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 Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:00 pm
*Let me know if I need to change anything. I HAVE CHANGED INFO ON THIS!* ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Dante
Nicknames: N/A
Age: 17
Birthdate: 10/31
Gender: Male
Village Sand
Race: White
Rank: Academy Student
Shinobi Profession: Assassin
Ninja Type/Class: Medical & tactician
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╫Major Information╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: N/A
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Level: low
Chakra Element: Medical
Battle Strength: Medium range
Battle Weakness: Loses control of his temper easily
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
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3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
Background Info:
Dante grew up in a small family made up of just his mom, Kaname, his dad, Akashikyo, his older sister, Nanami, his older brother, Kisara, and himself. He normally trained in his yard by himself since he was naturally hated by people and his family was always away on missions so they never had any time to train him. He was constantly left home alone even as an academy student. He had to practice the Bushin No Jutsu constantly because he never actually had his family to show him how to perform this jutsu. He's naturally a loner except for when he has missions with other people but even then he isolates himself from his team members.
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:N/A
Boss Summoning: N/A
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: Right arm
Headband Style: Sand
Headband Color: Black
Flack Jacket Style: N/a
Flak Jacket Color: N/a
Weapon Class: Sword, knives & explosives
Name of Weapon: Nightmare, Fire & Ice
Weapon Range: Short/Long
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location: Back/sides of legs
Exploding Smoke Grenade=2
Makibishi= 2
Shuriken= 2
Light Bombs=2
Kunai Holster Location: Left leg
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: right hip
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Black
Backpack Style: N/a
Backpack Color: N/a
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: Back (under the sword)
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Black
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╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:17 pm
First, I recommend that you change your element to Medical to start out with. We consider medical as a chakra element.
Why does your bloodline say unknown? If you want a bloodline, you need to apply for one.
Your chakra level is low unless you are accepted into a bloodline.
I dont think you can have long AND short range as a battle strength. Those two kind of counteract each other.
Finally, You cannot summon until you are a Chuunin. Even then, You have to apply for the summoning wolves.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:55 pm
Hizuma the Troublesome Hizuma Hyuuga 
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Full Name: Hizuma Hyuuga
Nicknames:
Age: Thirteen
Birthdate: July Eleventh
Gender: Male
Village Mist/Kirigakure
Race: Japanese/Caucasian
Rank: Acdemy Student
Shinobi Profession: Combat Specialist
Ninja Type: Short Range/Speed
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Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: Byakugan
Clan: Hyuuga - estranged
Current Bloodline Stage: One
Chakra Color: Firebrick
Chakra Control:Excellent
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Element: Lightning, Water
Battle Strength: Close Combat, Jyuuken style
Battle Weakness: Long Range Fightning
Fights Won: Zero
Fights Lost: Zero
Shinobi Special Skills:
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3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Forehead
Headband Style: Standard
Headband Color: White
Flack Jacket Style: *none*
Flak Jacket Color: *none*
Exploding Smoke Grenade Three
Makibishi Zero
Shuriken Five
Light Bombs Five
Kunai Holster Location: Right Thigh
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Right Hip
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Grey
Backpack Style: Standard
Backpack Color: Grey
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ •Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu) •Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) •Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu) • • • Ninjutsu
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Personality: Cool, calculating
Nindo: "Start living or hurry up and Die"
Height: Five Foot Four inches, head and shoulders
Weight: One Hundred Seventeen Pounds in his Skivvies
Original Eye Color: Creamy White
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It all started in Leaf. Born into the Side Branch of the clan, he was taught he was inferior to most. Set to recieve the Caged Bird Seal at age Four, he...suprised, the Hyuuga elders by activating the Byakugan at that young of an age, when most shinobi haven't even learned they have chakra. After this point, he was adopted into the Main clan and raised, however he was forbidden to talk to his real family. He trained relentlessly under the clan's head, proving himself to be skillful in taijutsu, making the Jyuuken look more like a dance than a fightning style. With his real parent's blessing, Hizuma simply disappeared one day, his clothes, tools, a small portion of the Hyuuga clan's bank account, and a copy of the Hyuuga clan's records and techniques going with him. He settled down in Mist, proving himself to the Mizukage he had no ties with Leaf. There he resides to this day.....
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ((Will finish later)) Looks very good, I'll say APPROVED! Hope to see you in mist very soon.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:53 pm
Dantes, you are ACCEPTED!
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:14 pm
yury Yurameshi
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╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Yury yurameshi
Nicknames: hunter of the mist
Age: 20
Birthdate: aug 19
Gender: male
Village village hidden in the mist
Race:black,asian
Rank: academy student
Shinobi Profession: ninjutsu
Ninja Type: Stealth
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: none
Clan: none
Current Bloodline Stage: none
Chakra Color: black
Chakra Control: low
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Element:water
Battle Strength: ninjutsu
Battle Weakness: genjutsu
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
*Note Special shinobi skills must be approved BEFORE posting your profile*
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations: none
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: n/a
Boss Summoning: n/a
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: normal
Headband Style: normal
Headband Color: black
Flack Jacket Style: none
Flak Jacket Color: none
Weapon Class: long sword
Name of Weapon: soul reaper
Weapon Range: 5ft
Special Abilities: can cut throught anything
Weapon Location: back
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 5
Makibishi= 5
Shuriken= 20
Light Bombs= 10
Kunai Holster Location: left leg
Kunai Holster Color: black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: right leg
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: black
Backpack Style: none
Backpack Color: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:back
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: black
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╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:loud,funny
Nindo: protect what is impotant
Height: 6ft 5in
Weight: 174p
Original Eye Color: black
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╫Background Information╫
Yury's parents were killed in the great ninja war so he lived by himself most of his life. At times he gets sad but he covers it up with jokes. his heros are zabuza and kisame
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:03 pm
Demon: Just a few issues-
1. You need to apply for the wolf summon
2. If you want your weapon to have any special abilities you need to app for it in custom weapons, also I don't really know what a "Guillotine Sword" is, is it like zabuza's sword?
3. You can not have any kind of relationship with or to the characters from the manga/anime, they are canon characters and their stories remain the same despite the world being slightly different. You can of course know of Zabuza, and you can even hope to follow in his foot-steps, but you can't know him
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:49 am
@lance:i thought he had to be a chuunin to even be able to summon
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:52 am
Yes, he does. Hes just saying that he needs to apply for wolves if he wants them when the time comes
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:20 am
@greg surprised ok thankies, ooo read my story.
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:15 pm
Stu Hikurate
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Full Name: Stu Hikurate
Nicknames: SPARKS
Age: 13
Birthdate: dec,27,1996
Gender: male
Village Village of the sand
Race: White/caucasion
Rank: Academy student
╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon:
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color: : fire red
Chakra Level: low
Battle Strength: speed, ninjutsu,
Battle Weakness: genjutsu and long range attacks
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: Neck
Headband Style: normal
Headband Color: green
Flack Jacket Style: normal
Flak Jacket Color: normal
Weapon Class: sword
Name of Weapon:
Weapon Range: short
Special Abilities: none
Weapon Location: waist
Exploding Smoke Grenade=0
Makibishi= 0
Shuriken= 5
Light Bombs= 0
Kunai Holster Location: back of right leg
Kunai Holster Color: blue
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: waist
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: other leg
Backpack Style: n/a
Backpack Color: n/a
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: in jacket
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: green
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: eays going, good sense of humor, and friendly but can become serious at any time he needs to.
Nindo: never let the past bother you thats why its called the past
Height: 5ft 4in
Weight: 94
Original Eye Color: Green
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╫Background Information╫ He has no family and doesnt remember anything beyond the age of 7. He has a metal arm which he got from that day his parents died in a freak accident. He is never the one person that would give up on anything even something stupid. He lives by himeself in a old rundown building. he never lets anybody worry over him. He has no friends and he wants to make history by becoming someone important.( i will see if i can get the metal arm aproved.)
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:26 pm
Your chakra is not high, unless you are the head of a bloodline or a jinchuuriki.
It says your bloodline stage is level one, but no bloodline is listed. If you have applied for and been accepted into a bloodline, then list it, and list your chakra as medium. Otherwise, your chakra is low.
Apply for that metal arm in custom technology.
Your cannot have 3 battle strength. Take one off. I suggest taking off either Taijutsu or Ninjutsu, because to me, someone who specializes in both just doesnt make sense.
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:50 pm
There i finished the few problems how is it now? Can your character have a certain religion or so like alchemy or atheist or such?
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:06 pm
I'm gonna wait until the metal arm is approved by major before I say approved.
Regarding religion, I'm gonna say no. I have nothing against religion, in real life I'm a pretty religious guy, but its just so that we have no religious debates. I know it sounds dumb, but think about it. Giant religious debates start over the smallest, dumbest things, and the point of this guild is to have fun. By allowing religion, it opens up for the possibility of finding that one person who belittles said religion, and feelings get hurt, and people quit the guild. Even posting this is opening up that possibility somewhat. (Not trying to offend anyone by saying that, but hey, this IS the internet. Theres always that one person.....) So in short, NO RELIGION.
P.S.: Even in Fullmetal Alchemist, alchemy wasnt a religion.
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:15 pm
okay i agree with the religion part. i also put my metal arm in the custom technology too.
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:59 pm
heyi think the metal arm is approved because i went to the custom technology topic and saw that one of the technology was the same as mine but diffrent name and major put it up himself so does that mean he approved the device or does he need to spprove me having the technology?
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