This is a good start, I like it. Much better than forgetting this whole thing which is what I thought had happened. I like it, sorry you lost what else you had, but if you wanted to write more, I wouldn't complain. I don't think this needs to be cleaned up really, IMO, just stringed together with similar topics so it makes sense. I think at the end we might want a do a little editing to make it sound better, with a more even and less fluctuating voice, which is what you get with a lot of people, but that's a problem for another day.