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 Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:45 pm
Okay, I added some new info to the front page, got rid of the PTSD, added a more shorter bio bit, and added a post for art (for when I get some) and a new poll heart
Any more comments/critiques would be loved!
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 2:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:06 am
Man, Koko, your quest makes me want to dust off mine. gonk
I actually have popped by your quest before to read up on it, but I never really got too far. I'm not sure why- it isn't that long, and I actually do enjoy reading things like this.
I can't really help on anything since, hey, it seems realistic enough to me! (That, and I suck at describing people in depth. talk2hand ) Keep up the good work - I hope you make it!
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:23 am
Kat- Haha, thanks. I can understand not being good with in-depth things too. it is pretty long though, and it can get tedious to read it. ^^; Hence why i made a lsightly shorter one for people who are all "lawl tl;dr".
-snerks- These quests do have a strangely siren call, huh? At first this was gonna be one of those 'I'll do it maybe but I don't expect anything' and then it became 'MUST PERFECT QUEST. MUST GET ON ISLAND. RAWRG.' It even lured me out of lurking to post in the main thread XD
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 6:52 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 7:40 pm
So, I've been thinking about it for a bit, and I think I may consider questing for a tauric serum. Yeah, it's 500k, but hey, it'll give me a goal to shoot for!
Plus, ever think of how a tauric would effects a mouse? It was the discussion in the thread about how a tauric serum would effect an animal with hand-like front paws that made me consider doing this. really consider it. It had been something I was thinking about, but it was always in the back of my mind.
So the question is, what does everyone think about it? Should I bother with going for a tauric? or should I stay the course? And while were at it, what do people think about a non-morphic mouse? That's just a random idea, and not one I'm particularly attached to but just thought I'd throw it out there XD
Also, any comments or crtis on the quest are very helpful and loved!
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:48 am
I think you ought to 'stay the course' with your orginal serum plan, I like the character and can't think of much to say to critique (but will get around to it) ninja although a Tauric white lab rat be interesting to see, but I just don't think a nonmorphic serum has the same quality just a regular serum or tauric.
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:31 pm
Ditto. Poor guy might get stepped on as a non-morphic...or something. I like the concept a lot, too. Keep-a going with it.
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 10:52 pm
Oh, comments!
I don't ask for a four page critique...just of you see something I might want to tweak or if you have any suggestions, just say so and I'll consider them. ^^ Sometimes people can say a lot by writing a little, you know?
Raur- Haha, thanks for the comment. I do like my original plan, but yeah...I thought a tauric mouse would be neat to see. I think the transformation to tauric isn't as graceful or 'pretty' as normal anthros, and that's why it draws my attention. I don't like 'omg bishounen' things...even though I guess Noah could be consider a 'pretty boy'...I tried to balance his looks out as being average with the freckles and braces and whatnot though >.> But I digress.
Kuroda- -snerks- Yeaaaah. XD I just threw that in as an after-thought since nonmorphic serums are only 100k as opposed to the tauric's 500k... I just find it funny that tauric beat nonmorphic by only two votes...it has given me things to think about though.
Thanks though! -worked hard on this concept too!-
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 1:23 pm
Nice character, he sounds like a great candidate for the Island. heart
Yeah...my character's one of those dime a dozen alcoholic stories, too...Perhaps they'd get along. blaugh
But, anyways, I'd say no for the tauric, perhaps yes for the nonmorphic. It depends on what funding you have when you get to the island. A nonmorphic is slightly rarer right now, and has a few interesting roleplay challenges that might be fun for you to have your character deal with. But that's just my opinion. A regular serum would still be pretty cool.
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:53 pm
Ah, thanks!
It is sad how prevalent alcoholic households are really. And maybe they would get along- common ground does wonders, huh?
Yeah, there do seem to be a lot of taurics between the fish-like taurics and the horse taurics. But like I've said, the tauric draw for me is I'm interested to see how it'd work out structurally...but a serum for tauric is 500k. -winces- Nonmorphic is cheaper at 100k, and that's sort of why I threw it out- it's different, but not too bad gold-wise. The polls are peer pressuring me to go for tauric though.
Heck, if I don't have the gold for either, I'd be fine with a plain anthro, really. But I like to see other people's opinions! :3
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 1:39 pm
 I also think you should go with the non-morphic serum. 3nodding That would be rather interesting to see, plus there arn't that many non-morphics out there. (I've only counted 3 non-morphics, & 6 taurs on the island so far)
Me, I've started debating on whether to quest for a non-morphic serum. (My ideal animal is a grey kangaroo) I'm not too sure what a regular serum 54 kangaroo would be like though.. I dunno.
And I like your character. The OCD-thing is different.. I thought about doing that for my character, since I actually do have a little bit of OCD myself.. But I figured I'd stray away from that. And the bullies.. Ah, the bullies.. My character, once I get the history up, had the same issues. (Just not quite like that, about the German thing, of course.) Except my character had no idea why she was always picked on, since she wasn't all that different or abnormal in any way.
I was reminded of my old German foreign exchange student friend, Stephan, when reading that part, about the bullying.. I felt so bad for him, since some immature guys always picked on him. Just because he was from Germany, that group of boys always called him a Nazi & other German-bashing terms like that. It was horrible. Then again, the boys picking on him were freshmen. (And sadly, most freshmen seem to be quite immature, & becoming more & more immature nowadays)
But like what I was saying, I think his history sounds good. (Lots of detail, too. Guess that's not a bad thing) Makes me not feel that bad that I typed a long history for my character, too..:: ::.
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