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 Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:43 am
Ashlyn Flayler  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Ashlyn Flayler
Nickname: Ash
Gender: Female
Race: Animal Based Homunculus
Birthdate: January 4
Age: looks about sixteen or so
Blood type: n/a
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Occupation: She works at the circus when in comes to town.
Mode of Transportation: Herself mostly, sometimes she will to go old school and use a plain old bicycle.
Hobbies: Ash loves to dance. Normally when she walks she has a little best in her step and a twirl here or there. She’s also extremely flexible and enjoys doing cartwheels and back flips and such.
Motto: "There isn’t such a thing as normal, but there is a thing called different. Why try to be something that doesn’t exist?"
Appearance: Ash is a very short and petite girl. She stands only at four foot nine and weighing at only 102 pounds. Her eyes are blood red and catlike. Her blond hair is extremely long reaching to her waist. She normally has it up in a bun held by twin hair pins. She is normally wearing dresses like woman would wear in the medieval times, and is normally bare foot.
Personality: Ash is a very odd person. She tends to be extremely random and most would think she was insane. Due to her being part Jaguar she can be quite the stealthy ninja. She can stay absolutely quiet and sneak anywhere even outside in the brightest part of the day. She is very laid back and playful. Even though she seems like a very calm person, she's the type that will one moment be your best friend and then, from one wrong said thing, your worst nightmare. Otherwise she’s quite likeable and fun.
Background: Ashlyn's past in unknown to herself or anybody. She can't remember anything of her creation. She believes she can't remember because of a car crash she went through. Ash remembers hitting her head pretty hard and then blacking out. Any father back then that and she doesn’t get anything. Ash doesn’t really mind not knowing about it though. She doesn’t give much thought about past or future. She is here now, and that’s what matters. Staying here and alive, survival. She won't let herself go down without a fight.
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Who you Fight for: Homunculus
Rank: Epsilon
Team: n/a at the moment
Rival(s): Anything of canine decent.
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Image of your Homunculus: 
Abilities of your Homunculus: Ash doesn’t really have any other special abilities. She is over all a normal black jaguar, well a giant black jaguar, but other than that, nothing.
Other Equipment: Two sharpened hair pins that she likes to use when in ranged combat. They have a super thin almost invisible thread on them that lets her pull them back to her. The thread may be thin but it is extremely strong.
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Theme song: "I Don't Wanna Grow up" Simple Plan
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:12 am
Nicely done. I see no faults, so you're good to go. Nice to see someone officially be an animal based homunculus. Your profile's approved. Make your thread and jump in the RP.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:09 pm
Alexa Jordan Matsuka _______________________________________________________________Name: Alexa Jordan Matsuka
Nickname: AJ, Lexa, Prefers AJ
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Birthdate: June 27
Age: Nineteen
Blood type: AB+
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Occupation: Delivery Girl/Street Performer
Mode of Transportation: Small Motorcycle
Hobbies: AJ's interests include playing with fire and blasting classic rock, indie rock, any kind of rock through headphones inserted directly into the ear canal. Being loud is her favorite pastime, along with annoying her co-workers and running around doing errands.
Motto: "Careful playing with fire, boys, you will get burned"
Appearance: AJ is a short girl, around 5'1", with fiery red hair and intensely blue eyes. Her face is angled, and she is thin. Her clothes vary at times, but what you see in the picture is what she wears almost all the time.
Personality: AJ is a rather curious person. She is loud, obnoxious, random, and yet, she's a collected person. There is nothing scatter-brained about her. She doesn't plan ahead a lot, and does everything without a plan, but it works for her. She's still alive, isn't she? She craves danger, and sometimes will go thrill seeking in Homunculus territory. Also, she has a Napoleon Complex. A big one. Being as AJ is so short, she dislikes being called such names as 'Shrimp', or 'Pipsqueak', even 'Beansprout' with piss her off bad enough.
Background: AJ was born nineteen years ago in a small town on the coast of Alaska. She was raised there until she was seventeen, when her home burned down, along with her parents her brother and her sister. She only escaped with their arctic fox, named Nuki. Distraught by the loss of her family, she left for the big city. The fire left her mentally scarred, with a fear of fire. Determined to over come this fear, she set about to work with flames, the very flames that destroyed her life.
She procured a job as a delivery girl for a local business, and earned herself a motorcycle in the process. Nuki follows her everywhere, the only family he's ever known, and does so with an almost blind loyalty. He is a part of her street act, where she harnesses the power of fire in daring acts of courage and danger.
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Who you Fight for: The Alchemists
Rank: Warrior on Training
Team: N/A
Rival(s): N/A
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Kakugane Serial Number: XXVII
Name of Primary Kakugane: Wilfre's Soul
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Flare Guard- A defense made entirely of Fire, the light of the lighter with surround anything, sending out random flares on all sides. The flame is nigh impenetrable, save for fire's natural enemy: water. In that instance, the sword, which would normally be engulfed by flames becomes the weapon. When in use with the fire, the sword can be used to cut just about anything, and is excellent for cauterizing wounds or cooking dinner.
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: A 15th Century Broadsword, she prefers swordfighting and will use the sword as an outlet for Flare Guard
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Theme song: Through the Fire and the Flames - Dragonforce
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:15 pm
As soon as you add that background, she'll be good to go like Taco Bell. If you're having trouble, send me a PM.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:26 pm
Fixed it. Kinda. I'll work on it more when I start to RP
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:31 pm
Alright, looks good. One more thing, though. Your Buso Renkin's description is a little vague. Mind expanding it a bit? Just a little bit. Is it just a flaming shield or a weapon that allows for fire manipulation? Help me out here.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:51 pm
There we go. Anything else?
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:07 pm
That's perfect. Make your thread, and start role playing. If you wanna know what's goin' on right now, you could either read up on every single topic that's been posted, or you could check this thread.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:04 pm
Chris Valentine  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Chris Rowen Valentine
Nickname: Chris, Valentine,
Gender: Males
Race: human
Birthdate: 8/16
Age: 18
Blood type: -O
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Occupation: alchemist-in-training
Mode of Transportation: motorcycle
Hobbies: he likes to go out and find girls to talk to. listening to his music, and a variaty of other things
Motto: "never give up on your dreams"
Appearance: Chris Is tall and skinny, he is about 6'1 and weighs about 138 pounds. he has long-ish black hair, and sea grey eyes, he usually wears a black jacket, and a pair of warn-out jeans
Personality: Nice to people he likes, can be very polite. will rush to the rescue of any 'damsels in distress' he likes to be the 'kinght in shining armor'
Background: Chris was born into a good home, his perents loved him, or at least he thinks they did the truth is he doesn't even remember. the night they died they were coming back from dinner at a nice restaurant, his dad lost control of the car and it flew off the road into a heavily forested area, Chris was alive but he would never remember anything from before that night. at age 12 he was put through a series of surgerys to try to restore the part of his brain that had been damaged in the accident. at age 16 he graduated highschool, he went imediately to see if he could get an aprentaceship with an alchemist, he didn't get it until he was eighteen, for the past year he has been studing to become an alchemist when his aprentacship is finished. currently he hopes to help defeat the humunculi and get the girl
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Who you Fight for: Alchemist
Rank: Warrior
Team: N/A
Rival(s): N/A
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Kakugane Serial Number: I
Name of Primary Kakugane: shade's vengence
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Shade's judgement- an aura of shadow that protects you from most attacks it also allows you to store up energy from damage you have taken and use it to your advantage. IE making your attacks very powerful, increasing your speed, or a number of other uses. this does not effect other weapons
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: a second gunblade that is normal, and several daggers
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Theme song: the last night by skillet
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:20 pm
A couple of things before we accept this.
The whole "forgotten past" thing is a little (overly) cliche', and also sorta lazy when filling out a profile. I don't mind if the character doesn't remember it, but could you at least tell why he doesn't remember anything? Car crash, mad scientist, knocked on the head, anything, just put a little thought in your character. You're creating a person, and every person in the world has a history, and your person has eighteen years of history.
The other thing I'd like to question is what exactly your Buso Renkin does. "Armor of Shadows?" Okay, that sounds cool. Does that mean it covers your character in shadows, or does it cover certain things in shadows? Expand that a little bit. It's "useful in tight spots?" How exactly? And how does it make his attacks "devastating?"
You also say that your "other equipment" is a normal gunblade, while the image of your Buso Renkin (which is supposed to be your primary weapon) is a gunblade as well. Does that mean you have two gunblades or does your Buso Renkin's special ability affect your regular gunblade? Help me out here.
Other than that, your character is good. Just fix him up a bit, then he'll be accepted no problem. Just go into a little detail.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:42 pm
done, this was by far the longest application for an RP I have ever filled out. BTW your sig rules
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:48 pm
Seriously, the longest? Heh, wait till you start role playin' for real. You'll be able to fill out apps like that in no time flat. Who knows, if you're dedicated, you may start fillin' out stuff like me. Anyway, your profile is good to go. Just pick a number from this list to put for your kakugane serial number and make your thread. And if you want to know what's goin' on currently with the story, check this thread.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:10 pm
ok where do I start? there are so many spots in this RP i've never been in a guild that the whole thing is an RP before
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:14 pm
Where ever you want. As of now, the most active forum is the Alchemists HQ. Currently, there are a bunch of wild homunculi running around in the base. You could make your first post fighting one of those monsters. So if you're lookin' to interact with somethin', that'd be your best bet. But if you wanna walk around for a bit, just telling about your character, goin' through some development, you know ease your way into this world, I'd post somewhere downtown.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:15 pm
You could start in downtown. I'm having the same exact problem
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