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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:21 pm
 ._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|_________RPC Description & History________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Name: Takumi Chanda Nickname(s): Taki Age: 14 Birthdate: 7 ( may ), 8th ( Day ), 1:23 ( AM ) Gender: Male Sexuality: Gay Relationship Status: Single and looking Ethnicity: Germanic
Height: 5.4 ft ( 1.626 m ) Weight: He refuses to say... but it is 55.9 Kilo ( 123 lbs ) Body Build: Lean but muscular in the legs and arms. Eye Color: Dark Blue Hair Color: Dark Blue
Physical Description: I'm beautiful and you can agree to that, my hair is short and dark bluish with a tint of slight white, my eyes are very dark blue and I always where my white, sleeveless, undershirt with my black sleeveless vest. My pants are carnvass's and black. I do wear headphones most of the time, they are like a headband with my villager's symbol on them.
Personality: Does not care about anyone to anyone or what anyone thinks of him, he just wants to live life to the fullest.
Behavior: Takumi is a natural smart mouth to people, even if they say he has friends, he believes no one is his friend because he refuses to trust anyone. He tends to be curious and ask questions but he won't speak that much into the question. He is also a bit negative towards females, no one might know but he likes to do a 'switch of minds' and explore both parties.
Nindo: "You keep looking around and praying, don't you realize your god left this place a long time ago?"
Theme song: Life is Beautiful - Sixx am
Character History: Uncaring nobles.
Village: Mist
Rank: Genin
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Ninja Characteristics & Shinobi Skills__________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Ninja Class: Medical Class
Special Ability: Augment
The Medical Ninja Class is able to utilize a specialized technique wherein they can concentrate immense amounts of chakra into a single spot, generating an incredible amount of force behind any one of their attacks. This enhanced strike, or [Augment] allows the medical shinobi to channel their energy into a single devastating attack which can reduce stone, earth, or wood to rubble, or leave an opponent completely crippled, or worse. Beyond this, they can also use the ability to grant a kind of super-human strength, allowing them to, for a brief period, accomplish tasks no one normally could, such as lifting heavy slabs of stone, or ripping a tree from it's roots and swinging it around.
Tweak: N/A
Takumi is a medical ninja because he believes there are so many people fighting but not many healing so he wanted to learn something that isn't as common as Ninjustu or Genjustu or even Taijustu users. The reason he chose medical is because he knew he was able to learn it so he is a bit better towards genjustu.
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Strength
Benefit: +1 rank to all Offensive Taijutsu techniques. Strength ninja can also easily match the strength of others, surpassing their rank and beyond. Though the effective rank of their Taijutsu strikes only rises by 1 rank, it is difficult, even for those 2 ranks above them to contend with their raw physical power. Effectively, a Genin with the Strength benefit would be considered even more powerful then a typical Chuunin.
Combat Ability: Once per combat, a ninja with this attribute can "Pump Up", using the almighty power of screaming to increase the power of any Taijutsu attack by an additional +1 rank. (This stacks with [TRAIN] boosts as well)
Secondary Attribute: Great Chakra Reserves
Benefit: Depending on whether this attribute is placed as the Primary, or Secondary attribute of a character, they recieve different boosts to their chakra levels... User receives an additional +3/10 chakra points. [For every 10 points of chakra a user has, they receive an additional 3 points of chakra]
Tertiary Attribute: Cunning
→ To help him strategize from afar and keep himself one step ahead in combat.
His strength was chosen to help balance a bit of the medical side and show other men he isn't weak as a medic. The Great Chakra Reserves were so he can heal his allies and still be able to try and fight with them. Cunning was so he could also stay back if he didn't need to fight and help strategize his opponent's moves, trying to keep a step ahead.
Specialties:
Summoner: Allows a ninja to sign a Summoning Contract and gain access to the summons within it. To call the summons, the users must still be trained by the Summoning's Scroll Carrier (Summoning/Contract Sage), and they can only learn summons up to their current rank. No shinobi can access summons without this specialty. [ Summoning contract not yet decided ]
# Chakra Elements: 2
Primary --> Raiton | Obtained Secondary --> Katon | Obtained at Special Jounin
Chakra Color: white
Total Chakra: 31 Total Stamina: 25
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Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired:
E-rank Missions: 0 D-rank Missions: 0 C-rank Missions: 0 B-rank Missions: 0 A-rank Missions: 0 S-rank Missions: 0
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• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • Anrokku no Jutsu (Unlocking Technique) •
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Raiton [ L i g h t i n g ] Rank E - (Basic)
• Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training) • Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique)
Rank D - (Genin)
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Katon [ F i r e ]
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Medical Rank E - (Basic) •
Rank D - (Genin)
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Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) • Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) •
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Primary Style: → Current level of Mastery: ____________________________________
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Primary Style: → Current level of Mastery: ____________________________________
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties: Associated Kenjutsu/Taijutsu Style:
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|____________Apparel & Ninja Tools_________________/ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Headband Location | Style | Color: | Headband = headphones | Symbol on side of headphones | blue/black/white Outfit | Style: | In physical description Kunai Holster Location | Color: | Pouch above right butt cheek | black Projectile Holster Location | Color: | Pouch above Left butt cheek | Black Scroll Holster Location | Color: N/A
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:07 pm
@Minty: you actually get two specialties, and I'm not sure if you knew or not, but your tertiary attribute provides no actual bonuses, it's just for bragging rights essentially
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:50 pm
Can I just have one speciality?
And I know that, I just put it there cause something was to go there so I thought it was that.
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:58 pm
little mintchan Can I just have one speciality?
And I know that, I just put it there cause something was to go there so I thought it was that. If you choose to yes, you may have just one specialty and Mint, I've spoken to you before about the tertiary attribute info in my last few comments. Unless you're taking on Endurance or Great Chakra Reserves for it, you get no bonuses and only need to put how/why that attribute works with your rpc. Know that you're still missing another blurb and since your second element is not unlocked till sp.jounin, one of your free elemental techs can't be for that element. Please consider going though my previous comments as well since there has been many repeating points. I also recommend, comparing yours to an already approved profile to check up on things you are unsure of. Let me know when you are done and no reposting please. Simply quote me or pm me. Thanks.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:06 pm
What do you mean by 'blurb'? Sorry, big headache from constant math classes so I'm a bit blondie today..
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:10 pm
little mintchan What do you mean by 'blurb'? Sorry, big headache from constant math classes so I'm a bit blondie today.. That little description you placed under your attributes. Well, you're actually suppose to have two. One for why you picked the class and one for why you choose the attributes that you did.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:14 pm
Is it okay if I put them together in one?
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:48 pm

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Name: Cody Hyuuga Nickname(s): N/A Age:17 Birthdate: Nov 17 Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Relationship Status: Single Ethnicity: Caucasian
Height: 201 cm (6'7") Weight: 100 kg (220 lbs) Body Build: Lean, Muscular Eye Color: Crimson Hair Color: White
Physical Description: He is lean Muscular Normally he wears a long sleeved dress shirt which is unbuttoned in the front with black pants. He has medium length hair that is always falling into his eyes and he has to brush it away,
Personality: Completely Serious he can not take a joke at all. He rarely ever smiles unless he likes something a lot and he is always straight forward to do something or say something he is never shy
Behavior: He acts about the same during everything He is strict when it come to battle and he is always telling the truth when it comes to people.
Nindo: "Nothing is True, Everything is Permitted"
Theme song: Sick Puppies - Your Going Down
Character History: The Ultimate Fighter
Village: Mizu
Rank: Genin
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Clan/Bloodline: Hyuuga [x] Approval [x] Stage: Unactive
Cursemark: N/A
Ninja Class: Taijutsu
Special Ability:
Training Strength (x2) - You can lift much heavier objects then your peers and can more easily perform strength-based feats, such as breaking down doors, or punching through obstacles. When trained, all of your physical attacks and Taijutsu maneuvers act as if they were 1 rank stronger
Training Endurance
Tweak: Dropping Kenjutsu to add one more taijutsu Style
Cody was never good at Using Weapons or Ninjutsu But he was always amazing at he Taijutsu
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Speed
Benefit: Cody receives a +1 Rank bonus to his speed,but can even outperform those above their rank by a fair amount. As a Genin, his movements are faster then even the average Chuunin, requiring somewhat of a Sp. Jounin to keep up with or catch him. His Speed makes him blindly fast, but does not increase his reaction speed. Higher level ninjas with this attribute have been described as simply disappearing only to re-appear closer without showing any sign of movement in between.
However, not just movement speed is enhanced, but attack speed and tactile manipulation as well. With such an increase to the movement speed of their arms and hands, the deadliness of their strikes is enhanced, making such attacks difficult to keep up with as their movements seem like only a blur.
Combat Ability: [Burst] - Allows cody to increase his speed by one additional rank (putting Genin above the speed of a Sp. Jounin) for one post or perform an additional action for that round, enabling him to sting together combo maneuvers.
Secondary Attribute: Toughness
Benefit: Taijutsu strikes against Cody count as if they were -1 in rank (effectively, Cody gets +1 rank to Toughness), and any Taijutsu strike which is considered 3 ranks below their effective defense rank will have no effect whatsoever (Unless performed by a ninja with the 'Strength' attribute in either their Primary or Secondary attribute slot). Any jutsu with a 'Stun' effect at Cody’s rank or below will have only a minor effect. Also, though ninjutsu still act as their respective ranks and Cody takes full damage from them, they can more easily withstand the attacks and continue to fight.
Tertiary Attribute: Endurance
→ Gives Cody an additional 3 Stamina per Rank
Because Cody is tougher then some ninja he tends to take a few more hits or harder hits allowing him to stay out in the battle a bit longer. His Endurance Allows him more a bit more stamina then some ninja letting him do more taijutsu moves. His speed allows him to move faster letting him land more hits due to the fact he is faster then some.
Specialties:
Tactical Support: All techniques, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Bloodline etc... require 3 fewer posts to learn. In combat, they are particularly adept at evading incoming attacks (+1 to Evade) and they can easily identify the tactics and abilities being used by their opponents in combat (allowing them to identify tactical maneuvers and the breadth and power of the jutsu an enemy is signing). Teammates under a tactical support specialist's leadership gain +1 rank bonus to Evasion and Speed, and can combo more effectively, allowing their allies perform two jutsu per post... so long as they have had the plan laid out to them directly.
Combo: Whereas the average shinobi can only perform a single Nin-/Gen-/Tai-/Ken-jutsu in a post, Combo Specialists can perform 2 such jutsu in any combination they wish. In addition to this, when jutsu are performed back to back, one immediately after the other, both attacks always occur. The first attack can be blocked, dodged, or parried, but it cannot be negated or diverted in such a way that the second attack no longer occurs. The second attack always occurs after the first, making the Combo Specialist's opponent forced to deal with both attacks.
# Chakra Elements: 1
Primary --> Wind (Genin) [Train 10 post to draw out]
Chakra Color: Black
Total Chakra: 25 Total Stamina: 28
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Squad Name/number: Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate:
Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired:
E-rank Missions: 0 D-rank Missions: 0 C-rank Missions: 0 B-rank Missions: 0 A-rank Missions: 0 S-rank Missions: 0
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Non-Elemental
Rank E - (Basic)
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • •
Rank D - (Genin)
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Fuuton (Wind)
Rank E - (Basic)
• Kaze Bunshin (Wind Clone) • Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill)
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Taijutsu Styles Allowed: 4
Primary Style: → Current level of Mastery:
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Kenjutsu Styles Allowed: 0
Primary Style: N/A → Current level of Mastery: N/A
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# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Belt | Standard | Black | Outfit | Style: Long Sleeved Dress Shirt Unbuttoned, Jeans | Outfit | Color: Black | Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Hip | Black | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right Leg | Black | Scroll Holster Location | Color: Left Hip | Black
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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HeadlessKoko Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:18 pm
iOmega-kun Attributes: Erm…. There's a separate attribute known as agility, so you might want to use the word "speed" instead. Stamina: Your stamina is wrong, it should be 28 when your attribute bonus is added. Jutsu: You're allowed two elemental and one universal jutsus when you start off. Take out the additional element, since you only have one. Since taijutsu can't learn any genjutsu, then feel free to take out all but the first genjutsu bullet point. Apparel & Ninja Tools: I think you might have a typo for the amount of kunais you carry.
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:22 pm
little mintchan Is it okay if I put them together in one? That's considered a change in format. If you can, split them or if you like, I can assist you for that part of it. Just pm me the details.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:29 pm
Ok fixed most I just dont understand what you mean by the attributes one sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:32 pm
iOmega-kun Ok fixed most I just dont understand what you mean by the attributes one sweatdrop In the paragraph you gave to describe the attributes in context of your rpc, you wrote "His agility lets me balance better than some ninjas" when you have the speed attribute rather than the agility attribute. Speed doesn't give better balance, just faster speed.
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HeadlessKoko Vice Captain
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:34 pm
@Omega:
- Descriptions, if possible, putting as much info down as you can would be best. What you have down is what helps others to understand your rpc and what he is like. It also helps you to get a clearer sence of your own creation. What you have is fine but a bit more never hurts.
- I know its not marked down at the moment but Konoha is still rather full of genin so if you can, please consider either Suna or Kiri for your starting village. Thanks.
- Stage, if there's none, put 'N/A'
- You are free to remove the bijuu info section since it does not apply to you. Leave the cursemark though seeing how you might be getting one later.
- Ninja class section, you are required to put down your training regime so please let us know what stats your rpc will be training in. For more info on that, check the Taijutsu class thread.
- You are allowed to remove the secondary/tertiary slots for elements since they will just take up room.
- You should also mark down that your first element requires 10 posts of training in order to be drawn out.
- Endurance is 28 not 25 due to Endurance at Teritary.
- Remove the extra jutsu section if its unapplicable to you
- Genjutsu can't be learned for your class, hence you don't get the Bunshin no Jutsu, that section should also be removed.
- At profile creation, you gain 1 free non-elemental E-rank tech and two E-rank elemental techniques (not sure how this works with your need to draw out your element but I'll still give to you)
- You are allowed 1 custom weapon
- Kunai is pre-set at 7 and remains that way until more equipment is gained through rp.
And that should be about it. If you have any other questions, let me know via post or pm. Good luck.
@Kage: Thanks for the help.
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:35 pm
White Water Lilly little mintchan Is it okay if I put them together in one? That's considered a change in format. If you can, split them or if you like, I can assist you for that part of it. Just pm me the details. edited, hope i did it right
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:47 pm
@Mint: The blurb was still in the wrong place and you repeated some stuff so I made some minor adjustments to it. You also replaced your genjutsu with medical so I helped you create another section for medical - this way you get back your genjutsu slot. Other then that, APPROVED!
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