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 Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:55 am
RPC Name: Katsurou Uchiha
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Sharingan
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: My character might be a Samurai Class (with Katon as his primary element), thus Sharingan will compliment his class' reflexes and other attributes. Meantime, it will make up for any skills he may be lacking in.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan:
-Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan.
-The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time.
-This doujutsu gives the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it.
-The clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it.
-Once activated, the Sharingan may be activated at will.
-First five posts will cost one chakra point each, while second five posts, two chakra points each.
-The clan member must be in a life/death situation in order to gain tomoe.
-You must be Jounin or higher to achieve Mangekyou.
-Mangekyou takes a great deal of chakra, so it is much more limited than Sharingan.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Salted liquid trailed down the side of his neck, making it only so far before the hem of his top absorbed that very sweat into its fabric. His eyes were narrowed slightly, coal orbs flitting from one area to another as if he were expecting something. And, well, he kind of was. His ANBU mask laid some feet away from him in several pieces, showing that he hadn't been taking this battle all too seriously. That was his mistake. He just stood there, his hands fixed into loose fists around the sweat laden handles of twin kodachi. The air around him was silent. Way too silent to be normal. His opponent had managed to hide themselves in the shadows of the tree tops above, taking refuge in some part of darkened forest as he waited for their attack to behold him. He was growing immensely impatient but tried not to let that impatience of his go to his head. That was just what his enemy wanted of him: to lose his calm and break that irritating focus of his. He'd definitely lose this fight if that had been the case.
His ears had caught a very faint rustling of branches and leaves from his far right and he had easily dodged the several kunai and shuriken that had embedded themselves into the ground that he once stood upon. Eyes shinning a deep crimson in the faint dark that surrounded him. He was mere inches away from said weapons and had believed to had missed what they were aiming to do but, he had managed to miss something. His eyes widened slightly, brows furrowed in deep concentration and slight surprise as he finally caught sight of it: the wires tied to the ends of the weapons. Even with his Sharingan activated he tended to miscalculate a move here and there. It wasn't as accurate as he'd liked it to be. He drew in a sharp intake of breath, barely missing the scorching flames that had trailed down the steel wires, setting fire to the dying grass and a few of trees that had been in the way of the crossfire. He had managed to get out of way in time but had sustained a few burns in the process. Not even bothering to examine his wounds, the dark haired male merely smiled indifferently, sheathing his twin kodachi as quickly as his smile rose to his lips. "I'm finished playing around. Face me, coward." He called out to the trees above, almost as quickly catching the few shuriken between a few of his fingers, that now bled a little from a few scratches, and now faced the S-ranked criminal he had been sent to assassinate as a part of his mission.
The black clad female smirked in return, her bright blues sparkling with pure excitement as she got back into her fighting stance, "It's time to dance, kid!" And she had no sooner lunged at him, her sadistic grin widening ever so greatly. He was ready for her however and merely stood there, waiting for her to come at him all the while with an equally as sadistic smile on his own lips. His red hues sparkled with an almost malicious glint as she neared closer and closer, her next move flashing before his eyes even before she had time to execute it. He had this battle in the bag. He saw them, her moves were unfolding before his eyes. The criminal sped up the wide oak tree and headed straight for him - perhaps a risky decision. About four feet away, the vicious female executed a deadly whirlwind composed of two strong kicks. For the first kick, she had spun on the ball of her left foot and lashed out with her right leg. Seeing that the boy had stepped back and dodged her initial attack, she didn't hesitate to follow through with the second kick, performed vice-versa her first. Both kicks were aimed for his sternum. So fluid and so swift were her moves that if it were not for the six tomoe in his eyes, this woman would've devastated him by now.
Since close combat appeared to be his opponent's specialty so far, he decided to put some distance in between her and him. Due to his Sharingan, during her second kick, he had just enough time to prepare the meat of his forearms for receiving her velocious strike. Meantime, he made sure to keep a steady stance. Upon impact with his firm forearms, her kick summoned enough force to send him sliding across the smooth bark of the thick and lengthy branch they fought upon - just as he thought. He squat down slightly, pressing his feet against the bark in order to slow down his drifting as he continued to face her. This was key. He needed both the correct distance and a little time to perform his next move. Thus, immediately after his forearms departed from her kicking leg, he quickly brought both his hands together, in front of his chest, and didn't hesitate to execute the necessary hand signs for summoning a katon technique: Snake, Sheep, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger. By the final hand sign, he was in between 4m to 5m from his target and coming to an abrupt halt on the branch. Yet he did not wait. Two crimson eyes widened in effort as he drew in chakra from his mouth into his chest. At once, he exhaled the gathered chakra and blew out a scorching stream of fire towards his enemy [ Great Fireball Technique ].
This was merely a distraction, however. From his past experiences, he felt the said jutsu would merely act as an obstruction, temporarily hindering his opponent's sight and acting as a fiery barrier in between her and him. Without delay, his hands had departed and moved into the rear pouches of his ANBU outfit. Therein distinct pockets awaited three, wired Windmill Shuriken. "Is that all?!" he heared the wanted woman's muffled taunt through the crackling flames. His lips had unpuckered and his great fireball was quickly dying out. His sharp gaze still looking the girl's direction, he noticed hot vapors spilling upwards, from the center of his fireball. He figured that water and fire would cause vapor to form, therefore his opponent had to have used a suiton technique of some sort [ Water Shield Tech ]. Before the blaze he summoned previously could finish simmering to a naught, he clasped onto his Windmill Shuriken (two in his left hand and one in his right) and held their wires in between the spaces in his fingers. Soon after, he suddenly threw all the shuriken towards the female, controlling their wires to make the blades circle the area where he had seen and heard by him [ Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade ]. His Sharingan helped perform the said technique by tracking his fast-moving objects as they sped through what was left of his katon technque - a dense steam created by her suiton jutsu versus his katon jutsu. Fortunately for him, the steam would provide a nice cover for his thrown three Windmill Shuriken.
She stepped out, "Now, where were we?" The devious woman licked her lips lavaciously as she started for him again. She would not get too far though, for his shuriken had implanted themselves all around the healthy trunk of the large tree, behind the criminal. Furthermore, his twisted wires overlapped and stopped her from progressing any further towards him. Without a moment to waste, he backed a few steps and tugged on the overlapping wires. In accordance with his action, the wires hastily closed the gap in between the criminal and the tree, forcefully pulling and securing her against its dense wood. "Looks like our song has ended." an eerie, slow whisper flowed from his parted lips bit onto the wires' ends. He made sure to keep a strong tension on the metal strands so that she couldn't escape what he was about to do next. Inhaling through his nose, he gathered chakra in his lungs and released it through his next exhale. That next breath would mean the death of his target [ Dragon Fire Technique ].
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Attaining Tomoe-
It was a humid, summer night. Drops of rain relentlessly gunned the window panes of their house while inside, sixteen-year-old Katsurou Uchiha rested peacefully. His parents had left him to care for his grandfather, Takashi Uchiha, until they return from their personal vacation, and although Katsurou was not too happy to comply, his old geezer was more than happy to have his grandson over. His grandfather lived a ways off from any clear sign of civilization so it was Katsurou’s job to make sure that his old fellow would not get into any trouble or get hurt while his family was away. Unfortunately, that was easier said than done. Trouble itself was already brewing as one rogue samurai stumbled upon his grandfather’s old cottage and decided to investigate. This felon was no common thief, but a killer, trained in the art of sword-wielding and deadly techniques. Soon enough, Katsurou would have to go toe to toe with the man.
Thus it happened that said rogue broke into their small house and awakened Katsurou and Takashi. Katsu made sure to hide his grandfather in the closet of his room before he apprehended the intruder. Quietly, Katsu made his way down the small hallway of their single-story cottage. His eyes shut for a moment and reopened them to reveal two blood red orbs adorned with a total of four tomoe – two in an eye and two around the iris the other. Immediately, his eyes honed in to a chakra flow that inhibited an unfamiliar figure, hiding in the shadows towards the end of the wide hallway. Judging by the loud sounds of rainfall and lightning, Katsurou could tell that their house had been broken-into, and whoever the individual before his eyes was, they were not up to any good. “Get out. You’re not welcome here.” he said with a firm voice, hoping the intruder wouldn’t notice that hint of nervousness in his tone. The man readily placed one hand on the hilt of his katana and began slowly drawing its blade out of its sheathe. The felon had a course voice that sounded much like a frog’s croak. “Oh-ho-ho. My, what do we have here? Are those the eyes of an Uchiha?” asked the middle-aged criminal; apart from his eerie reply, there was something about his tone of voice that made Katsurou shudder.
The samurai continued threatening, “How much do you think they’d sell for?” Katsu began to glower at the deadly visitor, even as the foreign began performing a few unrecognizable hand seals. Memorizing the technique through his eyes, quickly and quietly, Katsu formed the same hand seals as did his enemy. “Don’t worry, this’ll be quick and painless – Ninpou Kawara Shuriken.” the samurai muttered [ Roof Tile Shuriken Technique ]. Shortly after, the felon used his chakra to lift up a two, sharp-looking knives that rested on the oak countertop, beside Katsurou. The knives were sent flying towards Katsu’s neck and he barely managed to redirect it with a nearer, frying pan, he himself had summoned by copying the samurai’s technique. Still, the flying blades managed to clip his neck. Wild-eyed, Katsurou fell back and landed on his butt as he realized that he could have died just then if he hadn’t managed to deflect his enemy’s projectile at the last second [ +1 Tomoe ]. This near-death situation summoned another tomoe into his right eye, giving his Sharingan a total of five tomoe. Seeing his technique had failed, the rogue grew angry and even swore at Katsu, “Damn you and your eyes, I’ll have them now!”
The man swiftly drew and threw four shuriken at Katsurou, but it was different now. Now, his eyes could track these fast moving objects almost like they were traveling in slow-motion. Katsurou acted quickly to dodge the man’s shuriken. Then he hopped back onto his feet, only to find a much longer blade than the ones of the earlier knives lunging right at his torso. Luckily, he moved at the last moment so that the blade only managed to slice through his clothes and clip his side. That wasn’t the end though, the samurai followed through with a flurry of similar lunges aimed at various parts of Katsu’s body. Unblinking and fearful for his life, Katsu continued to use his eyes and his instincts to weave around his enemy’s attacks [ +1 Tomoe ]. The last lunge sliced through his trapezius and his enemy pressed Katsurou against the wall, following through with a kunai, aimed at Katsu’s heart. “My eyes are mine and mine alone!” Katsu roared aloud, unexpectedly. It surprised his opponent and gave Katsu enough time to predict his enemy’s move aforetime. Thus, Katsurou formed a familiar hand seal [ Roof Tile Shuriken Technique ] and summoned a knife from earlier. It implanted itself into his opponent’s temple and killed them. “Scum,” Katsu murmured as he pushed the dead weight of a man off of him. He removed the blade from his upper trap and tossed it to the ground with a clang. Trudging along, he stopped to take a break and apply pressure to the bleed near his neck. Doing so, he found himself peering into a nearby window pane. Its reflection was rather blurry, but he could make out... three tomoe in each eye. Six tomoe?! Had he received them during his fight to survive?
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Attaining Mangekyou-
This fight was really becoming drawn out and Katsu was starting to get tired. Why was everyone after his eyes? Moreover, why was this particular fella after his eyes? He already had Mangekyou! Perhaps it was just so that he could take the eyes and sell them for a fortune? Katsurou had no idea. The enemy had not even uttered a single word since their fight began. At the moment, he was caught in the opponent’s Tsukuyomi and was trying to break free before it was too late! Being a naturally born member of the Uchiha Clan and having a highly trained, normal Sharingan, Katsurou managed to slip out of his opponent’s technique during the first day of torture – it was just in time, as the man sliced a carefully-aimed blade at Katsurou’s neck. His eyes caught sight of this and his reflexes caused his arm to react, moving up to take the blunt of the blade’s slice; it implanted into his forearm and caused the enemy slight surprise. “How did you, escape?” the mysterious man asked in an undertone, eyes widening for a moment. Katsurou could see streams of blood pour from the enemy’s eyes – it was clear, his opponent had reached their limit. Swiftly, Katsu gathered whatever increments of his strength were left to perform a final feat. The enemy’s vision, no doubt, was already blurry. Katsu jerked his arm off his enemy's blade and brought his hands together, then performed a few slight hand seals while his enemy was in the middle of stating their surprise. “Good… bye…” he coughed and along with his cough came a spray of stinging substance from his mouth [ Stinging Mist Technique ]. The droplets of yellowish hue irritated his opponent’s eyes and caused them to reach up and rub out the terrible substance. Meanwhile, Katsurou went in for the kill. The both of them were at their limits, yet only one of them would merely faint – while the other, would die. But what did Katsu attain? Had he merely won to survive? No, not only had he won, he had obtained the Mangekyou!
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 6:14 pm
RPC Name: Akura Sorikata
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Sorikata clan
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because I want to try out a new bloodline with my RPC; one which I have never tried before. TUP has A LOT of bloodlines I'd love to try out, but out of them all, This one, The Konaga [ which I will never be able to use ] and the Senbon Sakura one are the ones I want to try out. But turning into Dinosaurs would be fun XD
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Well, with this bloodline the user is able to change their genetic structure to any animal they have studied before hand. The transformation can be partial, full or varied. Partial being transforming one part of the body [ arm, hand, eye, ear, leg, torso ect. ]. Full being the entire body. And varied being more than one animal at once.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
In the border between the land of fire and the land of waves, a lone figure raced within the marsh lands, getting his pants soaking wet; storm clouds began to gather overhead. “ This isn’t looking good.” He mumbled, looking up getting a deep breath through his nose, gathering the scents that were around him. “ There are three… No four…” He mumbled closing his eyes; clenching his fits. “ I’m not sure I can take them on, I’ve wasted to much chakra as it is… This form doesn’t come cheap.” He said opening his eyes again; looking down at his left hand; sporting a crocodile-like scale pattern. And then at his right hand, looking like the leg of a tiger. His legs were like those of a cheetah, along with his heart so that it could withstand the speed he was constantly running at. His neck had the mane of a lion and his face had lion-like features; the most distinguishable being his nose, which was what he used to keep his trackers at bay. This was his recon chimera mode. It was the form he’d usually take for intercontinental missions; simply because he could smell anyone that he couldn’t sense, the cheetah legs so that he could run fast enough to outrun anyone that would bring him trouble; and the tiger and crocodile hands in order to fight off anyone that would come his way; but like he said, it was very very taxing on his young body, and before he knew it, he started panting due to the chakra consumption.
“ I need to conserve chakra…” He mumbled deactivating every partial transformation he had on, feeling a very high relief because of this. “ Much better, but now I have to stay alert because anything might happen.” He mumbled and began to walk slowly. About an hour past, Akura was feeling at ease with everything, he had totally forgotten about his enemies, the ones that were tracking him. Suddenly, a kunai was thrown and it barely missed him, flying right past his shoulder, and it got stabbed a few feet in front of him. “ What the..?” He asked as the kunai exploded. “ Damn it I forgot.” He growled under his breath, transforming his nose into that of a lion, trying to pin point where his targets where. Around him, he smelled that there were two men, one behind him, and the other in front of him. “ This should be fun.” He said running forward, changing his genetic composure into a snake; transforming his entire body into a snake as he jumped into the brush that was around him. Akura slid within the grass and wrapped around the man and began to suffocate him. “ Now… Be a good little boy… And don’t scream.” He mumbled into the man’s ear, sliding his body on to his mouth, the man attempting to yell, but nothing. And with that Akura squeezed tightly on the man, suffocating him until he died.
“ Gensai?” The other man yelled, slowly walking out of his cover. “ So… His name was Gensai?” Akura asked the other man, slowly walking out of the brush, throwing the dead body in front of his attacker. “ How…?” He asked Akura, growling, holding on to his sword tightly. “ Simple… By killing him.” He smiled and then ran toward the other man, quickly transforming his left hand into the arm of a Gorilla, and his right into the claw of a tiger. With the Gorilla’s hand he slammed the man in the face, almost like a b***h slap, a very hard one at that, so hard that he was knocked back into a tree. “ What in the world?” The man asked as he attempted to stand up, but while he did that, Akura dug his claws on to the man’s torso. “ Oh no no no, I don’t think you’ll be getting up.” He smirked. “ Please… Have mercy.” The man pleated for his life, but to no avail, Akura wasn’t going to spare him, not if he couldn’t help it. “ Sorry… I don’t own any mercy.” He said with a smirk and he took the claws out of the man’s stomach and then he slapped him with the tiger hand, slashing part of the face, afterward he slammed his gorilla fist on to his torso, breaking several of the man’s ribs. The man’s breathing became heavy, and Akura continued to smile. He gently picket up the man with his gorilla hand and then tossed him into the ground head first, the force of the throw cracking his skull. “ It’s over.” He mumbled.
Just as he killed the second man a sudden shock was thrown into Akura’s body, returning his hands back to normal; although he wasn’t hit by the full blunt of the attack, the shock was enough to return him to normal. “ Raiton user… great…” He mumbled taking a deep breath; his body was charged with electricity, so he wasn’t going to be transforming into any form anytime soon. “ Come out… Let’s not make this harder than it has to be…” He mumbled to the man. “ You mutilated one of my allies… Clearly I have no use fighting you face to face…” He talked slowly and deeply. “ Fine… Be that way.” Akura mumbled taking in a deep breath. “ Great Infinite Sand Breakthrough “ He yelled, exhaling a large amount of wind, blowing away the trees that were infront of him, making both the suffocated body and the mutilated one blow away, and knocking down the enemy that was throwing the somewhat badly aimed raiton jutsu. “ Now will you come out? Your lightning jutsu are useless.. .The best you can do is fight me up close.” Akura spoke. “ Chidori!” He heard a cry from the trees behind him, followed by many trees falling down. He had thrown the wind jutsu in the wrong direction; not only did he waste a lot of chakra by doing this, but he revealed his position, and any enemy within a hundred miles would see that. “ Wind Blade!” He yelled making a stream of wind gather around his hand, and violently he turned around, turning the hand with the wind blade into a tiger’s entire leg, so now the wind would shield his hand from the electricity and cancel the lightning jutsu, and afterward, he would cut him into ribbons.
Rain began to fall and a bolt of lightning fell between the two combatants; it all happened in a flash. Akura stood in front of the fallen man, his hand bloddied, the man’s chest penetrated by his claw. “ My job here is done.” Akura mumbled, turning around and heading back to the village.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:42 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Apples: Well sorry we took so long...big app >.>' Well it's certainly now Approved!
Akura: *Shakes bootay* Love seeing someone use a clan I made xD Nice app! Approved!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:16 pm
It's perfectly fine and thank you both. I really appreciate it!
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Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 2:13 pm
iJwlz-kun
Akura: *Shakes bootay* Love seeing someone use a clan I made xD Nice app! Approved!
* Sees Jade Shake her bootay * oh my thanks XD
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:34 pm
RPC Name: Cody Hyuuga Bloodline/Clan Requested: Hyuuga Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: My RPC is going to be a Close quarters fighter. I thought it would be nice to have a bit of an advantage to have the Byakugan with my RPC so I have more of a chance at winning when I am Up close an personal What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Hyuuga clan has the Doujutsu called Byakugan this Doujutsu when active allows the clan member to see almost 360 degrees around them and to a certain feet. The Byakugan also allows the clan member to see the enemies Chakra Points and allows them to shut off the point so they lose chakra. WHen the Byakugan is active there is a 1 chakra point cost for the first five posts and 2 for the 2nd five Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Cody Hyuuga walked into the training grounds and did not see the dummies “Ummmmm ok I guess I have to find them.” he said as he looked around for one last time to see if he could see the dummies but it was a failure. So he closed his eyes and began focusing chakra into his eyes and in a span of a few seconds he opened his eyes and right as he did the blood veins bulging from the side of his head along with his iris becoming more apparent compared to the normally hidden iris of the Hyuuga clan. Cody Stood there looking straight ahead and in a second he seen nine dummies and smiled as he grabbed nine kunai. Cody ran to a rock he had seen in front of him he placed a foot on it and launched him self up into the air. He was about seven feet from the ground as he spun in a circle sending his kunais to the dummies He landed on his feet and looked around to see if he had hit the all. He was happy that he had hit them all. At this point he was able to work around the blind spot that that byakugan had. Cody walked away from the hidden dummy training and walked to a new area. He did not know what this place was tell he seen a clan member come jolting at him. Cody Flicked his wrist and a blade came out of his sleeve. He blocked the clan members sword attack. “Wow When did you get that” the clan member asked Cody. “Gaijin Why are you attacking me” Cody Replied to him refusing to answer the question that Gaijin had asked. “Oh, ok fine don’t answer me and this is a training exercise your father and mine set up they wanted to see how you would do in an ambush.” Gaijin replied as he stepped back pulling he sword away from Cody. Cody turned and faced Gaijin and smiled fine let the fight began then” Cody said with the biggest smile on his face. Gaijin then jumped up into the air with is sword above his head in an attacking motion, Cody looked up at Gaijin and then he began to spin expelling chakra from his tenketsu. Gaijins sword came down on Cody who remained spinning. The sword hit the vortex and sending the sword into a near by tree and Gaijin flying to a rock. Cody then took stance again he knew if he attacked Gaijin could do the same thing so he would wait for Gaijin to get impatient and attack again. After about 3 minutes of them both staring at each other waiting for an attack Gaijin Yelled and rushed at Cody again. Cody knew this was the stupidest move he could do. Cody Smiled as gaijin got closer Cody just plan dodge the punch that Gaijin had sent to Cody and then he turned around and extended his out and some chakra out of it which pushed Gaijin into the air. Cody did not wait a second as he jumped up into the air gathering Chakra into his fist he then started to spin towards Gaijin Spectral lion head appeared around his hands and Gaijin began to freak out. Cody struck Gaijin in the gut sending him even higher. Cody landed in a near by tree safely as Gaijin fall on a rock in pain. Cody walked over to him “I believe I won the fight” ( Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Juuho Soushiken - Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist )
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:50 pm
I know that I'm not a bloodline acceptor Omega, but I've been doing a lot of research recently on the Byuakugan and Juken, and I think that there a few things you have in there that aren't quite right. First of all, the blind-spot, it doesn't quite work the way you describe it. The blind spot is at the base of the neck and extends at a slightly upward angle, not straight back, so it's highly unlikely that you wouldn't be able to see a training dummy that's on the same elevation as you, especially given that most training dummies are probably going to be large enough to see at least part of the dummy even if it were at a different elevation. Also, activating your byakugan is nearly instant, so rather than "after about a minutes"(which doesn't make much sense on it's own), it would be more like "in the span of a few seconds" So those were just some issues that I saw.
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:59 pm
Lance Fulgurant I know that I'm not a bloodline acceptor Omega, but I've been doing a lot of research recently on the Byuakugan and Juken, and I think that there a few things you have in there that aren't quite right. First of all, the blind-spot, it doesn't quite work the way you describe it. The blind spot is at the base of the neck and extends at a slightly upward angle, not straight back, so it's highly unlikely that you wouldn't be able to see a training dummy that's on the same elevation as you, especially given that most training dummies are probably going to be large enough to see at least part of the dummy even if it were at a different elevation. Also, activating your byakugan is nearly instant, so rather than "after about a minutes"(which doesn't make much sense on it's own), it would be more like "in the span of a few seconds" So those were just some issues that I saw. Thanks and Yeah i failed at the Activing part Idk what I was thinking when I typed that up thanks for looking over it before Jade or Lilly looked at it
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:22 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:29 pm
Now to wait for Juli or Lilly to look at it
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:15 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Lance: Thanks for helping Omega there!
Cody: For starters, could you list the techniques you used at the bottom, preferably in italics? Just makes it easier for me to make sure you're doing the techniques properly. Aside from that, I didn't see you write anything about the chakra costs, which are pretty important.
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Alright, Approved
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 7:20 pm
RPC Name: Soren
Bloodline/Clan Requested: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=3&t=20082725#278340038
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Well i made my rpc to be a weapon master, and i personally feel that this bloodline will greatly assist him in becoming what he wants.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: I know that you engrave a marking onto a weapon of any sort, and then by doing so you can turn the blade into thousands of mini blades that look like sakura blossoms. Each level gives out different forms of power that allow you to use it for defensive and offensive purposes.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Soren stood in the middle of the field with his sword in one hand hanging down at his side, he was beaten up and covered in blood from head to toe, he looked at the three remaining attackers, these random theives had attacked him and his two squad mates, one was badly wounded while the other was partly wounded and trying to heal the other as best as she could, Soren stood between the attackers and his friends. Soren never was the best out of his squad, but he would give his life for his squad mates who had became his friends in a heartbeat. Soren stood there with his stuiped childish grin as he always did, he then chuckled softly as he gripped the sword that was in his right hand, the sword he held was his fathers, he never knew his family but knew it was important to keep.
In a sudden blur his three attackers disappeared and then reappeared one at each side of Soren and the other in front of him each had there sword pointed at Soren . Soren quickly swung his sword straight up and cut the face of the attacker in front of him, he jumped up doing a back flip allowing him to dodge the attack from the two at his sides. Soren heard a sudden voice in his head, speaking of a simple sentence, "Ato Sakura No Ki No" He repeated what he heard in his head, his sword began to glow a light pinkish color before bursting into many little sakura blossom leaves, each leaf began to fly around at the movement of the hilt of the sword. Soren swung the sword down towards the man on the right, the small blades circled man and began to cut him. The man dropped to his knees a few minutes later yelling out in pain. The other man stood there surprised and unsure of what just happened, but he looked up at Soren , Soren came downwards with the hilt of the sword, the blade quickly formed back as he swung the blade threw the last remaining attacker. Soren stood there looking over at the dead attackers and signed as he looked at his friends.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:07 am
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Whoa sorry Soren! That was an incredibly long wait!Approved!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:49 am
RPC Name: Altrius Albane Bloodline/Clan Requested: Kaguya Bloodline Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: (( -Intelligible Snarls- ... I hate Apps... )) Altrius is a agile type of fighter and he relies on sheer agility and speed to take out his opponents. I have used the Kaguya blood line in another guild with a character named Akira. I'd like to try out in this guild since it is more "stage" like.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: A Kaguya is his own weapon, that being his own bone structure. They are originally from the land of water and have been supposedly wiped out. These men and women have the ability to manipulate their bones in many different ways. By combining a mixture of agile dances and taijutsu, a Kaguya member can be one devastating weapon. << Nngh. Hopefully this is enough >>
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
Sand blew in the wind, creating a dusty brown veil in Sunagakure. The Shinobi named Altrius Albane, a Kaguya through birth but not in name was on a mission with a squad. They were typical shinobi, mainly those of lesser value in Altrius' mind. Yet, they were required for the task at hand, one that required the neutralization of a rouge. Fun...
A plan had already been set, an ambush. Yuki, another member who was a natural weapon user was to lure the rouge into the vicinity of the ambush. While that was done, another member named Haito was to inflict the enemy with his genjutsu. Altrius' job was simple, confront the man with Yuki as support. Though, Altrius was not a front on fighter like most people would think because of his heritage; the Kaguya bloodline. But, he was naturally agile and speedy along with his own twist of utilizing the bloodline to his advantage.
The day dragged on as Altrius sat in his hiding spot, waiting for Yuki to run back and commence the plan. Sitting all day in the sand made him tired and irritable. A few ideas of Yuki's distraction going wrong had also floated across the young boy's mind as well. She may had been annoying, but Altrius didn't like losing a friend.
"Help!"
A plea for help disturbed Altrius' thoughts as he almost leaped out of hiding. It was Yuki. The teen peeked above his hiding spot and saw a man with brown hair and a typical cowl of the Suna Ninja. With him, he had both Haito and Yuki tied up. b*****d... Altrius thought to himself as he shoved one hand forward, spreading his fingers apart.
Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets
His fingers shot out five (one from each finger) milk white bullet projectiles towards the Rouge. They whirled through the air with almost a hissing sound as the spin took place. Altrius half hoped his attack would land without the man knowing, but he did and surprisingly easily. The brown haired swordsman ducked off to his right as the bone bullet landed with pelting sounds in the brown sandy earth behind himself. "Appears I missed a runt..." the man said as Altrius came out of his own hiding location, decked out in his dull brown uniform suited for the sand.
A cold expression played upon Altrius's face as he walked forward towards the rouge, silently challenging him to a fight. He spoke no words and commenced the first action against his opponent. Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows Two bone white protrusions struck through his palms as the young blonde haired teen rushed forth at his enemy. His right hand aimed to strike at the man's chest, who easily moved off towards the right flank of Altrius' initial strike.
The rouge drew out a katana and went to do a downward diagonal angle to sever the kidney area in Altrius' body. However, the teen anticipated the attack and twirled counter clockwise (to the left) and parried the blow with his left bone spike. As he did that, the right bone was ready to stab into the chest to pierce the vital organs.
It was a successful hit as blood flew into the air and spilled out onto the dusty ground. A hoarse growl erupted from the man's mouth as he stumbled backwards from the mortal wound dealt by the Kaguya teen. Altrius had retracted his bone like weapons and stood in silence, watching his opponent stumble onto his back like a helpless infant. From what he could tell, he was lung shot. The sounds of his breathing was harsh and blood flowed from the gaping chest wound and from the mouth.
Like a fish out of water, the man laid there dying as Altrius casually walked over to finish the man off. He placed his left foot onto the man's throat, pushing down hard and closing his airway. His pale blue eyes stared down into the dying man as one finger pointed directly between his eyes. With no expression upon his face, Altrius spoke "This is for Sunagakure, treachery will be dealt with in blood..." the cold sultry voice rang out of his voice as the boy aimed his hand. Wasting no more time, another bullet shot out of his finger tip and right between the eyes of the rouge. His life was ended swiftly at that moment, spraying more of the blood onto the sand.
Altrius left the corpse in the dust and went to free his allies and return home. Another day, another death.
Jutsu Used-
Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets
Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows
((( Bluuuuuuurg, sorry for the length... I suck at RP samples being short << I made this one a bit...story based. ))
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:39 am
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Rei Good to see you here in TUP! Just about everything is fine in the app, save for one thing. You mentioned the density in the knowledge part, but there really wasn't a play on it in the RP sample. Please add something in about the density and what you can manipulate at that rank in and I'll check it out again.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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