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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:17 pm
Mystical_elfgirl12 Magical Rainbow By Amber In a land, not too far, a young girl notices a pond with a magical rainbow. It holds at least a hundred different colors and it sparkles with a wonderful glow. The girl touches the rainbow and she feels magical warmth in it. She closes her eyes and she feels as if she is being painted with all the colors that it contains. When she opens her eyes she has a whole new look on life and how it should be. Then she walks home to tell her mother about her experience with the magical rainbow It's so nice to see some happy prose for a change. Through your writing I can tell that you're a beautiful person. wink
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:04 am
t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 Magical Rainbow By Amber In a land, not too far, a young girl notices a pond with a magical rainbow. It holds at least a hundred different colors and it sparkles with a wonderful glow. The girl touches the rainbow and she feels magical warmth in it. She closes her eyes and she feels as if she is being painted with all the colors that it contains. When she opens her eyes she has a whole new look on life and how it should be. Then she walks home to tell her mother about her experience with the magical rainbow It's so nice to see some happy prose for a change. Through your writing I can tell that you're a beautiful person. wink thank you i am so glad that you like my poetry. and i think you are a beautiful person as well
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 5:20 pm
Mystical_elfgirl12 t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 Magical Rainbow By Amber In a land, not too far, a young girl notices a pond with a magical rainbow. It holds at least a hundred different colors and it sparkles with a wonderful glow. The girl touches the rainbow and she feels magical warmth in it. She closes her eyes and she feels as if she is being painted with all the colors that it contains. When she opens her eyes she has a whole new look on life and how it should be. Then she walks home to tell her mother about her experience with the magical rainbow It's so nice to see some happy prose for a change. Through your writing I can tell that you're a beautiful person. wink thank you i am so glad that you like my poetry. and i think you are a beautiful person as well Thankies. ^^ That makes me feel special.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 5:25 pm
t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 Magical Rainbow By Amber In a land, not too far, a young girl notices a pond with a magical rainbow. It holds at least a hundred different colors and it sparkles with a wonderful glow. The girl touches the rainbow and she feels magical warmth in it. She closes her eyes and she feels as if she is being painted with all the colors that it contains. When she opens her eyes she has a whole new look on life and how it should be. Then she walks home to tell her mother about her experience with the magical rainbow It's so nice to see some happy prose for a change. Through your writing I can tell that you're a beautiful person. wink thank you i am so glad that you like my poetry. and i think you are a beautiful person as well Thankies. ^^ That makes me feel special. would you like to read another one of my poems if you want
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 5:29 pm
Mystical_elfgirl12 t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 Magical Rainbow By Amber In a land, not too far, a young girl notices a pond with a magical rainbow. It holds at least a hundred different colors and it sparkles with a wonderful glow. The girl touches the rainbow and she feels magical warmth in it. She closes her eyes and she feels as if she is being painted with all the colors that it contains. When she opens her eyes she has a whole new look on life and how it should be. Then she walks home to tell her mother about her experience with the magical rainbow It's so nice to see some happy prose for a change. Through your writing I can tell that you're a beautiful person. wink thank you i am so glad that you like my poetry. and i think you are a beautiful person as well Thankies. ^^ That makes me feel special. would you like to read another one of my poems if you want Sure. 3nodding Speaking of which I think it's time to post another one of my own.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:08 pm
A Mother's Love By Amber
A little girl comes home from school. She awaits the arrival of her mother?s love. She is home wondering what will happen when the family is together and what they will all do. As the clock strikes six her father comes home tired and restless. He looks at her and smiles for a minute, then he turns the TV on and he watches the news. Finally her mother comes home. She is tired, but happy. She looks at her daughter and she tells her how much she loves her. She gives her a hug and she tucks her into bed to dream her sweet dreams.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:08 pm
Mermaid Paradise By Amber
In a distant ocean lives a colony of mermaids. They ponder what it would be like on dry land. They picture humans walking on the sand with funny outfits. They picture little boys with funny things on their heads and funny things on their feet. They wonder what the little girls would look like without fins. Then they think how thankful they are for having fins and living in the ocean. From then on they only ponder about things like how birds fly and how horses gallop on the sand.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:41 pm
Mystical_elfgirl12 A Mother?s Love By Amber A little girl comes home from school. She awaits the arrival of her mother?s love. She is home wondering what will happen when the family is together and what they will all do. As the clock strikes six her father comes home tired and restless. He looks at her and smiles for a minute, then he turns the TV on and he watches the news. Finally her mother comes home. She is tired, but happy. She looks at her daughter and she tells her how much she loves her. She gives her a hug and she tucks her into bed to dream her sweet dreams. dat makes me warm and fuzzy. I t reminds me of an inspirational greeting card. whee
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:44 pm
Mystical_elfgirl12 Mermaid Paradise By Amber In a distant ocean lives a colony of mermaids. They ponder what it would be like on dry land. They picture humans walking on the sand with funny outfits. They picture little boys with funny things on their heads and funny things on their feet. They wonder what the little girls would look like without fins. Then they think how thankful they are for having fins and living in the ocean. From then on they only ponder about things like how birds fly and how horses gallop on the sand. Mermaids rawk. as do unicorns! whee You're into the whole whimsical, " If the world were perfect thing" huh? All of your poems are so positive and without conflict that they're almost unrealistic, but they are a breath of fresh air from angst. ( I hope that didn't come out the wrong way. sweatdrop )
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:49 pm
t0paz Mystical_elfgirl12 Mermaid Paradise By Amber In a distant ocean lives a colony of mermaids. They ponder what it would be like on dry land. They picture humans walking on the sand with funny outfits. They picture little boys with funny things on their heads and funny things on their feet. They wonder what the little girls would look like without fins. Then they think how thankful they are for having fins and living in the ocean. From then on they only ponder about things like how birds fly and how horses gallop on the sand. Mermaids rawk. as do unicorns! whee You're into the whole whimsical, " If the world were perfect thing" huh? All of your poems are so positive and without conflict that they're almost unrealistic, but they are a breath of fresh air from angst. ( I hope that didn't come out the wrong way. sweatdrop ) i am so glad that you enjoy reading my poetry that makes me feel really happy inside so thanks
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:52 pm
Sunset of Light By Amber
As I watch the sunset I notice the array of many colors. They zoom through the sky like a shooting star with a sparkling tail of light. I watch the sky some more and I notice how the stars look like celestial beams of love and fear. It is as if they are telling us not to fear love, but to embrace it with all our souls and hearts. I go back inside and my head is filled with hope and happiness.
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 3:36 pm
I wish love was that easy and reassuring.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 9:48 pm
and here i come in....with a cold breeze of.......angst.... sweatdrop
Holding my head Seeing the shadows fleeting Silent Screams Dance upon my sanity Searching A new breathe that will never come Smothering Feel the heaviness Hear the deafening roar Silence Contradiction of life You are not here Alone Do not hear Do not see Do not feel Do not live Do not exist Do not help Do not breathe Do not think Do not love Do not dance Do not move Do not be who you are meant to be
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 10:05 pm
Well... This is one of the few poems I've written that isn't about love.
'Tis acrually modled after a song. Maybe I'll post some of my others later...
The Music Will Never Die
The tune original The song nameless The melody amazing And the music painless
So beautiful it was The music never ended You could dance throughout the night And your worries be mended
A deafening void A trifling silence A misinterpreted ending And an abrupt start of violence
The dancing had stopped The music was gone And there was no more happiness To the usual dawn
The fun was over And everyone went home The tale was ending And was chilling to the bone
The cold was piercing And the snow started to fall Yet the beautiful music Could not be heard at all
As the winter pressed on The songs were all but lost Leaving no I’s dotted And no t’s crossed
It was a weird feeling Not to know how it felt To have everything gone And have nothing melt
The cold was alarming And without a song The quiet was deafening And was eerily long
People began to believe That the song would never be They lost their faith They were no longer free
But then you came out of nowhere A tune in your head You started to play And their hunger was fed
They were free once again And the music did play The tunes were happy And they danced all day
For a moment things were different No one knew why But they all did know This time, the music would never die
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 3:25 pm
TenshiDarkAngel and here i come in....with a cold breeze of.......angst.... sweatdrop Holding my head Seeing the shadows fleeting Silent Screams Dance upon my sanity Searching A new breathe that will never come Smothering Feel the heaviness Hear the deafening roar Silence Contradiction of life You are not here Alone Do not hear Do not see Do not feel Do not live Do not exist Do not help Do not breathe Do not think Do not love Do not dance Do not move Do not be who you are meant to be It seemed like a good place to take a break from rainbows and unicorns right? lol sweatdrop
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