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 Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 4:52 pm
Rpc Name:
KirYuu
Village: Suna
Rank:
academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Soma no Kou
What you know about the clan/bl: it is a bloodline. also known as a Kekkie Genkai. it means double the trouble, and it allows the user to split into two bodies, one is always weaker, it also allows for possesion of a body, but any damages to the possesed body are inflicted to the original body. Also there is no jutsu for this bloodline, yet. there is also no one currently in this bloodline.
Rp Sample:
" You ready Yuu?" Kir asked, pulling his brother's head out of his own.
" Yeah yeah... I'm ready, better not overcharge this time, let's keep it simple for right now." Yuu said, reaching his arms out of his brother's and his legs out the other arm. " Just don't make me catch on fire again." He said, looking up at the sky.
" Why you looking up there? this time we're making our own magic!" Kir said doing some quick handsigns, and smiling as his body stated to crackle with electricity.
" It isn't magic... you know that Kir..." Yuu said, feeling the tingling feeling and pulling his head back in. his arms would go back to normal, his legs too... his head wouldn't. " i still hate that my head is my weakness..." He said, sniffling on the inside.
" Eh be quiet, when we become the rock shadow we'll never have to worry about that again!" Kir said, a smile flashing across hisface as he discharged all the built up energy, making an explosion of electricity. " Sweet!" He said, falling over.
" Great..." Yuu said, sliding out of his brother. " Now I've got to carry you again..." He said picking up his brother. " At least this time we didn't get struck by lightening..." He said wlking back to the illage with his brother over his shoulder.
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Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 10:11 pm
Orchid Moon to be honest? no >.> you do not just randomly grow a tree with mokuton. There are only 2 jutsus that allow u to grow a tree and that a jounnin rank and kage rank. Jounin level jutsu drains opponents chakra useing the tree. Kage grows a forest. (was the first kages jutsu that grew the forest in front of konoha) There is no wood manipulation jutsu that allows you to control wood like that. is it possible to make a jutsu then once i get to a high enough rank?
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 6:32 pm
Guan Senju Orchid Moon to be honest? no >.> you do not just randomly grow a tree with mokuton. There are only 2 jutsus that allow u to grow a tree and that a jounnin rank and kage rank. Jounin level jutsu drains opponents chakra useing the tree. Kage grows a forest. (was the first kages jutsu that grew the forest in front of konoha) There is no wood manipulation jutsu that allows you to control wood like that. is it possible to make a jutsu then once i get to a high enough rank? it possible to make a jutsu at any rank... the jutsu being accepted or not is another story. Something like that would be A rank + and have many restrictions ^^
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 6:50 pm
 Village: Mist Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyoton What you know about the clan/bl: Hyoton is the bloodline ability to combine wind and nearby water to create ice, and manipulate it into various forms as: senbom (needles), spears, mirrors. This ice, merged with the user’s chakra, is stronger than most metals, and invulnerable to fire attacks. To activate this ability and to manipulate the ice, the user needs to perform hand seals.Weakness is Electricty Attacks. Haku was the last member of the unnamed Clan from the Mist who possessed the Hyoton Kekkei Genkai. However, he was killed in battle while fighting Team Kakashi. It is not known if there are any other surviving members of his bloodline. Something notable about Haku was that he was able to control the Hyoton ability at a young age. He was also able to perform the necessary seals to manipulate ice with one hand; and was able to manipulate water without hand seals. This Kekkei Genkai follows the same principles as most chakra fusion jutsus. To manage it, the user needs to control at least two chakra elements of be able to fuse them together to create a new element. In this case, water and wind chakra control was required to perform Hyoton. Possible Techniques: Sensatsu Suisho (Thousand Ice Needles) - Ninjutsu technique that creates a thousand ice senbom (needles). Haku was able to control the attack of these needles at will. The senboms can be used to immobilize, torture, or kill. Hyoton is the bloodline ability to combine wind and nearby water to create ice, and manipulate it into various forms as: senbom (needles), spears, mirrors. This ice, merged with the user’s chakra, is stronger than most metals, and invulnerable to fire attacks. To activate this ability and to manipulate the ice, the user needs to perform hand seals. Haku was the last member of the unnamed Clan from the Mist who possessed the Hyoton Kekkei Genkai. However, he was killed in battle while fighting Team Kakashi. It is not known if there are any other surviving members of his bloodline. Something notable about Haku was that he was able to control the Hyoton ability at a young age. He was also able to perform the necessary seals to manipulate ice with one hand; and was able to manipulate water without hand seals. This Kekkei Genkai follows the same principles as most chakra fusion jutsus. To manage it, the user needs to control at least two chakra elements of be able to fuse them together to create a new element. In this case, water and wind chakra control was required to perform Hyoton. Possible Techniques: Sensatsu Suisho (Thousand Ice Needles) - Ninjutsu technique that creates a thousand ice senbom (needles). Haku was able to control the attack of these needles at will. The senboms can be used to immobilize, torture, or kill. Makyo HyoSho (Crystal Ice Mirrors)- Ninjutsu technique which creates several ice mirrors, to form a prison to trap the enemy. Haku merges his body with one of the mirrors, which then allows him to move freely from one mirror to the next at near instant speed. This allows him to attack his opponents from multiple angles at almost the same time. Using his ice senboms, Haku can create a deadly web of needles with this technique (Crystal Ice Mirrors)- Ninjutsu technique which creates several ice mirrors, to form a prison to trap the enemy. Haku merges his body with one of the mirrors, which then allows him to move freely from one mirror to the next at near instant speed. This allows him to attack his opponents from multiple angles at almost the same time. Using his ice senboms, Haku can create a deadly web of needles with this technique Rp Sample: Yumi makes her way to the Ninja Academy.She is hoping she will pass her last exam she has been training so long for.Maybe finally becoming a Genin like she had always dreamed. "What the HECK!" Yumi screams as if she had seen a ghost. Suddenly A hot ,bloody mess comes right before her eyes. She sees a group of rouge ninja coming into vison. She jumps over what seems like 1 millon assainated bodies of innocent people. "What are you DOING!" " Look kid,You are becoming a an interferance, get out of the way or I will hurt you!!!!" says an ennoyied rouge ninja "Make ME!!" Says Yumi Yumi Begins to form her ice she fuses her wind and water out of her nap sack to make her ice.She foucused her chakra. She ."Makyo HyoSho! "She shouts.She forms mirror like objects and places them in front of her enemiesShe forms her self into a mirror and begins to confuse her ememys by swiching mirrors. "Where did the "kid" go! "I dont know did you see her? I thought I saw her in that mirror!" "No That Mirror!" No That One!" Say the extremely confused ninjas Suddenly she smashes the mirrors and focuses her charka on a different attack. "Sensatsu Suisho!" she shouts. She forms her ice into a small, pointy sembons or needles and wields them against her ememies. The Rouges try to dodge but are still hit with most of her many painful needles. One Rouge Ninja faints from loss of blood ,others with almost 100 needles in their backs.Just then, a ninja throws an attack at Yumi .He uses a Strong Electricly justsu and throws a Kunai at her stomach. She falls over clucthing her stomach seeing some of her bloody mix with the crisp ,white snow.She figures the rouges must be from the Village Hidden in Clouds. She uses a healing atnibotic and gets up. She focuses hedr charkra..Shazou No Jutsu! She Shouts! Suddenly she forms into a ice statue that resembles her of where she was originally was standing.Suddenly a rouge shatters it and Yumi begins her next move." Reido!" She Yells" She manipulates the water from the melted snow around her and forms it into ice."Reinigiri!" She says.Then she begins slidind on the ice fliping and almost staking as if the is no gravity. She throws a smoke bomb run and BOOM all the rouges are dead. The antibotic wears off. Her Villages Kage walks in. He has seen It all. " Yumi Cho you are a hero you are amazing for your bravery I will give you this." Says Yumi's Village Kage. He hand s her a vile of water. "Thank you Sir. What is It?" Yumi asks confused. It it is water from a a spring filled with healing water we found in Haku's pocket when we were carried of his body."I am Honnored" Yumi see her mother. " Yumi limps to her mom ,a nurse at the local hospital.
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 11:17 pm
(I'm noticing that a few of these accepted samples lack the two paragraph/ten line minimum.)
Rpc Name: Jubei Satetsu Kurotsuchi. It makes sense in the profile.
Village: Iwagakure.
Rank: Academy Student...
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu [Iron Sand] (Hoping for Clan Head... When he grows up)
What you know about the clan/bl: It's basically similar to the powers of Magneto. It's manipulation of the magnetic properties in ferromagnetic materials, such as iron dust. It can be used to break down metal weapons, such as kunai and shuriken, or it can go further and dip into the Earth and pull up some iron to use. It can be used to make different weapons, such as a sword or a small shield, or form a flurry of knives to stick the opponent from every direction. There's even the gigantic siege turtle jutsu. It's very versatile, and also very dangerous in the right hands.
Rp Sample:
Jubei was not going to have a very good day, if one read the signs. It was easy enough, all one had to do was look behind Jubei and decide that the ninja chasing him, a very angry looking assassin, was hell-bent on killing him and stealing his kekkie genkai. That was the problem with having a kekkie genkai; every ruthless ninja out there wanted one. Most wanted those Sharingan and Byakugan eyes, but every once in a blue moon you had a ninja that wanted your DNA so they could have their medical-nin pals splice it with theirs so they could have your kekkie genkai. It was very annoying. But he wasn't afraid of dying today, since he had a plan in the works. A great plan, one that would, if everything went the way it was supposed to, get him out of this alive and well. He just needed some time and a little ingenuity, one of which he had copious amounts, and the other, well... He was running out of. He was sure he would make it out of this one, but there was always that nagging doubt that he might end up nothing more than a prized trophy for someone. The thought sent a shiver down his spine, but that only reinforced his resolve to win this fight. Jubei reached into his kunai holster and gathered some chakra. This was going to need some precise timing and some good ol' fashion Iron Sand goodness. He just hoped that it would be enough...
The moment had arrived. The stage was set. With some quick thinking, Jubei had set up some wire-traps, each waiting to be sprung. Each trap would pull the wire, which would release the branch that was holding all of those shuriken in place. Those shuriken would tear that enemy-nin to shreds. Jubei hid quietly in the the shadows of a large boulder, waiting eagerly to activate the jutsu. He was holding several strands of metal wire, for a purpose that would soon be clear. Before he could go over the plan again, the enemy-nin stalked into the killing grounds. The enemy was alert, looking for Jubei for some sinister purpose. Jubei narrowed his eyes and glared, waiting for the enemy shinobi to spring the wire trap and die, so he could quickly get home.
The enemy shinobi had other ideas, though. Being of a higher rank, she quickly saw through the trap and purposely avoided the spot, instead looking for where Jubei was hiding. He wasn't a great ninja, not yet, and he may never get the chance. Her eye caught the slight shine of light coming off of his headband protector, and using her superior speed and taijutsu skill, delivered what was sure to be a fatal strike to his throat. His life would have surely been over in that violent, brutal instant... If that was Jubei.
It was, instead, a Kaneton - Hagane Bunshin no Jutsu (Metal Release - Steel Clone Skill), a jutsu his father had taught him many weeks before. What was supposed to be a fatal blow was instead a broken knee for the kunoichi, but before she could escape, the real Jubei surfaced from the shadows, a mad look in his eye. The steel wire his clone was holding, well... It was in his hands. A terrified look engulfed her once-beautiful, and pain-wracked, features as he performed the necessary hands signs and, just to be unnecessarily sadistic, spoke the name of the technique. "Kaneton Release - Hagane Dama (Metal Release - Steel Bullet)," He said, somewhat happily, as the metal wire in his hand broke down into the iron sand his family was named for, and acting in accordance with his jutsu, flew into the kunoichi at very high speeds. She was ripped apart, her beauty forever marred by the technique she so sought after. Rather ironic, really.
With the threat defeated, and his stomach rumbling, Jubei disarmed his decoy trap and headed for home. This time, he was not alone. He had his Hagane Bushin with him, and they had a wonderful conversation. The Hagane Bushin was carrying the ruined body of the kunoichi, because, well... One never knew what secrets a shinobi might hold.
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:37 am
WILL SOMEONE PLEASE ACCEPT MY PROFILE!!
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:42 am
I don't really know why you are telling people to accept your profile in the bloodline approval section...
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:45 am
NejiTentenLuv WILL SOMEONE PLEASE ACCEPT MY PROFILE!! please e patient, I'm sure that the crew wil get to you soon, it has only been one day, and they get kinda pissed when you tell them what to do. ^.^
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:50 am
OMG! I am SOOOOOO sorry I an kind of anixous... I didn't want to piss anyone off.
SO PLEASE DISREGARD THAT COMMENT
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 4:55 am
Evergreen Goblin Rpc Name: Naito Nara Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara Clan What you know about the clan/bl: They can manipulate their shadows to do really awesome jutsus, and they originate in the Hidden Leaf Village. Rp Sample: Naito sighed as he approached the bandits' camp. 'For crying out loud, these guys don't even have guards... and this is a B-Rank mission?' he thought. Suddenly an alarm sounded as Naito got close to the camp, and several bandits came out and attacked him. He just sighed and made a handseal. Suddenly several tendrils shot out of his shadow and skewered the bandits as Naito said, "If you're going to attack, you might want to make it less obvious." Several more bandits lunged at him, but he just sank into a strange pool of shadow as he chuckled. Then he re-emerged several feet away and went through a series of handseals before his shadow turned into a large dragon and ate the bandits. "All too easy," Naito said in amusement as his shadow returned to normal.
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 11:35 am
Rpc Name: Ono Oichi
Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Origami no Dara
What you know about the clan/bl: This Kekki Genkai allows the user to manipulate paper in various ways, for example papers shape, size and density. Stronger ninja with the Kekki Genkai can use paper to make wings, turn into paper animals and combine bomb tags with their jutsu to add an explosice kick to their jutsu. The clan's jutsu is naturaly weak to three elements Katon, Raiton and Suiton. Katon and Raiton can easily burn the paper and Suiton dampens it and destorys it. However the suton nature can be mixed with the paprt to create a more durable paper meshaw which is resistant to suitan and more dense.
Rank Applied For: Kekki Genkai Head
Rp Sample: As the man dashed forward and performed the hidden leaf style "Leaf Whirlwind" jutsu. He droped low and sweeped the floor, the air flowing with a wush like manner in a style of an upper cut. The man's leg came into contact with his foe, a young woman. As she was knocked off her feet she was sent spiraling backwards before crashing into a tree. She rolled to the side quickly and leaped up into the air as she performed hand signs. "Ninja art paper wins," she said. A split second after activating this jutsu a bundle of lose paper tumbled out from unde rher cloak as chakra was absorbed into it. It then fluttered up and attached to the womans back as it begun to fold and bend until it took the shape of large giant wings. As the chakra inside the paper gave it an increased density and made it razor sharp the woman flapped her new wings to remain air born. Upon flapping her wings she created a large blast of wind whick knocked the man off his feet once again and caused him to crash into one of the hidden leaf forests tree's. "This is the power of my Kekki Genkai, and your life ends here," she muttered.
The man smiled at her as she begun to laugh, "Do you think I'm scared of you and your little oragami tricks?! Your pathetic, don't make me laugh!" he said before standing up and grabbing the Katana off of his back, drawing it from its sheath. "I'll cut you down where you stand," he said. "Your not worth my time, Chou tokkoutai-butterfly kamikaze unit," she said as she formed hand signs and watched as 5 small pieces of paper from her wings dispereced and folded and bent their shapes until they took the form of butterflies which flitted and fluttered down towards the enemy ninja. "Is that the best you can do woman?" he said as he sliced the paper butterflies to ribbions with a multiple slah attack. "Never underestimate your oponent, no matter how weak they seem, you mis-jugded just how deadly those creations were, a fatal mistake." she said with a flat monotone. "What," the man said as he turned his attention to the diced paper that fell slowly to the floor, he then noticed they were bomb tags and in a split second they ignited into a large blast, and ended his life.
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 7:03 pm
Evergreen: Denied - The RP was not good enough. Of the 30+ Jutsu there, you only used like....3...also, there is a whole other stage, which has its own weaknessess and what not as well. On top of that, the RP was not ling enough.
Theiceangel of darkness: Denied - First thing, what is it that drives people to kill me and Zane all the time D;? Not that thats actually why you are denied. It was because you used Hyouton Techniques, but you were applying for the Ushio clan...?
Zetsubou: Approved, though I'm not really too sure what you were doing in the rp e.e'. Also, despite the fact that it says you could possess people, there aren't any clan jutsu...perhaps you should create some in the custom area, and we could add them in.
Nejitentenluv: Denied. I'm like, 100% sure you simply copied and pasted all the information in the What You Know section...Also, in your RP sample...you didn't use any of the jutsu written down there. It seems you used the jutsu from...idk wikipedia or something!
Anon: Denied....simply because you are you...jk xP Well, it is a very nice RP, and you seem to show a good understanding of things. The only thing I have something against, is the lack of jutsu. Though, you are approved.
Remedy: Denied. The RP sample was fine, though the what you know section was a bit weak. You didn't really say anything about the weaknessess.
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 7:05 pm
Jade, are you OK with being the regular bloodline acceptor now, since I hadnt realized we closed custom bloodlines when I gave it to you sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 7:06 pm
gregar828 Jade, are you OK with being the regular bloodline acceptor now, since I hadnt realized we closed custom bloodlines when I gave it to you sweatdrop And Remedy, you cant be clan head until chuunin rank
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