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 Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:17 pm
Name of weapon: Jin: Mushuitu ( Metal: woodwaterearth ) Who owns the weapon: Okuribi Where it was found/Who made it: it was found in a summoning scroll along with the Mokuton Scrolls that were held in Okuribi's jacket when he was found. *Note: He has to touch the scroll with A Mokuton Jutsu for it to break the summon seal, and bring out the Blade. The Range of the weapon: Three sword lengths. ( About twelve feet ) Weakness: Katon, Raiton, And the hinges in it's joints. Description: It is three blades. One Brown, One Blue and one Olive. First blade: TuSecond Blade: ShuiThird Blade: Mu* Note: The Names are from the Chinese elements. It looks like normal Blades, But the end of each blade has a small slit in it that a blade can be inserted in about 3 to five inches. Then A clicking noise is heard, and the sword's handle is lengthened and narrowed into strings that inlay into the blades. only the bottom handle ( The one Okuribi holds ) does not enact this transformation. After that, three joints are created on the blade, so that the blade can turn and pivot on the spot, making it capable of reaching around objects. Properties of the Inlayed wire: The Wire is capable of channeling Okuribi's chakra, making him able to use jutsu literally out of the blade itself. This Way of using Jutsu is different from the Regular way. He must charge his jutsu into the Blade, and in three turns ( Posts of his opponent the Jutsu goes off. ( This does not count as his move in the Turn it goes off ) This blade requires 50 Posts to train, 10 Training to weild it straight without it bending, 10 without it spinning, 10 the learn how to swing it without allowing it to Bend, 10 Post training how to swing it without letting it spin. Rp Sample: "..." Okuribi said sighing, Jumping as his assailant jumped at him with His blade again. " Pitiful..." He said sighing, unsheahing his blade, Tu. " First Blade... Tu... " He said sighing, Getting into a fighting stance. " I Will Kill you you sorry excuse for a worm!" The Enemy ninja said smiling, running forwards, attempting to slash Okuribi in half. " Now Die miserable beast of Burden!!!!" He said laughing. " Too slow... " Okuribi said, tilting his arm and blocking hit, his blade not giving an inch, even though it looked as if he were holding it loosly. " Second Blade... Shui. " He said, unsheathing his second blade with his free hand, he let out a sigh, stabbing with it acros his chest, infront of his blade, Directly at his opponent's right Shoulder. " Now die... " Okuribi said, sighing. " Ha! Like I'll let that happen! " The Enemy said, laughing and swinging his blade up, using Okuribi's Tu as a guide, He smacked Shui in a wide arch above Okuribi's head. He jumped back and smiled, he started to run forwards, closing the Gap between the two. " ... " Okuribi said, Sighing. ' I'll have... to use... Mu... won't I... ' He thought to himself sighing, he took both of his blades, and inserted Shui into tu's handle, And inserted Tu's point into Mu's handle that was behind his head. Letting out another sigh, Okuribi drew out the Enlongated blade. The Ribbons of cloth on the handles of the blades fell, wrapping around The handle of the Long blade, intertwining underneath Okuribi's hand. Once revealed the Wood turned to a dark Grey, and you could hear metal sliding on metal as it turned into Wires, inlaying themselves into theblade. Once the entire handles were inlayed as wire, Joints and hinges were Revealed. Showing a little effort to hold it directly infront of him. Which anyone else, besides any other person who never showed anything upon their face, would have shown Great trouble, weilding the blade that Was twelve feet long, not to mention the fact that the Joints could bend into a ninty degree angle, or even spin completely around. ' I'm glad... that I... trained beforehand... ' Okuribi thought sighing, He finally got his blade in place. He looked up at his opponent and stood in his attack stance. He pushed up on the blade, and brought his hands together, making handsigns quickly, he caught the blade easily. " Ha! You think that you can Fight with that huge thing? " He said, laughing, andrunning forwards, passing the Point of Jin: MuShuiTu. " ... " Oku Ribi Said, Tilting the blade, The Tip of it turning and flipping entering the ground, He side stepped, and sighed. This person was an idiot. He tilted his blade the other way, making it turn, so that the Blade was Facing the charging enemy. " You think that will hit me? " The Enemy ninja said laughing, not able to stop in time, he put his blade up, and ran into Jin: Mushuitu. " ... " Okuribi sighed Sidestepping again, this time to the Burried end of Jin: Mushuitu. flicking the blade, making All the sides point at The enemy ninja, enclosing him into a Triangle, tight enough that he couldn't escape without using a Jutsu. " Now die... " Okuribi said sighing. " Ha, So you have me like this, You just wait, I'll bust out in just a second. " He said, Letting go of his katana, and preforming a Jutsu, water picking up and flinging Shuriken at OkuRibi. " If you don't dodge and let me out, then you die!!! " He said laughing. " Wrong... " Okuribi said, the Jutsu he had charged into his blade earlier going into effect. " Rising Bamboo blades. " He said sighing, Bamboo Spitting his opponent. Thirty Plants to be exact. The Shuriken disapated into water, and fell short of Okuribi's feet. " Too Easy... " Okuribi said, tilting Jin: mushuitu's handle, the joints reverted into Sheaths, The Wires inlayed into the Blade, folding up and recondensing into Wood again, The Ribbons comming off the Handle of the long blade, and replacing itself onto the right handles. He sighed, taking the Sheaths from hi back and tossing them into the air, he Swung his blade, the Blades releasing one another, they all flew into their Respective Sheaths, which Okuribi caught. He looked back at his opponent, who was now a pincushion, fiilled with his Bamboo blades. " Told you... " He said turning and walking away, he let out a sigh. He had helped the earth by thinning the herd of idiots.
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:08 pm
How long has it been since I submitted a custom? Too long. Well here it is other mods, your chance to tell ME what I did wrong for a change!
Name of weapon: Serpent Fangs (Yamatano's Current Daggers)
Who Owns the weapon: Is it THAT hard to figure out?
Where it was found/who made it: These are the Daggers that Yamatano has had since the beginning of the RP, but they have been given their special properties by the reforging in the Demascus forgery and the power of Manda and the Summoning Snakes.
Weakness: If struck by water, jutsu or non, the venom of the blades will be washed away, leaving them normal.
Description: I'm toying with the idea of poison in addition, but my real idea is this: By expending 4 chakra points (2 for each dagger) Yamatano is able to extend each of his daggers to the length of a Katana.
RP Sample: I'm busy. Expect to see it tomorrow.
@Zetsu: Masamune is SIX FEET LONG. BOTH OF YOU ARE WRONG. But Hinote is right Cain, your blade is impossible to use.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:47 am
And Greg has yet again managed to crush my hopes and dreams of being right... emo
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:36 pm
Name of weapon: The Cross to Bear
Who owns the weapon: Kay Aburame
Where it was found/Who made it: The man who makes all of Kay's weapons
The Range of the weapon: 9 ft. melee, 15m ranged
Weakness: This weapon isn't very well suited for stopping raiton jutsu being its composition easily conducts lightning, and it is succeptible to fire as well.
Description: It is a nine foot long spear that has a cross at the very top of it and is made of an unknown element found by a merchant traveling in the rain village. The weapon itself looks like nothing more than a cross that fit's into chakra, but for one point of chakra, Kay can indeed make this spear elongate into a nine foot long spear with two large arms like a cross has. It is very strong, and heavier than your average katana, but it has a somewhat devastating effect. For defense and offense it is well suited to stop tai and bukujutsu, and when it extends it does so with extreme speed, and is deadly to anyone without substantial armor to block it. It also has a rather usefull effect. Using chakra, equal in rank to a chuunin jutsu, the weapon can levitate, and be shot forward with extreme speed for a good distance, or be returned for the price of a genin jutsu.
Rp Sample:
As the battle around Kay raged on he stood still for a moment, closing his eyes and holding his cross againts his chest. "Don't fail me now luck, be my lady tonight!" he said holding up teh cross and causing it to shine the same color of his chakra. The bottom of the croos pointed and sharpened into the same shape as a kunai. The arms and bottom area of the cross elongated, creating an impressive spear that shown out across the battle field. The enemy ninja thought it would be harder to maneuver ignorantly, and threw shurinken at him. He spun it around as Akura hid behind him and the shuriken were tossed away. He then let it levitate, and his chakra shot it forward it at the ninja closest to him, impaling him, and then ran in and grabebd it, snatching it and stabbing it into the ground, the arms of it protecting him from the enemy's wakizishi. Shi and Etsuhi quickly ended the two, and then they were surrounded by a cell of enemy ninja. "Oh bugger," Kay said.
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:21 am
 Name of weapon: Insanity's Edge Who owns the weapon: Michael Cornelius Where it was found/Who made it: Insanity's Edge was a special dagger that Michael's father was fond of, and often carried with him. He looted the weapon from a locked trunk years after their death, it being the only untouched item in the broken home. The Range of the weapon: 10" Weakness: The effect of the weapon doesn't work continually on the same target forever. After being abused by its effect twice the target begins to gain a resistance to it, otherwise blocking it out/realizing it's a genjutsu of sorts. Description: Although a Konaga cannot himself/herself cast a genjutsu, a specifically crafted blade may. Insanity's Edge is a unique weapon that takes advantage of the otherwise disadvantageous pain of the Konaga. When painted in the blood of another, it casts a sort a genjutsu-like effect. The dagger relays information in such a way that it ties its victim to that of the user. The victim would then experience all that the user experiences, in this case, that pain of a Konaga, for three seconds. As most shinobi are not even close to being used to their pain, it immediately ravages their body with the extremely painful sensations. It also relays what the user is thinking at the time to the victim's mind, allowing them to 'read' Michael's thoughts. Often he is depicting how he will torture, and kill the other for his own pleasure, which is exactly what the target will see. Once the effect is used it cannot be for another twenty posts. Both of the effects last for a full post. A more minor aspect of the dagger, is that it is made of a metal that is a grade or two stronger than a kunai, and can conduct the main elemental affinity of the user. RP Sample:xxxxMichael stepped out onto the coarse sand with hit booted feet, looking about the barren area. He had just left the cover he had taken to avoid a sandstorm which appeared to have lasted a full day. His rations were low, and he would completely out of water. If this were a mission, it would be grotesquely disappointing. However, this was just a simple travel attempt to reach Sunagakure. He had heard there was an arrogant Shinobi there who thought himself better than others, supposedly a jinchuuriki with frightening capabilities. Just the mere thought of it made him smile, since he had never fought one of the demon hosts before. He would have been there already, if it hadn't been for a mistake in direction, and a miserably long sandstorm. The hours spent within the cover was welcomed though, since it provided ample time for him to meditate. xxxxThe pink hues scanned the horizon once more and found nothing but sand dunes and rock. It looked like there was still a ways to go, and he needed to cross the area quickly. He wouldn't survive much longer without more water. With his goal in mind he began to read the sand again, listening to the sound of his boots pressing against the sand. It was the only thing he could hear besides his breath. Which either meant his footsteps were strangely loud, his breath was heavy, or that it was just quiet. It was the latter, and the silence was slightly disturbing at best, since it was usually an omen of danger in the area. Why would anything dangerous live out in this barren land of sand, rock, and sun? xxxxWhat appeared over one of the distant sand dunes didn't seem dangerous at all. With what little he could see Michael made them out to be two or three human figures walked in the opposite direction. It seemed like they had spotted him as well, since they suddenly began a mad dash towards him. Their speed was surprising, which meant that they were fellow shinobi. Michael stopped walked and just stood there, waiting for the now three shinobi to reach his sand dirtied figure. There was sand just about everywhere. It coated his face, and what exposed skin he had, as well as mixing itself in with hair, and sticking to his clothes. A bath would be in order when he could afford the luxury, since sand was never really his thing. xxxxThe three figures took approximately ten minutes, but made it nonetheless, standing within ten feet of Michael. Each of them had a kunai hold, attempting to hold it menacingly. xxxx"Hey, goth man, give us what ya' got, or we'll skin ya'." The taller one said, his voice no more impressive than the average male. He took a step closer to Michael and plastered a menacing grin on his own face, holding the kunai as if ready to strike. xxxx"Oh? Three rogue shinobi wishing to steal from me? That's rather absurd, since I doubt any of you can. The choice is yours, die at my hand, or run back to wherever you came from." Michael replied, his voice growing more threatening as he spoke. The mere fact that these three thought they could rob him was infuriating. Sure they didn't know who he was, but that didn't make a difference, they were going to die whether they chose to or not. xxxx"Tch. Let's just kill the ******** already." The third one said, apparently female by the distinct sound of her voice. Upon further inspecting, Michael's pink orbs were successfully able to spot the curves of the woman, those being the trademark of her sex. Apparently she noticed, because she spoke again. "Checking me out? Go ahead, last thing you'll see before you die."xxxxThat was it, even though they had said little, Michael was already thirsting for their blood. His expression changed to match his emotions, and he threw off the cloak that partially shielded him from the desert sands. The leather of his clothes squeaked as he balled his hands into fists. Making the first move, he charged forward at the one who spoke first. Ill-prepared for the assault, the man went down with a solid punch to the forehead, being subsequently killed by a solid kick to the neck as he fell. Bewildered as well, the others took a few moments to shake it off before moving in for the attack on Michael. Killing the first man was disappointing, but he'd be sure to extract all of his pleasure from the woman. xxxxThe second man let out a short cry and stabbed at him with a kunai, recoiling instantly when he noticed that Michael had easily dodged. He dropped the piece of metal and began to form hand signs at a fast pace. xxxx"Katon: Daitou no Jutsu" The man spoke, thrusting his arm to the side. Flames burst around it and extended to further its reach. He charged once more at Michael, letting out yet another yell as he wildly swung. Waiting until the last moment, Michael side-stepped the attack with ease and stuck his foot out, tripping the male shinobi. He followed the man to the ground with the game foot and kept the pressure on his back. At that moment the kunoichi let out a short cry and fell to her knees. All Michael did was smirk after taking a momentary glance, she was a genjutsu user. xxxxTurning his attention back to the man on the ground, he saw that he was struggling furiously to get from under Michael's foot. He chuckled, and wrapped his gloved fingers around the hilt of his dagger and drew it. Using the foot that was pressing the man down to support his weight, Michael bent down and pressed the blade of the dagger to the man's back. He kept pressing until the blade was half an inch deep and began to drag it upward for the length of a foot. With a time delay of one second, the genjutsu-like effect of his dagger activated. Immediately the man began to let out disturbing screams of pain, his own body momentarily feeling the pain of a Konaga. He too felt the same feeling Michael felt when the chakra ravaged his body, viewing his thoughts for the moment as well. Images of Michael lightly cutting the girl in several places and torturing her appeared in the victim's mind, doing nothing to divert him from the pain. Soon enough he passed out from the intense pain, allowing Michael to kill him with a strong stomp on the back of the man's neck. xxxx"Now for you..." He said, turning around to face the kunoichi who was still on the ground. She was shaking, apparently frightened by the vision that was viewed when trying to cast a genjutsu on him. Slowly, he began to walk to her, gently licking the blade off of the blade of his dagger. It tasted sweet, and tinted his sand-covered cheeks in a light pink. The blood was arousing, exciting, and overall great to see. It filled him with otherwise unknown happiness. With all of this in mind, he pinned the girl to the ground, giving her a hideous grin as she stared up at him in shock. "We're going to have some fun."xxxxThe girl began to fight him, moving about and trying to escape his grasp. She was unsuccessful and gave up after a few minutes, shivering, and beginning to cry. xxxx"W-what are you going to do to me?" She asked. xxxx"Ahh... don't worry your pretty little face with that. Tell me your name." Michael lightly slid the edge of the dagger along her cheek, the blade so sharp that it drew only a few beads of blood. The kunoichi cringed, shutting her eyes, and opening them again to answer his question. xxxx"M-M-Mina..." She answered, her tears beginning the wet the sand below her head. Obviously she was afraid of dying, and her thoughts were exactly on that. She knew he was going to kill her, and she was powerless to stop him with both of her comrades dead. This man was a heartless b*****d in her mind, someone morally retarded. xxxx"Mina? That's a pretty name. So... fitting." Michael said before taking the dagger and ripping it across her shoulder. The girl cried out in pain, only serving to excite him as he lowered his head and lightly licked the sweet liquid that was leaving the wound. "The blood of women always did taste better." He stated, reaching into his kunai holster and pulling out four. Although ineffective with the sandy ground, he drove one kunai through each of her hands, and one through both of her feet. She began to scream, something Michael was all too familiar with. xxxxHe couldn't hold back anymore. With himself already aroused and excited by her blood, Michael took the dagger and pressed it hard against her neck. The kunoichi sobbed uncontrollably, only to be interrupted by a scream of her own as he began to drag the blade across her exposed flesh. Blood sprayed out of the large wound and dirtied the front of Michael, covering his face, hair, and clothes. Satisfaction and immense excited filling him, he reached his hands down and cupped them together, gathering her blood. He spread the delicious fluid over his face and hair, reaching out with his tongue to lick up what it could. It tasted sweet, it tasted delicious. The experience was beyond that of meditating, it was more. Michael moaned, his arms going limp as he savored the moment, savoring it before the pain returned.
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:39 am
Name of weapon: Soushu
Who owns the weapon: Tensaijin Kanja
Where it was found/Who made it: A blacksmith spent ten years forging this weapon and infused it with every ounce of his chakra. As a retired Jounin and a member of the Senju clan his chakra was quite high but his skill in infusing the materials was uncontested. The blacksmith died at the end of the process but he created one of the strangest blades in existence.
The materials that were put into the blade consisted of the remains of a specific meteor. A temporal device that gathered chakra through time and space. The remains of an Elder Wolf Summon. Several locks of Tensaijin Kanja hair and the blessing of 'God' when it passed through Amegakure.
The Range of the weapon: Three feet
Weakness: Such a powerful blade should have it's own weaknesses so here they are
-The blade is 'alive' and can thus, in theory, be effected by Genjutsu
-Because it is hyper-thin the blade is also VERY heavy and dense
-Senju clan members can feel its presense because their wooden constructs suddenly become vibrant with plant life
-It takes ten posts per month to use the blades abilities
-Tensai will always be in pain because of his emphatic relationship with the swords concentrated chakra supply
Description: A bronze colored 'O' chaped decoration covers the first three inches of the blade. The crossguard is eliminated on the right side, leaving only a smooth transition of handle to blade. The right side has two intercepting prism like curved decorative filled with multiple angular notches with a similar function to the sealed zanpakutou's crossguard. The right crossguard looks similar to gears in this fashion. A shedding flower petal design imprinted on the 'O' decoarative is surrounded by a brief philosophical haiku. The handle has also lengthened for additional stability and control, though a subtle two inch bend with a loop at the end of the hilt is added. Violet string is wrapped around the handle and rises to the empty left crossguard where it forms a tight loop and lets four inches of string hang. The blade is several times heavier than normal...and exponentially sharper. The blade is so thin and sharp that, when held vertically in front of Seiji, light is actually 'cut' rendering the wielder invisible because the light waves are sliding off the edge of the blade and moving around it. Even this is not yet a true testament to the sharpness of Atsui Kokudo's edge. When swung at high speeds an empty void of air is often fired, creating a potent suction force that draws surrounding matter towards its core. This invisible wave becomes an arc of heavily compressed debri and high density atmosphere capable of exploding with dramatic force. Even a butterfly that carefully lands on the edge of the blade will be severed. Water and most liquids often flow AROUND it due to it's sharpness.
As said before, Senshu is a sentinent blade and has it's own inner world where it's power source lies. This 'inner world' is simply a disturbance within space and time available once a resonance has been created between the thought waves of Tensai and Senshu. Within this 'inner world' four towering torii surround a spherical orbject.
A series of seals along the torii can be stripped away and Senshu's power source will flood a network similar to the chakra circulatory system. This network allows Senshu to tap into a Quintessent energy source guarded by the torii. The energy source is an amalmagation of demonic, natural, and normal chakra (Neither Tensai nor Senshu can use this energy it only keeps Senshu alive). Once released Tensai chakra network experiences a growth near the hilt of the blade that connects the two. This connection allows Tensai to boost his dramatically boost his speed and strength at the cost of eternal pain as the intense chakra surges through his body and stimulates it. This pain and Tensai's chakra fuels the blade because of it's emphatic relationship with Tensai, allowing it to produce various violet colored energy constructs. These constructs can take the shape of shields and walls or arcs and blasts of energy. Each construct requires a C rank amount of chakra but the concentrated nature of the chakra damages opponents on a cellular level, leaving second to third degree 'chakra burns'.
Rp Sample: In the works
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:04 pm
@Zetsu: Generally speaking, I actually like this weapon. Although you say it's nine feet, and then it grows to nine feet. So I'm wondering, does it grow to eighteen feet, or is it actually originally a smaller height and THEN it grows to nine feet? And the only thing I would change about this is the jutsu channeling thing. If I were to approve this weapon, I would only want it to be able to channel Mokuton jutsu because of its nature. I don't want it to be able to just channel ALL of your jutsu, that's overdoing it as far as power is concerned. And I'd want it to take just as much chakra as it would to use the jutsu without the weapon. Finally, I wouldn't allow you to get this until Chuunin. Reason being in order to use this weapon, you have to summon it. And the summoning jutsu is a chuunin level technique. So even if with the one change I mentioned I approved this, you could save it in a customs thread, but I wouldn't allow you to use it until chuunin.
@Kayvient: DENIED. If you look in at the rules on the front page, it says nothing that can absorb and reflect chakra. And although this isn't 'reflecting,' it's deflecting which should be in there as well. Not only that, but only 3 chakra points to deflect something up to B-rank? That is unbelievably overpowered and ridiculously cheap for you to do.
@Meta: There's already a Konoaga clan jutsu that allows others to feel the pain of a Konaga that is not just a genjutsu. So why would you make a weapon that basically does the EXACT same thing? It seems to me that you should just wait until you can learn that technique instead of creating a weapon just like it. Sorry, but I'm gonna say DENIED. Feel free to put in another application though, but this just seems pretty futile.
@Martin: I'm just gonna stop you right there and sayDENIED. This weapon is undeniably overpowered. Firstly, it makes you invisible. Of course someone with a doujutsu would be able to see you, and I would let this go if it wasn't for the next two abilities. The suction ability is actually pretty interesting, although I don't know the extend to which its concussive force hits. The last ability is...well it's pretty strong on its own. If I were to approve this weapon, this would be the ONLY ability I would let it have. I mean to dramatically increase your speed and strength to what degree? +1 rank, or what exactly? It's gotta be concrete, all of it does since all of the abilities have a sense of vagueness about them. And I would have to extend the limitations. I mean just saying that it's really heavy is far different than actually RP'ing that it is. I mean, I would go so far as to say to give a post count to how long you can wield the weapon before a cooldown period is initiated to rest your sword hand. And since it's made of wood, I would say that it would be useless on a jounin level mokuton user as far as sheer attacking would go because I could see them very easily being able to control the wood enough to misdirect your direct attacks with the weapon. But that last limitation is iffy even in my head. But seriously, overall this is pretty vague and very powerful. I don't think any kage even has a weapon as close in power to this one.
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:06 pm
@Luo: s**t, really? I didn't know that, since Cobra himself gave me the idea for the weapon. This wasn't an attempt to gain a jutsu, but it was made in the spirit that all Konaga in this guild have a special weapon. Are you sure you can't reconsider? I mean, really Cobra suggested the idea. 0x
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:27 pm
Yeah I wasn't sure about that part which is why I had another ability for it just in case, and I fixed at least most of my grammatical and spelling errors.
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:59 pm
@Meta: Yep, it's called Chakra overload and is stronger than what your weapon does. And I'm afraid I can't. No matter who suggests it, it doesn't change the fact that there's already a jutsu in place that does the same thing.
@Kayvient: DENIIED. It just kind of seems like you're looking for a way to stop any type of attack from hitting you. Any weapon can stop a taijutsu attack or sword attack, it's just how you use the weapon. But I can't accept a weapon that indefinitely stops ANY taijutsu or sword attack, especially since you didn't even define up to what rank. And your height description for the spear says the weapon is nine feet, but then it says in the description that it grows to nine feet. So, wouldn't that mean its initial height is NOT nine feet? As for the second ability, I would allow it actually if that was the only ability or you changed entirely the first ability. However, I would need you to define how far it can be shot forward instead of "a good distance," and I would keep the return price at chuunin instead of genin. There would be no reason that the cost would reduce for returning it since both of the actions require chakra.
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:50 pm
Oh I see what you mean I worded that improperly. What I meant is that it's initial size is a small goldenrod colored cross that is only big enough to function as a necklace. But I guess I didn't make it clear that it grows to nine feet...
As for the taijutsu, I meant within reason. If you swing a normal sword at the cross, I could blcok it with the spear. But if you were a master of your style and I was no better at using this spear than a fork, you would own me. In that sense it works like any other average everyday spear.
For the distance, could we set it at, say, 30 meters before it would inevitably hit the ground if thrown straight, but what if I were to angle it upward like an arrow, could it be longer, while still harder to hit my target? ((Sorry if I'm giving you trouble here.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:40 am
Name of weapon:Fist of the Thunder God
Who owns the weapon:Kilris
Where it was found/Who made it: Kilris found the gauntlet in his Fathers things after he died.
The Range of the weapon: Length of right arm
Weakness: To work the chakra has to be channeled threw the metal of the gauntlet which when used several times in a row can start to cause electrical damage to the arm of the user.
Description: The covers from the tip of the fingers to the end of his shoulder, this can protect the users right from basic attacks and low level jutsu. This isn't the special power however, when a Raition user channels their chakra into the metal of the gauntlet the electricity gathers in the hand section of the armor
(Cost the same chakra as a jutsu of your current rank or below up to user). This looks similar to the Chidorie but at low levels the bark is worse the the bite, the user can strike the opponent with the chakra in their hand or it can be thrown.
A/S Damage: The jutsu at this level is far from deadly but still has it's in the right fight. When the user strikes his opponent they will feel a painful jolt of electricity that can stun a enemy if they are at a A/S level. When the jutsu is throw it will shock the opponent but their is no stun effect even to academy students it is mostly a distraction jutsu at this level.
Genin Damage: At this level the jutsu hasn't grown much, and it has the same effects as the last level however it can now be used on Genin in the same manner and the thrown jutsu can stun A/S.
Chuunin Damage: This is were the jutsu starts to become more dangerous, when the user strike their opponent it has the cutting power of a Kunai, it will also leave burns around the skin and cause a numbing making the damaged part of the body hard to use. When the jutsu is thrown it can knock the user of their feet and sends electrical pulses threw their body which can effect the damaged ninjas body for two posts.
Jounin Damage: When striking the opponent this jutsu is very similar to that of the Chadorie, in fact they could almost be seen as the same jutsu, the real price at this level is the thrown version of the jutsu can "blast" a hole into a persons body while sending electric pulses at the same time.
Sannin Damage: At this level if a Chuunin or lower is struck with the hand to hand version the electrical shock produced will kill them, not to mention the gauntlet will tar a hole threw any opponent which will leave massive damage due to the shape and groove of the gauntlet intensifying the wound. It can also stun Jounin and other Sannin, Jounin can be stunned for two posts Sannin for one. (If their not already dead). The thrown version of the jutsu can blow of a body part off its victim. It can stun in the same way as the striking version.
Rp Sample:
{Working on RP sample}
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:49 am
Name of weapon: Kyohaku Yaiba (Star Blade)
Who owns the weapon: tsubaka inoue
Where it was found/Who made it: The forest of stars... erhm... in a forest.
The Range of the weapon: 73cm (28.7 inches)
Weakness: Limited number of wishes see description.
Description: Kyohaku Yaiba is a blade that grants wishes although the wishes have limits. It is said that once the Star Blade has no more wishes the wielder can seek the gods and ask for more.
Limits:
1 Wish per fight.
Wishes can not grant life or death. Therefore no instant kill, and no being GOD.
Wish Limit: 100 [Can be brought down/up]
Can not wish for elemental jutsu, or any other jutsu the user doesn't know.
Allows various Shinobi types to be applied in/out of battle. For a limited time (Max 5 Posts.)
Can not grant bloodline usage. So no instant sharingan or other bloodlines.
Can not use wishes to get revenge, money, love, lets just end it here and say the 7 deadly sins.
Can not grant immortality.
Can not grant instant rank up. (No going from Genin, to chuunin)
Can not grant more wishes. If wishes run out the wielder must go and seek the gods and ask for more.
When asked for more original wish count is reduced by half.
Can grant teleportation but if wielder is going from country he or she needs to at least post going from one country to another.
Rp Sample: {Working on it, but what do you think of it so far.}
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:49 pm
Name of weapon:
Hexblades
Who owns the weapon:
Akaishi
Where it was found/Who made it:
It is a Kumo clan artifact, and goes to the living member of the clan. If there is more than one member the Clan head can either withhold it from them, or have them contest against eachother for it.
The Range of the weapon:
Normal Katana reach
When attached to eachother:
Shuriken's reach
Weakness:
Each blade has a specific Weakness that applies to it.
Ashura: This is the Blade of fire, and is weak against water.
Murasame: This is the blade of water, and is weak against earth.
Osafune: This is the blade of Earth and is weak against Lightning.
Kotetsu: This is the Blade of Lightning, which is weak against wind
Nosada: This is the blade of Wind that is weak against fire.
Masamune: The Blade of sealing fates, is weak against Healing jutsu.
Zanmato: This is the blade of life, which is Weak against all elements as they are able to kill.
Description:
Ashura: It looks like a normal Katana, except that the blade is constantly giving off heat, making it the hardest to wield without causing injury. It takes 5 posts to learn how to fight with this blade without causing self inflicted burns. The blade is a constant Red, and while in use at a fight, it is white hot, and can cut through normal Katanas that are not special weapons.
Murasame: It looks like a normal Katana, but it is always wet, constantly dripping water as it condenses the vapor around it. It takes five posts to make the person quit looking at their hand that they carry this blade in as it is constantly wet as well, often giving the impression that they are bleeding. When in a fight, this blade produces more water, and can Absorb watervapor in the air.
Osafune: It looks exactly like a normal Katana, But every time it clashes with another blade, it cracks, Releasing small flakes of Explosive material from the blade, and if ignited, the Material will explode. The explosion is small, but if it were on your person it would hurt. ( Explosion is equal to that of a black cat ) The Blade itself is far heavier than Any other blade, Even the Zanbato. This blade take 5 posts of Carrying it around in it's sword hand, constantly swinging it, and Five posts on dodging the Explosion's sound waves by using it as a shield.
Kotetsu: It looks exactly like a normal blade, except that electricity dances across the blade indefinatly. The Blade looks like static is running down it. When in battle, a sound is heard as the electricity increases, giving the Blade an effect that numbs the area where the opponent is cut by it. This blade takes five posts to learn how to not get zapped by it during use in battle.
Nosada: This blade has a Green tint to it, and can not be touched, without the object touching it flying towards the tip of the blade. The blade is covered in winds that, once in battle pick up to Gale force. the Wind affects nothing besides objects touching the blade. This blade takes five posts to learn how to not let og of the blade and have it fly off into the distance.
Zanmato: This blade gives off a Glorious light that resonates healing abilities that promote natural healing, acceleraqting it, until the point small wound are instantly healed. To heal major wounds, all one needs to do is sit in it's light for an hour, and it can heal even the most dastardly of wounds, however it can not bring back the dead.
Masamune: Unlike it's more famous counter part, this Blade looks exactly like a normal Katana, and is created by linking Ashura, Murasame, Osafune, Kotetsu, and Nosada together.
This blade is the Blade of sealing Fates. It is said that no one peirced by this blade can be revived, although no one has ever seen this blade that didn't die shortly afterwards. it is said that the blade itself kills the opponent, not the User. Kumo clan members know this is not true, but they Know that This blade increases Sealing abilities, Making the User have to completely bypass saying the name of the Seal, and even the Hansigns needed. All they have to do is think of the Seal they wish to place, and make a small incision where they want it. The blade can not cut, but where it seemed to pierce the skin, the Seal appears. This can be done for any seal, except one binding a Jinjuriiki.
Heaven's cloud:
When Ashura, murasame, osafune, kotetsu, nosada, and zanmato are combined, they create a small shuriken, which is razor sharp.
It splits into six different Shuriken, and all Shuriken return to the User after thrown.
They adopt all the traits of the blades used to create them, Creating immense heat, Condensing the water, turning it to vapor, placing sediments into it, making it capable of containing infectious qualities, as well as charging it with electricity, and giving it a Speed bonus that makes it able to cut from just the sheer speed at which it moves. ( Dodging these no more than 3 feet results in a slight cut to apear, causing infection, Searing pain from the Heat, Searing pain from the Salt in the water, and searing pain from the electricity flowing into the wound )
If hit directly by these shuriken,
One: The hit area is in unbearable pain, and the ninja falters on their next move.
Two the Ninja is in unbearable pain, and falls to their knees clutching the affected area.
Three: The ninja falls to the ground, grasping their wounds, and screaming in pain.
Four: The Ninja goes flying backwards as they are literaly knocked off their feet from the Pain.
Five: The ninja stands in one place, falls unconscience and convulses while standing from the pain.
Six: The Ninja Falls directly back, convulsing, and flying in and out of Consciousness so much that they can't react to anything.
* Note: This only lasts for one turn, Because the blades have to return to The Kumo clan member as soon as they hit their
target.
** Note: The blades return to normal once they return to The Kumo member, each of the Shuriken turning to one blade.
*** Note: The Blades can be Combined for various effects.
Fire/Wind: A blade made of flame that is consentrated, And extremely powerful, Mostly used to propel one's self. CAN be used to cut through metal easily .
Water/lightning: You can guess. It can let off a spray of water, and Electrocute anything hit by it. It also increases it's chances of electrocuting things.
Wind/Water: It creates a small hurricane, Which freases anything it touches.
Wind/Lightning: It creates a storm, and allows for projectile lightning.
Water/fire: Creates a steaming mist that causes 2nd degree burns to all it touches. ( It stays on the blade, and where the blade just swung for one post )
Water/ fire/ lightning: It creates a electrically charged burning cloud of mist that Causes 3rd degree burns and extra numbness in the affected area. ( See water/fire bracket's for mist information )
All of these require a 10 post period of learning to use them effectivly.
Rp Sample:
" So, You wanna play? " Akaishi said laughing, Unsheathing Ashura. " I'll fight you with this one blade for right now. " He said laughing at the Bijuu that thought it could defeat him.
" Foolish mortal! My Sand shalt destroy thy and thine allies!" The Ichibi said, letting out a vibrant roar that shook the ground, and made sand rise into the air. " Thou shalt fall to mine desert winds! " He said, making the Sand swirl quickly, exactly like a Desert sand storm. " Foolish mortal! no living being without one of mine counterparts could ever survive this attack! " It said laughing heartily.
" You talk way too much. " Akaishi said, kneeling and twirling Ashura quickly, the Sand turning to glass, and then crumbling and reforming into glass rapidly. soon A Wal was constructed around Akaishi, But it was quickly wearing away, Akaishi thought fast, and Bolted forwards, Still protecting himself from the sand by twirling his Burning blade. He closed the Gap Between him and the Ichibi quickly, He Drew murasame quickly, Swapping it out for Ashura, Making the sand wet, and dropping. He swung Ashura, Making small thin Glass lines in the air. He jumped from line to line until he reached the top of the Ichibi. Akaishi Then Sheathed Murasame, And plunged Ashura into the Ichibi, Kicking off just enough that His blade slid down the Ichibi. the sand storm subsided as a line down the ichibi's face, and torso became glass. When he hit the Ground, He sheathed Ashura, and Drew out Murasame.
" Mortal! Thine blade hath dealt me pain! " He yelled angrily, He focused minutely, his skin vibrating and turning the Glas back into sand. " I shalt destroy not only you and your allies fighting mine counterparts, But I shalt also destroy your village for daring to attack me! " The Ichibi said, forming walls of sand around Akaishi. " Now You miserable peice of burden! Die! " It said, Closing in the sides of the box he encased Akaishi in, An outline of akaishi in the Sand.
" You really need to learn how to tell wet sand from dry sand. " Akaishi said, Shaking the sand off quickly, before the Ichibi got any ideas. " I moistened your sand by Raqpidly slashing throughout the entire Box of sand you tried to encase me in, Making it the consistancy of Beach sand. " Akaishi said laughing, Running up to the Ichibi's leg and Repeating said process, Making the Ichibi have to lean to the right as his left leg became Mush. " Heh. Now, How about we do this Eye to eye, I know that you can downsize yourself, And you'd probably be able to kill me a whole lot faster. " Akaishi said smiling.
" Fine Foolish mortal! I shall do as you ask, But be forewarned... I shall destroy you. " The Ichibi said, Folding in upon himselfso that His skin was so condensed that it was th hardest thing in the world, Including Diamonds. " Now, You shall feel my wrath! " The Ichibi said, Reaching out quickly, His arm expanding the Gap, And reaching out to Rip Akaishi to shreds.
" Sorry, But I Can't Let that Happen. " Akaishi said, Sheathing Murasame, And bringing out Osafune and ashura, He Jumped, And Swung Osafune, Connecting with the Ichibi's Claw, It reverberated the blade, Causing flakes to come off. He Swung Ashura into the Mddle of the flakes. He Quickly Sheathed Osafune, And drew out Nosada, Smiling as it increased the explosion power, As well as Propelled him away. He Placed Ashura and Nosada Together, and created a Blade that was equal to that of a jet engine when it came to propulsion. He Rode the Blade straight past the Ichibi's head, Uncombining the blades at the exact moment, Causing him to slow down. He landed gracefully and smiled as the Ichibi Growled in pain, as well as Hatred.
" Thou Mortal! Darest thou use thine blades to destroy mine hand? " The Ichibi said, Holding up his stub. " No matter! I can recreate what was taken from me. " He said, Plunging his hand into the ground and Sinking into a Five foot Crater, He Jumped out, his hand renewed. " Now Thou shalt feel mine Wrath! " He said, Shooting out hundreds of Small hands from his chest, All aiming for Akaishi.
" Oh, This is new. " akaishi said, sighing. ' I can't block all of those with Ashura, not even if I use Murasame... And If I use Osafune, I run the risk of blowing myself up, There are far too many... Nosada isn't any help, It is just going to break them, and he will be able to hit me with grains of sand... Kotetsu isn't even usable in a situation like this... And I am not Fusing Murasame and Kotetsu ever again... I guess I'll have to use all of them, And follow up with either Ashura or Murasame... That is the only logical choice... " Akaishi thought, Jumping forward and spiraling, taking out his blades, Except for one, He began to slash rapidly. He rended one hand, and either Sealed it off with Ashura for a couple of moments, or he made it heavy and almost unusable to the Ichibi who was focusing on other Hands at the moment. " Come on, Is that all you've got? " Akaishi said, his body covered in Sand. He waved Nosada over his body, making sure not to touch the blade, otherwise it would probably take off. The sand was removed, and he stared at an amasing sight. The Ichibi had used his entire body to create the hands, and he was now reforming on the other side where Akaishi had just been standing. " Well now, Isn't that a party trick. " He said laughing. " No matter, You are about to die anyways. " Akaishi said, Taking out Zanmato, He waved it over his body, Healing his minor wounds from the sand scrapping him. " Now then, Let's see what you've got! " He said, Peicing all of the swords together, he smiled and laughed as six Shuriken Replaced his blades.
" What doth thine hope to achieve from using those peasant's weapons? " The Ichibi said laughing, Taking on Akaishi's appearance. Let us end this right here and Right now! " The Ichibi said laughing, Running forwards, He Reached out and Grabbed Akaishi, So that the only place to throw the shuriken was forwards, or stab them in it's back.
" Sorry Demon, But I hate to disappoint. " He said smiling, Throwing them behind him, and placing his hands directly on the Ichibi's stomach. " Say good night. " Akaishi smiled, and laughed as the Shuriken Flew back through the Ichibi' arms, Turning them into Glass, And then Flew into his hands, Making six slots where the Swords were inside of the Ichibi. " Now Ichibi, Time for you to be sealed back where you belong. " Akaishi said, withdrawing his blades, and ducking quickly, He avoided breaking the Glass that was already beginning to darken, as the Ichibi vibrated slightly turning his insides into glass. Akaishi Sheathed Zanmato, and Combined all of his other Blades, He stepped back, And whistled, His ally in this fight throwing the Little Host's unconscience body to him. " Damn it is a good thing we found you. For the both of us. " akaishi said, setting him infront of the Ichibi's almost Broken glass state, He plunged Masamune into both of them, Withdrawing it, And sealing the Ichibi within it's host. " There you go little girl. " Akaishi said, Kneeling and patting the four year old's head. " Now, Don't go to sleep again ok? " akaishi said laughing, Standsing up and turning away. " Come on, We'll take you back to Sunagakure. " Akaishi said smiling. ' How the hell can she manage to hold something so powerful inside of her... and from what I've heard... that one is the weakest... ' Akaishi thought to himself, Shuddering at the thought of fighting something stronger.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:40 pm
Name of weapon: Kasaku no Yume (Honorable Dreams) http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs28/f/2008/132/f/1/Buster_sword_by_Wen_JR.jpgWho owns the weapon: Sayuri Hageshii Where it was found/Who made it: Yume was found after Sayuri left her home years ago to escape her abusive father. She found it abandoned in the snow that capped a mountain near Kirigakure, its blade lodged deep in the dirt. It, along with a granite headstone, marked a grave, and upon the stone, the words “This sword is a symbol of my dreams, my honor. Wield it well and let its power enfold you.” The grave’s occupant was unspecified, and Sayuri took the blade as a symbol of the dreams of others. She keeps it with her at all times. Its maker is unknown. The Range of the weapon: 65 inches, plus the length of Sayuri’s arm (27 inches). Total range: 92 inches; 7 ft, 8 inches. Weakness: Kasaku no Yume must be cleaned frequently, or it will rust very quickly. It also is difficult to control once swung, since its massive size affects its trajectory. Yume is an inconvenience, as its enormous size, coupled with the weight of the blade, makes it difficult to wield. Description: Kasaku no Yume is sixty-five inches in length, which includes the hilt and guard heights. The steel blade is 51 inches long, while the hilt is 11 inches, and the guard is 3 inches. The deadly blade has two circles, one on top of the other, spaced 2 inches apart from each other, cut into the steel. The blade is 7 inches wide, and weighs 11 lbs. The blade itself is black and engraved, while the guard has a swirling winged motif embossed into the gold-tinted metal. Rp Sample: “Where the hell is he?” Sayuri yelled to Shay, turning her head slightly to glance at her sister. Shay merely shrugged and continued to lean back on her elbows, the picture of relaxation. Sayuri glared at her sister and rolled her azure eyes before turning away from Shay and activating her Byakugan. Her eyes swept the forested training arena, looking for Niko so she could kick his a** from here to hell. She rolled her stiff shoulders, trying to lessen the weight on the muscles caused by Kasaku no Yume, strapped crosswise to her back. Her enormous blade hindered her movements slightly as she crouched on a wide branch towards the top of an enormous, ancient sycamore. The telescopic, enhanced vision of the doujutsu showed her that Niko was ten meters away, crouched in a sort of hidey-hole between two trees to catch his breath. Sayuri dropped to the ground directly in front of him and the fight commenced. She moved quickly, using the blunt side of Yume to strike the major joints and pressure points on Niko’s body. Her Byakugan aided her accuracy as she watched the blood vessels rupture with each blow of the steel blade. She parried and deflected the slash of Niko’s blade, aimed at her shoulder, but stopped Yume too early. Her grip slipped slightly and the blade clipped her hip, smashing into her painfully. She focused her chakra into her hands, diverting it into the enormous blade. The Raiton chakra made Yume crackle menacingly and glow with a nearly unnoticeable red light. She slashed the deadly sword at Niko, nicking his arm and jolting him with the electrical energy. The older boy swore loudly and carelessly slashed at Sayuri, who dodged just in time. Yume was burning from conducting the electricity under Sayuri’s gloved hands. Niko’s blade was aimed directly at Sayuri’s stomach as he thrust the deadly edge towards her exposed skin. With a swirl of mist, LT-sensei appeared between the two Genin, grabbing both blades and yanking them away from each wielder, signaling that the fight was over. She felt Yume cooling down as she strapped the blade back onto her back, shaking hands with her sparring partner. *Side note: Yes, Kasaku no Yume is based off of the Buster sword, wielded by Cloud Strife/Zack Fair from Final Fantasy. The reason behind this is because Cloud Strife is a sexy beast. The only differences between Yume and the Buster Sword are the fact that: Naruto doesn’t use material, rendering the holes as mere useless decorations. Also: My RP sample sucked because I’m having writes’ block. Sorry.
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