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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:59 pm

._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|_________RPC Description & History________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Name: Bella .L. ( Pending Shihouin) Nickname(s): Lightning or Bell is what most call her Age: 16 Birthdate: 5/5 Gender: Female Sexuality:Heterosexual Relationship Status: Single Ethnicity: Half Thai, Half Hispanic
Height: 5'4" [163 cm] Weight: 118lb [ 44.7 kg ] Body Build: Curvey, light weight Eye Color: Tan peach Hair Color: oak tree brown
Physical Description: Bella wears a half made Kimono that is flexible for her fast movements the colors are traditional to her clans fashion white being the higher ups. She wears black shorts under her kimono, long white stockings cover her legs.Tanish gold sandles on her feet. Her sleeves are cut so her shoulders can be seen under the sleeves is bandage tape warped around her arms. A small butterfly tattoo is on the back of her neck X. She is very well nice looking for her age.
Personality: To best explain Bella she one of your everyday shy girls to meet hiding behind friends and such . She takes on the fragile type letting others act on behalf of her even tho it could be something easy to handle.Bella loves to fight but only does so in training or helping out someone she dislikes harming others with no reasons to her motives. A blush is always on her face which makes her very cunning teen even if she doesnt notice what she said could make a crowd go rushing to every place to find something to cheer her up.
Behavior: When first meeting others Bella tends to be nervous towards them and studders while talking. After a while when friends get to know her more they will find out shes very cunning and clueless to half the words that come from her mouth at times. Her Alone times are relaxing as tends to sleep in a random spot that fits her needs or runs around for training her father makes her do. When in a fight with enemy shinobi's Bella plays the more childish run around attack afew times untill her ally goes for a the kill or if need she will take the person done herself. If its a friendly spar she will just play fool around and act inncent untill ordered to take stop goofing off.
Nindo: "You can't be to careful anymore, When all that is waiting for you ."
Theme song: Sanctuary Battle song: Broken Vs Born
Character History: First steps & spotlight
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Ninja Characteristics & Shinobi Skills__________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Clan/Bloodline: Shihouin |(pending) Stage: N/A
Cursemark: N/a
Ninja Class: Taijutsu
Special Ability: [TRAIN]
Taijutsu Class ninja can [TRAIN], enabling them to increase their Speed, Strength, Endurance, and Toughness. Every Taijutsu Class user must choose however how they will Train their RPC. Each RPC must make a choice... Either they can train each stat once, eventually raising them all by 1 rank, OR they can train just two stats, but one of the stats can be trained twice
Bella trains mostly in her clans Taijutsu and works along the lines of close combat as her use. She has always been able to keep her self close to a enemy in fighting trms and rarly need to use ninjutsu or genjutsu to help her. She see them as a defence.
Tweak: N/a
Attributes: Speed
Primary Attribute: Speed
Benefit: Speed Ninja receive a +1 rank bonus to their speed, but can even outperform those above their rank by a fair amount. As a Genin, they would be faster in their movements then even the average Chuunin, requiring somewhat of Sp. Jounin to keep up with or catch up to them. Their speed makes their movements blindingly fast, but it does not increase their reaction speed, and therefore does not increase their ability to evade incoming attacks. Higher level ninja with this attribute have been described as simply disappearing only to re-appear closer without showing any sign of movement in between.
However, not just movement speed is enhanced, but attack speed and tactile manipulation as well. With such an increase to the movement speed of their arms and hands, the deadliness of their strikes is enhanced, making such attacks difficult to keep up with as their movements seem like only a blur. Combat Ability: Once per combat, a ninja with this attribute can utilize a 'Burst' technique, which enables them either to increase their speed by an additional rank (Putting a Genin's speed above that of a Sp. Jounin) for one post or perform an additional action for that round, enabling them to string together combo maneuvers. (Normally, most shinobi would only be able to use one jutsu per combat post.)
Secondary Attribute: Agility
Benefit: An Agility Ninja receives a +1 rank to their evasion, and enables them to more easily dodge techniques, effectively making them more reactive and quicker to respond to an attack then even the typical Chuunin . Projectiles thrown by an agility ninja very rarely miss, and therefore must be in some way deflected rather then dodged. Agility ninja also cannot be knocked off their feet and can balance quite naturally on even the thinnest of wires without requiring the use of chakra. Somehow these ninja always seem to land on their feet, just like cats.
Tertiary Attribute: Sexy:
---> Stunning charm
Not just Bella's speed and great use of her martial arts is in use for this but good looks she keeps up. She use it as a distraction stunning anyone willing to cause harm to her. As she grew up elders told her she would be a wonderful and beautiful and she as kepted those words dear to her.
Specialties:
Combo: Whereas the average shinobi can only perform a single Nin-/Gen-/Tai-/Ken-jutsu in a post, Combo Specialists can perform 2 such jutsu in any combination they wish. In addition to this, when jutsu are performed back to back, one immediately after the other, both attacks always occur. The first attack can be blocked, dodged, or parried, but it cannot be negated or diverted in such a way that the second attack no longer occurs. The second attack always occurs after the first, making the Combo Specialist's opponent forced to deal with both attacks.
Tactical Support: All techniques, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Bloodline etc... require 3 fewer posts to learn. In combat, they are particularly adept at evading incoming attacks (+1 to Evade) and they can easily identify the tactics and abilities being used by their opponents in combat (allowing them to identify tactical maneuvers and the breadth and power of the jutsu an enemy is signing). Teammates under a tactical support specialist's leadership gain +1 rank bonus to Evasion and Speed, and can combo more effectively, allowing their allies perform two jutsu per post... so long as they have had the plan laid out to them directly.
# Chakra Elements: [1]
Primary --> Raiton , Available at start
Chakra Color: silver
Total Chakra: 25 Total Stamina: 25
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Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired: [0]
E-rank Missions: [0] D-rank Missions: [0] C-rank Missions: [0] B-rank Missions: [0] A-rank Missions: [0] S-rank Missions: [0]
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• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • •
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Raiton (Lightning) Rank E - (Basic)
• Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique) • Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)
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Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) • Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) •
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Bloodline Abilities
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Primary Style: Inazuma Current level of Mastery: 0
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Primary Style: Shunko ? Current level of Mastery: 0
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Primary Style: N/a
? Current level of Mastery: N/a
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# Custom Weapons Allowed: [1]
Custom Weapon 1: N/a
Weapon Type: N/a Weapon Range: N/a Weapon Location: N/a
Weapon Description: N/a
Special Properties: N/a
Associated Kenjutsu/Taijutsu Style:
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|____________Apparel & Ninja Tools_________________/ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Headband Location | Style | Color: | Bella's Head band is designed like a french maid bonnet that rest on top of her head the color is black. Outfit | Style: Picture tells it all | Outfit | Color: White, Black, gold ,purple | Kunai Holster Location | Color: Tooked in her hip string, light tan | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Lower left thigh,Black | Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower left thigh aswell, Black
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:55 pm
@Muffin:
- You can remove the secondary and tertiary slots for your elements since its just wasted space.
- Your chakra is 25 since you've chose no attributes that would boost it up.
- The taijutsu class is allowed one Kenjutsu style and one custom weapon so its not 'N/A'
Other than those minor details, your profile looks good. Just need your bloodline app to be approved.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:22 am
Please do not double up your posts when barely an hour has past since your submission. You need to take into consideration that not all mods will be on at the same time as you and that only a selected few are asked to handle profiles. To double post without there being any changes is like telling us to hurry up and approve your profile which is rude. Please delete one copy of your profile and it will be dealt with soon. Thank you.
--edited-- Scratch that, it would appear that you already deleted the duplicate, but my words stand. This isn't only as a warning to you but to other people as well. Don't repost thinking it will get us to look at your things faster. Each mod has their own life out of Gaia and will handle things on their own time. If things have been sitting for over 5 days, then feel free to send us a friendly reminder through pm or post in the comment thread in regards to who to contact in such a case. Thank you. -------------
Also I can point out something to you that's wrong about your profile immediately. All members start out as genin and will only receive two free E-rank techs. Other than that, you can only start with the two jutsus set in the format. Please edit those out now and I'll evaluate the rest of it soon.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:49 am
Well, ninjutsu specialty says I get infinite E and D rank as Genin. Is that not true? Should I still edit it?
And I didn't double post on purpose, I simply was on my ipod, and accidentally double posted because the page wouldn't load, then I posted from the computer, and when I turned my ipod back on, it posted it again.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:10 am
SK Loda Well, ninjutsu specialty says I get infinite E and D rank as Genin. Is that not true? Should I still edit it? And I didn't double post on purpose, I simply was on my ipod, and accidentally double posted because the page wouldn't load, then I posted from the computer, and when I turned my ipod back on, it posted it again. That's true but that doesn't mean your character gets to know those techniques upon rpc creation. In this guild, techniques need to be learned through training posts. The limits are just set there so people can go and have their rpc learn ever technique possible. This in turn causes people to take into consideration what techniques they want to learn over others.
That's understandable. Sorry if it came out a bit harsh, I'm feeling a bit under the weather atm and seeing someone repost so soon, irked me a bit. It isn't just you, this has happened before as to why I still stressed it in my edited note. Thanks for explaining though and yeah, I'll be going over your profile sometime in the afternoon.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:19 am
Haha, no sweat, I know how it is. My fault, I just thought that I would get all of them, but it makes sense to have to train them. I'll get right to editing that.
Sorry for getting so defensive. xP
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:44 pm
Hey guys. So while Cobra is away on vacation, I have been given permission to accept profiles. Just know that at any point in time your profile could be recalled if upon his return Cobra sees something wrong with it. Other than the slight chance of that happening, if I give you the okay, you're good to go for rp.Still waiting on Cobra's confirmation about your rouge rpc. Have you contacted him in regards to it Gohan?Hey Yuki, so I've made some minor edits to your profile such as the attribute section. You didn't really need to include the description of the attribute (speed, agility, etc.) so I simply edited it out. Other than that, APPROVED! Happy rping. Just know that upon his return Cobra might catch something that I might have accidently missed and your rpc might be recalled for some minor editing. Other than that, it should be good to go.So before this can be approved completely, you're gonna need to get that bloodline approved so once you finished editing it, let Jade or I know and we'll take a look. I've made some minor edits to your profile format wise and to also remove the speed attribute description. I would also highly suggest changing the color of your raiton section as the color is blinding. Other than that. You'll be good to go upon your bloodline approval. APPROVED!Its cool and just repost your profile once you get the coding sorted out. If you have any problems just let me know.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:07 pm
I would like to add, since Lilly seems to have missed it, that you do not get the benefit for your tertiary attribute. It's more like bragging rights (Meaning you'll be slightly better at X than an average shinobi, but not by much.), and to my knowledge the only tertiaries that actually do anything are Endurance, and Great Chakra Reserves.
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Unrelinquished Despair Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:42 pm
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Name: Hyouton Nero Nickname: Snowball, The Sloth Age: 14 Birthdate: June 12th Gender: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual Relationship Status: Single Ethnicity: Japanese/Caucasian
Height: 5’ 5” [172.7 cm] Weight: 127 lbs [67 kgs] Body Build: Skinny Eye Color: Greyish, almost platinum colored. Hair Color: Black
Physical Description: He is tall skinny, and of medium height. He is always yawning, even if in the middle of a heated battle, or seriously important event, he is almost always tired, and his eyes are almost always showing of this. They usually stay about halfway open, as he is almost always too bored to keep his eyes open, or too lazy to focus. He slouches most of the time. He has long black hair that gets in his eyes often, and he has to use his hand to brush it out of his vision, or just shake his head until it is out of his eyes (if he’s feeling too lazy to reach all the way up there).
Personality: He is incredibly lazy. One of the laziest people of all time very likely. He, however, does not consider it laziness, as far as intelligence. He believe wasting time and energy on actions and activities that aren’t important, is a waste of time, and doesn’t do them. He enjoys sleeping, and is often seems quite tired, but he always gets enough sleep, usually sleeping for periods of time of 10 or more hours at once. He always speaks his mind, and if somebody talks too much, or is bothering him, he will not hesitate to flatly and plainly say “you talk too much” or “you’re starting to bug me…”. Through his laziness however, this does not extend to being vocal. If in a conversation, he will respond if talked to, he doesn’t follow his rule of only talking when necessary.
Behavior: When alone, he is usually lying down, or slouching, or eating. He also reads sometimes, as he feels that if one must keep his eyes open, they should at least give them the pleasure of doing something worthwhile. With others, he is pretty normal. He is a very good listener, and if somebody is talking, even if he doesn’t appear to be paying attention, he is, and picks up a lot of details. When with others, in combat, he also likes to play the support role, and will often choose to use impairing abilities, or jutsu’s with lasting effect, rather than a direct damaging jutsu, such as a fireblast, or chidori, or even basic moves that affect a single person with initial damage, such as hitting them with a sword or any direct damaging jutsu primarily, but he will use kunais, and fire from afar. He enjoys providing cover fire, and helping to gain an advantage for a team rather than for himself, as he considers having to be relied on as an extra burden which only creates more work. However, he is capable of direct damage.
Nindo: “If it can be done, it can just as easily be avoided or not done. When something cannot be done, or cannot be avoided, that’s when you have to do something, because remember: You can only stay in bed and sleep, until you can’t, when the moment comes, that you can’t stay in bed, then, and only then, is the conscious choice to do something, made for ones-self.”
Themse song: One for Anything to do with combat and then one for Everything else
Character History: Character History
Village: Kirigakure (Village hidden in the mist)
Rank: Genin
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Clan/Bloodline: Hyouton. Approval Stage: 1 (Genin)
Cursemark: N/A
Bijuu: N/A
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Special Ability: [3rd Controllable Element]
Tweak: N/A
Nero was always smart, since day one of the Academy, he had been fascinated by the jutsus other people (mainly the older kids) used. They seemed incredible to him, and he knew right there that he wanted to do that when he was older. By specializing in Ninjutsu, he could not only do this, but do it more than most could. He could have a 3rd element, controllable and under his belt. The one time where Nero avoided laziness was with his Jutsu and with fighting, what better way to do it than to be able to be able to do it with less limitations, and with more elemental ability. He liked to support in combat, so having a third element let him do just that.
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Great Chakra Reserves
Benefit: User receives an additional +5/10 chakra points. [For every 10 points of chakra a user has, they receive an additional 5.]
Combat Ability: Once per combat, even if the user has been completely drained of their chakra, the user can still complete one final jutsu which they already know by utilizing their "Overdraft" ability. [This jutsu costs no Stamina to use]
Secondary Attribute: Intelligence
Benefit: All jutsu, for the purposes of learning, are considered one rank lower and can be learned at an accelerated rate, of 3 fewer posts required.
Tertiary Attribute: Cunning
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Nero is smart, and has a great amount of chakra, that seems to never run out. On top of all of that, he is very very perceptive, he can see traps before they can cause harm, usually by simply seeing something ordinary, out of place, such as a tree limb that is slightly cracked. He is also very strategic, always setting traps. He rarely goes into a battle that isn’t on a field where he doesn’t want to be, or where he wouldn’t have the advantage. He is also aided in school by his high intellect, which helps to negate the effect of not wanting to do any work. He is quite good at chess and strategy games, including “Go”. He can practically predict an opponents next move, before he even does it, based solely on a previous one, sometimes actually predicting correctly.
Specialities:
Tactical Support: All techniques, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Bloodline etc... require 3 fewer posts to learn. In combat, they are particularly adept at evading incoming attacks (+1 to Evade) and they can easily identify the tactics and abilities being used by their opponents in combat (allowing them to identify tactical maneuvers and the breadth and power of the jutsu an enemy is signing). Teammates under a tactical support specialist's leadership gain +1 rank bonus to Evasion and Speed, and can combo more effectively, allowing their allies perform two jutsu per post... so long as they have had the plan laid out to them directly.
Chakra Control: All Nin-/Gen-/Tai-/Ken-jutsu techniques are reduced in cost as if they were one rank lower (for Chakra only) at Genin, and at Special Jounin and above, they cost one rank lower (for Chakra only) minus an additional 1 chakra point. Use of chakra control techniques such as Wall/Water walking cost nothing. Also, ninjutsu 2 ranks below the user and below do not require hand seals to perform.
# Chakra Elements: 3
Primary → Water (avaliable at rpc creation) Secondary → Wind (avaliable at Chunnin) Tertiary → Lightning (avaliable at Jounin)
Chakra Color: Faint, but visible yellow.
Total Chakra: 35 Total Stamina: 25
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Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired:
E-rank Missions: D-rank Missions: C-rank Missions: B-rank Missions: A-rank Missions: S-rank Missions:
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• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • Kakuremino No Jutsu (Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique)
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Water (Water) Rank E - (Basic) • Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation) • Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)
Rank D - (Genin) • Howling Blast • Mizu Peretto (Water Pellet)
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Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) • Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
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Bloodline Abilities
• Tsubame Fubuki (Snow Storm Swallows) • Haryuu Mouko (Destruction Dragon Fierce Tiger) • Hyourou no Jutsu (Ice Prison Technique)
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N/A
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N/A
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# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1: N/A
Weapon Type: N/A Weapon Range: N/A Weapon Location: N/A
Weapon Description: N/A
Special Properties: N/A
Associated Kenjutsu/Taijutsu Style: N/A
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Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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[align=left][color=skyblue][size=13]Hyouton Nero[/color] | [color=silver]Genin[/color][/size] | [color=darkblue][size=12]Kirigakure[/size][/color][/align]
[align=left][color=teal][size=10]"If it can be done...[/size][/color][/align]
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[size=10][color=#92C7C7] Rank: - Description: - [/color][/size]
[align=left][size=10][color=Blue][Chakra Pool: 34/34] [Stamina Pool: 25/25][/color][/size][/align]
[align=left][color=teal][size=10]...it can be avoided."[/color][/align][/size]
[size=9] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QEmmQWxCuJ4]Battle Theme [/url][/size] / [size=9] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0HNRqMaV8c]General Theme[/url][/size]
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:44 pm
I reposted it. I figured with all the changes I've made to it, it'd be better to simply re-post it.
((Also Unrelinquished....You are a MLP fan...<3. Rainbow Dash is the best though....))
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:42 pm
Thanks for reposting. So yeah, there were several format problems with your profile but I fixed it. Next time, please stick to what we have and don't go changing it. There are a few things that can be removed but most are set in stone and are a vital part of your rpc's proflile. Other than this, there are still several things to take note of though. - Height and Weight. In TUP we require profiles to state both standard and metric to make it easier on others to visualize your rpc's height seeing how not everyone is from the same area and might go by a different system.
- Character History. Please go to the Life of a Shinobi fourm and create a thread for your rpc there. A backstory may be typed up later but a place holder is required as of now.
- Please put in your rpc's rank. Everyone starts out as Genin so that is what you'll be placing down.
- For the clan/bloodline section please also include a link to your application as it may be used for future reference.
- As I've mentioned before, your rpc only recieves 2 free E-rank elemental techniques so please remove 2 of the excess jutsus.
- Shinobi tools wise, I've returned it to its orginal state as in TUP, these are the equipment your rpc starts off with. To get more, please rp your rpc getting it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:22 am
@ Lilly: Yeah, I've contacted him on the rogue. Somehow the discussion was always stopped [From either side] and in the end Cobra went to vacation. But anyway, I'm going to change my bloodline so don't worry on approving it yet.
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