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 Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 9:25 pm
Open for critque and such!
*cuts ribbon*
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 9:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:54 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 9:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:05 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 2:50 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:02 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 10:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:39 pm
Kay. I read through your posts. Just be forewarned. I critique honestly. If I offend you please keep in mind that I did not mean any harm.
I'm a little skeptical about the multi-colored eye thing.
It is possible but some therough research should be put in before attempting to give a character that trait. My biggest issue with her eyes is the purple one. Purple is not a natural color so even if she did posess that trait you would have to choose a different color... unless she wore contacts. The ice-blue eye would most likely be blind, because other than in blindness that too is not a natural color. The eyes would certainly have sight complicaitions.
Be careful with the young mother part too. Giving birth that young puts serious risks on both the mother and the child. You pritty much have that under controll.
Cool animal. Its a new animal to me. Have several back-up animals on hand and dont get to attached. From what I understand they're starting to get strict with kanines and felines.
I think your character needs a little more fleshing out. If you need any help let me know... and If you need a quest banner I can make you one. Just drop by my thread if you need anything.
-Casey
Oh... on the bonfire thread Malic, Tristan and Casey are at Casey's duplex. It might take a while for them to migrate back twords the bonfire. If you want you can have Eri join us there though.
good luck with your quest.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:11 pm
Thanks for being helpful! ^_^
A banner would be very helpful too.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:38 pm
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