:: Zanpakuto/Spirit Weapons/Vivication :: [OLD]

[Ishiba Satomi]

:General::

Character Name: Yotsuyu Muku Sakkakubarahana
Link to Profile: X

Zanpakuto Name: Suijin (水神)
Name Meaning: Water God
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:

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Spirit's World: The banks surrounding a massive river that seems to stretch into eternity, there is also a small English styled villa nearby. There are also some nearby grasslands.

General Shikai Rules: On release; You pay 3 SP + 1 SP per post released unless you have a custom that makes your zanpakuto permanently released at the shikai state. Boosts Intelligence and Spiritual Power by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu.
::Shikai::
Attack Name: Rei warikiru ken narihibiku (霊割り切る剣鳴り響く)
Name Meaning: Soul Rending Blade Echo
Ability: As a passive effect while the Shikai is released, attacks made with it are infused with spiritual energy that can blast out in waves; literally cutting the spiritual enegy of those hit. While these attacks do inflict pain, they do not inflict physical damage.

1/10th Sp or Int drain to target's SE. (Round to the nearest whole number, down if it's .5)
Attacks with the sword itself use Sp OR Int +10 (Resistance is placed against Sp OR Int instead of Defense. (Whichever, between Sp or Int, is the higher is the one used.))

Appearance: (In Yotsuyu's profile picture, is the blue glowing sword.)
Release Command: "Come forth, Suijin!"

Edit: Complete re-work of the shikai, going with something different.

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Comments: 12 hits is a little too much damage. Thats x12 damage multiplier in a single turn. If they were flat damage, that would be different. Like 5 damage per hit. But it is adding int or Sp. So thats 30 * 12 without the modifiers. 360 damage in a single post, which would one shot essentially anyone at this level. Tentatively
2. Approved - Cass
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[jake23482]

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Pre-submitting the Final and Perfect forms for when they are unlocked. Added Spirit Weapon to the top since there didn't seem to be a topic for it.

Character Name: Allecia Caroline Schneider
Link to Profile: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12737589#153584272

::Spirit Weapon::

Weapon Name: Abgelassen-Schwarz [Drained Black]

Ability Name: Schwarzer-Regen
Name Meaning: Black Rain
Ability: Allecia can take one of of her attacks to split it into 2, or, by sacrificing her defensive action; she can split it into 3 attacks. - The cost of the attack is increased by +2 SE; or +4 if Tripled. [Mandatory 1 Post CD every 3 Consecutive uses; or a 2 Post CD after Triple Attack is used] [Augment]
Appearance: The Drained Black is a Metallic Silver Mini-Gun, with a five-barrel formation, that aligns in the shape of a pentagram. It allows Allecia to sacrifice power for a greater chance of gunning down her opposition. Her heilig pfeil are dark purple-black.

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Comments: You dont have to halve or third your damage.
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::Final Form [Letz Still]::

Appearance: Allecia's Final Form takes morph's her clothing slightly, giving her an armored chest-plate of black, with a larger version of her Abelassen-Schwarz, yet she seems to move as if the mini-gun is not slowing her down. A purple-black wing of reishi forms off the right shoulder.

Ability Name: Drehe den Stern!!
Name Meaning: Rotate the Star!!
Ability: An attack with a Speed = Allecia's Speed +10 and a Power = Allecia's Spirit Power. Allecia can target up to three people with this attack as long as they are in front of her. Each target beyond the first is confronted by only half the initial attack's power. [IE: Primary target = Full Power, Secondary and Tertiary Targets = SP/2 for Power] - 2 SE for Single Target; or 3 SE for Multitarget. 1 Post CD; or 2 Post CD for Multitarget.
Appearance: Allecia causes the barrel of the mini-gun; Drained Black-Full Power [As she calls it] to rotate at high speeds and unleashes a storm of high-speed holy arrow projectiles to mow down those infront of her in a 'spray and pray' type of assault.

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Ability Name: Fünf Höllen des Himmels
Name Meaning: Five Heavens of Hell
Ability: An attack with no power, but a Speed equal to Allecia's Speed. A target hit by this attack is instead slowed in movement speed by -10 for 2 posts. [Stacking up to 5 times, and refreshing the duration on each application.] If a person's Movement Speed is reduced to 0 by this effect, they are considered Bound [Unable to Dodge/use movement skills or skills that require movement] until hit by a damaging attack, or the duration expires. - 2 SE/Use [1 SE per Post, per instance of Debuff applied, doubling for each instance EX: 1 Stack: 1 SE/Turn, 2 Stacks: 2 SE/Turn, 3 Stacks: 4 SE/Turn, 4 Stacks: 8 SE/Turn, 5 Stacks: 16 SE/Turn] = This attack can be used up to five times consecutively but goes on a 3 post cool-down if a different attack is ever used in the sequence. - Allecia can choose to not pay the SE Maintain cost and end the debuff early.
Appearance: A strange negative energy burst from her mini-gun that forms shackles on the left leg, right leg, right arm, then the left arm and then finally the neck, all chaining together with reishi chains that reduce a person's ability to move effectively. It is said that this is a form of torment inflicted by Allecia, slowing her enemies down until they're forced to stand still and accept their fate.

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:: Perfect Form [Volstandeig]::

Form Name: Schwarzer Stern Engel [Black Star Angel]
Appearance: Allecia's Perfect Form takes morph's her clothing entirely, giving her a full-armored chest-plate of black, with purple and violet lace drapings and accents. She gains two versions of her Abelassen-Schwarz, and can move and fire the twin mini-guns with no apparent object to her own movement, infact, she seems even faster than before. A pair purple-black wings of reishi forms off her shoulders, and a pale purple halo with a pentagram in the center hangs over her head.

Ability Name: Fünf Höllen des Himmels : Vol-Kraft!!
Name Meaning: Five Heavens of Hell : Full Power!!
Ability: An attack with no power, but a Speed equal to Allecia's Speed+10. A target hit by this attack is instead slowed in movement speed by -10 for 2 posts. [Stacking up to 5 times, and refreshing the duration on each application.] If a person's Movement Speed is reduced to 0 by this effect, they are considered Bound [Unable to Dodge/use movement skills or skills that require movement] until hit by a damaging attack, or the duration expires. - 3 SE/Use [1 SE per Post, per instance of Debuff applied, doubling for each instance EX: 1 Stack: 1 SE/Turn, 2 Stacks: 2 SE/Turn, 3 Stacks: 4 SE/Turn, 4 Stacks: 8 SE/Turn, 5 Stacks: 16 SE/Turn] = This attack can be used up to five times consecutively, but goes on a 3 post cool-down if a different attack is ever used in the sequence. - Allecia can choose to not pay the SE Maintain cost and end the debuff early.
Appearance: A strange negative energy burst from her mini-gun that forms shackles on the left leg, right leg, right arm, then the left arm and then finally the neck, all chaining together with reishi chains that reduce a person's ability to move effectively. It is said that this is a form of torment inflicted by Allecia, slowing her enemies down until they're forced to stand still and accept their fate. The chains form faster in this form, and are harder to avoid.

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Attack Name: Schwarze Barmherzigkeit
Name Meaning: Black Mercy
Ability: An attack with no power, but a Speed equal to Allecia's Speed+20. If the target is afflicted by Five Heavens of Hell or it's Full-Power Variant. They are instead drained of 1 SE, (Allecia heals her SE for the amount drained) doubling per stack of the debuff applied. [EX: 1 Stack = 1 SE Drained, 2 Stacks = 2 SE Drained, 3 Stacks = 4 SE Drained, 4 Stacks = 8 SE Drained, 5 Stacks = 16 SE Drained.] -:: This attack can only be used once per combat. 5 SE to use.
Appearance: Allecia fires off holy arrows which retain a link to her mini-guns. The arrows seek out and link to the chains afflicted on her enemy before she activates the true nature of the attack, which begins ripping reishi [spirit particles] from the target's body, causing them to weaken and wither as their soul is literally torn at by the effects of the chains. No physical pain is experienced, and no injuries of the physical sort are inflicted. It is considered a merciful way to die, presented with the alternatives.

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[xl Xero xl]

::General::

Character Name: Kazuka
Link to Profile: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12733439#153533638

Zanpakuto Name: Rage beast
Name Meaning:N/A
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: https://i.imgur.com/R2i9kRM.jpg?1

Spirit's World: https://i.imgur.com/29k4GDW.jpg?1

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Rageing Fire fist
Name Meaning:N/A
Ability: Kazuks Sword Manifests into fist like gauntlets on his hands up to his forearm These Gauntlets burn with his Fiery rage and Spirit energy embedded into They burn firey aura,His fist now are deadly weapons of metal and fire The se fist constantly burn with His Spiritual energy. The damages of this is +10 Str when he hits someone with his fist
Appearance: https://i.imgur.com/R2i9kRM.jpg?1
Release Command: Burn my Zanpkuto and pummel my enemies

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::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name: Burning fire
Name Meaning:N/A
Ability: His gauntles now Fuse them selfs competely covering his arms and his zanpakto is now his whole arms competely makeing him stronger with his attacks the power is boosted double the normal punches he would dish out It burns with spiritual energy infused The damage is from his Str +20 .
Appearance: https://i.imgur.com/R2i9kRM.jpg?1
Release Command: Burn my fist and crush my enemies

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Attack 2 Name: Flameing fist
Name Meaning:N/A
Ability: Kazuka Takes his fist and pounds them together then charges at his enemie attemping to close line them with his right arm or left depedning on were they are at takeing phyiscal damage from his attacks +20.
Appearance: https://i.imgur.com/R2i9kRM.jpg?1
Release Command: Time to Die!

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2.Approved - Cass
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[KibitzRajas]

Replacing Sara's Illusion Shikai
::General::

Character Name:Sara Ichika Ren
Link to Profile: x

Zanpakuto Name: Anastasia
Name Meaning: Resurrection
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:

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Spirit's World:

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General Shikai Rules: On release; You pay 3 SP + 1 SP per post released unless you have a custom that makes your zanpakuto permanently released at the shikai state. Boosts Strength and Defense by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu. -Powers = Level 50 Customs
::Shikai::
Appearance:

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Release Command: Turn The Tide, Anastasia!
Attack Name: Lotus Dance: A Thousand Paper Cuts
Name Meaning:---
Ability: Anastasia has the ability to create tiny razors along side the blade within this dance. So small to see and unknown how many there is along the blade edge of Anastasia. When this is activated, Sara will dash towards her opponent delivering a single blow. It cuts so deep it will feel like they just ram themselves on piles of sharp paper hence the name of A Thousand Paper Cuts. Attack=Strength+5, If their defense is lower then her strength, they will lose 5 SE. 5SE to activate, Two Post Cooldown

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[Baron Blank]

::General::
Character Name: Aidoneus Yamiyo
Link to Profile: [x]

Zanpakuto Name: Mienaimono
Name Meaning: "Unseen One."
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: [x]
Spirit's World: [x]


::Shikai::
Attack Name: Mienai Shisha
Name Meaning: Unseen Dead
Ability: Using Mienaimono as a focus Aidoneus brings forth a dark specter from his opponents shadow that reaches around them to grab at their eyes. For the purpose of the attack the opponent's clarity is treated as 10 less. If the specter can make contact an opponent is Blinded [Physically and Spiritually] if they fail comparison [Sp] vs [Sp] for 2 Posts. Costs 3SE.
Appearance: [x]. The Bident symbolizes the Right to Rule. In the case of Mienaimono the right to rule over the darkest depths of the underworld or so Mienaimono says. However as a Darkness Zanpakuto it is something to be wary of.
Release Command: Rule from Below
Shikai Release: +5 to Intelligence and Spiritual Power increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu. Cost: 3SE Start 1SE to maintain.

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2. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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Redoing my Shikai Ability now that I better understand the system.

 

[Ryuu Sanada]

:: General ::

Character Name: Kazuki Marumasa
Link to Profile: Eleventh Division Shinigami

Zanpakuto Name: Kami no Rai-Kaze
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Raiki and Kama [Human]
Spirit's World: xXx

:: Shikai ::
Release Appearance: A pair of heavy leather gloves with bits of steel plating over his knuckles.
Release Boost: +5 to Kazuki's Spd and SP; increasing by +5 every 100 Reiatsu [Capping at +200]. 3 SE [Activate]; 1 SE [Maintain]
Release Command: [Always in Shikai; No Release]

Shikai Ability 01 [Lv.100]: Rai Shikon
Costs: 4 SE
Effect: After charging his right arm with Lighting, Kazuki delivers a powerful straight infused with this elemental energy. Attack Speed is equal to his Spd +5, and its Power is his Str +15. Opponent's struck by this attack are Stunned [can not Attack/Defend] for their next post; if their Sta is less than the Attack Power.
Cool Down: 2 posts

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Shikai Ability 02 [Lv.100]: Kaze Ha [Locked]
Costs: 3 SE [per use]
Effect: By infusing his limbs with Wind; Kazuki can send waves of air off of every swing, or kick, he makes to deliver a bit more of a ranged option. Attack Speed is his Spd +15, and its Power is his Str +5. Those with less Int and his Spd can not see these blades. Kazuki can combo his use of [Kaze Ha] with another [Kaze Ha] per 100 Reiatsu he has.
Range: 30 ft.

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:: Bankai ::
Release Appearance: Both of Kazuki's arms
Release Boost [Bankai]: +10 to Kazuki's Spd and SP; increasing by +10 each for every 100 Reiatsu [capping at +300]. 5 SE [Activate]; 3 SE [Maintain]
Release Command: 'Howl Kamaitachi! Roar Raiju! Show them our Ferocity!'

Bankai Ability 01 [Lv.150]: Raiju
Cost: 4 SE; +3 SE [Shunko]
Effect: Named after the beast of the God of Thunder; Kazuki drops to his hands, in a runners pose, before kicking off from the ground in a quick dash. He then lunges at the opponent with his clawed hands outstretched to come across their torso in a flash. Kazuki's Movement Speed is his Spd +10, Attack Speed is the same as his Movement Speed, and his Attack Power is his Str +20. If using [Shunko]; Kazuki's whole body is engulfed in lightning making him look like the beast, Raiju, increasing his Attack Speed and Attack Power by +10 each. Once used; Kazuki can use [Rai Shikon] in the same post.

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Bankai Ability 02 [Lv.150]: Kamaitachi
Cost: 4 SE [Activation]; 2 SE [Maintain]
Effect: Upon activation; The blades at Kazuki's elbows extend to the length of long swords. In this mode all of his attacks have their Attack Speed increased by +10, and their Attack Power increased by +20.

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Bankai Ability 03 [Lv.150]: Rai-Kaze Kabe [Locked]
Cost: +3 SE [per turn added to Shunko]
Effect: Upon activation of [Shunko]; an aura of lightning and wind engulf Kazuki's body like a small storm. His Defensive Power is equal to his [Shunko] +30, and those that get within melee range take damage to his [Shunko] in power.

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:: Fusion ::
Fusion Appearance: Fused Kazuki

Fusion Ability [Lv.200]: Sword of Shunko
Cost: ---
Effect: While fused with his Zanpaku-tou, the excess energy produced by [Shunko] are channeled into Kazuki's hand, in the form of a sword of Reishi, instead of out his back and arms. All of Kazuki's hand-to-hand abilities are still useable with this short sword sized blade. Movement Speed = Speed +30, other movement skills stack with this, and all Attack Powers are increased by +10.

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[jake23482]

::General::

Character Name: Achana "Maple" Sonozaki
Link to Profile: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12734329#153545365

Stats Boosted by Releases: Speed, Defense

Zanpakuto Name: Gankona-Heshi
Name Meaning: "Stalwart Soldier"
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Appears in the shape of a giant iron golem with a massive shield and a tiny sword. It's armored shape is like that of a grand samurai, possibly one in parade armor with an ornate kabuto helmet. It has no face, just a single red eye which gleams beneath the covering of the helm.
Spirit's World: A giant stone fortress which is blanketed in a perpetual moon-lit night. If one were to see it, they might swear it looked like a black clone of the white citadel, Las Noches.

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Kanzen-Bogyo
Name Meaning: Complete Defense
Ability: While Released; Achana Converts her Attack Action into either a Defensive Action or an Augment Slot. She cannot attack; but Counter-Attack Skills are considered Defensive Skills.
Appearance: A big black shield with a red gem and gleaming lines that glow as her reiatsu pressure rises.
Release Command: "Mamoru, Gankona-Heshi"

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::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name: Kyūkyoku no Bogyo
Name Meaning: Ultimate Defense
Ability: While Released; Achana Converts her Attack Action into a Defensive Action -AND- an Augment Slot. She cannot attack; but Counter-Attack Skills are considered Defensive Skills.
Appearance: Achana's outfit becomes a mirror of her shields. A red and black breast-plate, boots and gauntlets. A small wakizashi is at her hip.
Release Command: "Bankai, Chūjitsuna Yōgo-sha!" [Final Release, Loyal Defender!]

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Attack 2 Name: Musabori-kuu
Name Meaning: Devour
Ability: Achana can use her shield to "devour" an incoming attack's power; If her Defense+20 higher than her attacker's Strength, Intelligence, or Spirit Power [Physical, Technological, or Spiritual Attacks determine the stat for comparison]; Then the shield eats the attack and refracts a copy of it back at the attacker with the following changes; The Speed = Original Speed, The power of the refracted attack is calculated with Achana's Defense. [Cost = Technique's Base Cost+3, 1 Post CD]
Appearance: The giant black shield absorbs kinetic force and redirects it back at the source; blasting, smashing or slicing at the person who dared to try and bypass the defender.

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[Saucy Goblin]

::General::

Character Name: Manan
Link to Profile: x

Zanpakuto Name: Shangri-La
Name Meaning: Lost Horizon

::Hekai::

Attack Name: Amar Amgalan Khöndii
Name Meaning: Peaceful valley
Ability: Attacks are negated in a radius of 60 ft with Manan as the center. Costs for attacks are still taken out of their user's SE unless they beat a comparison of SP+10. 5 SE + 1 SE per post to maintain. Boosts SP and Def by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu.
Appearance: A remnant memory of a peaceful shinigami comes to Manan briefly, evoking the ability that the shinigami used as a Bankai. While not nearly as powerful, Manan's hekai charges her mists with spiritual energy. The fog takes on a deeper haze and opponents find that when they attempt to attack they are either met with illusions or even forget where their target is.
Release Command: "There is silence in the mists.."

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Comments: I feel like this needs a counter, something along the lines of if someone is so much over a comparison they can attack, or it dispels the area entirely.
3. Jake - Approved
Comments: I'd slap a SE maintain cost on it and call it good. It has a comparison. It pretty much means don't attack her or anyone in her mist unless you beat it.

::Nisekai::

Attack Name: Divaajin Aldsan
Name Meaning: Paradise lost
Ability: Everyone within a 60 ft radius, including Manan, is taken to a different realm unless they beat a comparison of SP. Within this realm, any action that is not peaceful in nature cannot be performed. Healing is allowed. This also reactivates [Möröödögch] for the same cost, increasing the comparison by +20. Anyone is free to leave the realm, but cannot harm anyone within and if they return are subject to it once more. 5 SE + 3 SE per post to maintain. Boosts SP and Def by +10; increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu. [Capping at +300]
Appearance: A realm of mist, fog, and towering mountains overlap the current realm like a tranquil blanket. There is nothing but snow and gray skies for as far as the eye can see. A familiar reiatsu for shinigami permeates the air, like that of a tranquil lake.
Release Command: "There is peace in the fog.."

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Comments: Same as above
3. Jake - Approved
Comments: I'd slap a SE maintain cost on it, and a comparison to avoid the initial yoink.

 

[Nevermore or Evermore]

::General::

Character Name: Kaito Amatsu
Link to Profile: x

Zanpakuto Name: Tetsuko
Name Meaning: "Iron Tigress"
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: The Smith The Tigeress
Spirit's World: The Forge

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Kitaeru
Name Meaning: "Reforge"
Ability: Can make one additional [Attack Action] during a post while released. After 3 turns of combat have gone by the sword is "reforged" into a new weapon, and a single targets items are treated as one item grade lower against it.. i.e. Advance Grade is treated as Complex.
[Costs 1 SE to Maintain once Reforged]
Appearance: [ Hammer, Blade ] Tetsuko takes time to warm up to full power once released however due to the dual nature of the Zanpakuto it allows for a higher volume of attacks. After spending time in combat the sword blade of Tetsuko slowly begins to heat up until it is red hot. During this process Tetsuko is drawing upon an opponent's residual reiatsu, and once struck with the hammer when fully heated up it is reforged into a weapon designed to shatter the opponent's weapon.
Release Command: "Fan the Flames, and Beat the Iron"

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Comments: This is a first, so congrats on something unique. Let's see how it works and if it turns out to be too much, we can tone it up. cool
2. Approved - Bandit
Comments: Ooooooh s**t this is gonna be so nasty

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Unsure if this needed a comparison, for the weapon grade effect

 

[Master Agito]

::General::

Character Name: Khan
Link to Profile: Arrancar

Zanpakuto Name: Mugen karasu
Name Meaning: Infinite Crow

::Resurrection::
Appearance: Xx
Release Command: Scream at the stars
Attack Name: Bide
Name Meaning:
Ability: When Khan is hit with an attack but does not return an attack that turn, he receives a +15 boost to his Attack power per attacker. (So if Khan is attacked by 2 people and does not return fire he will receive +30 that turn, but if hit by two attacks from the same person it will only be +15 that turn. The attack power boost lasts until he leaves his released state.

Attack Name: Shifting crow (hollows in disguise)
Name Meaning:
Ability: Khan can shapeshift while in his released state, he can turn into a jet black and feathered version of whatever he wants. His forms can give him a +20 boost In either attack power, Defensive power, attack speed or movement speed and must be made clear in post. The boost can also be applied to more than one category at a lesser effect (so instead of just +20 attk power he could do +10 attk +10 def power ) Must wait 1 turn in between changing forms.

Release Boost: +10 Def, +10 Sta increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu [Capping at +300]
Release cost: 5 SE to activate, 3 SE per turn to maintain.

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[Luciferin Bandit]

::General::

Character Name: Nara Ellerose
Link to Profile:

Zanpakuto Name: Sarenrae
Name Meaning: Lady of Redemption
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Sarenrae appears as a beautiful, olive-skinned woman with flaming red hair. Her smile is warm, and her eyes sparkle with love.
Spirit's World: Sarenrae resides in a tower on a pebbled beach looking out over the endless ocean.

::Shikai::
Attack 1 Name: Radiant Aura
Ability: Sarenrae shines with a radiant, warm light. Nara and her allies feel emboldened by the presence of the Lady of Redemption, their sins washed away. Nara is healed by 5hp a post. Any ally within range (100 feet) is restored by 10 HP or 3 SE per round (their choice). this costs Nara 3 SE per post, and an additional 2 SE per post per ally affected.
Appearance: Sarenrae’s metal shines with a brilliant divine light.
Release Command: “Shine, Sarenrae!”

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Comments: eeds a SE Cost, preferably increasing per person healed - Though could get away with it removing a Light Wound or reducing an injury 1 stage; The most you could heal would be 5 HP Personally, 10 HP to an Ally. Also 10 Spirit Energy healing is way too much maybe 2 or 3. :: Also needs a duration.
2. Approved - Chaos
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Attack 2 Name: Blinding Radiance
Ability: Sarenrae shines brighter, it’s light blinding those with evil in their hearts. Anyone with Hollow reitsu (including hueco hybrids, vizards, etc.), or otherwise gains stat points from the consumption of souls (like bounts) takes Nara’s STR in damage and is blinded unless their SP is greater than Nara’s Honor*10 (so 60 if she has 6 honor points, etc.) . They are blinded for 2 posts. This costs Nara 3 SE and can only be used once every 3 posts.
Appearance: Sarenrae’s shield glows brightly.
Release Command: Show them the light, Sarenrae

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1. Approved - Jake
Comments: Needs a cost, cool-down, how long does the blind last - Lowered your SE cost by 3 for this technique.
2. Approved - Chaos
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::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name: Aura of Strength
Ability: Nara herself glows with Sarenrae’s light. Her defense is enhanced by yet another layer of divine protection, this time from Sarenrae. Effectively, the bonus to defense granted by Nara’s [honor] point bank is increased to 20 per honor point spent in this way for 5 gaian posts. Nara can choose to transfer this defense bonus to a willing ally, giving them +10 defense per honor point spent. This costs 2 SE per post to maintain (in addition to the cost for [honor]).
Release Command: Sarenrae, Give me your strength!

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1. Approved - Jake
Comments: The max you could gain from the effect is +20 at Level 100. Exponential effects like this are highly discouraged as it is inadvertent multiplication. Just noting this is a boost to Defensive Power, not the Defense stat.
2. Approved - Chaos
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Attack 2 Name: Pillar of Light
Ability: Nara calls forth a billar of blinding white radiant light, which comes down from the heavens, utterly devastating any evildoer who is found in its light. Any creature with hollow reitsu, or that derives stat points from killing PCs, or is otherwise “evil” by alignment is subject to 25 points of damage for every point of Honor spent unless their SP or Defense is greater than Nara's Honor*10 (so 50 if she has 5 honor points, etc.). Non-evil characters are unaffected by this.
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Release Command: Burn, Sarenrae

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1. Approved - Jake
Comments: Way too overpowered. Its an essential auto-hit against anyone. - Also is this bypassing Defense or ignoring a person's right to defend via barriers?
2. Approved - Chaos
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Attack 3 Name: Mass Cure Wounds
Ability: A pillar of warm orange light comes down from the heavens, bathing Nara’s allies and herself in warm, redeeming light. All wounds up to fatal are healed in a radius of 50 feet around Nara (10 HP per honor point spent). Nara can choose who is included in this (up to 1 additional person per additional honor point spent).
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Release Command: Save them, Sarenrae

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1. Approved - Jake
Comments: The max you could heal is 10 HP personally, 20 HP to an Ally per the level of the custom. Same about the wound healing per shikai comment.
2. Approved - Chaos
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[Baron Blank]

::General::

Character Name: Osamu Shisa Komamura
Link to Profile: "Woof Woof"

Zanpakuto Name: Komainu
Name Meaning: "Lion Dog"
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: [x]
Spirit's World: [x]

::Shikai::
Attack Name: A-un
Name Meaning: Open, and Closed
Ability: Komainu grants 1 extra action per post to spend on Supportive or Binding Kido. Kido cast this way costs an extra 2SE.
Appearance: [x] Komainu is a living type zanpakuto as such when released it takes on the form of a Massive Lion Dog. While released it acts as a second caster, able to cast any Supportive, or Binding Kido that Osamu knows.
Release Command: Rise from the East, Shield my Friends-Set to the west, Bind my Foes!"

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1.Approved - Chaos
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2. Approved - Bandit
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[Master Agito]

::General::

Character Name: Abel
Link to Profile: Rosary

Zanpakuto Name: Titania
Name Meaning: -
Sealed form: Hatchet
::Hekai::

Attack Name: Balrog
Name Meaning: -
Ability: When Abel is hit with an attack but does not return an attack that turn, he receives a +10 boost to his Attack power per attack defended against. The attack power boost lasts until he seals his zanpakuto.

Boosts INT and DEF by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu.

Appearance: Turns into a set of Shoulder guards, gauntlets and grieves.
Release Command: Forgive my enemies
Cost: On release; pay 3 SE + 1 SE per post released

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1. Approved - Bandit
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2. Approved - Jake
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::Nisekai::

Attack Name: Revelation
Name Meaning:
Ability: Abel’s body becomes extremely hot to the touch, burning with a power equal to his defensive power. Abel’s melee attacks receive +20 fire damage.

Boosts STA and SP by +10; increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu. [Capping at +300]

Appearance: The Bankai memories stored in Abel’s false zanpakuto are released, changing his form to a scarred remnant of a Bankai of the past. While in this form Abel’s body becomes more dense and heats up dramatically.
Release Command: Let the sun set and the moon never rise again.
Cost: On release; pay 5 SE + 3 SE per post released

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1. Approved - Bandit
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2. Approved - Jake
Comments: The effect of the Nisekai has a percentage increase, which is not allowed in the manner you are using it. Just add a flat +20 to attack power [that is fire element] and call it a day.

 

[Luciferin Bandit]

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Buying the 50-level ability slot from the spiritual goldsmith. I want it to add onto the shikai release, so im just submitting it here as part of it. I plan to do the same with bankai and the 100-level slot. I did this with ?Nara and thought it was another release. Will have to edit later.

Character Name: Faewyn Neltrenado
Link to Profile: Here

Zanpakuto Name: Nemizir
Name Meaning: Nemizir is the name of the forest.
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Nemizir is kind of like Fae’s “happy place” it is an endless forest, dense and verdant, where wildlife and plants play out the laws of nature endlessly. If Nemizir shows a single appearance, it is often that of a wood nymph or spriggan, a beautiful woman made of vine and root, with wild leaves and vines for hair
Spirit's World: See above

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Grasping Vines
Name Meaning:
Ability: Fae speaks the command and vines appear out of any nearby organic material, growing to monstrous size in mere moments. These vines seek out Fae’s enemies, wrapping them up and binding them. They must have greater strength than Fae’s SP+10 to break free of the binding. While bound, an opponent cannot move their limbs, or move from the spot they are bound. This lasts for 3 posts and costs Fae 5 SE per post to maintain.
Appearance: Small vines begin to wrap around and cover Fae’s staff. A large, deep purple flower blooms at its end, like an amethyst jewel.
Release Command: Bind them, Nemizir!

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2. Approved - Jake
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Ability: 50-level ability slot from goldsmith
Name: Leeching vines
Description: Fae commands the vines to drink freely of their host, and they obey.
Effect: If an opponent is bound by Fae’s Shikai, they begin to lose 5 HP per post. Faewyn regains the damage as SE for the duration of the shikai. This can be avoided if an opponent has more stamina than Fae’s SP+10

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Added to profile? NO

 

[iiiCrimsonr0se]

Character Name:Daisuke Thu Higurashi
Link to Profile:Daisuke Higurashi

Zanpakuto Name: Kazekurama
Name Meaning:Wind fox
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:Wild Wind
Spirit's World:Inner World

::Shikai::
Attack Name:Heavenly Winds
Name Meaning:
Ability:In the shikai state Daisuke can create winds to either protect himself or attack. When the be fan is swung vertically it creates propelling winds that reduce damage of incoming attacks by 10. While when swung horizontally it causes sharp razor winds which deal 10 damage. He also gains +5 to sp with a cap at 100.
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Release Command:Lets Play Kazekurama

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1. Approved - Chaos
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2.Approved - Jake
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