Custom Technique Submission

[Evanescently Magnificent]

Kondo Kaicho

And now for the nitty gritty! So for Manipulation of Forces, Are these waves visible to another? I have concerns it is auto-hitting similar to the old pain technique. Secondly, if it's dodge mechanics are meant to be only the walking on techniques then how does it interact with anything that launches the user backwards? Say I'm using solo flight at the same rank am I am avoiding these jutsu?

Now for Autumn Cherry! This buff to yourself to gain three acts for as long as you don't hit a defense that's it's rank or above? If I'm understanding it right then I don't think I can pass it only because then it would be mimicking disciplines that give three offensive acts

Jenni Deer

Oxygen Mask! So, it's a seal that places on a body that defends solely from Misama drawing from it's hosts chakra pool and if it's Sumire's it's one rank less to defend from yesss? If that's it it just needs a duration since no customs can last forever!

For Familiar what is the classification (simple or spiritual) of the attacks these are making? Like if Dragon made a claw attack at me? Also what do you mean exactly when you say it has stats equal to it's body rank? : P  

[Overlord Diaus]

▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dance of the flailing turtle ]
| Rank A-S |
Class bloodline
[ optional Earth]|
Cost: Stamina 80
80/80 chakra stamina (last 7 posts before retracting )
[ Complex/Simple ]
Technique Description Similar to the vine jutsu the user will grow upwards to 8 long spinal cords from the base of their tail bone, without removing them they will obey the users command just like ones fingers move. like the vine technique the spinal tails are sharp and can extend past their 6 foot base range by double. once formed the tails can either attack with the movements of the user or coil around themselves to form a larger denser tail. both forms are capable of flailing the flesh from an opponents, the harder and quicker the movements of the user th more destructive the flails can become as like whips the most destructive part of the tail would be the tips . By infusing earth nature chakra into the bone tails they are morphed into a hard substance similar to diamond, the infused bone shows to be even able to drill through S rank defenses when in this form.the simplicity of the technique is over shined by its effectiveness as a armor piercing weapon.





▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dancers end enforcer ]
| Rank | X
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: dependent on rank( cost 5 stamina for each additional post
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: around the elbows a bone will form and the end instead of a point it is in the shape of a nail head, inside the elbow all the way to the wrist a temporary bone tube is made, the users fist will grow bone grooves around the knuckles to maximize the techniques destructive force. using pressure built up within the tube and resistance from the bone nail Clem can add a added impact as she punches an opponent causing the very dense bone nail to shoot into her arm slamming into the bottom of the bone tube applying greater force similar to a jack hammer. this technique can be applied to the elbow or knee of the user though as a result movement is slightly restricted to the wrists and ankles





▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dance of the puppet ]
| Rank | E
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 5
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: a simple technique that allows the user to dislocate each joint be it finger spine, neck or ankle etc in any direction they want with ease. making movements such as back attacks by swinging towards them dislocating a joint to reach said victim, or to contort ones body down to fit into small spaces many times smaller then the users body. even fake death with simple acts of snapping ones head around.






▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Name: Marrow web ]
| Rank | C
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 20
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: drawing marrow from ones body and focusing it into the fingers the user can fire cable like wires made from marrow at high speeds capable of piercing solid stone, the cables made from marrow are strong as steel yet flexible as yarn, used for either combat of supplementary use the user can alter the ends of these cables to form hooks once attached to a object to either pull them towards her or her towards the object. if still connected to these cables the user can retract them pulling her at a much quicker rate, these cables are similar to spider webs only in durability






▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ secret art: skeletal prison ]
| Rank | C
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 20
[ Spiritual ]
Technique Description: preforming several hand signs the user will plant either the hand of foot firmly on the ground growing six rib like bones that travel through the ground bursting up at an opponent attacking just below the opponents ribs in order to pin them to a single spot. one the user removes the hand or foot the ribs will disintegrate after 1 post. that attack strikes the left right back and front of the opponent embedding in them several inches, additionally the attack can be altered to trap a opponent without stabbing them but rather lock them in place through a cris-cross method











re-submission  

[Jenni Deer]

Eva: The attacks fo the familiar are spiritiual and of same body rank. Say Wild Board headbutts you, that's B-rank spiritual damage. If the Wild Boar runs, same speed as B-rank. Things like that.
Oxygen: added rules and upkeep


▰ Character: Sumire Mahofu
▰ Link to profile: [x]

▰ Familiar [ Onajimi ] | Rank X | Bloodline | Spiritual
The user forms the required hand signs, causing any existing miasma in the area to gather in a target location within ten feet of the user per rank of the technique. As the miasma becomes dense the user's chakra molding gives it shape, causing the miasma to take form of a creature of the user's choosing depending on the rank of it's execution. Each of these creatures has it's own unique attributes, exploiting the user's mastery of their element, having a body rank and stats equal to it's rank. Each creature can use Basic Combat attacks up to it's rank by drawing from the user's chakra supply. Each creature requires an upkeep two ranks below it's executed rank. Each creature has a single activation, treated as a shadow clone for this technique

Chicken: The user can conjure five chickens at E Rank strength each, these chickens are able to collectively swarm and attack a target or target seperate targets. Lacerations and wounds inflict tier one poisons from these creatures.
Lion: For a D Rank amount of chakra the user may summon this beast. It's claws and teeth inflict tier one poison on contact. Gains mild increase in strength and slight decrease in speed.
Hell Hound: For a C Rank amount of chakra the user's chakra takes this form, standing up to ten feet in height. This creature causes tier two poisons when bitten or clawed. Gains moderate increase in speed and mild decrease in strength.
Wild Boar: By using a B Rank amount of chakra the user creates a twenty foot tall wild boar. This boar has three horns that extend from it's head. These horns inflict tier two poison on contact.
Dragon: Utilizing an A Rank amount of chakra the user creates a fifty foot oriental style dragon composed of miasma. This dragon freely flies about, able to expel tier three poisonous miasma in breath form, affecting those who inhale it. This breath has a thirty foot reach and costs the user an additional B Rank amount of chakra. The creature's claws and fangs inflict tier two poison.
Wraith: By utilizing an S Rank amount of chakra, the user creates two ten foot tall wraiths that are composed of translucent miasma. These wraiths move with a supreme increase to speed, inflicting tier four poison and tier two paralysis upon targets who they pass through. Due to the user's genjutsu specialization, targets who see these wraith suffer tier two mental stress and those who make contact with the wraith have the wraith used as a physical contact trigger for a genjutsu.
Oni: The user creates a one hundred foot tall Oni that is purple in body color. This oni rampages, having a supreme increase in strength and speed. This creature causes tier four insanity on sight due to the user's genjutsu specialization. Physical contact with the ogre causes poisonous miasma to spew forth on the object that contacted it, inflicting tier four poison if inhaled. Upon it's destruction, the ogre expels a two hundred foot wave of miasma that lingers for five posts.


▰ Oxygen [ Sanso ] | Rank X | Maruton | Spiritual
An unique seal that Sumire had created. After doing the handseals, it leaves a tattoo/beauty mark/invisible mark or whatever the person wishes upon on their skin. When they come contact with miasma, the seal activates and a pure raw chakra gas mask appears on their face while in contact with miasma. Draws chakra from the seal bearer equal rank of what it's defending. One less chakra if it's Sumire's miasma if she made the seal upon the ally. The ally must pay an upkeep of C-rank per post. When used once, it cannot be triggered again unless Sumire seals another one onto them.

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Kondo Kaicho

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[Kondo Kaicho]

Overlord Diaus

Denied. These haven't been reformatted and I don't have a character link. You should really re-read the custom submission rules....

Jenni Deer

Approved. Looks good, enjoy the customs~

 

[Overlord Diaus]

▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dance of the flailing turtle ]
| Rank A-S |
Class bloodline
[ optional Earth]|
Cost: Stamina 80
80/80 chakra stamina (last 7 posts before retracting )
[ Complex/Simple ]
Technique Description Similar to the vine jutsu the user will grow upwards to 8 long spinal cords from the base of their tail bone, without removing them they will obey the users command just like ones fingers move. like the vine technique the spinal tails are sharp and can extend past their 6 foot base range by double. once formed the tails can either attack with the movements of the user or coil around themselves to form a larger denser tail. both forms are capable of flailing the flesh from an opponents, the harder and quicker the movements of the user th more destructive the flails can become as like whips the most destructive part of the tail would be the tips . By infusing earth nature chakra into the bone tails they are morphed into a hard substance similar to diamond, the infused bone shows to be even able to drill through S rank defenses when in this form.the simplicity of the technique is over shined by its effectiveness as a armor piercing weapon.





▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dancers end enforcer ]
| Rank | X
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: dependent on rank( cost 5 stamina for each additional post
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: around the elbows a bone will form and the end instead of a point it is in the shape of a nail head, inside the elbow all the way to the wrist a temporary bone tube is made, the users fist will grow bone grooves around the knuckles to maximize the techniques destructive force. using pressure built up within the tube and resistance from the bone nail Clem can add a added impact as she punches an opponent causing the very dense bone nail to shoot into her arm slamming into the bottom of the bone tube applying greater force similar to a jack hammer. this technique can be applied to the elbow or knee of the user though as a result movement is slightly restricted to the wrists and ankles





▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Dance of the puppet ]
| Rank | E
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 5
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: a simple technique that allows the user to dislocate each joint be it finger spine, neck or ankle etc in any direction they want with ease. making movements such as back attacks by swinging towards them dislocating a joint to reach said victim, or to contort ones body down to fit into small spaces many times smaller then the users body. even fake death with simple acts of snapping ones head around.






▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ Name: Marrow web ]
| Rank | C
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 20
[ Simple ]
Technique Description: drawing marrow from ones body and focusing it into the fingers the user can fire cable like wires made from marrow at high speeds capable of piercing solid stone, the cables made from marrow are strong as steel yet flexible as yarn, used for either combat of supplementary use the user can alter the ends of these cables to form hooks once attached to a object to either pull them towards her or her towards the object. if still connected to these cables the user can retract them pulling her at a much quicker rate, these cables are similar to spider webs only in durability






▰ Character:Clementia
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ [ secret art: skeletal prison ]
| Rank | C
Class bloodline
[ Element N/A]|
Cost: 20
[ Spiritual ]
Technique Description: preforming several hand signs the user will plant either the hand of foot firmly on the ground growing six rib like bones that travel through the ground bursting up at an opponent attacking just below the opponents ribs in order to pin them to a single spot. one the user removes the hand or foot the ribs will disintegrate after 1 post. that attack strikes the left right back and front of the opponent embedding in them several inches, additionally the attack can be altered to trap a opponent without stabbing them but rather lock them in place through a cris-cross method











re-submission  

[Mattysandwich]

Character: Avalanche
Link to Profile: Avalanche
Forbidden Seal Brand: Mark of Justice
Symbol: Here
Awoken Stage:
• Supreme in Speed. Moderate in Strength and Reflexes
• Overwhelming Ninjutsu (Ice Release Bloodline)
• Costs 25 Natural Chakra per post to maintain.
Unleashed Stage:
• Double Supreme in Speed. Supreme in Strength and Reflexes
• Overwhelming Ninjutsu (Ice Release Bloodline)
• Keystone PA: Unnerving Cold: Avalanche's Genjutsu applies frostbite status effect to their genjutsu. This effect is tiered to the level of genjutsu applied as follows E-C Rank: Tier 1, B-A Rank: Tier 2 and S-S+ Rank: Tier 3. Frostbite applied by this effect is canceled when the genjutsu used is broken out of.
• Costs 50 Natural Chakra per post to maintain.

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Kondo Kaicho

 

[Kondo Kaicho]

Overlord Diaus

Still not formatted correctly, see other's examples to reference. But, I'll dig in to what I can from what's legible. Anything denied is something that can be worked on. I strongly suggest you review everything about customs here.

Dance of the Flailing Turtle: Denied. How long are the spinal cords? If you're referencing a technique in another technique, use the exact name of that technique and the bloodline or elemental release it's from since this isn't obvious to me. I don't mind techniques that have armor piercing abilities, treating defensive techniques or barriers as one rank lower. Specify that. Applying earth chakra to this has no systematic benefit unless it's just the flavor text for S Rank application? Unclear on it. Needs cleaned up and an upkeep applied to it. If it's being manipulated per post it has to have an upkeep. Reference the page I sent you to prior...info is all there for that.

Dancers and Enforcer: Denied. Unsure of the way this bone tube is applying additional force? Are the grooves ridges? Serrated knuckles and such? I would rephrase the first sentence to include the bit about the knee and elbow both, a bit redundant at the end. I like the jackhammer visual though, I don't think you need to limit your physical movement of joints. No reason to really. Why limit yourself.

Dance of the Puppet: Nothing inherintly wrong here! I think you could even add to it and say it increases your reflex slightly per body rank. Approved if you want it this way, but you can resubmit with my suggestion if you wish.

Marrow Web: Denied, not bad though. You need to specify speeds and distances.

Secret Art: Skeletal Prison: Denied, another decent one though. Do the ribs disintegrate upon removal of the limb from the ground or the user's following post? Specify. How big are these ribs you sprout. Feel free to add paralysis tiers to this if the target is pierced with it. Not a bad idea. This will also require an upkeep cost per post if you're actively holding the barrier with physical contact.

mattysandwich

Approved

 

[Kondo Kaicho]

▰ Character: Masato Umechika
▰ Profile Link: [ x ]

▰ Manipulation of Forces | Rank A-S+ | Ninjutsu [ Maruton ] | Spiritual
This technique pushes or drags targets away from or to the user by releasing powerful solid waves of chakra. It is possible to effect multiple targets at once, causing them to collide with each other but reduces the range of the technique by half. Can drag objects from up to fifty feet away at A rank, doubling it's range per additional rank. The user must replicate the chakra cost of this technique for ever target affected. Has a two [2] post cool down. Targets may resist this technique by applying chakra equal to it's cost in order to stand their ground. If mid air, this requires chakra be paid an additional rank higher than the technique. This actions consumes the target's defensive action.

Quote:

Custom Style Created by Teaching Profession

▰▰▰ Description:
Founded by Masato Umechika, the Kazanran Ryu is a school that monopolizes upon combining combining both fire and wind elements with the speed and accuracy of the Hyuuga's gentle fist style. The style's name comes from it's signature move, the "Fire Mountain Orchid", which creates flames in the shape of a blooming cherry blossom upon impact.

▰▰▰ Notes:
• This style requires the user have access to the Gentle Fist, Fire and Wind elements.
• Simple Techniques from this style gain the Gentle Fist's Training Application.
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▰▰▰ Style Creation Credits:
• Kondo Kaicho | Masato Umechika

Stage One

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Guiding Principle [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shidō Gensoku ] | Rank E | Taijutsu | Training
The user learns to apply chakra to their simple techniques to augment their execution, applying rapid bursts of flame to physical strikes, passively applying an additional ten chakra per rank of the technique. Doing so creates an explosion of flames within five feet of the attack that cause tiered burning and burns depending on the parent technique's rank. Doing so requires the fire element.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Weeping Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shidarezakura ] | Rank C | Taijutsu | Simple
The user strikes a target with a hooked punch that is delivered to the top of the head. This strike forces the target off balance as they fall forward. This technique is executed at a slight increase to strength per rank of the technique. If successful, the user then delivers a barrage of physical strikes with their hands to the target's back, permitting the gentle fist training to be applied, totaling in thirty two strikes. The target is pinned to the earth by the strikes, causing tier one full body paralysis if unblocked.

Stage Two

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Second Bloom [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Daini Saku ] | Rank X | Complex
The user launches a chakra infused punch at the target that is consumed by fire chakra. Upon direct impact, the user's strike ignites it's target, consuming the entire being for tiered burning. If unevaded, the user then releases a second punch that stops just before impacting the target. This strike is infused with condensed wind chakra the size of the user's fist and consumes an equal amount of chakra to the original strike, acting as a Korabo technique between the two strikes. The wind fuels the flame upon impact, increasing the burning duration for an additional post between E and C Rank, two posts between B and A Rank and additional three posts between S and S+ Rank. In addition, for each rank of the combined two strikes after Korabo, the target is knocked back ten feet.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid [ Kazan Ran ] | Rank B | Spiritual
The user channels their chakra into the desired hand as it resonates with a flaming glow that encompasses the hand. Upon the next physical strike with the hand that is made with a taijutsu technique or Basic Combat attack, this technique is released. Upon impact, a fiery ten foot wide orb of flames stems from the user's hand with concussive force. From four sides of this initial explosion, a series of smaller orb like waves of flame that measure out thirty feet from the point of impact erupt that cause an intense heat wave that drives targets away. This technique causes tier two burns and burning upon direct impact while those within the radius of the attack suffer tier one burning.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Heavenly Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Tenzakura ] | Rank B-S | Spiritual
When surrounded or facing an incoming attack, the user draws from the principle the Heavenly Spin of the Hyuuga clan. Releasing chakra from their entire Tenketsu system, the user melds their fire and wind chakra within it simultaneously. Instead of spinning rapidly to release a sphere of protection, the user channels that chakra being released to tightly wind around them, creating a small flaming twister that spirals around them. Upon impact with the user, the incoming attack is caught within the unexpectedly powerful spiraling chakra and treated as Korabo with compatible Ninjutsu and Bloodline Ninjutsu. This attack is thrown back, utilizing the user's defense and the target's offensive technique to counter.

Stage Three

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Autumn Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Jugatsuzakura ] | Rank S | Complex
The user channels their chakra into their fists, expelling fire chakra that swirls about them in the form of reddish orange cherry blossom embers. The user is unable to utilize defensive abilities during this technique, turning all three of their activations into offensive actions for the sake of striking the target with their fists at the casted rank of this technique. After it's initial post, this technique requires an A Rank upkeep. Upon impact during this technique, the user's fists expel a swirling vortex of autumn colored blossom like embers cause tiered burning and burns to a target who is stricken. If the user strikes a defense that exceeds the techniques rank and potency in cost the technique is ended immediately.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Moonlight on the Pine Trees [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shogetsu ] | Rank S | Simple
The user delivers a powerful and swift strike that gains a supreme increase to speed upon delivery. The user strikes the target's chest, seeming to do no damage upon impact. The user's next post, the target's ribs and bones shatter from the impact as they suffer tier two paralysis over their entire body, internal hemorrhaging causing need for medical treatment within two posts or the target suffers comatose hospitalization. If the user applied the Guiding Principle to this technique, the target does not suffer those wounds as normal. Upon the second post, the target's body burst into flames with the fats within their body as fuel for the flames, causing their body to remain ablaze for an additional post. Alternatively, this technique can be used to destroy a barrier technique or defensive technique. Upon impact the barrier is destroyed if the technique is superior in rank and power to the barrier. Following the destruction of the barrier a concussive blast of force is released that blows away any target within one hundred feet. Should the Guiding Principle be applied to this variant, the concussive blast is set ablaze, applying the training's ability to the wind.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Chrysanthemum Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Kikuzakura ] | Rank S+ | Simple
The user vanishes from sight, consuming a body flicker use as they strike a target from behind with a single strike.If unevaded, the remainder of the user's one hundred strikes will continue successfully. The user begins a flurry of accurate strikes aimed at the target's tenketsu that each carry a concussive blast that is capable of knocking the target back five feet. When combined together, the target in the center is made into a human rag-doll as they are violently blown between strike after strike as the user appears on the opposite side of the target each time to deliver the next blow. The ninety eight blow throws the target fifty feet into the air, allowing the user to appear above them, delivering another blow back into the earth. The final blow drives the target deep into the earth, creating a twenty five foot crater on impact.

 

[Kondo Kaicho]

All changes made that were in question and explained over Discord

▰ Character: Masato Umechika
▰ Profile Link: [ x ]

▰ Manipulation of Forces | Rank A-S+ | Ninjutsu [ Maruton ] | Spiritual
This technique pushes or drags targets away from or to the user by releasing powerful solid waves of chakra. It is possible to effect multiple targets at once, causing them to collide with each other but reduces the range of the technique by half. Can drag objects from up to fifty feet away at A rank, doubling it's range per additional rank. The user must replicate the chakra cost of this technique for ever target affected. Has a two [2] post cool down. Targets may resist this technique by applying chakra equal to it's cost in order to stand their ground. If mid air, this requires chakra be paid an additional rank higher than the technique. This actions consumes the target's defensive action.

Quote:

Custom Style Created by Teaching Profession

▰▰▰ Description:
Founded by Masato Umechika, the Kazanran Ryu is a school that monopolizes upon combining combining both fire and wind elements with the speed and accuracy of the Hyuuga's gentle fist style. The style's name comes from it's signature move, the "Fire Mountain Orchid", which creates flames in the shape of a blooming cherry blossom upon impact.

▰▰▰ Notes:
• This style requires the user have access to the Gentle Fist, Fire and Wind elements.
• Simple Techniques from this style gain the Gentle Fist's Training Application.
•
•


▰▰▰ Style Creation Credits:
• Kondo Kaicho | Masato Umechika

Stage One

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Guiding Principle [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shidō Gensoku ] | Rank E | Taijutsu | Training
The user learns to apply chakra to their simple techniques to augment their execution, applying rapid bursts of flame to physical strikes, passively applying an additional ten chakra per rank of the technique. Doing so creates an explosion of flames within five feet of the attack that cause tiered burning and burns depending on the parent technique's rank. Doing so requires the fire element.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Weeping Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shidarezakura ] | Rank C | Taijutsu | Simple
The user strikes a target with a hooked punch that is delivered to the top of the head. This strike forces the target off balance as they fall forward. This technique is executed at a slight increase to strength per rank of the technique. If successful, the user then delivers a barrage of physical strikes with their hands to the target's back, permitting the gentle fist training to be applied, totaling in thirty two strikes. The target is pinned to the earth by the strikes, causing tier one full body paralysis if unblocked.

Stage Two

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Second Bloom [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Daini Saku ] | Rank X | Complex
The user launches a chakra infused punch at the target that is consumed by fire chakra. Upon direct impact, the user's strike ignites it's target, consuming the entire being for tiered burning. If unevaded, the user then releases a second punch that stops just before impacting the target for no additional actiation. This second strike is infused with condensed wind chakra the size of the user's fist and consumes an equal amount of chakra to the original strike, combining the strength of the two strikes. The wind fuels the flame upon impact, increasing the burning duration for an additional post between E and C Rank, two posts between B and A Rank and additional three posts between S and S+ Rank. In addition, for each rank of the combined two strikes after Korabo, the target is knocked back ten feet.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid [ Kazan Ran ] | Rank B | Spiritual
The user channels their chakra into the desired hand as it resonates with a flaming glow that encompasses the hand. Upon the next physical strike with the hand that is made with a taijutsu technique or Basic Combat attack, this technique is released. Upon impact, a fiery ten foot wide orb of flames stems from the user's hand with concussive force. From four sides of this initial explosion, a series of smaller orb like waves of flame that measure out thirty feet from the point of impact erupt that cause an intense heat wave that drives targets away. This technique causes tier two burns and burning upon direct impact while those within the radius of the attack suffer tier one burning.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Heavenly Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Tenzakura ] | Rank B-S | Spiritual
When surrounded or facing an incoming attack, the user draws from the principle the Heavenly Spin of the Hyuuga clan. Releasing chakra from their entire Tenketsu system, the user melds their fire and wind chakra within it simultaneously. Instead of spinning rapidly to release a sphere of protection, the user channels that chakra being released to tightly wind around them, creating a small flaming twister that spirals around them. Upon impact with the user, the incoming attack is caught within the unexpectedly powerful spiraling chakra and treated as Korabo with compatible Ninjutsu and Bloodline Ninjutsu. This attack is thrown back, utilizing the user's defense and the target's offensive technique to counter. This technique has a two post cool down after it's use.

Stage Three

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Autumn Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Jugatsuzakura ] | Rank S | Complex
The user channels their chakra into their fists, expelling fire chakra that swirls about them in the form of reddish orange cherry blossom embers. The user is unable to utilize defensive abilities during this technique, turning all three of their activations into offensive actions for the sake of striking the target with their fists at the casted rank of this technique. After it's initial post, this technique requires an A Rank upkeep. Upon impact during this technique, the user's fists expel a swirling vortex of autumn colored blossom like embers cause tiered burning and burns to a target who is stricken. If the user strikes a defense that exceeds the techniques rank and potency in cost the technique is ended immediately.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Moonlight on the Pine Trees [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Shogetsu ] | Rank S | Simple
The user delivers a powerful and swift strike that gains a supreme increase to speed upon delivery. The user strikes the target's chest, seeming to do no damage upon impact. The user's next post, the target's ribs and bones shatter from the impact as they suffer tier two paralysis over their entire body, internal hemorrhaging causing need for medical treatment within two posts or the target suffers comatose hospitalization. If the user applied the Guiding Principle to this technique, the target does not suffer those wounds as normal. Upon the second post, the target's body burst into flames with the fats within their body as fuel for the flames, causing their body to remain ablaze for an additional post. Alternatively, this technique can be used to destroy a barrier technique or defensive technique. Upon impact the barrier is destroyed if the technique is superior in rank and power to the barrier. Following the destruction of the barrier a concussive blast of force is released that blows away any target within one hundred feet. Should the Guiding Principle be applied to this variant, the concussive blast is set ablaze, applying the training's ability to the wind.

▰ Fire Mountain Orchid Style: Chrysanthemum Cherry [ Kazan Ran Ryu: Kikuzakura ] | Rank S+ | Simple
The user vanishes from sight, consuming a body flicker use as they strike a target from behind with a single strike.If unevaded, the remainder of the user's one hundred strikes will continue successfully. The user begins a flurry of accurate strikes aimed at the target's tenketsu that each carry a concussive blast that is capable of knocking the target back five feet. When combined together, the target in the center is made into a human rag-doll as they are violently blown between strike after strike as the user appears on the opposite side of the target each time to deliver the next blow. The ninety eight blow throws the target fifty feet into the air, allowing the user to appear above them, delivering another blow back into the earth. The final blow drives the target deep into the earth, creating a twenty five foot crater on impact.

 

[Mattysandwich]

First few are just re-submissions to have everything updated. The last few are new customs.
▰ Character: Selina
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Awakened Resolve | Rank S | Bloodline [ Keystone ]| Spiritual
Selina manifest the resolution within her soul, which in return summons a spirit which assist her. This spirit is eight feet tall and is ethereal to attacks. It has two activations, one offensive one defensive, drains chakra and stamina from Selina, utilizes the jutsu which Selina knows, and can be any where in the same topic as Selina. Cannot leave the topic Selina is in, and if Selina leaves the topic then the spirit fades away. The activation can korabo any jutsu with Selina at one rank lower than Selina while retaining its ethereal form. The attack will appear from Selina in this case. However, the attack may come from the spirit instead. In situations where the spirit launches an attack or uses a defensive action, the spirit is rendered vulnerable to harm for one post. The spirit can take an attack up to A-ranked before it vanishes into blue flames. When koraboing techniques, Selina and the clone do not both need to be performing the handseals for the technique, although one activation is taken from both of them. Finally, with the spirit awakened, Selina can turn any of her hanaton jutsu into katon when korabo'ing jutsu. Technique last for eight post before the spirit disburse in blue flames.

▰ Promises | Rank A | Bloodline | Spiritual
Selina uses a bond set up through the Miyamoto clan to temporarily make someone of the Chiru clan. This does not allow the bonded one to use Hanaton techniques, so much as it allows Selina to use Hanaton techniques onto them as though they were herself. This technique cost Selina two activations, and the cost of the hanaton techniques she uses is added into the cost of this technique. Last for six post and is only effective within the same topic.

▰ Flower bonds | Rank X | Bloodline| Spiritual
Selina's body will expel a five foot wide stream of petals which are directed by her two hands, reaching ten feet per rank of the technique. Through somatic movements the petals will latch themselves to a target, and stick onto the surface with Chakra. Selina is able to continue to manipulate these flower petals while stuck to an object, allowing the objects to be freely moved if their body rank is lower than the cost and potency of this technique. Through the use of The Awakened Resolve, anything latched onto by this technique can also spontaneously combust. Technique last for three post if uninterrupted.

▰ Magic Missile | Rank X | Bloodline | Spiritual
Selina generates a pink flower in her hand. She then launches it ten feet per rank of the technique at the desired target. The flower explodes into a plethora of petals on contact, creating more petals that cover a five foot area per rank of the technique while delivering an explosive knock back up to ten feet per rank applied.

▰ Wall of Petals | Rank X | Bloodline | Spiritual
Selina manifest flower petals rapidly in front of her. This creates a dense wall which can absorb the impacts of attacks equal rank and below. The size of the petal walls is equal to ten feet per rank applied.

▰ Reflect | Rank S+ | Bloodline [ Sage ] | Spiritual |
Selina expands her hands outward, creating a spherical barrier of light chakra that is infused with her nature chakra. This barrier protects Selina from techniques of it's own rank and potency and below without breaking. In addition, the physical impact of any object against the outside of this barrier will create an explosive wave of nature chakra melded with lightning and fire chakra. This explosive wave of chakra throws all targets within range back two hundred feet and inflicts tier four burns as they are ragdolled away. In addition, the chakra wave carries the light release's brightness, causing tier four blindness to those who see it. This explosive release ends the barrier's protective sphere.

▰ Flare | Rank S+ | Bloodline | Spiritual
Selina generates light chakra in her hand or the tip of her weapon, creating a twenty foot wide stream of flames that follows the path of the strike and stretches two hundred feet in range. Those who witness the flare suffer tier four blindness and those directly impacted by it are afflicted with tier four burning.

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[lunecarree]

▰ Character: Mirai
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▰ Reflections Of Self [ Jiko no hansha ] | Rank X | Bloodline [ Glass ] | Cost [ Chakra ]
While a glass clone is active and Mirai is capable of performing this jutsu, she may "reflect" her conciousness on one of the clones. This turns the previously mentioned clone into the "new Mirai" with all her previous experiences right up until that very moment, while the old body dies. The cost of this technique is always equivalent to her body rank and may not be reduced by any means.

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▰ Character: Mirai
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▰ Inner Demons [ Uchigawa no akuma ] | Rank C | Bloodline [ Glass ] | Cost [ Chakra ]
An alteration of the glass clone jutsu, this technique upgrades the glass clone to now be C rank in strength and capable of using glass bloodline jutsu it's rank and below by drawing on the user's chakra pool. This effect includes custom glass jutsu with the exception of Reflections Of Self as clones are not the real Mirai.

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▰ Character: Seishirō Hitori
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▰ Cat Transformation [Nekomimi Henge no Jutsu ] | Rank E | Ninjutsu [ Maruton ]| Spiritual
This very simple transformation functions systemically exactly like a normal Henge. However it does allow her to turn herself into a physical cat. This cat is the same size as a standard house cat, and she cannot perform any jutsu of any kind while in cat form. However should she like, she can speak like a normal human during this form. This technique has an E ranked upkeep cost every five posts.

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Mattysandwich

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WICKEDCOOKIE

Denied. This technique is essentially a shadow clone technique with a permanent feature. Another member has a permanent level clone and the amount of restrictions on it trumps this by far. You'd be better finding another thing than resubmitting this with more restrictions. If you were to attempt it, I will require the body be breakable by techniques of the body rank of the user upon creation of that body. Overall it would be way too easy to defeat. Not worth it. Second technique denied as it plays off the first.

Azeiel The Risen

Approved