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 Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 10:42 am
Sabin Duvert:3, 2, 4 (I am inelligible for soquili prize)
I answered the three prompts in order, but forming one "narrative" smile
Prompt: #1
Such life undersea!
Brilliant colors daze, amaze!
But beneath, darkness.
Prompt: #2
Martyrs save us all
Why did it have to be you?
Next time, take me too.
Prompt: #3
Its home yawns 'fore me
I have not come to turn back
Its maw yawns for me
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 12:01 pm
Ryghann snip dazzling lights here deep inside the cave origin unknown Just letting you know the last stanza is 5-5-5 rather than 5-7-5!
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 12:17 pm
Valkymie Ryghann snip dazzling lights here deep inside the cave origin unknown Just letting you know the last stanza is 5-5-5 rather than 5-7-5! thank you, fixed!!!! <3
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 7:49 pm
dawns_aura: 3,4,2
Prompt: 1
Jewel of the sea
Margaliti the wond'rous
My beloved home
Creeping shadows fall
Twisted turning foul, dark heart
Corruption unchecked
Tears for innocence
Upon twisted altar bled
Life for peace unbroke
Ev'ry ten years we
Choose our best, brightest hope
Sacrifice in vain
Tears I weep, my home
Jewel bright, tarnished by blood
Unending cruel life
Prompt: 2
Bright and Shining star
Hope that this time it's enough
Brave face as you left
My friend, my brother
Do not let this be your end
Sacrifice in vain
Rest in peace, my friend
Vengeance shall be had, blood spilt
In your Memory
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2017 10:01 pm
Wasteland Wyvern: 3, 4, 2, 1
Prompt: 1
In the deepest depths,
Far below in the abyss,
Here I've always lived,
Where voices ring out,
Where beauty is paramount,
Where blessed ones swim,
As nice as it seems,
A lurid secret it holds,
Ten years, payment due,
'The Deep' sounds its call,
A life for your blessed peace,
Then blood stains water,
Each time I watch this,
My heart bleeds for innocence,
Lost with the tides ebb,
I don't understand,
Why victims go willingly,
Honor? How foolish,
Dismay, disgust, fools,
I'll not give my life to you,
Not for peaceful lies
Goodbye and good luck,
I'll remember some fondly,
Though most not at all,
I'll swim far away,
Never will I return here,
I do wish you luck,
You will need it now,
Much more than ever before,
As 'The Deep' wakens.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 12:33 am
Mia Lovasz: 1 4 3 2
Prompt: #(s) 1
Softly it begins
As fluffy clouds fill the skies
Padding sandy shores
Gently trickling down
Forming a misty haven
Nourishing the earth
Echoes of thunder
Rumble across the distance
Wind blowing through trees
Flashes of lightning
Streaking the heavens above
Fierce winds, stormy skies
Waves crash on the shore
Ocean breeze upon my face
It calls to my soul
Restless and carefree
As wild as the deep blue sea
My heart belongs here
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 1:29 am
Voiding Re-posting poem with the change AilsingJuno:1,3,4,2
Prompt: #1, #2, #3,
Prompt 1
The seagull crying
The taste of salt on my lips
Sea foam on the beach
The waves crash loudly
The wind whips across the sea
Home is this wild place.
Prompt 2
A sharp shriek a scream
Blood in once tranquil water
My face turns away
Memory tortures
I long for his silent voice
Silence he is dead.
Prompt 3
I'm Lost and alone
The siren song lures me
To deep inky depths.
Mysterious cave
Villagers don't speak your name
A Shroud of secrets
Weary I enter
The Behemoth devours all
I am no longer.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 2:52 am
Dea and #Teddy#: 2, 3, 1, 4
Prompt: 1
Fear in the deep blue,
This place does not feel like home
I must swim away.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 9:45 am
Mewsings of An Angel: 1, 3, 4, 2
Prompt:All
#1
It is safe always.
It is our home forever.
Why would we leave here?
You look so confused.
Have you never had a home?
Nowhere that is yours?
Here is our comfort.
We do not fear the darkness.
For our home is light.
With our offering
We can always be safe here.
For The God protects.
#2
It should have been joy.
But all I felt was sorrow.
My dear friend was gone.
Chosen by the God.
I fear I will be the next.
I will disappear.
Perhaps if I go
I will see my friend oncemore
Together again.
#3
At the mouth of death
Far I had swam to get here
I did not want to.
Curiosity.
It was a dangerous thing.
Should I run away?
Or maybe closer?
Peek into that mouth of death?
None entered would leave.
Few knew what lay there.
Fewer wanted to find out.
Maybe I could see?
Or I would die there.
Strangled by the darkness there.
Never to be seen.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 11:49 am
Moxxiie: 1,2,3,4
Prompt:
#2
Sacrifice was made,
Without fear your life was gave.
I must now be strong.
My heart now shattered,
Our love was all that mattered.
I have to move on.
Too much was the pain,
On the day you had been slain.
My heart cries sad song.
Such a gruesome loss,
It came at such a huge cost.
I won't hurt for long.
Soon I will join you,
In death our love remains true.
You can't say I'm wrong.
My life I will take
My own sacrifice to make.
With you I belong.
#1
Captured in a cage
I yearn for the freedom life
I just want to leave.
To swim wild and free
No one to tell me the rules
Need to get away.
I am a lone wolf
No one to answer to now
Time to be alone.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 3:04 pm
Thrivis: 1, 4, 3, 2
Prompt: #1
Wilderness awaits
Deep water makes colors burn
I must soon follow
Swimming little friends
Where are we going today?
Don’t stray from the reef
Can shrimp be happy
Living in Venus’ basket?
They aren’t flowers...
We all blow bubbles!
So much like your fireworks
Ocean parties ROCK
You can keep heaven
Deep and dark is where it’s at
Rock on in the deep!
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 3:15 pm
Eternal Xantara: Nixi-Seathi, Sumi-e Beni Kumonryu Koi, Orange Koi, Kohaku Koi
Prompt: #2
Contemplating life
Seasons come and seasons go
Cherish what we have
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 3:23 pm
Teh Cheryl: 3, 1, 2, 4
Prompt: 1, 2, 3
Prompt 1
waters in the deep
endless darkness forever
can i ever leave
Prompt 1
feeling trapped at home
always wishing for escape
will you help me run
Prompt 1
home is where the heart
always longs to return to
this is not my home
Prompt 2
hate to say goodbye
as they push you to the deep
better you than me
Prompt 3
darkness calls me near
a rumble in the abyss
do i stay or go
i wander closer
i enter into the depths
this is my goodbye
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 4:37 pm
Wasteland Wyvern Wasteland Wyvern: 3, 4, 2, Re-Roll
Prompt: 1
In the deepest depths,
Far below in the abyss,
Here I've always lived,
Where voices ring out,
Where beauty is paramount,
Where blessed ones swim,
As nice as it seems,
It hides a dark secret, 6 syllables!
Ten years, payment due,
'The Deep' sounds its call,
A life for your blessed peace,
Then blood stains water,
Each time I watch this,
My heart bleeds for innocence,
Lost with the tides ebb,
I don't understand,
Why victims go willingly,
Honor? How foolish,
Dismay, disgust, fools,
I'll not give my life to you,
Not for peaceful lies
Goodbye and good luck,
I'll remember some fondly,
Though most not at all,
I'll swim far away,
Never will I return here,
I do wish you luck,
You will need it now,
Much more than ever before,
As 'The Deep' wakens.
One line in your haiku is a syllable short! :>
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 4:40 pm
AislingJuno AilsingJuno:1,3,4,2Prompt: #1, #2, #3,
Prompt 1
The seagull crying
The taste of salt on my lips
Sea foam on the beach
The waves crash loudly
The wind whips across the sea
Home is this wild place.
Prompt 2
A sharp shriek a scream
Blood in once tranquil water
My face turns away
Memory tortures
I long for his silent voice
Silence he is dead.
Prompt 3
I'm Lost and alone
The siren song lures me
To deep inky depths.
Mysterious cave
Villagers don't speak your name
A Shroud of secrets
Weary I enter
The Behemoth devours all
I am no longer.
You also have one line that's a syllable short :>
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