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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:49 pm
Alice had been staring at her desk, waiting for someone else to go first. After breathing a little sigh of relief at hearing another student introduce himself, she slowly stood up from her front row seat and turned towards the class. She cleared her throat, and adjusted her glasses out of habit. Alice made sure to avoid looking at anyone, so as not to add to her nervousness.
"Um... H-hello. My name is Alice. I took a train to get here and walked the rest of the way...?" She hadn't meant that to be a question but it ended up coming out that way anyways. Her heart began beating harder and she glanced in the teacher's direction as if he could help her somehow.
"As for why I'm here, my parents thought it would be good for me to get out-" she cleared her throat again, "I mean... They thought a change of scenery would be nice."
Alice began to fidget nervously. She straightened out her clothes and shifted her weight from one foot to the other. Then, she took a deep breath and continued, "The puppeteer that is pulling my strings is named Bourgeoisie Alice V, though most people simply call her "Alice" as well. She has been roleplaying for a little over 12 years now on both Gaia's forums and the online game Nexus Tk. She has enrolled in the Academy to work on her weak points and become a better rper."
Embarrassed and all too eager to sit down again, Alice quickly added, "That's all." She gave a short bow, sat back down, and resumed staring at her desk.
Alice had long, black hair that extended down to the middle of her back that she usually kept out of her face with her favorite silver barrettes. Her sapphire-colored eyes were half-hidden from view by glasses that never left her face. She was currently wearing a black, long-sleeved shirt with a black-and-gray plaid sweater vest over it. Her black, pleated skirt went down to just above her knees, and she wore bunched up knee socks with her Mary-Jane shoes.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:30 pm
Sitting in the back row, looking somewhat like a tall monkey made of misfit rocks, came a slight creaking noise, earth moving against earth, as the thing slowly stood. From deep within its chest resonated a low toned voice.
"I om Dekoond, Bassador ohf mae pe-o-ple. I whill shtudy yon wahys."
I am D'cund. Ambassador of my people. I will study your ways."
It paused and its chest raised as a the noise of wind blowing through an empty cavern issued from its mouth. "I wahss made beh Chik-eye-all."
I was made by Jikial.
Suddenly it stopped and a small hand reached up through its mouth, following that hand was the body of a human with dirty blonde hair, glasses, and blue eyes. That human was me.
Is me.
"I am Jikial, I created this guy to get different, who said fantasy had to be all about elves and dwarves eh? eh?" Jikial shifted around as he stood only about a foot-tall on D'cund's hand. It felt awkward. "Sometimes it has just got to be about rock monsters and other crazy things. Though I had no idea he'd speak so slow, I'll probably tweak that."
And with that the foot tall human crawled back inside. D'cund sighed, again the cavern noise, and sat down with a mild thunk. He spoke once again with more haste, "Da Lady who broughd me hea was naut quiet, I cood not speak to ha if I tried. 'Dis good to speak fasta now."
The Lady who brought me here was not quiet. I could not speak to her if I tried. 'Tis good to speak faster now.
D'cund's laughter sounded like two rocks banging together.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:32 pm
Lloyd - or Tombstone - was the next to answer. He was slouched almost impossibly far back in his chair. His sand-colored and mud-spattered duster, which rested over a black double-breasted waistcoat (which strained faintly under his musculature) that in turn covered a white shirt, radiated out from him and across the floor. Emerald green eyes peered out from beneath the wide brim of a brown cowboy hat that rested on his pointed ears. His arms were crossed; hidden by each of his sizable biceps, his fingers - free in their motion within his fingerless gloves - were brushing lightly against the rosewood grips of his pistols. His right foot was using his boot heel to tap out the beat of a song only he could hear. The knife strapped to his thigh outside of his tan pants, Lloyd had bound tight enough for it not to bounce or shuffle and ruin the sound.
"Tombstone," the elf growled. He didn't mean to growl. It was just the sort of thing that happened every time he spoke. "I'm a 'slinger. The fastest guns west of the Hellfire Chasm. Most accurate, too." It wasn't boasting; it was just a fact. It was what one ought to know about him if they were to say they knew him. "I'm from a s**t town in the wasteland. Doesn't matter where. Probably gone. Things come and go like wastelands. People. Towns. Convictions. Tumbleweed. Money. It's just how it goes." His speech was slow and deliberate, a deep rumble from the back of the throat that arrived exactly when it meant to. His face remained as stone-carved as it had been before, the slight motion of his mouth barely noticeable at all. "I've done most of what there is to do. I've done honest work. I've done dirty deeds. I've robbed and defended banks, protected and raided caravans, hunted and been a bounty. I do what it takes to get by, and where I come from that usually ends up being something violent.
"Found my way to your little place through an odd little gateway. Never seen this much green in one place before. It's weird, witnessing a world that hasn't had a crash yet. As for my player... he's one of the faculty. No need to repeat his profile here, I should think."
A moment of silence settled as he stopped speaking, broken only by the steady and rhythmic clicking of his boot heel on the floor, before anyone else spoke again.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:09 am
Levi didn't really feel like speaking right after the.. Whatever he was and the guy with the guns, but no one else seemed to. Actually, he didn’t feel like speaking in front of a class at all. With a sigh, he raised himself from his chair and walked to the front of the class, even though the last two hadn't bothered. His black hair was a disaster at the moment, mostly due travelling and lack of any hair care product. He had grown it semi-long; barely above the shoulders, to piss of his dad. It was almost worth continuously having to shove his hair out if his blue/grey eyes. He was close to six foot tall, but didn’t look like it as he walked to the front, his hands in the pockets of his hoodie, shoulders slumped. His clothes were slightly ragged, a few rips in his jeans and a hole in the side of his hoodie. He had wanted to change for his first class, but didn’t bring many clothes when he ran from his house.
"I'm Levi Jemison. I rather not discuss the specifics of where I come from, but lets just say I am not going back there.." He said with a slight scowl on his face. "The reason why I came is because I got an invitation. It seemed like a waste not to use it. Simple as that. I intend to get a diploma here”, Levi ended. He spoke rather curtly, as he wasn’t used to being around a group of this size and it made him anxious.
"My player", he started, glancing up to where his player loomed over him "is called Keynir. He hasn't done a lot of roleplaying, but says he enjoys it nonetheless. Honestly, the guy has the attention span of a potato on LSD. I think he's really jazzed about this though, so he'll probably keep me here with you guys. His mind is pretty much everywhere, so he tries to maintain some structure by making lists, which also feeds the minor OCD he claims to have. The OCD thing is kind of a pain, too. The guy keeps editing what I say and fidgeting with how I look. It’s getting really annoying."
With that, Levi gave one last look up to his player, who approved with a nod, before he went back to his seat on the far right of the class again.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:16 pm
"Alrighty then, no colors. Gotcha." He looked up to the sky as if he were hearing a voice. "That guy up there is StealthNeko, and I guess the name really speaks for itself. Not many people know his real name, and vanishes a lot, so forgive him for that. He also says to excuse him for not giving me a form other than a shadow." Fang suddenly came into focus. He was an odd neko, with red eyes scattered with flecks of gold. His eyes were more cat-like than human-like so it was rather hard to see the flecks. His blonde hair flowed down to his shoulders, with his auburn ears sticking up like little hills in the desert. His clothing was simple enough: A common day black dress shirt with some dark blue jeans. The only thing out of place was a cape attached to a collar around his neck, which was also black except for the golden trim. He stood at about a quarter of an inch shorter than 5'11". His skin was lightly tanned, with small scars on his arms.
"Alright, that's good, thanks, Stealth!" He looked at the teacher and his other students.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:14 pm
From the back of the class walked a man, about 5' 8", but seeming taller compared to his slouching classmates. This man, well he was erect, he wore a simple white t-shirt which molded to the shape of well-formed pecks, a flat stomach. With this t-shirt he wore a pair of nice black jeans, and a pair of running shows: Asics, his favorite brand. As he walked his medium-length hair pushed back from the wind, for he walked with a purpose. He stopped, did an about face and spoke:
"Hello ladies, gentlemen, or whatever you prefer to call yourselves, I am Garret Thorngage. I come from this wonderful little rock right outside of campus, but it wasn't just a rock, it was a rock lobster- No I'm kidding. Well it really doesn't matter where I'm from, and I know you won't remember anyways, so I'm not going to bother you with such mundane details; I'm here to brief you on who I am and that's just what I'll do. In high school I took part in JROTC, Debate, Theater, and whatever else I could get my hands on. I was very successful, got many college acceptance letters, including from several academies, and decided to go here." He spoke with an air of confidence that he produced, the same one he would use on-stage, in a debate, or during a drill competition.
"Oh and the guy who is playing with my joystick and whatnot is CurruptedDart, he's tall, good-looking, and interested in you! Oh wait, that's just what it says on match.com. Well to say the least, he's RPed quite a bit, he's pretty smart, and likes to maintain a humorous atmostphere." For the introduction of his controller he flipped to an English accent which was flawless. After this he walked just as swift and erect back to his seat and he had left from it before.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:16 pm
Dark brown curls twisted from the top of her head. As the others spoke her tongue was propped outside of her lip. Instead of looking up to see her fellow students she had a pencil in hand and was drawing into her desk. When the silence settled Basira looked up. “Guess I’m up next.” Basira grinned as she stood. She was boisterous for her small five foot two. “I’m Basira.” With a grin she spun a scale-bar in the middle of her palm. “I’m from a big city, big name place! And it was so borin’. I just had to get out. A real s**t show. So I took some advice and got out. Well, I like to draw. A lot. Not pretty pictures, sometimes, but I like, I like buildings more. Not sky scrapers more like, uh movie sets. Those are nice but even more theatre sets. They’re real nice. I came here cause it seemed like some people here could get that…or at least leave me alone long enough to do that.” As she spoke the speed that she twirled the scale bar increased and soon it twirled right out of her hands and onto the floor. “And uh, well here I am…It’s got a roof, and that’s nice.” Basira continued to speak as she dropped to the floor to pick up her scale bar. Once in hand she pointed to the ceiling. “And that’s Tse!”
When she received no response Basira looked up to an empty space. “Well, Tse should be there. Well, Setses, but she prefers Tse." Occupied with other things Basira received only a thumbs-up before disappearing again. " Everyone calls her Set, but that’s a real bummer. Cause she’s no evil brother-killin god. But uh…” Basira twirled around to peer a bit higher. “I still don’t see ‘er! Well, she’s roleplayed for some time I guess but had a time span of not doin’ much because every roleplay she touched died. So I’ve been told..weird.” Basira settled back into her seat and looked down at her desk.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:07 am
Mayura looked around for a moment, it seemed it was her turn, she took a deep breath to calm herself and stood up, she stood around 5'6" or 5'7", long black hair that reached her waist, a pair of headphones around her neck, a red shirt, black and white skirt, and a black jacket on top. "Hello my name is Mayura, and as you can see my player...not so good describing things, anyway.. I got an invitation as you guys and thought it would be a good idea to see what I can learn and who I could meet" she said with a rather shy smile, still feeling quite nervous. "My player enjoys role plays very much, but not that good at it, besides she is ESL so she get some trouble with words". She stood there for a moment and sighed walking back to her seat "that's pretty much it.."
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:44 am
"Alright then, nice first round. Let's not be bolding dialog though, that upsets the sitting Dean," Mr. Vay pointed to a poster on the wall by the door which listed the Academy rules, one of which was not to bold dialog. He moved on quickly though, dropping his hand with a smile. "The two of you not finished can jump in when you get to it, hopefully soon," the teacher gave an expectant look to the pair of unintroduced students but he didn't dwell on that either. Before long the subtle glare was gone and his deep green eyes were on the rest of the class again with another friendly smile. "So, we're going to give them another day to get their intros posted but that doesn't mean y'all just get to sit around and look pretty," he pointed the last playfully at the female students in the front row with a coy little wink. It may have been creepy if he looked like the stereotypical professor but he'd already passed for a student and, honestly, looked younger than a few in the class. His clean shave and boyishly short, cowlicked haircut was partly to blame for that. Wearing the same, basic t-shirt and jeans combo as most of the class also didn't help; neither did being shorter than most of the males there. Possibly aware of this, but mostly out of habit, Vay stood with his back straight to get as much height as he could while he addressed the class. "In the mean time I want all of you to work on the next assignment. We'll turn them in starting tomorrow morning and hopefully everyone will have their introductions by the time we finish," Vay gave a glance to the unintroduced again as he walked around his desk with a slow stride and pulled the chocolate, corduroy blazer with tan leather elbow patches (proper professor attire) off the back of the chair behind it. "My wife didn't dress me today," the teacher grinned, making light of his clothes as he pulled on the blazer then continued walking around the desk to resume his perch on its front edge. There Mr. Vay watched the students somewhat expectantly a moment then looked back at the chalk board and laughed with a shake of his head. "I should probably tell you what the assignment is, eh?" he glanced briefly at the class before pushing himself off the desk again and walking to the board. "This one's a three parter but don't get all intimidated by it. Just an exercise," he spoke into the chalk board as he scrawled onto it: 1) List the characteristics (physical, personality, and background) of the student introduced before you. 2) Choose, in your opinion, the best introduction so far. 3) Explain why that is the best one. After dotting the last item with a bit of a flourish Mr. Vay turned back to the class and stepped aside so they could read it. "First," he pointed at the first one, "Read over what the student directly before you posted. Fang, you get to do me since you went first. Make sure to read all of what they wrote, in case there's more than one post. Also, you should all be reading everything anyway," he said the last sentence in a bit of a mumble then flashed another friendly smile. "Then just list out whatever characteristics were mentioned or implied by the post. If you want to be extra fancy you can mark what was explicit (actually said) and what was implied (hinted at)." He paused to look over the class and see if they all got it. "If I ever lose you in the instructions just shoot me a PM and I'll explain," he gave them an apologetic look before going on. "Secondly," he pointed to number two, "Read all the students' introductions and pick which one most effectively conveys a well-developed character. This is a judgement exercise so you're going to have think (and then think even more on the last part where you have to analyze that judgement) but there is no wrong answer so don't freak out about it. Just be sure you can support your judgement in your analysis. Speaking of which, that's number three," he pointed to the last instruction. "Here you have to tell me why you picked that intro as the best. Again, no wrong answer so long as you can support it with analysis," he paused briefly, "And don't choose your own. Even if you really think it's the best we don't need to hear it from you." Finished with instructions for the day, Mr. Vay folded his arms over his chest and leaned back against the black board to watch the students with a pleasant expression. Roll Call:Bourgeoisie Alice V Alice Valentine: a girl with a few mental disorders trying to find someone to understand her and not call her "crazy". Currupted Dart Garret Thorngage: a boy with low self-esteem and what little confidence he has was earned through hard work and success. DragnGuy7 Alex Rider: a down on his luck slacker pushed into enrolling by his nagging parents. Jikial D'cund Vospa: a brutish male rock hominid hailing from parts unknown. Keynir Levi Jemison: a home-schooled and neglected boy determined to make something of himself. Kobochi Mayura: an easy-going girl with the hopes of making friends and having some fun and adventure in her otherwise boring life. Lily564a Rodney Amhent: a once basketball star, now he's the science fair. Setses Basira Itzli: a sometimes meticulous, sometimes lackadaisical girl that does not do well under pressure. StealthNeko Fang Caligon: an adventurer, looking for a place to belong. Venom3001 Lloyd "Tombstone" Sanetha: an elf gunslinger from a postapocalyptic Wild West.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:49 pm
"Well, Mr. Jemison came before me, explicitly he is described as having messy semi-long black hair that is not well maintained, having blue-grey eyes, six foot tall, wearing a hoodie, bad-postured, and raggedly clothed. He is implied to be a traveler, a bit of an outcast, disinterested, and possibly moody. I would go so far to say that he left in the middle of the night without notifying his parents of him coming here seeing as his relationship with his father isn't the best." Garret stopped to take a breath and continued to speak on the second question.
"I select Tombstone over there as the best introduction because he really captured the whole essence of his character and created a clear picture in the head of the reader without using a cliche-type character." Garret finished the assignment with a fair bit of ease. This is a fairly good exercise to show the necessity for attention to detail. He thought to himself, being an ex-cadet he preached one of the most important things in drill was "attention to detail" so this message really rung true with him.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:42 pm
"Jumped the gun a bit there, Garret. Is ok though, just need to work more on that following directions thing. And patience. Weren't supposed to turn these in till morning," Mr. Vay flashed the boy a smile then shook his head and waved it off. "How bout you give me a bit more analysis on your choice now as yer so eager. Seein' as that's really just the definition of a good intro, not the how an' why of it. I want to know, specifically, what he did to achieve this clear picture and non-cliche character."
Then the teacher turned to the rest of the class, "Might as well the rest of you go ahead and start posting too since we already got it started."
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 9:25 pm
Tombstone nodded. "Old rock-solid, there, is the one who came before me: D'cund Vospa. A rock person. Here to 'study our ways,' as he said." Tombstone shrugged. "Origin missing. Personality in development, it seems. Body of rocks, voice like grinding stone." He shrugged. "Probably is grinding stone," he added.
"My vote goes to the Alices," the elf continued, still slouching, arms still crossed. "The description of actions. The dialogue, particularly the pausing, stammering, and unintentional question. The body language, especially - the actions of nervousness rather than just saying, 'Oh, yes, have we mentioned she's nervous, because she is, nervous that is,' as sometimes happens." His face cracked into a slight smile. "Even Alex - or Venom, if you prefer - falls into that sort of thing from time to time, and he likes to think he's good at these things." He nodded, the concluded: "And it's all wrapped in a package of good technical work on the grammar and spelling. Not necessarily an incredibly exciting character... at least not yet... but what we have is excellently communicated."
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:16 pm
D'cund stood back up beside his desk and opened his mouth. He breathed for a moment before realising he got up to speak.
"Ma knowlitch es limited in dis mannah. Dis why I ahm 'er afta oll." He looked at the girl who spoke before him and pointed an open hand at her down his long arm. "Dis woman 'er ehs Ahlice. Sha female, ond nahvous, too nahvous ta say mora. Sha ehs wearin' dahk clothes. Ahlice ehs likely rehclusive. Ha clothes, demeana, ind speech slep say so.” He breathed. “I can na say much mohr for ‘er.”
My knowledge is limited in the manner. This is why I am here after all. This woman here is Alice. She's female, and nervous, too nervous to say more. She is wearing dark clothes. Alice is likely reclusive. Her clothes, demeanor, and speech slip say so. I cannot say much more for her.
What passed for his brow furrowed and he raised his previously pointing hand to his chin and closed his mouth to frown. He bore a striking resemblance to a certain famous statue in doing so; if the statue was made out of barely refined materials.
“I val-oo de-a-log, so I lek da cha-ahk-ta Basera. In ha bit sha ekspressed ha pasohnalty well bi speech aloon. Ha qwik-tak and ha qwik chang ehn suubjehcts behlie ha ahs eider eh qwik tinker or eh scahtta-braynt pearson. Eider weh it ehs foon.” He lowered his hand and lifted his brow. D’cund’s eyes closed as he bowed. “Tahnkoo.”
I value dialog, so I like the character Basira. In her bit she expressed he personality well by speech alone. Her quick-talk and her quick changes in subjects belie her as either a quick-thinker or a scatter-brained person. Either way it was fun.
Thank you.
With all the silence of a distant avalanche, D’cund sat back down.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:22 am
Mayura got up and began her post, "Ok so number one, her hair is dark brown and curly, she is 5'2" tall, she comes from a big city and was bored, as for personality she seems to be a rather hyper girl that loves to draw theater sets. Number two, I liked tombstone's description, as for why, he captured my attention with his description, how he described his character, like he knows exactly who he is." With this she took a deep breath hoping that was what the teacher asked for.
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