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Masshiro


King Bunny

PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:49 pm


Kashiyoru's personality has had a 1000% overhaul! Crits would be loved. ;w;

I'd also love the following~
-Badge design suggestions
-Crits on minipets
-ART <3 (will pay for.)
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 11:27 pm


I would crit more if I wasn't so sleepy but I have to add my little bit.
If I remember correctly, kitsunes and what not's power is based on the number of tails they have, right ?
Well Tomoko is already an existing character here, and she has 3 tails, and is pretty remarkable at that. Eight tails would be way too powerful in my opinion, and I've seen another kitsune quest crit'd this same thing (i believe it was frezir's nogikitsune, for reference)

perhaps lower the number of tails to 1-3 ?

I'll crit him more in depth if you'd like later, but I just wanted to say that quickly before sneaking off to bed

chiickadee

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Masshiro


King Bunny

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:49 am


It's stated on his profile that he is an eight-tailed fox spirit who is -loosely- based on the kitsune. I'm pretty sure I mentioned before that he doesn't have the ability to grow more tails. The number of tails he has was determined by how many times his tails split before he reached puberty. I'll re-check his info to be sure it's in there.

Edit: I must of said it in thread at some point... Hmm. Anyway!~ It's in there now. -^^-
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:38 pm


Mmm. Bump. ~<3


Masshiro


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:24 pm


First off, I really like Kashi~ He seems like a fun character and overall looks pretty awesome 8D

Typo here: "He compensates by flirting with nearly everyone meets." should be "everyone he meets"

One thing that's a little weird XD If he's spent the last ten years as a ghost, how is he still that "new" to it? I know that animals wouldn't normally live as long as humans etc and he may have technically been younger as a fox when he died, but it could still work to have him be very very new to Halloween-world if you did something like converting "fox years" to human years. Sorta like "dog years" lol

Another reason he might want to attend Amityville could be to make it easier on him to stay in his humanoid form~ Since all students get a pin that basically 'traps' them in that form on the campus. Even though it's not necessarily in his write-up, he strikes me as a bit of a lazy a** XDD

Good luck getting him! Crit back, perhaps? owo <3
PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:36 am


Ten is very new for a ghost. Some ghosts are tens of hundreds of years old! You can't expect him to master it in just ten years. OnO When he died he was ~16-17 in fox years. I imagine Ghost years move -much- slower than any other.

Shh! You're not supposed to know that he's lazy. XD (He'd much rather his prey come to him rather than him having to go to them.)

And I fixed that typo!~
I'll crit back... Thursday. Maybe. I've been trying to get to it, but I work 12am-5am all week. @.@ I'll figure it out, I promise!


Masshiro


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Masshiro


King Bunny

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 10:08 pm


OwO
PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 5:19 pm


OwO


Masshiro


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Masshiro


King Bunny

PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:56 pm


*pushes this up... again*
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