First off, I really like Kashi~ He seems like a fun character and overall looks pretty awesome 8D
Typo here: "He compensates by flirting with nearly everyone meets." should be "everyone he meets"
One thing that's a little weird XD If he's spent the last ten years as a ghost, how is he still that "new" to it? I know that animals wouldn't normally live as long as humans etc and he may have technically been younger as a fox when he died, but it could still work to have him be very very new to Halloween-world if you did something like converting "fox years" to human years. Sorta like "dog years" lol
Another reason he might want to attend Amityville could be to make it easier on him to stay in his humanoid form~ Since all students get a pin that basically 'traps' them in that form on the campus. Even though it's not necessarily in his write-up, he strikes me as a bit of a lazy a** XDD
Good luck getting him!
Crit back, perhaps? owo <3