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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:50 pm
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz: You've expanded on the techniques, so I thank you for that. As for how you can incorporate it, a simple acknowledgment of the slight drain would work, or you could even just add it into the what you know section. Add that and you should be good to go.
Tenchi: Now that you added in the senses, you've covered just about everything for the first stage. Keep in mind that in the second stage, water is even more dangerous to you, and prolong usage can harm your body, similar to the eight gates. APPROVED
Panthers: ^^
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:01 pm
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 4:21 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
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TvIaMsOqTuHeYz: Well now that you added that in, everything seems to be in order. Sooooooo APPROVED! Have fun with it!
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"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 4:28 pm
RPC Name: Heliel Luster Bloodline/Clan Requested: HyoutonWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because I think it would fit my Rpc, and having a Hyouton user in Konoha would help the village's military power. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Well, it's Hyouton, it's a elemental bloodline which grants the user the Ice Release by combining Wind and Water. The Ice formed by this bloodline is extremely durable, being able to withstand most forms of fire, save for the never ending flames of Amaterasu and the Spiritual flames of the Nibi. And they are able to make hand seals with just one hand Please supply a Brief RP Sample: ” And now, fall under the mighty wrath of the Goddess of the Moon, burn infinitely, Amaterasu” Black fire rose from the market area of Konoha, many ninja and civilians scurrying for safety; screams of agony rose from the burning area, many men had been burned and killed by the demonic flames. ” Hel-san, you are our only hope. Not many of our ninja are able-bodied to keep up the fight.” The kage said, missing an arm herself, most likely a result from the flames which were treated before it would expand and take a larger chunk off her. ” Very well Hokage-sama. If I must, I will give my life for this village.” He told her, kneeling in front of her before rapidly getting up and putting his katana on his waist. ” Does no one dare to challenge me?! I single handedly brought the hidden leaf in a blaze of fire, and not one ninja is able stand before me?” he then yelled, and before long a figure stood behind him. ” I’ll gladly take you up on that offer.” Heliel spoke, his hand on his katana. ” Hm, the fury of the Goddess must rest, but only for a brief moment, I suppose I can battle you while my powers return; I can spare a little fun before burning the rest of Konoha into a crisp.” Saying this, the man deactivated his sharingan, but Heliel simply studied him. ” Just…who are you… You seem familiar. Heliel said making a single seal, waiting on the man to answer him. ” I am the prodigal son of the leaf, I am the reason of which this village still stands… I am Itachi Uchiha.” He said, and a light breeze came over at just the right moment, making the man’s hair flow making the scene look very awesome and movie-like. ” Never heard of you!” Heliel yelled as he began to focus his chakra and formed many Ice swallows. ” Tsubame Fubuki” Heliel said as many small birds opened their wings and began to fly toward the Uchiha man. ” Snow Storm Swallows!” Heliel then yelled, seeing the birds Itachi knew what it was, and how to counter it. ” Fire Ball Jutsu” He then commanded, releasing a ball of flames which then darted toward the birds, burning them all. ” Too easy.” Itachi then said, but he felt a sudden rush of cold, cutting at his strange robe. Looking upward he saw that Heliel was in the air, with a seal on his hand and more birds around him. ” You were the savior of the leaf? Ha!” He said, sending the birds toward the man, hoping that they would do the trick. ” Shadow Clone explosion.” The man commanded moving his arm toward Heliel, as he did a clone rushed toward the Swallows, and then exploded, taking the birds down with it. ” Hyourou no Jutsu” Heliel said as he landed, placing his hand on the ground chunks of ice rose from the ground, trying to catch Itachi. ” Shadow Clone Explosion.” He commanded once more, this time sending two clones, the first clashed with the incoming ice, and the second one jumped, using the already created pillars of ice as leverage. The clone landed beside Heliel, knowing that he wouldn’t have time to make a jutsu, he knew he had to craft some sort of defense or offence that would protect him from the clone, so he extended his arms forward, making two triangles of ice shoot toward the clone, destroying it along with the ice. ” Consume this ignorant fool’s flesh; consume his pride and joy, burn, Amaterasu!” Itachi proclaimed activating his Magenkyo Sharingan in a heartbeat and burning down the ice with little problem. ” Looks like you’re no match for me.” The man said in a uncaring tone, pacing slowly out of the black fire, unscaved by it. ” Fire’s back on.” Itachi said with a smirk closing one eye and sending a blast of flame toward Heliel, black flames to be exact. Seeing the fire, Heliel began to make seals and from the ground under him, a large one horned white whale rose from the ground, crashing into the fire, going toward Itachi trying to slam into the man. ” Damn…. You’re good.” Itachi mumbled, bringing his two fingers together he turned himself into a large stack of burning dead bodies, using the substitution jutsu. ” Damn that son of a gun.” Heliel mumbled as he jumped back, landing on another building. ” Come on out!” Hel said spreading his arms upward, allowing his chakra to freely drift around his hands. ” Snow’s Sensor.” He said in a calm tone, sending his charka to the air and quickly making it snow, despite the fact that the fire some of it melt, making blind spots within his barrier he was able to get a clear view of the village, chakra wise. ” There you are.” He said, finding the man, using the Snow’s Sensor jutsu’s ability to increase his sensor abilities, though he couldn’t tell Itachi’s position perfectly, he could tell where the man’s chakra was, and then make it different from the Amaterasu’s aura. ” Haryuu Mouku, Destruction Tiger, Fierce Dragon.” He then commanded, making seals, using the snow around him to create ice and then forming it into a strange looking ice Tiger that floated around the village. Running through some seals, Hel made the same jutsu two more times, making a total of three tigers go toward Itachi. Jumping out a field of debris, Itachi saw the snow and took note of the first tiger, and the other two soon after. ” This was a bad idea..” He mumbled to himself as he jumped toward a ceiling, hoping that the creatures would not follow him, but the tigers brought them up a wall and went toward Itachi, whom ran away from the creatures and they gave chase to him. Following the battle via his snow sensory jutsu, Hel positioned him in a way that Itachi would run through his line of attack, and he then made seals, making a rose bud appear behind him. A few minutes of running past between Itachi and the tigers, and Hel made a single seal and four roots dashed toward Itachi without him noticing, and before long they wrapped the man, and the tiger’s ceased to move, almost guarding the man. Walking out from a ally, Hel smirked and looked at Itachi. ” Got you.” He told them man, but all Itachi could to was smile, which was followed by a psychopathic laugh. ” You think you can kill me? You’re not strong enough… NO! Your hate is not strong enough; if you wish to kill me you must hate me! Hate me like you have never hated anyone before in your life!” Itachi said closing one eye and looking upward. ” What are you talking about?” Hel asked Itachi, making the roots hold tighter on the man, but he still laughed. ” What’s so funny?!” Hel asked and Itachi stopped speaking, the light of the sun suddenly became darker, almost as if the sun would have been blocked out by something. ” That is, you were so busy taking me, you failed to see what I was doing all along.” Itachi said opening his other eye, and Hel looked up, seeing a large mass of Amaterasu floating above the village. ” Now die.” Itachi proclaimed as the mass of flames came down toward the village, but hell knew what he had to do; he made a long string of seals and made a single ice mirror which sucked Itachi, the Amaterasu, and himself within it. ” What is this?” Itachi asked, not being tied anymore, seeing his flames as far as his eyes could allow it. ” This… Is the Samurai’s Dimension, it is that which lies within the Ice Mirrors, a Jutsu of my creation which allows me to take those that I wish to kill, or save, within the mirror and safeguard them there. By taking you here and your flame here I saved the village.” “But you damned yourself, and I’ll just break free.” Hel said, and Itachi added, and Hel collapsed on the ground, on his knees. ” Oh, your wrong, if I die, whatever is within the mirrors at the time of my death stays here, for all eternity, or at least, until the boy succumbs to the temperature.” Hell said falling face first on to the ground, his legs becoming consumed by the amaterasu. ” If anything I am the leaf village’s savior… You are just some scum which wanted to destroy it…” Hel finally added, succumbing to the wounds of the Amaterasu. Custom Jutsu are Here and herePlease note that the Samurai's Dimension is still under work, and may be subject to change.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:03 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
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@Silence: I see you added more to both the info section and the sample. Perfect. APPROVED! Happy rping!
@Akura: Since it's for rp sample I let it slide that you had in a canon charater. Couldn't blame you though, Itachi would be an awesome opponent to face. Just know that we're generations pass them and they will most likely never appear (more of a note to others than you). Anyways...APPROVED! Enjoy!
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"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:35 pm
Woot! Thank you very much. ^.^
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:05 am
RPC Name:Mifune Uchiha Bloodline/Clan Requested: Uchiha -SharinganWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan:I want this bloodline because it gives options to the user. It allows me to adapt my character to the situation at hand. All in all they are a very versatile clan when used right. Also at higher levels due to the precognitive abilities of the sharingan it allowed the user to fight defensively and still win by tiring out an enemy and that is the way I prefer to fight. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The bloodline allows the user to copy techniques to almost complete precision. The Sharingan also allow one to increase their awareness as well but they may not be able to react fast enough to fast moving opponents. This dojutsu also has the ability to see the chakra system but not as clear cut as the byakugan. The Sharingan has three stages in it's basic form. The one tomoe is the first of all basic forms and is gained when one loses a loved one and is devastated greatly by it or through great personal strife. The second tomoe is gained through training over time. At this stage the user is now able to so see the chakra outline and has a bit more awareness. The third is gained through a life or death situation. At the three tomoe stage one is more aware than the first and his able to copy jutsu with ease. They can see the chakra outline the same however. The advance level of the three tomoe is the Mangekyou Sharingan. This Sharingan can only be gained by killed a best friend or someone you hold dear to you.(in this guild however you have different rules that I greatly prefer.) The Mangekyou Sharingan's form is different between everyone in it's shape and form. This allows the use powerful of techniques, such has Ameratsu, Tsukiyomi and Sussano. But there is a consequence to these techniques as the user's eyesight begin to deteriorate under the circumstances. It continues to decrease after each use until the user goes blind. To keep this from happening, one must obtain another Mangekyou users eyes to make an eternal mangekyou sharingan. The Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan has been said to have the ability to control Bijuu. It has all of the abilities of the Mangekyou users form plus the ones he took from the other person. This eye never goes blind and the eye changes form to combine the two Mangekyous. This eye is considered an achievement in the shinobi world. You guys' system is slightly different however and has up to a maximum of six tomoe seals which is ......... interesting. THey can only be gained in a life or death situation with a person's RPC and not an NPC. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Mifune stood in a sparring match against one of his comrades. It was normal training exercise like any other day, but Mifune was being serious like always. He stretched his limbs to try and calm his beating heart and emotions. He always got rowdy inside before a fight it would seem, as he figured it was just his excitement. Looking at his opponent he nodded to him. "Ready when you are brother." He said waiting for his friend to get ready. He closed his eyes for a second before opening them. As he slowly opened his eyes they were different. Normally they were a bright green, but now they were a dark blood red crimson. Each of his eyes contained a set of two tomoe seals each. He had come quite a way since he had first gained access to his sharingan. He used to only be able to barely see through minor genjutsu and could only glimpse the next moves of his enemies but now he had gotten pretty good at reading his enemies moves and adjusting accordingly. He had also gained the ability to see the chakra around a person even its colors and distinguish different peoples' chakra signatures. His opponent was an old friend of his, one who shared a fire affinity but was not of the Uchiha bloodline. In any such case, Mifune still considered him his brother in arms and in peace. Mifune's Opponent nodded for the single to go and took off with the first move. Firing off the bat with a few hand signs he announced his first jutsu. "Housenka no Jutsu (Mythical Fire Flower Technique) " He said while shooting 3 small fireballs at Mifune. He stood stationary to see what Mifune would do. This was only the first move of the battle and this would probably be drawn out between a Bloodline jutsu and Ninjutsu. Mifune saw the fire coming at him and did a few handsigns at about the same speed. "Katon: Kyuuka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame Sphere Technique)" He said while blowing fire out of his mouth to protect him from the flames. He did not stop their however, he reached behind him to take out the two windmill shuriken he always carried with him. With the attached strings on them, he threw the large Shuriken at his opponent. The large Shuriken flew around the sphere of fire and was headed straight for his opponent. He had hoped that his friend would be able to dodge it. He now attempted the Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi [ Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade ]. The opponent saw what Mifune had done and he thought it was pretty clever. He did not have time to admire it however as the battle has just opened with Mifune's attack. He jumped out of the way thinking he was safe. He kept moving however and did his next set of handsigns. "Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)" He announced as he blew and hurled a large fireball at Mifune. Now he had hoped Mifune had an answer for this. Mifune continued to manipulate the Shuriken, even though his friend had dodged it, he seemed to think they kept going in the same direction. His heart beat was rising. However, he saw his friends next move and use his Sharingan to predict the next movement. Moving left early to avoid the the fireball he manipulated the strings to catch him off guard. The fire however caught one of the Shuriken and sent it flying past his friend. He kept the last one under his control the best he could and aimed for the legs with the string. Mifune's opponent didn't see it coming at first but the Windmill Shuriken had caught him off guard. It was then that he realized he was to late. Feeling a string wrap around one of his legs, he tried jumping but it was no use. He went into the air only to be pulled back down. Now the battle was almost over if Mifune choose to finish it. Mifune smirked that his friend had forgotten about his technique. He did the handsigns for the Ryuuka no Jutsu [ Dragon Fire Technique ] and stopped. "The match is over." He said speaking knowing that his friend had no way of escaping. The fire would just travel down the string. He deactivated his Sharingan and walked over to help his friend up. "Good match" He said shaking his hand with a smile. Jutsu's used. Housenka no Jutsu (Mythical Fire Flower Technique) Katon: Kyuuka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame Sphere Technique) Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi [ Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade ] Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique) Ryuuka no Jutsu [ Dragon Fire Technique ]
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:39 pm
RPC Name: Matsuya Komihachi Bloodline/Clan Requested: Supekutoru Annaiyaku (Spectral Hosts) Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because it interests me to see how I can work having a spirit companion into a roleplay. That and it seems like a pretty sound choice. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Honestly, what I've read. But I'll give it a go: So the clan/bloodline hasn't been in the shinobi world for long. The clan members have the ability to commune with and touch ghosts as if they were still alive. They also get more chakra since the ghost lends the members theirs. And to top it off, the clan is nearly immune to Raiton and Katon. They have the power to summon their ghost, and at later levels use the ghost's energy to summon weapons, shields, and use blasts of aura. Oh, and they can send their spirit to heaven or hell and gain additional powers from doing so. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Matsuya was doing what he did every time he got the chance, napping. This time it was behind the ramen shop he was supposed to be cleaning up for the mission he'd been assigned. Just as his dream was getting good, he felt a jolt go through his body as something hit him outside his dream. He slowely opened his eyes and looked around as his eyes focused. "What? I'll finish cleaning. Settle dowm, old man." Then he got hit again. "I'm not old Mat-san! And I'm not a man!" Matsuya sighed as he recognized the voice. "What is it now, Asame-chan? Did something important happen, or do you just enjoy waking me up from my dreams?" As Matsuya's eyes focused he finally saw the girl hovering next to him. She was still the same as the day he'd been binded to her, beautiful and full of attitude. "Both! I just heard a women scream from somewhere nearby." Matsuya stood up slowely and stretched his shoulders. "Maybe she tripped and broke a nail. You women scream because of bugs, who knows what it was." Asame hit Matsuya again. This time harder to make a point. "It wasn't that kind of scream! I'm a girl, I should know! She sounded genuinely scared!" Matsuya slowely started to walk out of the alley and into the main street, Asame being dragged along by his waist where her "tail" connected to him. "Fine, Asame-chan, let's go look will that make you happy?" Matsuya walked down the street, looking down every alley as he went. "Nothing. See? I told you it was a bug." Asame kept wrapping herself around him at odd angles to look down the streets. "No, it wasn't a bug! She sounded terrified. Keep looking!" Matsuya sighed and kept walking. Two blocks down he felt it, overwhelming sadness. That was his sign that they were close. Two allies down they found what they were looking for, a crying woman pinned against a wall by a large man. "I'm tired of waiting for you to come to me on your own, Nana-chan. I guess I'll have to do things my way." Matsuya whistled to draw the man's attention. "Don't think that's going to happen, buddy. You see, I don't take kindly to this kind of thing around here." The man looked at Matsuya and chuckled. "Yeah? What the hell are you going to do ya' little punk, stop me? She's mine anyway, just don't know it yet." The woman tried to wriggle out of the man's grasp, only to fail when he hit her again. His hand had her pinned between him and the wall, not a good angle for a jutsu. Matsuya sighed and looked at Amane. "What do you say? Show him what we can do? I did all that training after all." Amane smirked and nodded. "Yeah, lets show him." Then in unison they both said, "Bakemon Kodachi (Phantom Shortsword)!" Amane waved her hand and conjured a veil of spectral energy around Matsuya's closed hand. As the energy condensed a short sword, around the size of a tanto, appeared in his hand. "You ready, big guy?" The man looked up from the whimpering woman again to see what Matsuya had done. "What, you still there?" Matsuya nodded and rushed at the man, ready to drive the tanto through his arm. He wasn't aiming to kill, but if the opportunity dictated it he'd have to. The man tried to dodge but it was too late. Matsuya had dug and torn the tanto into and out of the man's bicep, crippling his left arm. The man staggered back, gripping his arm. "You f&@*ing brat! I'm bleeding like a stuck pig." Amane shot out form Matsuya's back and pointed angrily at the man. "That's what you are, a pig! You should die like one!" Matsuya's eyes narrowed and he shoved Amane's head and torso down with one hand. "Quiet, Amane-chan. He's still going to fight. So I think it's time we show him our ace." Amane clung to her head where Matsuya was holding her hair. Even as a specter she was in pain from that. "Ow ow ow ow! Mat-san let go! I want to hurt him as much as you do." Matsuya let go and let her drift back up to his side. He also let the tanto disperse back into spectral energy "Fine, then how about it, big guy? You callin' it quits? Or am I going to have to send you to the hospital?" The man was still holding his bleeding arm when he looked up. "Screw you, brat! I'm going to crush you until you can feel every bone in your body being broken!" The man ran at him, limp arm at his side, his other raised with a knife in it. Matsuya smirked and raised a fist in the air. "So be it. Amane?" Amane nodded and mocked Matsuya for theatrics. They both yelled in unison again. "Ekutopurazumu Boruto (Ectoplasm Bolt)!" Spectral energy condensed onto Matsuya's raised fist, forming a jelly-like substance on his knuckles. Then, as suddenly as the jelly apeared, a beam of concentraited spectral energy shot from Matsuya's fist. It was flying straight at the man, hitting him before he knew what had happened. The next second, the man was on the ground twitching and covered in burns. Good news was, the wound on his arm was cauterized. Bad news was, the man was still standing with nothing but a few tufts of hair amd clothes singed. Matsuya's face turned into a wicked scowl. He was getting angrier as his attacks wounded the man, probably since that's all the man himself was getting. Matsuya cursed under his breath. "Great. This idiot doesn't fall down." Amane looked at Matsuya with a look of confusion on her face. "What now Mat-san? This pig won't fall down." A look of wicked temptation crossed his face, ironic considering what he was going to do. "Now we show him the powers that the gods themselves bestowed upon us." Amane nodded and closed her eyes as they both said the same words. "Amano Chariotto (Divine Chariot)!" Amane started to wave her hands around, collecting spiritual energy. As the man regained his faculties she finished them. A set of dove's wings made of pure spiritual energy. She slowely lowered them onto Matsuya's shoulders. "Here you go, Mat-san. Your own set of wings." By this time, the man was charging the two again. Matsuya flexed his legs and prepared to fry this pig. "Thank you, Amane. Let's finish this guy." As the man neared 3 feet from Matsuya, Matsuya shot from the ground and into the sky using his wings. He hovered about fifteen feet above the man and smirked. "Time for you to see what happens when you threaten a beautiful woman around here." Matsuya held his hands out, his palms towards the confused man. Amane was hiding behind Matsuya's back, tears flowing from her eyes. She had to cry considering the situation, but something about how Matsuya was standing up for the women much as he had for her after her death was making her sad. The tears condensed on Matsuya's palms, forming a small ball. And once again they uttered the jutsu in unison, both sounding unbelievably sad. "Biimu no Imi Ranpu (Beam of Holy Light)." A flash of light emitted from Matsuya's hands and then a beam shot straight at the man. This time it wasn't just spectral energy. It was the energy of the heavens themselves firing at this vagrant. As the beam hit the man a small voice could be heard from Amane, who was still crying. "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry." Matsuya started to descend from his mid-air perch. He spoke to the man, even though he knew the twitching mass could no longer see him due to the intensity of the flash. "You'll survive, I made sure of that. I'll call some med-nin and they'll heal you. I can't say what your punishment beyond this will be, but you have my sorrow. Stay alive, I'd hate to be the cause of your death." As he slowly descended to the ground and let the wings disperse, Matsuya turned and looked for the woman, hoping to play hero. But she was gone. "What the?! She was just there!" Amane smirked and wrapped herself around Matsuya's body. "Looks like you don't get to play hero this time, Mat-san. After all, I'm the only girl you'll ever need." Matsuya frowned and grabbed her hair again. "Of course, and one day you'll be my bride Amane! Just have to become a spirit myself! And that won't happen anytime soon!" Amane squirmed and tried to free herself. "Mat-san, that still hurts!!" (sorry about the length. I like writing one-sided roleplays. Kinda got carried away. sweatdrop )
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Unrelinquished Despair Crew
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 5:23 pm
RPC Name: Toshusai Manami
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ranmaru Dojutsu
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Well, my character is going to be a genjutsu user. And, seeing as this bloodline is the only one that benefits said class, I'll be using it. That, and it'll be great to punish people for thinking that their sharingan/byakugan is capable of saving them from my awesome Genjutsu.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Well... this clan if full of people with creepy red eyes, y'know? They can also manipulate red particles and stuffs... Clones, 'splosions, all that jazz.
Silliness aside, I'd say they're basically anathema to Byakugan, with abilities similar to it. They can sense life up to 15 meters, locate and track others chakra in a range of 200 yards. Did I mention that they can sense how many people there are? It also gives the user "heightened perception and analytical powers," which they can use to look at an opponents chakra and see what jutsu they are using.
On top of all that, they can sense someone's life force, with the capability of transferring their own into someone else to heal them.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
Manami's slow, steady breathing fogged in the air as it came out in long streams. It was cold, frost coated just about every form of life, and he was concentrating. Concentrating on the movements about him, on anything within his vicinity. If it weren't for the fact that his eyes were closed, anything that could see, would notice that his usually deep purple hues were glowing with a rather uncharacteristic red. Another breath escaped his paled lips, his fingers trembling slightly while laced together. He could hear someone approaching, and they were getting far too close than should be comfortable. Perhaps it was the thick brush that he had decided to seat himself in? That was the most likely reason, and it was aiding him in his plan. A rather developed plan meant to dispose of the group of Chuunin level shinobi that had been dispatched to get rid of him. With what limited intelligence that their village held, he probably guessed that they only knew he was a genjutsu user, and that he was stronger than any of them alone. Of course, that didn't stop them from sending out a scout.
A branch broke, and the offending shinobi froze in place, his eyes wandering over to Manami. In turn, Manami's eyelids slowly opened, revealing the menacing red glow. Performing a small string of hand-seals, his first genjutsu took effect. While nothing was actually happening, the scout was beginning to see things. In the other's eyes, a threatening black chakra began to swirl about his form, belittling the chuunin shinobi perform him with raw power. A panicked expression took charge on his expression, and he began to back up, darting back towards the camp which his allies were resting. The end of Manami's lips curled, watching and listening to his opponents hurried pace. Tonight would be fun, but there was still much waiting to do. As he moved to rise from his sitting position, his stiff muscles whined in protest, having sat in one position for far too long. It took a few minutes for him to actually stand straight, but once he did, his mind was directed towards the failing light. Truly, he had been sitting, waiting for quite a while. He estimated it had been seven hours, waiting for the group to catch up to him, find his trail after duping the bulk of the guards sent after him. They all probably thought he was just a weak genjutsu user, but his little trick will probably change their minds. Caution wasn't the only thing needed when going up against him. And so, Manami set off after the trail of the fleeing shinobi.
To avoid suspicion of being followed, he had lagged behind quite a bit, using his slow pace to give the group he was after a false sense of security. He was at least two hours behind when he had finally arrived at the camp. Each of the chuunin were laid about a rather bright fire. False sense of security indeed. Another string of seals exercised his cold hands, afterwards, a bright gathering of red particles appearing from his body. Suddenly, another presence was sense within his immediate vicinity, and the particles, as well as himself, fell against the tree he was standing by. He quieted his breath, and looked about, trying to find the physical form that he sensed. The shinobi had come so close without realizing it, and that would be his downfall. Utilizing his own stealth, Manami crept away from his tree and towards the presence, stopping momentarily to check on the line of sight of his target. It was a man of equal rank, although not as alert as she should be. Once again he crept, except to the man's back, and he calmly placed his hand on the man's shoulder. "You should be more alert." He whispered calmly, his voice exceedingly soft, and feminine. Another genjutsu from his vast repertoire was cast, and the shinobi before him fell into a slumber, crumbling to the ground in his sleep. This man hadn't at all been a part of his plans, but him being here made it much easier. A steadying breath filled the air as Manami kneeled beside the sleeping shinobi, beginning a long string of hand-seals. The first technique to come out of the seals utilized the bright, vibrant red particles that floated about him. They clustered into two separate groups, at first forming a bright red humanoid figure, and then slowly fading into his exact appearance. A curt nod was given to the pair as they moved away, both of them finding a suitable position around the three sleeping shinobi. Once in position, Manami whispered under his breath, placing his right hand softly against the sleeping shinobi's head. “Jissei Muma no Jutsu.” He sang in a lullaby-esque tone. Not seconds after, the shinobi began to show visible signs of fear on his face, and not long after that, he began to scream. These screams weren't normal screams of fright, they were screams of a more disturbing nature. His voice echoed in the quiet as it he was being mauled by some ferocious figures, promptly waking up his three comrades that were sitting around the fire. No sooner than they had, the clones shoved their feet into the dirt and kicked it up into the faces of all three shinobi. Manami's hands moved into action instantly, firing off seals rapidly as he cast yet another genjutsu on the three shinobi. “Narakumi no Jutsu.” He said hurriedly. From then on, there was nothing else that he needed to do, his four victims would do the rest for them, falling into frightful world. A handseal was made, and both of the clones dispersed, seemingly exploding back into their red particle origins, and flying all about the way, striking anything in their path. Gradually, they began to fade, as Manami began to, walking off back into the forest towards his village. Killing wasn't his style.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:35 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
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Azeiel: Lazy eh? Same one used in PotS xP Since I had a hand in approving your bloodline there, I already know that the RP sample is fine. What you need to do now is take a look at the ENTIRE bloodline we have set up alright? There is a different system for how they are acquired, how many are acquired, and what you can do. Change your what you know section from what you know based off of other guilds/manga/anime to what you actually know from THIS guild. Please and thanks!
Major: Not that this is incredibly important, but what exactly happened to the coding given in the format? As for the RP sample, I'd like to see a bit more of the techniques in play, maybe something with a few more of the techniques and what not. Perhaps a play on the weakness
Meta: Gewd job! Approved!
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:00 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
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Major: Another thing you should take note of is the fact that the bloodline is still being edited so atm, we still won't be able to really approve your bloodline. Sry for the inconvience.
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"...It's a never ending battle out there."
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:16 pm
dude....i thought i was gonna be an innovator cry
RPC Name: Hyouzou Law (not yet created)
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ranmaru
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: as despair mentioned, this kekkai genkai is essential for any genjutsu user. it would fit perfectly with my character.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: stemming from Ranmaru, this ability turns the eyes completely red. These eyes can counteract the abilities of the byakugan, while also sharing some with the clan (i.e. looking through solid objects, track chakra) they can sense life and chakra, like a sensor, in a limited range, and their genjutsu ability increases while the eye is turned activated.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Hyouzou's demon red eyes were the only illumination offered up to the council member. A moonless night....just my f**king luck. The elder, reaching towards 70, was sweating profusely, his eyes still locked on those two red spheres. There was no doubt who his assassin was, and if the elder didn't do anything quickly, he would surely die. It was one thing that the famous "Hyouzou of the Mist" was sent after him. It was another, however, that Hyouzou activated his kekkai genkai. With those eyes, the assassin would be able to not only kill the elder, bu take his time doing it, for the bloodline limit gave the user additional prowess in the art of genjutsu. The elder cursed his luck. He had never thought genjutsu useful, and being more focused on taijutsu, he only bothered to learn the bare minimum. He panicked as his mind struggled to think of something, anything, that would at least allow the elder to reach other shinobi for assistance.
Finding the elder was too easy. With his kekkai genkai, Hyouzou had not only sensed his life force, but was able to keep watch on the man throughout the night. The old geezer spent the night in a brothel, taking on both a harlot and an outrageous amount of debt. It disgusted the killer. It disguested him so much, in fact, that Hyouzou had cast more than one "Ataeru Kanjoo No Jutsu (Inflict Emotion Technique)" on the elder through the walls, making the elder experience major mood swings. Overconfidence to fear, Hyouzou had done much to increase the elder's already increasing debt. Still, the man would most likely steal it from the village treasury, as he had always done. Hyouzou had to fight down the urge to spit on the elder, knowing full well that he was here for something else. Might as well play with him a while.... The shinobi's hands flashed at an amazing speed. "Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power)" With an accompanying glare, Hyouzou's figure seemed to reach a whole new level of intimidating, his "enormous amount of chakra" suddenly revealed itself.
The elder slowly backed up as Hyouzou's figure seemed to glow purple. The killer seemed to suddenly gain a large amount of chakra. He wasn't sure if it was a genjutsu or not, but the elder did not wait to find out. With a startled cry, the elder bolted, headed towards the nearest road. It was a slim chance, but, if luck was on his side, he would be able to find a wandering shinobi or samurai. All he needed to do then was bribe or blackmail, whichever was easier. As he continued to run, however, he noticed something strange. Didn't he pass that tree already? Weren't those vines a a few miles back? It was fairly dark, so he couldn't have been sure, but the elder was fairly certain that he had passed these landmarks already. He suddenly stopped. It was quiet. Very quiet. Was Hyouzou even following? Not having looked back until now, the elder slowly turned around, his worst fears arousing. He stopped turning, however, once the biggest one came to realization. Those two circles of red were in the exact position as always, as was the elder. He let out a cry.
Hyouzou couldn't help but grin. It was a stupid trick, he knew it, but he couldn't resist. Seeing the old b*stard squirm was hilarious. Hyouzou's vision danced around the elder's figure. He was dying. His health had never been spectacular, but seeing Hyouzou in the middle of the night seemed to speed his heart rate, and his strain on his muscles did no better to his body. The elder's vision seemed to focus then, and Hyouzou had guessed that his genjutsu was found out. Before he could dispel it, however, the elder's life force changed drastically. Hyouzou cursed himself as he darted towards his prey. He as having a heart attack, and if Hyouzou didn't save him, his bounty would be lost. "Heart Attack" didn't necessarily count as assassination, at least, not to his employer. However, by the time Hyouzou reached the man, the elder had passed. Hyouzou cursed his luck. "Great. All that stalking for nothing." With a scowl, he left the body in the middle of the forest. They would find it tomorrow, but he had no reason to be caught with it. Best leave it to the wolves.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:32 pm
hah. about the coding.... sweatdrop when I started writing this application I had like 4 tabs open for stuff on my profile. And somehow I copied and pasted something else and forgot to go back and recopy the code. So I just kinda took it from a previous application and forgot to put the coding back in. Sorry about that.
As for the suggested edits...I edited some stuff in. Really hoping that looks good.
And I'm okay with it being edited and not approved for the moment. I'm just trying to lay down the foundations for my profile. Hopefully by the time I get those done it will be finished mrgreen
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