Oh my, I do dig the bad-boy attitude. The FEAR and natural abilities are also very intriguing!
My big crit is on how he makes friends. If he is generally pushy and rude towards people, how would he react to people who genuinely wanted to get to know him? On the subject of girls, how would he react if he ever came to feel something for a girl beyond his normal "want to toy with them" feelings? I think that would be something interesting to see. >D
Also, what kind of hobbies does he indulge in? What kind of skills does he have?
Can't wait to see what you do with him! I'll definitely check back~
Would you be able to leave
Tsetsiliya a crit whenever you have time? :3