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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:32 pm


User ImageAMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Tsetsiliya Pavlova
Nicknames: Whatever nicknames you can come up with; she will happily answer to it
Gender: Female
Age: Appears 14 ( real age is somewhere in the neighborhood of 130 years )

Faction/Race: Demon ( Poludnica )

Personality:
Tsetsiliya is as nervous and mousy as they come. Not intimidating in the least, this timid nature does not become a poludnica, who is supposed to be enticing. Tsetsiliya is very aware that she's not living up to her name ( nor her family pride ), but she is trying very hard to surmount her nervous disposition. But years of ingrained habit make that difficult - bullying will do that to you. In this respect, she's a pushover. She is naturally intimidated by larger characters or those with strong personalities, but is drawn to them at the same time. She tends to be clingy to friends, then becomes increasingly paranoid that she's annoying them. It's a vicious cycle.

It takes a lot to push her to the point where she will lash out at others, and times like that are often accompanied by an unexpected shift in appearance. Things such as meddling with her stuff ( including stealing, rooting around, or even destroying ) or getting into her business are good triggers, and at such a point she will get highly upset and go into a rage fit to make any spoiled child proud. Any other show of emotion is accompanied by these shifts in appearance, and this happens quite often. She would rather bottle her anger and keep it to herself, which often ends in a small explosion of words and tears, than complain every other second.

And it's a good thing she does this, because she has a lot she could gripe about if she were a little less stubborn about solving her own problems. She has been made aware of her weaknesses quite often, and as such she is very protective of them. Any critiques or offhanded comments that sound like critiques are met with a nervous, slightly snappish reply. If told that she is in the wrong, Tsetsiliya will endlessly apologize and try to make amends. When she is especially intimidated by something, she'll fluster around trying to find a solution, and snap at those who try to fix the issue themself. She's independent and believes that if something is her problem, then it is exclusively hers to deal with - another resulting behavior from bullying. It's probably the only thing she is adamantly stubborn about. Well, that and proving herself.

While not necessarily dumb, Tsetsiliya lacks street smarts and common sense at times. It can be said that she's a little on the forgetful side, and has a hard time keeping names and faces down. But that is not to say that she certainly won't try. She may get it wrong the first three times, but she will do her best. If anything can be said about her, it is that she is determined to try, even if something intimidates her. Making friends? Tsetsiliya will try. Even though it sets her knees quaking at the thought of it. She does want to make friends, it just takes her a while, seeing as she is wary of kindness given out of the blue.

If anything can be related to her poludnica nature right off, it's her affinity for children. Youngsters can find a guide in her. In turn, she will do her best to appear brave and confident for the young ones, who seem to respect her more than some of her peers, or even her own parents, might. She will take any kind of praise she can get, glowing with pride when she does receive it and constantly stumbling over herself to continue to impress. The results can vary from good to horrendous.

She enjoys spending her time doing a number of things. She loves being active and is in constant need of keeping her mind occupied; an idle mind is wasted, she believes. She enjoys taking walks or runs, and would probably do well on a track team, being a fairly decent sprinter ( have to run through those big grain fields, after all! ). She also has a fondness for riddles, either collecting them or sharing them. Gardening is her main passion however and the thing that brings her the most happiness - this is probably related to the fact that poludnica tend to hang around grain fields and silos a lot. Despite the pristine condition of her clothing, Tsetsiliya is not afraid to get her dress dirty, and enjoys growing a number of odd plants on her dorm room window sill planter.

She also loves wheat and bread; being a poludnica, she has a natural affinity for grain. Any kind of bread-like product is her favorite treat, and she will consume it shamelessly until every last crumb is gone. It's a wonder she hasn't gained a lot of weight.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? The fact that she is just not scary enough. Her parents are concerned she is not coming into her abilities fast enough, and hope that by placing her with boas and ghouls her own age, she'll finally grow in a way that Ruining School did not allow. She wants to be scary, she really does! Especially if it'll make her parents not look at her with such disdain. One can expect a hard working student from this timid girl. She aims to please!

Brief History: Tsetsiliya's family is old money, with a father who was known for terrorizing royalty ( a demon who's dwelled in the Russian palaces during the time of the tsars - a fact he is very proud of and apt to bring up in conversation ) and a mother who did not discriminate on who she scared ( known to haunt areas near Poland, and while much more demure than her husband she is much more demanding from her daughter ). As such, when she was born, her mother ( a reputable poludnica herself ) insisted that the girl would be schooled in the same proud institution she attended: Madam Morrigan's Ruining School for Ghouls. Needless to say, her parents had doubts about their timid child, who cowered at the overbearing responsibility on her shoulders. Carrying the family name proudly, her race, being a poludnica her parents would be proud of! Being sequestered away and tutored privately kept her from meeting others of her own age group, which perhaps stunted her emotional growth a little, and her parents are likely the ones to blame for her shyness. When she came of proper age, she was ready to be enrolled at Ruining School. Madam Morrigan assured her parents that all would be well ( anything to keep the hefty donation the missus gave yearly ). She would make Tsetsiliya just as frightening a poludnica as her mother was.

Neither parent accounted for bullying, however. Bigger, stronger girls latched onto the weak Tsetsiliya and teased her without mercy. Her parents only told her to bear through it, or to channel those feelings into accessing her true potential. But the years passed, and their daughter only receded further into herself. Madam Morrigan insisted that she needed only a little more time, and indeed private lessons were given to the girl, but nothing did any good. She was encouraged to divulge the names of the bullies, but the stubborn girl would not say a word. It was her problem.

The bullying at Madam Morrigan's only worsened, and the timid Tsetsiliya was not coming into her abilities as quickly as either parent would have hoped. In order to strengthen their daughter, they decided to pull her from private school entirely and send her to a public institution. Perhaps this way, she'd finally bring pride to the Pavlova demon family. Perhaps interacting with boys as well as girls would trigger a change.

Not that Tsetsiliya feels that way. Looking at the Amityville Academy building is enough to make her want to run and hide. She wants to be scary, and she wants her parents to understand that, but a school full of girls -and- boys? What if she fails? She's not quite sure she can handle it, but she's going to try.

Natural Ability:
Shapeshifting - Tsetsiliya has three main forms: her default form, which makes her look like a girl of twelve; a beautiful young woman in her twenties; and an old hag. Normally she sticks in the child form, but any surge of emotion can cause her to shift, depending on the mood. The problem is she has issues reverting to her normal state when in high distress, and certain features will stick on her until she calms down ( such as the hag's nose on a child's face, but more often than not, the hag's hands remain a pretty constant feature ).

FEAR:
High Noon - Poludnica are also known as "noon demons", so it's natural that Tsetsiliya's FEAR would harness the powerful heat of a noontime sun. She has the ability to raise the temperature gradually in a battle, making her opponent lethargic and confused, before the temperature becomes stifling. When raised high enough, the opponent might pass out from disorientation.

All of this is ideally speaking, of course

Just as with her shapeshifting, her heat attack has a long way to go. She cannot properly zone in on a specific target just yet, and as a result the heat can encompass the immediate area around her ( i.e. the entire classroom ), but her range is expected ( hopefully ) to grow with time and practice. It is just as in-tune to her emotions as her shapeshifting is, and when pushed to a certain emotional extreme, it can either fizzle or become an inferno. Paired with her inability to contain it to a certain area, sometimes practice rounds do not end very well. She hasn't quite mastered detaching herself emotionally when it comes to attacking and can be easily overwhelmed or distracted, causing her attack to miss or not work in the first place. Those who are tuned well to heat or fire would be unaffected by the attack.

Physical Description: As Tsetsiliya grows, she'll move into taking on her woman's form more indefinitely. At the moment, her body is very much that of a twelve-year-old child's. The woman form is fairly attractive ( well-proportioned, tall, and fit ), if one avoids the hands, which are gnarled and clawed hag hands, and her mouth, which is fine when closed but otherwise hides rows of sharp little teeth.

Eye Colour: Milky white, almost opalescent, and eerie, with pronounced pupils. Her eyes yellow in her old hag form.
Hair Colour/Style: She's a blonde with thin, long hair ( it reaches the back of her calves ), which she normally keeps tucked into a braided bun underneath her head scarf. Her bangs are short and curl around her face. Her mother says long hair the color of grain is befitting a poludnica, and has not allowed her to cut it shorter. It takes on an appearance similar to candy floss when she's in hag form, turning cotton white in color.
Skin Colour: Pale white, leaning towards porcelain.
Clothing Style/Colours: A headband or headwrap that resembles this but lacking the baubles. Dressed with accents on her clothing that are distinctly Russian ( the quilted, curled-toe boots, fur trim on sleeves and hem of the skirt ), with a tendency to lean towards long sleeves and skirts or dresses. Maybe a vest instead of a loose robe or dress, with a shorter skirt that doesn't stop above her quilted boots if it'll make her look more contemporary/modern. Colors should be predominantly white but with hints of harvest colors ( golds, tans, reds, oranges, browns ). The artist can feel free to be as stylistic with any of this as they wish~! That's part of the fun of this. :3
Extra: She wears a chain belt around her hips that is adjustable for her transformations; it is a family heirloom from her mother's side. The belt is gold, and the interwoven links look similar to heads of grain. There is also a charm that looks like an old-fashioned scythe on it, which she fiddles with whenever she's especially nervous. She has a mouth filled with several sharp little teeth that looks smaller when closed, but widens greatly in other circumstances, stretching almost ear-to-ear when her FEAR is in full swing or she is particularly happy about something.
References: Here, have a super fail tektek

Possible Emblem Ideas: Perhaps a wheat stalk? A sun could also work.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:16 pm



alpha lyrae

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:52 pm


Hi! Thanks for the crit on Carol.
I like Tsets, and I can't find much wrong with her.
I was wondering, though, how she will respond if someone is genuinely nice to her or sticks up for her?
Please excuse me if it already says this haha~
And what makes her really happy? How does she react when she is in trouble?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:59 pm


Thanks for your crit, childs! Much appreciated. heart

Truthfully I think Tsetsiliya would be a little wary of anybody being nice to her without precedent. Since most girls who tried to get on her good side during her Ruining School days were only doing so for personal reasons or just for a laugh, I think after the initial surprise, she'd cling to people who are nice to her. Prooobably not know much about personal space and all that, which could get annoying to some people. Then she'd be all paranoid she's annoyed them. XD It's a vicious cycle.

I suppose gardening makes her happy, since poludnica are known to haunt grain fields and silos. Praise also makes her super happy, so she'll trip all over herself to seem like she's doing good in something.

As far as when she's in trouble, she'd probably panic at first, fumble around figuring out how to relieve the situation, then get snappish if anybody else tries to butt in. She's fairly independent in that respect~ P:

I'll toss these in her profile now. Thank you! <3

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:39 pm


I wonder how she would react if someone were to continuously and purposefully critique to the point that she has to control her ability or risk injuring/harming the whole of the school?

That's not a critique, it'd just be something interesting to find out later. xDD

I really like her. You've done an amazing job of fleshing her out and I can't find anything to critique. I can see where CM's crit came from, but you answered that and added it to Tsets' personality. Well done, Halie!
PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:41 pm


Haha, the poor girl would probably be on the verge of a nervous breakdown. XD Trying to keep her cool and talking in that dangerously low voice that people get when they're trying to stay calm. She'll have to learn to walk away from that one, methinks.

I don't think her abilities are THAT widespread. XD It probably would only encompass the classroom she's in at most. The area may increase as she grows but we'll see. That's something to think about though! *goes to stick that in her quest info*

Thanks for the comments, Lolli. ; ; <3 Much appreciated!

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:07 pm


It sounds like you have a really good idea of what she would be like. I love the way she is sounding^^ I couldn't find much to really crit on, but a couple things did jump out at me.

1) You say she is a very nervous and mousy individual. I feel that situations she could fall into are explained well and play off this timidity. But there is one spot (under her personality, the last paragraph) that it almost seems a random thing was thrown in about sports. If she is as timid/nervous/mousy as she seems to be, wouldn't sports be the last thing she'd enjoy doing? Or perhaps specify a particular sport she enjoys?

2) Her FEAR fits her species nicely and I like the way it sounds. I'm just wondering what the "weakness" of this FEAR would be. Like, if someone was to (hypothetically) create a thunderstorm, would her FEAR be useless? Or, since her FEAR seems to involve concentration, if someone was to break this concentration, would her attack falter and die down?

I hope these are helpful to you :3
PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:26 pm


Knew I was forgetting something with the FEAR. XD;; Thanks for pointing that out!

1 ) She enjoys being active, but I think she would be more attracted towards track and field, since it's not really a "team" sport ( which would mean less pressure on her, she thinks ), and she's fairly good at running. Have to move fast through those grain fields, after all. XD

2 ) Since she doesn't actually conjure a sun/sun-like object but moreso the heat, I don't think it would matter if the opponent could create thunderstorms or not. If she were really in top form ( and even then only in third year, maybe ) her attack might dissipate the coolness of the storm.

As far as real weaknesses go, it would be very concentration-based. Since she's emotional she'd be easy to throw off balance in that respect, or just easy enough to break her concentration. Those who are already in-tune with heat or fire won't be affected by her attacks, naturally.


Thanks for the crits! ; ; heart I've addressed them in her profile!

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:13 pm


I had never heard of a poludnica until now, and I like what you've done with her! The remaining parts left on her when she uses her natural ability is such a cute touch, and really communicates adorable inexperience. ^^

I'm a fan of her persistence, and reading the bit about refusing to give up her bullies' names to Madam Morrigan triggered this question. How deep down does her persistence go? Does she have a chip on her shoulder underneath all that mousiness, or is she just a very private girl? Does she understand that she has limits and things that she can't do/handle?

I also wonder about that scythe. I think, though I'm not sure, that there's a strictness around weapons that says only Reapers may have them from the get-go. If you haven't already, that might be worth looking into (if you've asked already then ignore me completely, "orz). If it does turn out to not be allowed, maybe she could have a little scythe-and-sickle charm bracelet or something instead - I only suggest jewelry because it's easily fiddled with.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:46 pm


On the matter of her persistence, it's kind of a mix of both independence and a thirst to prove herself. Her parents have all these hopes for her and feel constantly disappointed when she can't quite be scary enough, so she figures if she can stay strong and pull through things most other people would cave for ( i.e. bullying ), even if it means asking help, they'd sing her praises for being so strong. Also she believes that it is her problem to solve and nobody else's business. While she wants to be praised, she also wants to show that she is capable of handling her problems herself without asking for help.

All of this, I think, will eventually come back to bite her hard. But I think that opportunity would be good for some further character development. :> So I'm gonna say she doesn't quite understand her own limits yet.

And the scythe I actually haven't asked about yet, although perusing the forum information/quests/characters again kind of points in that direction. The jewelry idea is good! I might maybe make it a chain belt instead.

Thanks again! Helped a lot, Disco. <3

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 6:45 pm


I think that overall, she is a really well thought out character and I can see you put a whole lot of time into planning her out. ^___^

I don't see a lot that you really need to change, but I only have one question. Is there a reason for the girl being so timid and shy? I feel like it wasn't really the bullying that made her that way because it seems like she was like that even before people began to bully her. Has she always been so skittish and timid or did something cause this? That's all I really have to add. :3
PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 7:07 pm


Hey, thanks for your crit, Eternal!

She's been timid since she's been shut away as a child. Her parents wanted to raise an obedient daughter and had her tutored privately until she came of Ruining School age. That, coupled with the overbearing responsibility of upholding the family name as well as that of her race (and of poludnica everywhere), she doesn't feel quite ready for the challenge. Part of her timidness is shaped with the bullying though - she didn't interact with many others in her age group so she doesn't quite understand how to deal with others.

All of this has been worked into her personality~ heart Thanks again!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:12 pm


Did a bit of tweaking to her FEAR and general clean-up around the thread. heart
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