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 Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:46 am
oOboredXx Suicidesoldier#1 ((lol nice, perty good, a sort of personal thing instead of omnipresent but still an inner thought idea. )) Leaning over Morcain's chair specifically, the drill sergeant turned and barked out some pretty peculiar messages. "Boy, you seem like a person that just needs to be yelled at! I can't quite put my finger on it, but you need to be yelled at! Rant over, maggot." The drill sergeant said, as he continued on down the line, glaring at recruits and staring at anyone who dare even made eye contact with him.
Army
Bus
ArrivalMorcain cracked an eye open as the sergeant found the need to yell at him for god knows why. Oh yeah, he really needed that. "Shortest rant I ever heard..." he muttered under his breath as he watched the drill sergeant continue down the aisle. Speaking at all, much less a comment against the drill sergeant, was probably a bad idea. Then again, all of Morcain's ideas seemed to be bad ideas. Oh lord, were all the instructors going to find the need to yell at him for existing? That would be a bother. He hated bothers. Could you tell? Then again, the pointless yelling was expected. A lot of people seemed to have the completely random urge to hit, throw things at, yell, shout, or otherwise simply annoy the young man. He hated it, and if he hates you, your a bother. And bothers will not be tolerated. If he ever got the chance, he would probably kill you without batting an eye. He wasn't exactly the nicest or most orderly of people...and he would probably make a dangerous, unreliable soldier. Oh dear. Here come the thoughts again. Such a nuisance they were. Speaking of thoughts, just when was this bus going to stop?! ((I find my posts get too messy or otherwise illegible if I switch to an omniscient point of view...)) ((Very nice job, poetic license exploited, and your spelling seems to be in order! blaugh ))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:04 am
Kitai Genki
Marines
Bus
Arrival Kitai's mind wandered as the long boring trip went on. Here she had expected an adventure, and instead had wasted some-odd hours of her life on a boring trip with nothing but the sound of senseless chatter and tires on the rough road. As her eyes watched out the window, looking at nothing and hardly noticing the scenery, she wondered if there was some way to turn back. Nah, no turning back. No matter how badly she wanted to, Kitai knew there was no way she could ever do it. While this part may be as boring as watching late-night infomercials, she knew that what lay ahead would be anything but disappointing.
As soon as she could feel the big ride stop, she lifted her bag onto her shoulder and rushed off of the bus. Stepping out into the fresh air, free of the stench of sweat and the sound of heavy breathing around her, Kitai took a deep breath. She wasn't too fond of sitting still for long, so the trip had been especially tedious, not to mention all of the people around her and that not a one of them had said a word to her the whole trip. No matter, though, since she hadn't any interest in communicating with any of them anyway. Now, all she had to worry about was...well...where to go?
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Fashionable Conventioneer
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 7:40 am
Roleplay Name: Nurse Yuna aka Yunaria Delamontia
Branch- Military Basic Training---> Soon to be Navy
Location: Where I am needed Current is Training post
Objective- Complete Basic training Yuna jumped off the bus, with eyes full of hope and darkness. She had currently left home to join the forces as a nurse, after all what is a felt w/o a nurse? She wasn't the only one it seemed to be getting off the bus, she watched as people piled out of the bus one by one, until it was her turn. Was it the adventure she had hoped for?
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 7:41 am
James Chapman
Marines
Bus
Arrival
James sat on the bus reading his book “Fallen Angel” a vietnam war story by his favorite athour “Walter Dean Myrers”. The bus was bumpy and he was getting car sick but this is what he was waiting for. His brother of twenty three had join the army about three years befor had just got out and James’s mother was crushed when James told her what he was doing. He gave his mom a hug and told her every thing will be fine its just basic training. He started to look around the bus no one looked happy as if they did not choice to join. As the bus pulled to a stop James grabed his gear and walked of in his size twelve and a hafe boots. He was a tall six foot two new recruite he hoped his height would benefit him, instead of making him a target. He made it.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:00 am
((The Brother Angel- A very good job at both spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. The only thing your story lacked was descriptive enough details to accurately describe the situation. Yes the bus was bumpy, but how was it bumpy? You'll need to roleplay a little bit further, but I think you've got it down.
The Little Mermaid 1212- Good description of internal thought. You seem to present a decent array of both spelling and grammar and the basic of roleplay. Like many others, you've succumb to the general synopsis of trying to think how to respond to a bus roleplay in a military setting. I'm sure you can make your work longer and so, your accepted!
Typo Positiv- ^ but sans the not enough posted. Your are definitely accepted.))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
Arrival
Suddenly the bus lurched, giving an awkward change of the gravitational force, one that usually sent new recruits flying out of their seats. "ATTENTION! All new recruits will file off of this bus in an orderly line. Failure to follow my orders will result in definite reprimanding! Now off the bus. Double time recruits!" The Drill sergeant seemed not only unaffected by the previous lurch, but somehow calmed by it, as if he was expecting this sort of thing to occur. This quietly warmed the hearts of several of the new recruits, becuase they quickly realized that the Drill Sergeant didn't actually have a bad attitude, and that merely it was all a show to weed out the recruits of a weaker heart.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:05 am
Olaroe cadet:Sidney Hyton Marine Corps- echo battalion bus stop Sidney wants to become a better man by joining the marines.He herd they were tough and would break him down and build him back up. ((Uh, you have to post your arrival, or in this particular case, your departure from the bus according to the story unfolding. With that in mind, I um, concurrently must tell you that you have to post a story in accordance with my story. It's a role play?))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:06 am
Suicidesoldier#1 (( The Brother Angel- A very good job at both spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. The only thing your story lacked was descriptive enough details to accurately describe the situation. Yes the bus was bumpy, but how was it bumpy? You'll need to roleplay a little bit further, but I think you've got it down. The Little Mermaid 1212- Good description of internal thought. You seem to present a decent array of both spelling and grammar and the basic of roleplay. Like many others, you've succumb to the general synopsis of trying to think how to respond to a bus roleplay in a military setting. I'm sure you can make your work longer and so, your accepted! Typo Positiv- ^ but sans the not enough posted. Your are definitely accepted.)) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
Arrival Suddenly the bus lurched, giving an awkward change of the gravitational force, one that usually sent new recruits flying out of their seats. "ATTENTION! All new recruits will file off of this bus in an orderly line. Failure to follow my orders will result in definite reprimanding! Now off the bus. Double time recruits!" The Drill sergeant seemed not only unaffected by the previous lurch, but somehow calmed by it, as if he was expecting this sort of thing to occur. This quietly warmed the hearts of several of the new recruits, becuase they quickly realized that the Drill Sergeant didn't actually have a bad attitude, and that merely it was all a show to weed out the recruits of a weaker heart. Sorry i was kinda rushing it because i had to clean
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:13 am
the brother-angel Suicidesoldier#1 (( The Brother Angel- A very good job at both spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. The only thing your story lacked was descriptive enough details to accurately describe the situation. Yes the bus was bumpy, but how was it bumpy? You'll need to roleplay a little bit further, but I think you've got it down. The Little Mermaid 1212- Good description of internal thought. You seem to present a decent array of both spelling and grammar and the basic of roleplay. Like many others, you've succumb to the general synopsis of trying to think how to respond to a bus roleplay in a military setting. I'm sure you can make your work longer and so, your accepted! Typo Positiv- ^ but sans the not enough posted. Your are definitely accepted.)) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
Arrival Suddenly the bus lurched, giving an awkward change of the gravitational force, one that usually sent new recruits flying out of their seats. "ATTENTION! All new recruits will file off of this bus in an orderly line. Failure to follow my orders will result in definite reprimanding! Now off the bus. Double time recruits!" The Drill sergeant seemed not only unaffected by the previous lurch, but somehow calmed by it, as if he was expecting this sort of thing to occur. This quietly warmed the hearts of several of the new recruits, becuase they quickly realized that the Drill Sergeant didn't actually have a bad attitude, and that merely it was all a show to weed out the recruits of a weaker heart. Sorry i was kinda rushing it because i had to clean ((It's alright, you problably have the skill to be a decent roleplayer, I just need to verify it. Respond to my latest post, which is departure, or getting off the bus, and I'm sure you'll be fine. Just try to have the same sentence structure and spelling you had before, make it a little bit longer, and use descrptive language, and I'm sure you'll make it!))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:44 am
James stepped of the buss light footed. His brother said to him that these people will give you hell. He shook his head trying to think on the postive. His nuckles craked like when he would do the wish bone on thanksgiving. The Drill sergeant asked every one to state there name. James was in and out of focus thinking about what he would be doing here the air was fresh like he was at the beach. He’s name called he went to antaion and said. “James Chapman United states marina HO RA!. “He felt good with his interduction . It was hot, hotter then hot it felt like the devils sweet room. He wiped his forhead that was dretched in sweat that could be a new waterfall. He placed his gear under his bunk and could see that someone had allready clamed the top which he was fine with.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:54 am
the brother-angel James stepped of the buss light footed. His brother said to him that these people will give you hell. He shook his head trying to think on the postive. His nuckles craked like when he would do the wish bone on thanksgiving. The Drill sergeant asked every one to state there name. James was in and out of focus thinking about what he would be doing here the air was fresh like he was at the beach. He’s name called he went to antaion and said. “James Chapman United states marina HO RA!. “He felt good with his interduction . It was hot, hotter then hot it felt like the devils sweet room. He wiped his forhead that was dretched in sweat that could be a new waterfall. He placed his gear under his bunk and could see that someone had allready clamed the top which he was fine with. (( Your spelling sucked. However, that's alright! You presented that you were capable of providing detailed description, and for that, I now know that your good at both basic sentence structure, roleplay, and description! You pass! blaugh ))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:56 am
Suicidesoldier#1 the brother-angel James stepped of the buss light footed. His brother said to him that these people will give you hell. He shook his head trying to think on the postive. His nuckles craked like when he would do the wish bone on thanksgiving. The Drill sergeant asked every one to state there name. James was in and out of focus thinking about what he would be doing here the air was fresh like he was at the beach. He’s name called he went to antaion and said. “James Chapman United states marina HO RA!. “He felt good with his interduction . It was hot, hotter then hot it felt like the devils sweet room. He wiped his forhead that was dretched in sweat that could be a new waterfall. He placed his gear under his bunk and could see that someone had allready clamed the top which he was fine with. (( Your spelling sucked. However, that's alright! You presented that you were capable of providing detailed description, and for that, I now know that your good at both basic sentence structure, roleplay, and description! You pass! blaugh ))[/quote(( lol i know spell check broke idk how i did so good with my spelling in my 1st post and ok but if im in the marines and the are squeds without captains do i chose to be one or do i work up to it?
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:04 pm
the brother-angel Suicidesoldier#1 the brother-angel James stepped of the buss light footed. His brother said to him that these people will give you hell. He shook his head trying to think on the postive. His nuckles craked like when he would do the wish bone on thanksgiving. The Drill sergeant asked every one to state there name. James was in and out of focus thinking about what he would be doing here the air was fresh like he was at the beach. He’s name called he went to antaion and said. “James Chapman United states marina HO RA!. “He felt good with his interduction . It was hot, hotter then hot it felt like the devils sweet room. He wiped his forhead that was dretched in sweat that could be a new waterfall. He placed his gear under his bunk and could see that someone had allready clamed the top which he was fine with. (( Your spelling sucked. However, that's alright! You presented that you were capable of providing detailed description, and for that, I now know that your good at both basic sentence structure, roleplay, and description! You pass! blaugh ))[/quote(( lol i know spell check broke idk how i did so good with my spelling in my 1st post and ok but if im in the marines and the are squeds without captains do i chose to be one or do i work up to it? (( Well to specifically be marine, you must first pass marksmen training, in accordance with Lich Arhas Menethil, however you can join the army in the mean time until you pass either of our Marksmen oriented training in order to join the marines! blaugh ))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:24 pm
{{ sounds good how do i do that?}}
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:34 pm
the brother-angel {{ sounds good how do i do that?}}
Go here!
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