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Poetry....
  gets my thoughts and emotions on paper
  very inspiring for writing
  that thingy where words sometimes rhyme? Idk?
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Winters Serenade

PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 2:41 pm
xD I'm Still Shocked At How Ignorance Can Be Turned Into Poetry Like That. The World Can Be A Beautiful Influence...Even If It Is A Little Uncanny. ^^  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 6:21 pm
^^' Yes it is, It is amazing how words and emotion can unwravel and create memorable art.

Here is one I hope you enjoy, for all of you who think this maybe perverted...well then your missing the point xD this is strictly romance. Enjoy!

Purely Tempted Beauty

I takes a moment,
it shoud take less,
Tonight we put our love to the test,
move your hand to my theigh,
make a wish close your eyes,
I am all yours tonight
In your arms hold me tight,
this is wrong this is right,
Don't confuse your temptations with your limitation,
but don't hold back,
our hands linked,
exact,
I love you, I love you,
tell me it too.
Nothing compares to this,
your lips hold mine in a passionate kiss,
with edge,
but it's for the best,
Slowly truthfully as you remove my dress,
It's for the best, for the best,
tonight we put or love to the test,
You are mine,
I am yours,
My body is yours to explore,
I am yours I am yours,
There is nothing more to live for,
In this perfect moment, In this living dream,
your hands tug and rip at my satin dress seam,
Unwillingly exposed for you my love,
my hands drift up above,
and land to your cheeks,
you whisper you love me
as you kneel over me,
feeling the pressure,
the neverending pressure of our love at it's best.
That night we put our love to the test,
Flattering,
Clustering,
faltering,
Love,
is what we both have sub comed to,
Baby, I'll always love you, that much is ture,  

Strawberry Rai


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:25 am
I also like your poem. i think you said you're name was Luna/snow in the introduction...i'm trying to remember names by re-reading introductions XD hahahaa. But yeah i deffently do like it  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:12 pm
Yeah. Not Many People Call Me Luna. They Mostly Call Me Snow, Or Winters. xD Good Poem Rai. Truthfully, Your Title Fits The Whole Thing. Sweet Beautiful Temptation Indeed. ^_^

Midnight

A Moonlit Glow Fills The Night.
Shadows Fill Whats Left Of The Light.
The Leaves Blow, And the Grass Sings.
And The Rain Falls Gently Without A Sin.
The Church Bells Ring An Echoeing Tone.
Almost Stone Cold, Yet With A Warm Glow.
Together With You, We Hear These Things.
With A Soft Kiss, In Each Others Embrace.
Together Within the Enchanting Midnight.
Under Its Everlasting, Entwining Spell.  

Winters Serenade


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 5:41 pm
I love reading your poems that have love in them Luna, obviously now i'm deffently calling you Luna, winters Serenade ^^ hahaha.  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 6:49 pm
Agreed 3nodding
Oh, and thank you Luna! That is actually the only poem I have written that the title corresponds to the whole poem, otherwise it doesn't even make sense xD Anyway, I love your poems too, very rich in passion. A blissful enjoyment. Excellent work!  

Strawberry Rai


Winters Serenade

PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:40 pm
xD Thank You. Your Welcome Rai. xD No Sense? Plenty Sense!  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:45 pm
Grass in My Applesauce

In the lunchtime shade
Food in tray, tray on lap
Peaceful but for a bird's chirping,
Blissfully, unknowingly,
Chipping away and a tree's sore spots

Snapping a branch,
No longer a gentle giant
Along with the lightly gusty breezes
Blowing grass
Soiling perfectly good applesauce

Food's not food unless it's edible,
But you'll never know until it's your turn to taste it.  

burntchurro


Strawberry Rai

PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:56 pm
Wow morningorchid, your poems are a sweet sensation, and intriging journey with a mysterious twist! That's my complicated way of saying I love it! Good work.

xD you don't know until you see them actually! xD  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:04 pm
What Have You Done? I've All Of A Sudden Now Fear Apple Sauce. xD Nice Work! I Like It. It Gives Such Detail And You Capture The View Nicely. I Can Already Imagine It. ^^  

Winters Serenade


Strawberry Rai

PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:17 pm
You are exactly my brand of heroine~

All your tears in one injection
is the Heroine to my affection,
The fragrance of your skin, the intoxicating glancing
Sends me spiraling seductivly hypnotically entrancing
all my self conciousness excluded,
The ivory grin, light headnesses infusion,

You are exactly my brand of heroine,

Our conspiracy, this trust,
pure, intoxicating lust,
For a memory Or a loved one,
COuldn't compare,
this addiction this obssesion,
Your cool breath saturating my hair.

You are exactly my brand of heroine

And I do not plan on getting unhooked,
For an image could never capture every detail of your look,

You are exactly my brand of Heroine,

and I wish I can get high again...[not literal]  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:12 pm
I'll Say, I Think Your Poem Got Me High. Rai, Your Poems Are Inspiring And I Think Pretty Much Intoxicating. I Just Can't Get Enough Of Them! ^^ Fantastic Work!

Morning

The Moon Falls, And The Skies Are Alight.
The Sun Is Peeking Out From The Skies.
A Tinge Of Orange, A Bit Of Baby Blue Too.
Some Red To Go Along. Like A Sweet Apple.
The Pigeons Croon A Sweet Song, And The Clouds Move Along.
The Day Starts, And People Awake.
The City Is A Busy Place.
Except For Us, Just Because..
Were Dreaming Of What We'll Be Doing This Morning.  

Winters Serenade


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:28 pm
Wow haha. in just a days or so time. a whole bunch of poems come on, and i'm like WOAH! I love how food is getting brought into the poems XD but its making me hungry too hahahaha.

Also! Lucille I love reading your poems i can feel it all! without much discription then the words you use.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:50 pm
Thank you Chi and Luna, your words are inspiring! ^^ I am now encouraged to write more. razz  

Strawberry Rai


Winters Serenade

PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:59 pm
Please Do! I'm Most Eager To Read. ^^  
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