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william_ruby

PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:43 pm


Carlos Ralfer
hmm let me try explainng what I mean for the first jutsu another way....how would someone counter it? I mean, every jutsu has to either have a stop or counter or some way, in the game system, to be tracked numerically. Get what I mean? In other words, it has to corrisponde to some stat or ability. That's why I was thinking it was a boost to the hide check cause that's what it's for, hiding. Understand?

Wait, didn't I said that you needed a relevant drawback fo the Ingame stats for the clan? All clans have to have one unless their ingame stat is really minor (like +1 to chakra or something)


Also, what are the d6, d10, ect things at the top suppose to be fore. What are the dice suppose to be for? The user or the defender?

Oh, and remember, I said that the eyes would need a starting CP value. Look at my other posts. One of htem should ahve it.

Oh... Well Yeah... I fixed that. Didn't know what you meant.

Yeah the draw back for my ingame stats was the whole getting blind thing. Remember?

I added something to explain the dice.

And please don't make me do that for the eyes. No other doujutsu clan has that, that I know of and it really makes it difficult on low levels. On higher lvls the chakra wouldn't even really matter.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 9:28 pm


ok, see the fix for the first one.

hmmm as far as the going blind thing...hmmm you didn't post it anywhere that I see (might just be overlooking it) also, wouldn't that cancel out the eye jutsu?

and i'll check the other clans to see if their eye jutsu require chaka.

Carlos Ralfer


william_ruby

PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 3:10 pm


Uh... yeah the blind thing is in the assassins eyes stats.

Thanks. And.. you mean if their eyes take an initial chakra to activate right?
PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 4:56 pm


I didnt read all the dicussion between carlos and yourself, but from what i read the clan hides in shadows. but ide how simply in the shadow wearing black or literaly have the ability to sink in to shados like the guy from ninja scroll. Either way i think it quite good idea.....as actuly i was going to make a clan that could sink in to shadows.

giglamesh

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william_ruby

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 5:13 pm


Actually I haven't quiet gotten to the move where they sink into shadows. Right now I just want the clan abilities to get approved and then I will start working on their jutsus. Also I was sort of hesitant about hiding in the shadows because Jiriaya has a move that is almost exactly like that. But yeah if you ever play D&D look at the assassins class and the shadow dancers. I am pretty much making a cross between those and adding a ninja touch to it.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 6:44 pm


I always called it shadow walk, And for shinobi i belive it would be a incredible clan as since shinobi tend to me more devious that direct i belive it would be perfect, also the yello night seeing eyes is nice touch.

giglamesh

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william_ruby

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 7:59 pm


Ah finally a complement on my doujutsu. Now I know for sure it is original and creative. That sounds like a good name. I might take it if you don't mind.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:30 pm


doubt I'd allow sinking into shadows. I tried getting something like that passed for the Nara clan a while ago and if they can't do something with shadows then...well...you can pretty much be assured no one else will be allowed too without a DAMN good explination. Sorry.

Carlos Ralfer


william_ruby

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:37 pm


Hey tell me what my clan needs to do. And don't worry I have a way where it basically has to be approved. It is an actual move in the show. Jiriaya does it against the fight with Pein. That and the Nara isn't a bloodline... this is.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:52 pm


Quote:
In game Stats:

+ 20 Hide, move silently, and sneak attack, Use dex mod for attacking instead of str. >.> theres no mention of going blind here or in the assassination eyes. Whatever. Anyway, still, just going blind isn't a drawback cause all that means is that they don't have to learn that jutsu. You need a drawback on the stats. -5 con, -10 to Taijutsu, Genjutsu and Ninjutsu are my suggestions.

Dice rolled for sneak attack.
lvl1-9 d6 for shadow strike
lvl10-29 d10 for shadow strike
lvl30+ d20 for shadow strike
Jutsu List:


Jutsu Name: Shadow bending
Description of Jutsu: After years of living in the shadows and stalking his victims the mans body began to evolve. Finally all those many times where he has wish to be able to move out of the shadows without being seen if only for a little bit was possible. They do so by the movement of their body... It is hard for someone to naturally keep their eyes on the people of this clan even when they aren't hiding. While in conversation peoples eyes just seem to slip away from the face. The clan takes grasp of this ability to actually be able to sneak while in someones view.
Cp Cost: None
Damage: n/a
Requirements: Be a part of the Kagetachi clan.
Training:3 days wouldn't this take a bit more time to teach someone? make it about 5 or 6 days.
Special: If the user is within ten feet of any shadow they can hide in plain sight. The check against this is hide vs spot.


Jutsu Name: Shadow Strike
Description of Jutsu: This is an educated attack from the shadows that can leave the opponent paralyzed.
Cp Cost:
Damage: Depends on your sneak attack.
Requirements: 30 ranks in sneak attack and 10 ranks in knowledge(anatomy) Must be within the Kagetachi clan.
Training: 3 days not including the time studying. anyone can just put 10 points in their anatomy skill and negate the study part. So put an actual time period required for studying the human body. bout a day or two should be good. And increase the 3 days to 5
Special: Using their knowledge of the body the user can strike
their opponent in a vulnerable area leaving them paralyzed if they study their opponent for one whole round before they make their attack. Dc fort save has to beat 10+users lvl+users int mod


Jutsu Name: Assassin eyes
Description of Jutsu:These eyes seem to glow yellow and allow the user to see in the dark as well as give them faster reaction time as the pupils can take in more.
Cp Cost: 1cp per turn activated Ok...so I looked at the two major eye jutsu clans (Uchiha and Hyuuga) and it was annoying cause one of them had a CP cost for using the eyes and the other didn't. Hmmm you did put up a decent argument of how lower level members would find 10 per round a rough price...hmmmm how about just 2 per round to be fair. If you can argue it then go ahead.
Damage: n/a
Requirements: A clan member receives upon their first kill. The kill must be to only confirm that they are ready to be an assassin.
Training: None.
Special: +6 dex +15 spot Ok, I see how your spot checks could gain a bonus in darkness but your dex wouldn't go up that much just cause you can see in the dark. Lower it to about 3 or something around that.
If in the dark and suddenly exposed to great light or very sudden light the user suffers a -5 penalty to attack rolls and to their dodge bonus.

Carlos Ralfer


william_ruby

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:01 pm


I lowered the taijutsu but that was it. Ninjutsu is important and they train in that to and obviously Genjutsu would be studied by a clan that sneaks in the dark. They do lack taijutsu though because they don't fight fair and in the open. I hate odd numbers so I made the eyes give 4 dex because having besides being in the dark their pupils get bigger and they can see more acute. I think I agreed with everything else.

What do you think of the eyes looking like this?
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:13 pm


That's fine for the way they look.

Anyway, you need to take either the hit to ninjutsu or genjutsu. The drawbacks have to be releavent and let me explain why I put them. Taijutsu is basically for the same reason you did. Ninjutsu is because I figured a clan that would be slinking around like this wouldn't want to waste time doing the handsigns or the flashyness required to do ninjutsu.

As for genjutsu...well...I just put it up there so it wouldn't feel left out. XD

Carlos Ralfer


william_ruby

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:18 pm


Yeah... but I use my ninjutsu for helping escapes like poison gas and what not. And sticky syrup... Eh... And look under special for eyes... That is another draw back.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:23 pm


what, the going blind thing? I copied everything that was on the clan list for the clan off the front page. theres nothing there about blindness. just a penalty if someone turns on the lights.

Carlos Ralfer


giglamesh

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 12:12 pm


aww no shadow walk..........what about shadow dragon?...........forget that *gets out recorder* Once heat dies down from posting two many jutsu at once creat shadow dragon jutsu. <_< >_>
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