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Clan Name: Kagetachi
Village: None
Description of Limit: This clan uses stealth as there weapon to deliver devastating sneak attacks.
History:The first ninja ever to ever evolve this bloodline was awarded the title Kage for being a master of the shadows. He was the personal ninja of a powerful ambassador for Konoha. The ambassador was a rather effective one to for all his problems that he ran into seemed to disappear rather quickly. With his success people started to take notice to. When the ambassador even captured a small country of his own by just havening the Kage take out all the important figures there and then filling in himself. Eventually though the village came to war as the ambassador was much unliked among the people for committing great crimes. It was time for the Kage to find a new boss and from their he alone escaped that night and had found a home somewhere deep in that country and settled down to create a family. Though little did he know his son would build a great organization of ninja. Ninja that are loyal to no one.

That is how the organization started but the original people themselves were quiet. They talked to no one and they had no conscience. They would ruthlessly kill anyone, man, woman, or child. The clan also choose to stick to the shadows and be in the dark as much as possible. Even when they had to go outside during the day they would walk the shortest path between darkness. Slowly at first they only seemed to become some sort of flaw as their eyes became sensitive in the light. But over time they got unnatural sight in the dark and even later it became an altogether ability which could be controlled at will.
In game Stats:

+ 20 Hide, move silently, and sneak attack, Use dex mod for attacking instead of str. -4 con, -10 to Taijutsu and Ninjutsu

Dice rolled for sneak attack.
lvl0-9 d6 for shadow strike
lvl10-29 d10 for shadow strike
lvl30+ d20 for shadow strike
Jutsu List:


Jutsu Name: Shadow bending
Description of Jutsu: After years of living in the shadows and stalking his victims the mans body began to evolve. Finally all those many times where he has wish to be able to move out of the shadows without being seen if only for a little bit was possible. They do so by the movement of their body... It is hard for someone to naturally keep their eyes on the people of this clan even when they aren't hiding. While in conversation peoples eyes just seem to slip away from the face. The clan takes grasp of this ability to actually be able to sneak while in someones view.
Cp Cost: None
Damage: n/a
Requirements: Be a part of the Kagetachi clan.
Training:6 days
Special: If the user is within ten feet of any shadow they can hide in plain sight. The check against this is hide vs spot.


Jutsu Name: Shadow Strike
Description of Jutsu: This is an educated attack from the shadows that can leave the opponent paralyzed.
Cp Cost:
Damage: Depends on your sneak attack.
Requirements: 30 ranks in sneak attack and 10 ranks in knowledge(anatomy) Must be within the Kagetachi clan.
Training: 5 days and one day studying
Special: Using their knowledge of the body the user can strike
their opponent in a vulnerable area leaving them paralyzed if they study their opponent for one whole round before they make their attack. Dc fort save has to beat 10+users lvl+users int mod


Jutsu Name: Assassin eyes
Description of Jutsu:These eyes seem to glow yellow and allow the user to see in the dark as well as give them faster reaction time as the pupils can take in more.
Cp Cost: 2cp per turn activated
Damage: n/a
Requirements: A clan member receives upon their first kill. The kill must be to only confirm that they are ready to be an assassin.
Training: None.
Special: +4 dex +15 spot
If in the dark and suddenly exposed to great light or very sudden light the user suffers a -5 penalty to attack rolls and to their dodge bonus.



Owner: William_ruby


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No no. It's done. I just want to get the basics down and approved and then add more from there.

There. What do you think?
The difference between the sneak attacks is these ones stun. And they have drawbacks now. The stats aren't always on either. And the sneak lets them hide in plain sight. usually you can't do that. To start a hide you have to run behind something first. Yeah... lol by the way my genin that has this bloodline is on a team with two Uchiha's... Please allow me to compete with them some way. lol. They are Kenk and VicousKira to... *shivers* lol no. Jk do it fair and square like always.

Lol I give Kenk that he knows a lot and that he is most likley good but I know the system inside and out just as much as he does. I have been playing D&D for a long time now. People that play D&D would probably know what I was going for when I made this character to.

Okay the first people that had the bloodline got it from being in the dark. THey natural evolved so that their body was so much more able to sneak. So like say when their not even trying to hide people's eyes might move right over them. Like that one guy in class that you have and never realize till one day your like who the hell is this guy. The part about being near a shadow just has to do with limiting the power of this. Oh and none of these by the way are really jutsus. Just kind of abilities. If a spot light was on the person though it would be obvious that they would be seen but it is assumed that a sneaker of great skill wouldn't be spotted by one and move out of the way. The shadow thing also mean that the man obviously wouldn't be able to hide in a well lit room. Role playing will have to sort of come in here.

Okay this sneak attack makes the opponent stunned. You see by studying the body instead of just making a normal sneak attack, they hit some where the opponent is weak at which stuns the enemy. Thus why they have to have knowledge in anatomy. It has nothing to do with a jutsu again. Or it would be under taijutsu really which usually doesn't require chakra.

It became a doujutsu clan when I thought of how seeing in the dark would give them an advantage to sneaking. I wasn't actually thinking of anything about the uchihas when I though of the killing to gain the eyes. I am going to change the name of the eyes to in a moment. But the killing somone really is confirmation that the owner of the eyes is officially an assassin. Once The bloodline is approved and I then make the history of it it will probably make more sense. The int bonus is because the user is able to take in the scene more and process anything they see better. The dex bonus because since they see better they have more time to react.

Does this make more sense now?

woops. I'm so sorry bout this. I'll get to it tommarow.

heavenly spin? What are you talking about? If your talkinga bout a clan or jutsu I already approved, you gotta be more specific. My minds swish cheese dude....no...that's an insult to swish cheese everywhere.

oh, well thats something to be taken up with the crew. We're doing jutsu fixes now so we'll get to it. I'll bring it up then.

Anyway, to the jutsu. Well ok, if your gonna classify these as ability moreso than jutsu then that does help them a bit. Cause as jutsu...well...they weren't that well done to me. Anyway, if they are just abliity...then is this even really a clan? Well ok, it is but...hmmm nevermind.

Alright, fir the ingame stats, you gotta have backdraws. Since you have such large incresaes, you got to have some relevant backdrops. It's only fair.

Ok, next...you know that in order for a creature to naturally evolve, they'd have to live in that environemtn for like century...well ok maybe not century but close to it. And they'd have to live in PURE darkness. But by the very explination of your clans history, they were out and about in everyday life, just behind the scenes.

Shadow Bending: What I was really trying to convey at first with your descriptions is that your giving more of an antidot of the jutsu, your not actually saying WHAT it does in plain terms. It's not really clear what it does. The special straightens it up SOMEWHAT but not enough. Alter it to explain exactly what the ability allows and since this is a bonus to the hide check, mark that up as well. If I let his pass...hmmm it'd probably be a +10 to hide at best.
Also, your training days are WAAAY too high...unless you WANT to do 500 (Five hundred!!) posts at 5 lines each.

Shadow Strike: Ok, this one is explained better than the last one. Still a little foggy but its cool. Again, you want to do 300 posts just to paralyze someone, be my guest.


Assassin Eyes: Well, is tated my hatred of eye jutsu so meh. And I'm sure you can understand why I would think you stole the Uchiha idea. I believe that you didn't but I'm sure you cna understand. Anyway, I'm not sure if the other Eye Jutsu clans do this but for now, add a starting CP cost of about 10 or so +1 per turn to keep it activated. Also, just cause you can see in the dark doesn't mean your smarter, so loose the int. Also, the spot is a bit high. Seeing in the dark would give you a spot bonus, that I agree with, but only in the dark and it's probably be closer to 15 or 20.

hmm let me try explainng what I mean for the first jutsu another way....how would someone counter it? I mean, every jutsu has to either have a stop or counter or some way, in the game system, to be tracked numerically. Get what I mean? In other words, it has to corrisponde to some stat or ability. That's why I was thinking it was a boost to the hide check cause that's what it's for, hiding. Understand?

Wait, didn't I said that you needed a relevant drawback fo the Ingame stats for the clan? All clans have to have one unless their ingame stat is really minor (like +1 to chakra or something)


Also, what are the d6, d10, ect things at the top suppose to be fore. What are the dice suppose to be for? The user or the defender?

Oh, and remember, I said that the eyes would need a starting CP value. Look at my other posts. One of htem should ahve it.