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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:49 pm
Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: A Reaper's Rage Sin formDescription:After the death of Makyo in axiom, Srin mind went into a dark depression, during this time it slowly changed him on the inside... This talent twists both Srin's body and mind into something dark.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive A Grandmasters blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Srinn opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Srin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Srin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Srin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Srin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Srin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Srin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Makyo... your dark and my power..." says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city...
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:58 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: Out with the old Sin, In with the new Sin formDescription:Sin has finally been removed from the of Srin. Srin now believeing that he is free of the curse of his twisted brother.... or so he believed. During the removal Sin split his self. The control had left and chaos was left inside to make the man's soul whole. This talent twists both Srin mind and body into what Sin has become.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive Sin's blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Sin opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Sin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Sin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Sin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Sin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Sin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Sin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Srin.... oh yeah she would..." Sin says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city... Denied. Your Talent Grim Reaper has already been accepted for Srin, which leaves you with room for one Non-Combative Talent. If you want to submit custom skills for the Grim Reaper Talent, you may do so in the Custom Skills thread.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 9:34 am
Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: Out with the old Sin, In with the new Sin formDescription:Sin has finally been removed from the of Srin. Srin now believeing that he is free of the curse of his twisted brother.... or so he believed. During the removal Sin split his self. The control had left and chaos was left inside to make the man's soul whole. This talent twists both Srin mind and body into what Sin has become.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive Sin's blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Sin opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Sin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Sin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Sin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Sin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Sin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Sin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Srin.... oh yeah she would..." Sin says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city... Denied. Your Talent Grim Reaper has already been accepted for Srin, which leaves you with room for one Non-Combative Talent. If you want to submit custom skills for the Grim Reaper Talent, you may do so in the Custom Skills thread. no jacky said I could remove the reaper talent and get new one
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:47 am
xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: Out with the old Sin, In with the new Sin formDescription:Sin has finally been removed from the of Srin. Srin now believeing that he is free of the curse of his twisted brother.... or so he believed. During the removal Sin split his self. The control had left and chaos was left inside to make the man's soul whole. This talent twists both Srin mind and body into what Sin has become.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive Sin's blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Sin opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Sin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Sin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Sin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Sin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Sin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Sin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Srin.... oh yeah she would..." Sin says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city... Denied. Sin was completely removed by another PC.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:50 am
SorceressJacklyn xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: Out with the old Sin, In with the new Sin formDescription:Sin has finally been removed from the of Srin. Srin now believeing that he is free of the curse of his twisted brother.... or so he believed. During the removal Sin split his self. The control had left and chaos was left inside to make the man's soul whole. This talent twists both Srin mind and body into what Sin has become.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive Sin's blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Sin opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Sin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Sin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Sin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Sin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Sin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Sin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Srin.... oh yeah she would..." Sin says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city... Denied. Sin was completely removed by another PC. could I just renamed some of it and make it so no sin?
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:12 pm
xXLord OokamiXx could I just renamed some of it and make it so no sin? No. It's too basis on that notion as well as the fact it has too many issues with it to be able to fix it into an acceptable talent. the talent, on a whole, is denied.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:37 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank:Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both Talent Name: A Reaper's Rage Sin formDescription:After the death of Makyo in axiom, Srin mind went into a dark depression, during this time it slowly changed him on the inside... This talent twists both Srin's body and mind into something dark.... His body starts to cover in pitch placket and armor forms around him. All Besesrker skills are lost and his body freezes for two posts with no movements or skill use. But the good out of it is after which his speed increases by 2 and his eyes finally shone though the pitch black. He forms a sword and almost seems like a warrior class. (Custom skills later) Skills: Soul's Snare Passive A Grandmasters blade forms in the hand of the User becoming an S rank Weapon(His master rank)During the talent use it can be used, once talent is done it disappears Insanity's Scream C rank Srinn opens his mouth and begins to suck in all the air his lungs can hold, once full he screams unleashing a soundwave so high picthed the ears will bleed with in 10ft of it. But once he starts screaming the soundwave knocks back anything with in 25ft. Iron Gizo C Rank Srin's long hair slowly grows out behind and curls around his body, as it grows it begins to harden like iron making it a good defencive skill and when moving an offencive skill. It can block up to D rank skills for 6 posts Needle Gizo B Rank Srin beings to put energy into his long black hair turning all the hairs into large spikes that can protect against close range attacks or be combined with the Gizos to make a weapon. Steel Gizo B Rank Like Iron Gizo it hardens the air to metal like particules to protect or use a weapon with the needle Gizo. It can block up to C rank Attacks for 5 posts Dark Soul A Rank This skill slowly begins to harness all of Srin's dark energy his body, after three posts he can unleash a wave of energy that when hitting another person or creature becomes "Tainted". When Tainted, Srin is able to drain D rank energy from them every 3 posts and give it to his self. Dark Classes or bloodlines give C rank energy.(The foxes, Vestiors, ETC) Needle Storm A Rank By putting the energy to his hair once more while Needle Gizo is activated, Srin pretty much fires thousand of tiny needles out of his Gizo sending them almost everywhere. They can be large spikes and spliter off with D rank energy Insanity!!!!!!!!! S Rank Srin in a way of saying it loses his mind more than he already has and begins to busy flip some major @#%$. He slowly builds up all his energy for one post, during this post of charging he doesn't move and he doesn't speak oddly enough so you know something is up. Once it done he opens his mouth and unleashed a huge fog that covers the area. Well after doing this he needs to recharge his energy before using any skills for one post. This fog is acidic not to the body but to the mind. As a person breathes it in they slowly begin to see things and hear things, seers have been known to feel the effects as well. If they remain in the fog for: 1 post: Slight images and very low chance of madness. 2:posts: They slowly becoming easily angered and starts seeing things. 3 posts: They are becoming a bit insane and will start to have minor lasting effects(Nightmares, seeing things or hearing things, minor not like their attacking you) 5 posts sad Max) The person goes off their rocker and starts attacking things that are not there. They must roll a 6sided dice and must land on an even number for them to being aiming at a real person.(After Effects, Nightmares, mood swings, and seeing and hearing things.) This Fog only lasts 5 posts but the effects can be deadly Rp Sample: Hell... so many people should be there... so many people should have stayed there.... The ciggrate lights up the room as Srin breathes in the smoke... he didn't care for the black lungs, he could always replace them when they got bad.... Srin sat down and thought about hell as he looked at the glass orb infront of him. Today was the day that Makyo had died 4 years back... it was always hard to look back and think that the guy was dead... Sin sturdier in the orb and looked at Srin. Sin just moved the orb away and closed his eyes.... damn... As he does he slowly drifts out of his head and falls asleep.... the demon laughed in his orb as it slowly disappear and the glass became clear... the old Sin was dead... now he would be reborn like his brother.... Dark aria slips from Erin's gauntlets and begin to cover the man leaving nothing but a pitch black outline of him.... time had passed and the body had formed a dark hellish armor, and veins of red covered its body.... the red veins slowly pump to life and his eyes start to glow crimson as the figure slowly bring himself up. It blinks a few times and smiles showing rows of the razor teeth... the bottle of vodka on the table was put into its hands and finished quickly soon after. It slowly makes ot way out of the building and smiles as it looks around. He was in that floating city... he had never cared for its name... people stopped and stared as he looked at them... With a flick of his wrist a long hiss came from the air as a black blade formed in his hands.... he looked down at it and smiled bringing it up and opening his mouth as his long togune licked the blade... it had been so long since the blade or it had tasted blood..... People start to slowly move away as the spot him with the blade... a soft snickers escapes it lips as he runs towards the small crowd, the blades metal sliding against the ground to the right, sparks going onto the air as it moved. The being raised his blade up and began to his masscure.... two hours pass and city was in chaos, guards rush towards the market place to the being ripping apart a man with its bare hands and drinking it blood as it slid down it throat and messly around it mouth.... the being spots the guards and stops. It drops the body and its veins glow crimson as it smiles. The long hair at its back grew out and began curve around its body. The guards charge foreword with weapons drawn and slash down at the Creature, on its hair moved infront of the blades and began to make sparks fly into the air as it happen.... the guards step back in amazement as the hair spikes up and fires out of the mass. The guards fall to the ground like others before them.... the being simply went on feeding on them and disappear into the burning city.... the next thing would make everything to total chaos.... The being slowly climbed to the city's highest point and became perfectly quiet and still... many stop and wat h to see what it was doing.... time slowly pasted and it began to open its mouth... a dark fog began to spill from its lips down to the city below at fast rate shrouding all who saw it... many coughed and began to run away... The being laughed and laughed as screams could heard though the city.... ah yes he remembered the pronta killing this was much better..... It slowly slipped down to the bottom and went back to its fun.... Many guards ran to the being once more and surround it with firearms and blades.... The being smiles and sucks in a large amount of air while the guards wait to see what it was doing.... many of bladed guards charge at him... It opens it mouth unleashing a high pitched scream the destoryed the ears of the men attackjng him and pushing the rest into the buildings around them..... ah yes.... This was fun.... those that were not crying stood up and rearmed themselves. The being charges its energy and sends another shockwave at them of energy.... as they try to lift their guns they slowly drop to the ground as energy begins to be stolen..... the being lifted his sword and smiled. Their scream being heard from the areas around them as people started fighting people... the fog finally taking effect on them.... As the sun sets... the city goes up in flames... The being smiling as he picks up a camera he stole and takes a picture."Mom would be proud of us Makyo... your dark and my power..." says laughing darkly.... and begin to leave the destoryed city...
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:39 pm
Didn't I just say that the talent, on a WHOLE, was denied?
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:59 pm
Rpc Name: Vincent Rpc Profile Link: HereYour Customs Thread: HereRpc Rank: Journeyman Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combatative Talent Name: Third Eye of Madness Description: Vincent can subconsciously recognize another who holds within them the Black Blood. Skills: None. RP Example: If you'd really like one...
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:07 pm
YoDaeTatsuya HereRpc Name: Vincent Rpc Profile Link: Your Customs Thread: HereRpc Rank: Journeyman Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combatative Talent Name: Third Eye of Madness Description: Vincent can subconsciously recognize another who holds within them the Black Blood. Skills: None. RP Example: If you'd really like one... A great example of a non-combative talent smile Welcome back YoDae! This talent is approved.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:56 pm
Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank: Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combat Talent Name: Fistacuffs Description:This talent allow Srin to change his gauntlets into weapons, they are still weapons yes but each with its own skills and use. They can only be one weapon for each gauntlet and can never be changed. This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power. Skills: (If any) Weapon skills Rp Sample: No real need
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:41 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank: Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combat Talent Name: Fistacuffs Description:This talent allow Srin to change his gauntlets into weapons, they are still weapons yes but each with its own skills and use. They can only be one weapon for each gauntlet and can never be changed. This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power. Skills: (If any) Weapon skills Rp Sample: No real need Grim Reaper is Srin's Combat Talent Wulf. You can only submit a non-combat talent for him.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:46 pm
Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank: Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combat Talent Name: Fistacuffs Description:This talent allow Srin to change his gauntlets into weapons, they are still weapons yes but each with its own skills and use. They can only be one weapon for each gauntlet and can never be changed. This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power. Skills: (If any) Weapon skills Rp Sample: No real need Grim Reaper is Srin's Combat Talent Wulf. You can only submit a non-combat talent for him. I told you Jacky gave me the okay to replace it
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:45 am
xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank: Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combat Talent Name: Fistacuffs Description:This talent allow Srin to change his gauntlets into weapons, they are still weapons yes but each with its own skills and use. They can only be one weapon for each gauntlet and can never be changed. This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power. Skills: (If any) Weapon skills Rp Sample: No real need Grim Reaper is Srin's Combat Talent Wulf. You can only submit a non-combat talent for him. I told you Jacky gave me the okay to replace it Okay then. Reading your comment "This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power." Your talent is denied until you take the time to detail all of the skills and powers you expect to gain from this talent, and provide me with an RP Sample. A talent is not something you can just add to at a later date. Talent's are permanent, and all there benefits need to be made apparent at their creation.
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:48 am
Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Rpc Name: Srin Azio Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152847 Your Customs Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21977963 Rpc Rank: Master Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combat Talent Name: Fistacuffs Description:This talent allow Srin to change his gauntlets into weapons, they are still weapons yes but each with its own skills and use. They can only be one weapon for each gauntlet and can never be changed. This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power. Skills: (If any) Weapon skills Rp Sample: No real need Grim Reaper is Srin's Combat Talent Wulf. You can only submit a non-combat talent for him. I told you Jacky gave me the okay to replace it Okay then. Reading your comment "This talent pretty much allows to gain new skills and power." Your talent is denied until you take the time to detail all of the skills and powers you expect to gain from this talent, and provide me with an RP Sample. A talent is not something you can just add to at a later date. Talent's are permanent, and all their benefits need to be made apparent at their creation. Well it was 2 am when I sent this XD but still I will try
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