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 Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:27 pm
Crappily Explicit Poem #2
"unrequited"
it all started that summer,
we hung out for a week or two,
then i realized,
i had a crush on you.
i gave you my number,
or did you give me yours?
I don't remember,
not like it matters anymore.
but then you met her,
and she was all you talked about,
and i, by myself,
was feeling very left out.
then you guys went out,
and you were on top of the world,
who would've thought she could make you so happy,
that stupid girl.
but then she broke your heart,
you just about died,
and then all your thoughts,
turned toward suicide.
you were very depressed,
while talking to me on IM one day,
i had to restart,
and when i got back, you'd gone away.
i looked up your number,
and called to make sure you were okay,
and we got very close,
on the phone that day.
it's been about a year now,
and your wounds have all healed,
and my affections toward you were forgotten,
as soon as they were revealed.
we're all three friends now,
but you still like her better than me,
but why not?
she's prettier than i'll ever be.
you wrote her a poem,
thanking her because she cared,
when i was the one, not her,
that had always been there.
your poem telling her you love her inspired me to write you a poem telling you you're ******** shallow
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:28 pm
t0paz If ya wanna see explicit I have one for ya...rawr..kinda embarrassed to post it though sweatdrop go ahead and post it, as long as it doesnt violate the ToS your good as gold. which is surprsingly lax....for a ToS IMHO
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:29 pm
Sketched t0paz If ya wanna see explicit I have one for ya...rawr..kinda embarrassed to post it though sweatdrop go ahead and post it, as long as it doesnt violate the ToS your good as gold. which is surprsingly lax....for a ToS IMHO
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:32 pm
Sweet Obssession
You are a wonderous work of art
which I am compelled by
astonished & thouroughly obssessed with
everyday I watch you
admire you
my eyes studing every move you make
My hands longing to touch the tender
flesh of such delicate splendor
studying your skillfully crafted eyebrows
that frame every chieseled expression you make
dwelving into those eyes that
burn like fire in the night
Encompassing your beautiful slender
hands every chance I get
How I rejoice with you when you smile
the sunlight encased in your jubilance
In your sadness I feel your pain
your pain is mine, maybe ten times fold
The pain mirrored in your eyes can be seen in mine
Like chocolate I crave you everyday
wishing you'd melt in my mouth
and not in my hand
Hershey kisses,mocha, hot fudge
irraticating my senses
sensuous like a cup of hot chocolate on the coldest of winter
the first sip always the best
the anticipataion, the steam slowly warms your soul
then the first sip, your insides become engulfed
in the heat of the moment
it's shocking at first but once you recover
all you want is more
you close your eyes and sigh
savoring that instant before catiously
demanding for more
Each sip filling you
until you've stopped sipping and find yourself
greedily slurping , partaking of the chocolate ecstacy
frantically,desperately needing more
until you realize you've reached the climax
the last sip
the adre=naline slows enough to savor that last drop
stretching it all you can
Then you settle down comfortably
satisfied, reminiscent
I wish to make you my chocolate dream
so that I can reminise
about you accustomed hands
all over me, like the steam itself
your body filling me
our bodies entwinded as one
funny how now I couldn't care less if he goes to hell isn't it. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:35 pm
kristinarr Crappily Explicit Poem #2
"unrequited"
it all started that summer,
we hung out for a week or two,
then i realized,
i had a crush on you.
i gave you my number,
or did you give me yours?
I don't remember,
not like it matters anymore.
but then you met her,
and she was all you talked about,
and i, by myself,
was feeling very left out.
then you guys went out,
and you were on top of the world,
who would've thought she could make you so happy,
that stupid girl.
but then she broke your heart,
you just about died,
and then all your thoughts,
turned toward suicide.
you were very depressed,
while talking to me on IM one day,
i had to restart,
and when i got back, you'd gone away.
i looked up your number,
and called to make sure you were okay,
and we got very close,
on the phone that day.
it's been about a year now,
and your wounds have all healed,
and my affections toward you were forgotten,
as soon as they were revealed.
we're all three friends now,
but you still like her better than me,
but why not?
she's prettier than i'll ever be.
you wrote her a poem,
thanking her because she cared,
when i was the one, not her,
that had always been there.
your poem telling her you love her inspired me to write you a poem telling you you're ******** shallow
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:35 pm
wow, i like the symbolism topaz.....and i lurk lol. i think we BOTH pop in when the other says something kinky or not.....its scarry lol.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:38 pm
Sketched wow, i like the symbolism topaz.....and i lurk lol. i think we BOTH pop in when the other says something kinky or not.....its scarry lol.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:47 pm
t0paz Sketched wow, i like the symbolism topaz.....and i lurk lol. i think we BOTH pop in when the other says something kinky or not.....its scarry lol. ah1!!! people tell me i flirt, i dunno when im flirting or doing crap like that! hell i cant tell when someone hitting on me! im dense!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! i think i do it subliminally......... stare well..........meh. *hugs kate doll*......*looks around*
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:56 pm
t0paz kristinarr
your poem telling her you love her inspired me to write you a poem telling you you're ******** shallow
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 8:05 pm
Sketched t0paz Sketched wow, i like the symbolism topaz.....and i lurk lol. i think we BOTH pop in when the other says something kinky or not.....its scarry lol. ah1!!! people tell me i flirt, i dunno when im flirting or doing crap like that! hell i cant tell when someone hitting on me! im dense!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! i think i do it subliminally......... stare well..........meh. *hugs kate doll*......*looks around*
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 3:22 pm
I've been thinkin, since I haven't been writing many poems lately I could post prose or somethin.. but than again..I've never tried my hand at writing prose...I dunno...
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 3:47 pm
what exactly is prose writing? ive heard of it once or twice but i have no clue what it is.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:19 am
Sketched what exactly is prose writing? ive heard of it once or twice but i have no clue what it is.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 1:18 am
A shattered blade.
Schuffed and dented armor.
A small ponytail wrapped with an odd cloth.
A torn up old yukata covered with patches.
A scar that marks the left eye on his face.
Marked with a bounty, and an odd tattoo.
He trudges through mud and thickets for days.
Rest is for those who have time to relax.
Justice is for those who are demanded into freedom.
With no ties to a real family, no ties to a friend at all.
And a name that he made up himself.
He is Kirioji, the shogun outlaw.
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 4:21 pm
this poem is to my ex-girlfrind that I hate very much.
The beast comes out of her.
She is like a werewolf,
slashing my emotions.
She is like a vampire,
sucking everthing from me.
She is the She-Devil,
very beautiful but evil to the core.
One thing I can give you,
stay away.
She is the beast and always be the beast!
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