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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:42 pm


Might I recommend locking this topic temporarily, until bloodlines are opened once more? Nobody seems to be capable of looking two posts back to know that they are closed.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:54 pm


i did,but then i remembered the announcement that said that crew could approve so at first i was confused,but then posted also i looked and it wasn;t locked,also those post were make in june, he made the announcement recently

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:06 pm


Greg made his announcement May 30th... The clans/bloodlines after it are not to be looked at. I am not Crew, but I will try to help. also this thread should be cleaned, Tell everyone if they want their clan that they shoud copy it and paste it in their journal, because it is starting to get confusing with all his ooc in here, I will take this to the Chatroom, and if I see anything happening again, I will call you on it.

Also lance is online now.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:21 pm


Bakugan
Explosive, Long Range, Elusive

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Name of Kekkei Genkai/Clan: Bakugan [Blast Eye]


History: A highly elusive clan of people, wielders of the Bakugan Doujutsu are practically myths considering their abilities are so difficult to distinguish from standard shinobi tactics. Also, as masters of long range tactics, they know how to stay out of sight and how to attack from a distance, making their abilities hard to track back to their original source. The Bakugan bloodline is passed down through a group of people which call themselves the Baku, but seldom would any member of their clan admit to being one considering the reputation the clan received in the ninja wars as expert demolitionists, making many people homeless. so, members of this bloodline often keep their identities secret and use their abilities in ways which make them hard to be tracked back to them.

Abilities : Using their unique bloodline and their doujutsu, members of the Baku clan are capable of making long range explosions from a combination of two ninjutsu types, each one performed simultaneously and in conjunction with one another. Using their left eye, they are capable of compressing the air in an area up to 100 meters away and infuse it with chakra. Then, simultaneously, their right eye is capable of creating a single spark in that same area (the user normally winks to accomplish this), which ignites the compressed chakra, resulting in an explosion. Depending on the user and their level of power, the explosions can be quite impressive, but the bigger the explosion, the greater the drawback to the user. When using hand seals to create ninjutsu involving these abilities the effects on the user are lessened, though the techniques themselves tend to have a shorter range.


Rules For Kekkei Genkai/Clan :

1 - Clan members are only capable of using the Fuuton and Katon elements, though they can use both elements as Academy level students.
2 - Focused Eye Blasts have a maximum range of 100 meters and do not require hand seals. The downside is that continuous use degrades their eyes and limits their abilities.
3 - Bakuton Ninjutsu do not have the range of the Eye Blasts, but they do not harm the user. However, they typically they cost more then the average ninjutsu.



Weaknesses:

Elemental Restrictions: Members of the Baku Clan are completely unable to utilize any elements aside from Katon and Fuuton, though they are capable of mastering both.

Eye Degradation: Every use of their specialized Focused Eye Blasts causes damage to the user's eyes, which can result in blindness if used too often. Depending on the size of the explosion created, members suffer from negligible to severe headaches and suffer partial blindness/blurriness in their eyes. Normally, this blurriness can heal over time, but if over-utilized, the user could permanently go blind.

Bakuton Ninjutsu: These ninjutsu typically cost 1.5 times to cost of the average ninjutsu. (This cannot be empowered further by Ability Control or Offensive jutsu bonuses)


Strengths:

Focused Eye Blasts: Require no hand seals or activation from the user excepting the blink of an eye and can be used at range, from safe distances.

Bakuton Ninjutsu: Clan members have access to an exclusive set of ninjutsu techniques which cannot be copied or reproduced by anyone outside the bloodline.

Chakra Control: Katon and Fuuton ninjutsu cost 1 chakra point less for E though B-rank techniques, and 2 points chakra points less for A through S-rank jutsu.



Bloodline Abilities:

Focused Eye Blasts
The signature technique of the Baku Clan, these explosions are their greatest strength, but they can carry a high toll to those who don't use them responsibly. The immensity of the eye blasts as well as the number of times they can be used is determined by the Baku member's current rank. Every Focused Eye Blast creates a certain amount of 'strain' which affects the user's vision, limiting their long range capabilities. All eye blasts require air to be compressed, so they cannot be created directly on top of someone, and must be placed at least a foot away from the target (with the exception of the relatively harmless E-rank blast, which does not require much air compression).

[When used, the air which being compressed to create the technique slightly distorts, making the area somewhat wavy as if looking at something through a thin veil of water. Then, in the instant before the explosion takes place, the small ember, or spark which creates the explosion can be seen. The larger the Focused Eye Blast, the more distorted the compressed air is and the larger the ember (The distorted area being roughly equal to the size of the impending explosion). This all happens very quickly however, within a few seconds, and it is the only indication of the oncoming explosion in the area.]

E-rank Blast - 5% loss of vision in the right eye ... Recovery time = 0 post --> A tiny explosion (1 inch diameter), is useful for little more then a prank, or to ignite open combustibles.

D-rank Blast - 10% loss of vision in the right eye ... Recovery time = 1 posts --> A small explosion (1 foot in diameter),

C-rank Blast - 20% loss of vision in the right eye ... Recovery time = 2 posts --> A medium explosion (5 feet in diameter), blast contains force equal to that of a single explosion tag.

B-rank Blast - 30% loss of vision in both eyes ... Recovery time = 3 posts --> A large explosion (10 feet in diameter), with the force of about 2 explosion tags

A-rank Blast - 40% loss of vision in both eyes ... Recovery time = 4 posts --> 2 large explosions (Each about 15 feet in diameter), each with the force of about 3 explosion tags

S-rank Blast - 50% loss of vision in both eyes ... Recovery time = 5 posts. --> 3 massive explosions (Capable of blanketting an area about 30 feet in diameter), each explosion carrying the force of about 5 explosion tags.

...Given the values above, if at any point the eye strain of the user goes to 100%, that eye(s) goes blind permanently. Recovery time stacks, so every use of a Focused Eye Blast requires X number of posts before the associated eye strain is healed. So, using a C-rank Blast followed by an A-rank blast requires a total of 6 posts to recover from... each post restoring 10% of a user's vision. If 3 posts after those two blasts were used, a B-rank explosion were initiated, Eyestrain would be at 60% again and require 6 posts before full eyesight was restored.

If at anytime eye Strain reaches 70%, the user's right eye begins to bleed and they suffer from extreme headaches. If this occurs, the user's vision is permanently decreased by 25% until healed by a medical ninja. During this time, the user is unable to utilize any Bakuton techniques except from additional uses of the Focused Eye Blasts.



Bloodline Jutsu:

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Me o kuramasu no jutsu (Blast Release: Blinding technique)
Rank: D
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: The most basic of the Bakugan techniques, this technique creates two small explosions in front of the intended victim's eyes, creating a bright flash of light which blinds the opponent for 1 post. The explosions cause no real damage to the eyes, they are simply a means of creating the bright flash.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Kasai Hara (Blast Release: Fire Field)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: Channeling their chakra into the ground, the Bakugan user is capable of creating dozens of columns of compressed air across a 50x50 ft area which they can ignite one by one, causing a series of flame jets to erupt from the ground all across the affected area. The flame columns don't have any explosive force behind them, but they can cause severe burns if they strike an opponent directly. (The jets rise about 5 feet out of the ground)

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Bakuhatsu Todokohru (Blast Release: Delayed Blast)
Rank: C
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: A deceptive technique, the Bakugan user generates a small ember which floats through the air, traveling a maximum distance of about 100 meters towards and intended target, tracking them down and following them. At the beginning user's NEXT post, the ember then suddenly explodes in a dangerous blast. The blast itself has the force of about 2 explosion tags and has a diameter of about 5 feet with a lot of concussive force behind it, capable of tossing anyone around the blast back about 10 feet through the air. The blast can severely burn an opponent and cause extreme concussive force on the body.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Enkou Kabe no jutsu (Blast Release: Flame Wall technique)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: Compressing the air in an area, the Bakugan user is able to spread the compressed air out and then ignite it, generating a large wall of flame between them and their opponent. The wall of flame is about 100 feet wide and 15 feet tall, with intense heat radiating about 3 feet off of the flames themselves on all sides. The wall of flame lasts until dismissed by the user.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Tsuin-kaen Tatsumaki no jutsu (Blast Release: Twin Flame Tornado technique)
Rank: B
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: Compressing two large columns of air into twin spiraling tornadoes, a Bakugan explosion then ignites both whirlwinds, creating flaming tornadoes which fly across the field in criss-crossing patterns towards an opponent. The tornadoes reach heights of about 15 feet and a width of about 10 feet. These tornadoes whip around the field, tearing up the ground they cross over and igniting any flammable object they come in contact with. The heat and fire radiating off of these tornadoes can cause incredibly severe burns across the entire body. The whirling flames act as a vacuum to anything within 5 feet of them, sucking in objects, burning and incinerating anything which they engulf.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Jirai Hara no jutsu (Blast Release: Mine Field technique)
Rank: A
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: This technique creates a massive aerial mine field in an area with about a 50 foot radius from it's epicenter. By compressing the air across this area into a multitude of small spheres, which when one is ignited, explodes with the concussive force of an explosion tag. This explosion then causes a chain reaction throughout the entire field, igniting the rest of the compressed air spheres, causing dozens upon dozens of explosions in the area threatening severe damage to anyone within the area. The concussive force of so many explosions all around the area, aside from possibly burning/maiming the opponent severely, causes anyone within the field to go deaf for the next 2 posts.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Honoh Arashi no jutsu (Blast Release: Flare Storm technique)
Rank: A
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: A variation of the minefield technique and the Flame Wall technique, this jutsu creates a massive wave of explosions across a wide area. The explosions themselves move in a rapid wave across the air and can reach heights up to 30 feet. The explosions trigger across an area of about 200 feet, igniting practically all at once as they travel in a wave, each column of explosions seemingly igniting the next all the way from one side to another. The number of explosions involved in this technique is nearly immeasurable as they explode seemingly endlessly one after the other. Needless to say, this could easily take out an army of opponents with each explosion having the concussive and destructive force of 2 explosion tags exploding in about a 10 foot diameter.

Jutsu Name: Bakuton: Meruton Shippuu (Blast Release: Meltdown Gale)
Rank: S
Elemental Ethnicity: Bakugan Bloodline
Description: The signature masterpiece of the Baku Clan, only a few members in existence have been able to wield this technique and not harm or severely burn themselves in the process. Channeling their chakra into the wind all around them, the Baku clan member compresses the air and forces it forward creating an enormous gale of wind to flow all around them. This kicks up a storm in about a 300 ft long and 100 foot wide field of effect. Then, the user generates an enormous explosion behind them which ignites the entire area, creating a violent inferno of moving explosions which streak across the field, burning and incinerating everything in the area. Those who have seen the technique describe it as a force of hell itself, as from the outside, it appears that the entire area is engulfed in flowing rivers of crimson red heat and explosions, incinerating anything within it except the user (so long as they have the proper control to buffer themselves against the storm).

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 9:29 pm




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Dragonil Clan




History:User Image The Dragonil Clan is said to have been raised by actual Salamanders and Dragons. Each member has been endowed with a few traits of Dragons and Salamanders. They have a heightened sense of smell, hearing, and sight, as well as a set of fangs. Each Dragonil member is also very adept with the Fire Element, even having developed their own Katon Techniques. Each member also bears the mark of the Dragonil clan somewhere upon their body. The Dragonil's are usually of the Ninjutsu or Taijutsu class.

Abilities:
-Katon stronger by 1 Rank
-Heightened Senses
- -1 Chakra Point off of Katon Techniques


Rules For Kekkei Genkai/Clan:
-Fire must be only Element
-Must bear Tattoo somewhere
-Insatiable Appetite
-Can melt Hyouton Techniques at same level or lower


Strengths:
-Fire techniques are stronger by 1 Rank
-Can eat Fire techniques at same level or lower, and gain energy
-Strong senses


Weaknesses:
-Suiton attacks hurts as if they are 1 rank Higher
-Weak Genjutsu


Techniques:

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Name: Shokuji no Karyu
Rank: E-S
Description: With this Technique, the user can devour any fire technique that is shot at them. The catch is, to eat the fire, they must be a higher or equal rank to the flames. Even at the same rank, the fire can still cause minor burns. If the user tries to eat Higher-ranked flame techniques, they will be burned, and possibly killed if the technique is 2 ranks higher. When the user eats the flames, they will gain chakra. Ex: Devours a C rank Fire Tech, gains a C rank amount. CANNOT EAT OWN FIRE!

Name: Fire Dragon's Roar (火竜の咆哮 Karyū no Hōkō)
Rank: C
Description: This technique is similar to the Powerful Fireball technique, though it is stronger. The user's chakra is drawn upon, and a ring of fire with runes around it is created. The user then exhales, creating a large ball of fire which is shout out at the enemy

Name: Fire Dragon's Claw (火竜の鉤爪 Karyū no Kagitsume)
Rank: C
Description: The user will ignite their feet on fire and attack their enemy like that. The flames can also be launched out a bit, giving about an extra foot of distance.

Name: Fire Dragon's Iron Fist (火竜の鉄拳 Karyū no Tekken)
Rank: C
Description: The user will create flames around their hands, and attack the enemies like that. The flames can also be launched out a bit, giving about an extra foot of distance.

Name: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow (火竜の炎肘 Karyū no Enchū)
Rank: C
Description: The user will create a flame at the back of their elbow, which propels their fist forward. Despite the name, the flames can be created at the back of the foot, which propels the leg forward as well. This can give the user a devastating attack power.

Name:Fire Dragon's Wing Attack (火竜の翼撃 Karyū no Yokugeki)
Rank: B
Description: The user will engulf both arms in flames, and have them extend even farther out. Then, they will swing their arms, giving them the appearance of a dragon flapping their wings. The flames will launch out as large streams of fire, which can cause some serious burns.

Name: Fire Dragon's Sword Edge (火竜の剣角 Karyū no Kenkaku)
Rank: B
Description: The user will engulf their body in flames, and launch themselves at their opponent. This is best used if the opponent is incapacitated, as they can only move straight. The upside is this attack is very fast, and very strong, as well as can give enemies 3rd degree burns.

Name: Fire Dragon's Gleaming Flame (火竜の煌炎 Karyū no Kōen)
Rank: A
Description: The user will create fire in their hands, and condense it until it is a small orb. Then, they will clap their hands together, and create a large explosion, capable of causing 3rd degree burns, broken limbs, and probably even death if close enough.




Stage Two: Dragon Slayer
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The user has now unlocked the secrets of the Dragonil Clan, and has discovered new powers. Water Techniques now hurt them alot more than regularly, due to their high dependence in flames. The user will constantly be in a state known as 'Dragonforce' This state allows them to tap into the strongest attacks of the Dragonil Clan, but can also lead to damages of the users body.

Techniques:

Name: Dragonforce
Rank: B
Description: This is a skill that is completely necessary for the user to activate when intending to use the Stage Two Techs. Without this, the other techniques cannot be used. Dragonforce doubles the physical speed and power of the user, but prolonged uses of this can lead to broken bones, and internal hemorrhaging.

Name: Crimson Lotus Fire Dragon Fist (紅蓮火竜拳 Guren Karyū Ken)
Rank: A
Description: The user will light their hands on fire, and continuously attack their opponent. Each punch that is landed creates a minor explosion, capable of causing burns, as well as incapacitating.

Name: Crimson Lotus Exploding Flame Blade (紅蓮爆炎刃 Guren Bakuenjin)
Rank: S
Description: The user will unleash a torrent of flame blades at their opponent, and each will explode as they make contact with anything.


Name: Crimson Lotus Phoenix Sword (紅蓮鳳凰劍 Guren Hōō Ken)
Rank: B
Description: The user will now charge up their entire arm with fire, and release a single devastating blow at their opponent. These flames are capable of scorching or burning, and if the punch itself lands, breaking of the body.





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Original idea based off of the show Fairytail. Property of Lament of the Lonely
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:06 pm


Sound Sight
Otosan Clan

Blind, Sensitive, Altering

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Clan/ Kekei Genkai Background -Otosan clan began within the City Hidden in Darkness, a byproduct of twisted experiments that occurred during the Great War. Due to their cities lack of light, many of the ninja who came from the city were blind and unable to fight the bright attacks of the ninja in the upper world. But there was one clan who seemed to have a unique ability to fight the takeover none the less. This clan had developed a bat like sonar within their senses, a pattern of vibration given off their bodies that gave them a pulsing sight and allowed them to identify objects. This clan won its respects during the war, remaining hidden under the mountains. But a few younger ninja have ventured beyond the city, bringing with them their unique bloodline.

Clan/ Kekkei Genkai Description - The Otosan clan is blind, however their bloodline is a doujutsu derived off of sonic vibrations given off by objects and humans. Otosani clan members can then use this to help them identify ninja, and navigate through areas. These frequencies are ultrasonic, undetectable to all but their clan due to their highly sensitive ears which then translate the frequencies into a “sight” derived of sound. It is used so they can navigate regions and identify others. This superb hearing, however, can also be a downfall, for loud noises such as explosions can be disorienting due to their disruption of the vibrations, and leave the Otosan sensory deprived. As they grow to learn to use the abilities of this sight, they can alter the pitches to leave others under various effects. With this understanding of wave frequencies, Otoninja can learn Raiton and Suuton jutsu in two less posts than other ninja.


Rules & Requirements -
● Members of this clan MUST be naturally blind.
● As with all bloodlines, the clan’s jutsu are limited by rank.
● Members of this clan are extremely noise sensitive. As such, explosions of any type leave you without sight for the number of meters you can hear (see below) divided by ten. You can still hear, however, just not distinguish.
● You must have either Suuton, Raiton, or Fuuton elemental affinities.
● Altering frequencies requires the use of jutsu.
● Your hearing sensitivity increases as you gain rank allowing for greater range. Genin (20meters), Chuunin(30m), Jonin(40m), Ronin (50m) ANBU (60m), Kage (70m)
●You must submit a rp battle link to have this bloodline.



Abilities -
● Members of this clan can identify people via their “aura”, the natural vibration they give off
● Due to their blindness, the Otosan clan is immune to genjutsu.
● Clan members may learn Raiton, Sound, and Suuton jutsu in two less posts than normal ninja.
● Utalizing high pitches, they can alter others frequencies to create adverse effects. This requires jutsu.
●Members of this clan can speak to others using their vibrations. Others of the clan will understand, normal ninja (unless included) will not.




Clan/ Kekei Genkai Jutsu -

Sound Sight- Passive Ability This allows the members of the Otosan clan to detect the frequencies which allow them to see. They can detect things within a range as determined by the rank rules and guidelines. If an explosion occurs this ability is disrupted as by the guidelines.
Genin
Disorientation: D-ranked
By using their chakra to manipulate an opponent’s frequency, they can cause their vision to waver. This is useful to avoid attacks and cause mild effects such as nausea and dizziness. Any opponents speed rank is cut by one rank. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts and cannot be used for 3 after it wears off.
Sound Wave: D-ranked.
The user of this jutsu claps their hands together to create a wave of sound. Like a wave of wind it can strike objects in the air and halt their progress. This jutsu also can be used to push opponents back 2m, but may not be used more than once every four posts.
Echoing Steps: D-ranked
The user can alter the frequencies of an area to conceal their own noise while echoing the sounds of an opponent’s movements. This allows them to move silently until they attack.

Genin/Chuunin
Pitch of Hell: C-ranked
This jutsu alters a frequency from ultrasonic to a high pitch squeak that can damage an opponents hearing temporarily (3 posts). This pitch can also be used against summons to negate physical attacks.
Twenty-one gun salute: C-ranked
This jutsu fires off seven balls of concentrated sound that are three meters across. They move much like wind jutsu and produce a low tone when fired. If an opponent is struck by one of these balls they can be thrown back several meters.
Mimicry: C-ranked
This jutsu alters a person’s frequency so that they take on the appearance and voice of another ninja. This disguise can be held up to 15 posts unless discovered.

Chuunin/Jonin
Sound Wave- B ranked
This jutsu creates a solid wave of sound that travels at medium speeds. This wall has the substance of earth and makes a middle tone C pitch when fired. It can be manipulated by the users chakra.
Oto Shield: B-ranked
This jutsu creates a shield made of sound around the user that can block all C-ranked and lower techniques. B-ranked techniques create an explosion. This shield can be maintained up to 4 posts.
Slicing Current: B-ranked
This jutsu creates a blast of slicing sound which covers an area of 3 meters wide and several hundred deep. This tunnels wind can cut flesh to ribbons, and slice through all defenses except doton.
Sound Copy: B-ranked
This jutsu creates a replica of the user that acts as a bushin. It can be independent of the user and acts like a shadow clone until destroyed. When its destroyed the clone bursts to create a wave which bursts ear drums if the opponent is close.
Silent Fury- B-ranked
This allows the user to move silently for up to 5 posts with an increased speed. During this brief period, if they manage to get in hand to hand combat range, they can alter an opponent’s frequency so that they are put into a genjutsu like state. By altering the pitch and frequency, they can control this world. This jutsu can be broken in the same way as genjutsu.

Jonin/ANBU
Torture of the Body: A ranked
A burst of sound that alters a persons pitches to cause a series of pains to shift through their nerves on contact, causing pain similar to being cut by alcohol dipped knives.
Dog Whistle: A ranked
Most commonly used against animal summons this creates a frequency that is painful for animals to hear, immobilizing them for two posts.




Clan / Kekei Genkai Members
● Slate Otosan [dcpruden]
• Seseni Okazi [Tempted Goddess]
● -X Duo Yiro X-





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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:18 am


Alright usually VCs take care of these but since no one has seen them I will step in and if one of them see this and disagree with me then they can simply overrule me. I must say that each of these clans are interesting.

@Lament and Misah Sixx
Your bloodlines are accepted.

@Cobra
I like your bloodline but I feel like the jutsu may be a little too powerful due to their explosive nature. I think you will need to nerf each of them or raise the costs of them. This basically turns a single person into a one man nuke team/ bombing squad. They will need a bit more of a limit onto them then the 1.5 additional costs thing.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:49 am


Mistah BomChickaWahWah
Alright usually VCs take care of these but since no one has seen them I will step in and if one of them see this and disagree with me then they can simply overrule me. I must say that each of these clans are interesting.

@Lament and Misah Sixx
Your bloodlines are accepted.

@Cobra
I like your bloodline but I feel like the jutsu may be a little too powerful due to their explosive nature. I think you will need to nerf each of them or raise the costs of them. This basically turns a single person into a one man nuke team/ bombing squad. They will need a bit more of a limit onto them then the 1.5 additional costs thing.

The jutsu are under review by Hintie in the Custom jutsu thread.

...but in my defense, they aren't simply a one man nuke team. Those eye explosions are taxing to the user and those bloodline skills have high costs for their rank... which cannot be lessened or reduced by any other means.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 3:21 pm


@Cobra
Ahh alright then, well overall the bloodline is accepted just get hinotes approval on the jutsu.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:19 pm


Zues's Touch
[ Raikou Clan]
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Description:
Many eons ago the Gods walked the earth. There was one called Zues: Lord of the Sky and Master of Lightning. We ruled over the other god's with an iron fist,making sure his will was obeyed. All gods,including Zues,courted and eventually married mortal women. Zues raised his first children in peaceful times,letting them have a relevetly normal life with no knowledge there father was a god. It wasnt until the Children showed signs of Mastery of Lightning that Zues became worried. Henceforth he banned all of the gods from romantic ties to mortals and ascended into the heavens where he has stayed. Throughout the Centuries the Children of Zues have breed,and amazingly kept there powers. They call themselves the Raikou Clan. The Children are much like there father. They have short tempers and amazing abilities in the art of manipulating lightning. They also have an aura of leadership around them. They are naturally born to lead and people usually defer to them on choices. Most Raikages have been one of the Children. This is their story.

Rules

• The Original Children of Zues were half god half mortal. So many generations have passed since then that any traces of godliness other then the power grant have long since vanished
• While,yes, you are incredibly strong you are not Super Human. You have limits. The more the use your strength the more of a strain it puts on your body. The harder you push yourself the faster you tire.
• Fuuton Jutsu Goes up one rank when used against you
• Raiton Jutsu Goes down one rank when used against you
• Raiton Must be Your Main Element
• You CANNOT have Fuuton as a second element
• Due to the impulsiveness of these Shinobi they are soley focused on offence and offence only. The ability to learn genjutsu isnt beyond them as much as it is that they see it as beneath them. It is in the mentality that-'Why break their mind when I could break their bones?'
• Ther Impulse to lead other must be present in your RPC's Rp occasionally. Ex: When forming a team you always volunteer to be leader
• Can only be a Ninjutsu or Taijutsu user



Abilities

• You Strength goes up by one rank,meaning that a normal genin can go toe to toe with a normal chuunin,same with speed.
• You Learn Raiton Jutsu Two Posts Quicker
• You Learn tTaijutsu One Post Quicker
• You Have Zues's Aura. It makes you a natural born leader and gives you the impulse to lead. Other around you will also trust you more
• Your Naturally Stronger then normal Shinobi of your rank even with no strength training



Jutsu


Name: Fuzen Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Partial Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: D
Description: This is the first step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a limb on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is very short [1 Post]

Name: Kyousei Bushi No Jutsu [ Great Peircing Jutsu ]
Rank: D
Description: The user will grab just about anything with a point and will call upon thir lightning armor. They shroud the object in a casing of the armor so tightly packed that even a toothpick could penetrate a tree. However something of lesser mass can not do so much against somehting of greater mass. Example: A toothpick would not do as much against a boulder as a kunai would.
Note:No Auto Destroying others weapons,if contact is held with a object that this jutsu has ben used on then it will eventually break but not at once

Name: Raiton Tama no Jutsu [ Lightning Shot Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will shroud his hand in the armor. He will raise his hand and bring his pointer finger to point at the targer. Then on will the lightning armor surrounding his hand will change shape into a bolt,and fire at the target the finger is pointing at.

Name: Baburu Kassha no Jutsu [ Bubble Sheild Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will preform the handsigns and place his hands on the ground. A Shroud of armor will expand and form a bubble like sheild. The sheild is 3 meters high and 4 meters in diameter. The backside is that organic life forms can pass through wile clone,projectiles and jutsu of equal or lesser rank cannot. A jutsu of higher rank of a Fuuton jutsu of lower rank can break the sheild. Note that the users hands must remain touching the ground for the sheild to stay active

Name: Hangaku Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Incomplete Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: B
Description: This is the second step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a two limbs on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is short [3 Posts]

Name: Tsuin Tiger no Jutsu [ Twin Tiger no Jutsu ]
Rank: B
Description: After preforming the handsigns the user will coat his arms in the lightning armor. Soon afterwords it will peel off and form twin tigers composed entirly of the armor. These tigers can attack but will be destroyed after 3 hits or a C Rank Fuuton Jutsu

Name: Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: A
Description: This is the final step in the Lightning Release Armor's three forms. The user will be totally and completely encased in a feild of electricity. All there Raiton jutsu while in this form are one rank stronger as well as there strength and speed.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 1:47 pm


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Alright well I generally like this bloodline but you will need more limits. They need burnouts for their strength and speed and clearly defined results for what happens when they go over the limit. They will also need to be vulnerable to genjutsu and unable to Kai until they reach special jounin.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 1:54 pm


This version is approved. No stage 2 though.

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I RELIZE YOU ALREADY HAVE ONE,I JUST THOUGHT I COULD IMPORVE ON IT
I ALSO HAVE A STAGE TWO MADE FOR THIS CLAN BUT WILL NOT POST IT UNTIL LATER
I WILL ALSO POST MY VERSION AFTER THIS REQUEST




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Name: Hoshigaki Clan[Stage One]
Description:The Hoshigakis originated from the Mist Village decending from a long line of Water Masters.The members of this clan spent so much time in the water that the nutrients and pigments in the water dyed their skin blue.Combines with the Genetic defect of having a pair of Gills on your neck and Razor Sharp teeth it gives them a rather ominous appearance.The Children of the Hoshigaki all learned to Master Suiton Jutsu and like their Predacesors all were born with Massive Amounts of Chakara.Hoshigakis are known for their appitite for Danger and Excitment and their love of the Water along with a High adeptcy for learning Buijutsu(Swordplay). Hoshigakis have increadibly tough skin and can glance off all but the toughest blows due to the hardening of their skin from absorbing Nutrients in water. Hoshigakis are however,suceptible to Raiton justu much more then regular Shinobi due to the fact that their cells are altered thus conducting electrict much better then a normal Mans alowing greater voltage to reach organs and such. A Hoshigaki is feircly loyal to one person in their life and will follow any command given by that person without question.The Hoshigakis are still a threiving tribe in the Mist Village continuing their Age old traditions.
Strengths:
•Can Learn All Suiton Style In Two Less Posts
•Is Very Fast with speed Equivelent to a ninja of one rank higher
•Suiton Jutsu Is one Rank Stronger
•Chakra Level is equal to that of a Skilled Ninja of one rank higher
Weaknesses:
•Raiton used on Hoshigaki is one rank higher
•Must Be introduced to water of some sort once every 10 posts
•Easy To Provoke into a fight due to the fact that their instincts crave battle
•Must Give Their absolute loyalty to one person,Forcing them to follow any command given short of suicide
•Takes on post longer to Learn Raiton or Katon Jutsu's
Ability:
•Water Breathing
•Natural Skill With a Blade
•Shark Sence [Can Tell the Weakest Shinobi out of a group of people]
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:


Jutsu

Name: Suiton:Rishino no Dianot(Lake Creation)
Rank: E-S
Description:One of the Most Adaptable and Adversable Suiton Techniques of the Hoshigaki. This technique was a favorite of Kisame who would use it to fill the landscape with water. The user will do a handsign and hold it while he builds up the water in his gut. After sucessfully building up the Water he will let it out in one massive burst from his mouth. He can let it out horizontally being able to repel many things at once or down able to form a column of water which he can rise upon. The amount of water formed depends upon rank and amount of Chakra.


Acadamny Student:About 10 Gallons Worth;Very Minimal
Genin:Normally about 30 Gallons enough to preform most D rank Water Jutsu
Chunin:100-200 Gallons;Can flood a small area.This is where the quantity of water greatly increases
Jounin:300-500 Gallons;Enough to Flood a Reasonably sized area
S Ranked:500-1,000 Gallons:Enough to Flood Entire Areas of Villages,complete Mastery of all Water Techniques Is required to produce this Amount

::If you have a Demon,due to higher chakra it increases by X1.5::


Name: Suiton:Mizu Hashu Shiniti(Water Spit Technique) Rank: D
Description: This is a Quiet basic jutsu of the Hoshigaki.They take a rather large inhale and quickly release three to five small bullets of water at their opponent. It is similiar to the Water Bullets jutsu except this requires no handsign

Name:Suion:Mizu Nishti Hokaru(Water Levitating Defence)
Rank: D
Description: This Technique Utilizes the Hoshigakis Mastery of Water.They preform the handsigns and spit out a small amount of water which hovers around their body.The water will automaticly block one blow each time it is used before dissipating into the ground

Name: Mizu Nami Jutsu(Water Wave Jutsu)
Rank:C
Description: The User will preform a handsign which afterwords they cross their arms forming a X.When they slash their arms downwards a Wave will rocket across,Water,Earth or rock at whoever is standing in front of it.The direction cannot be changed once the wave is released

Name: Mizu Nechinechi Tama Jutsu(Water Sticky Bullets Jutsu)
Rank: C
Description: Similiar to the Suiton:Mizu Hashu Shiniti(Water Spit Technique) the Mizu Nechinechi Tame Jutsu utilizes the Same concept except this time the Projectiles are larger,about 1 foot across and stick to the thing it hits. If it were to hit a enemy it would cling to them slowing their movements the more that piles up.If it connects to the ground and someone steps in it then it will be transfered to them. This jutsu is deadly in the hands of a master but also is great for incapacitating a opponent

Name: Suji Hidai Jutsu(Muscle Extension Jutsu)
Rank:B
Description: The user must be wet or standing in water to preform this Jutsu.The user will absorb the nutrients from the water and temporarily convert them to protiens thus dramaticly increasing their strength for a period of time(5 Posts).

Name: Shiniko Mizu Buki Jutsu(True Water Weapon Jutsu)
Rank:B
Description: The User will preform a handsign and water wil wrap itself around his arms.The water will at the users will take the form of any simple weapon at any size that they wish as long as there is enough water.The water can form any solid weapon meaning no bows or projectiles.

Name: Kyo Bokafu Jutsu(Large Waterfall Jutsu)
Rank:B
Description: The User wwill preform the handsign and aim his mouth to where he wishs the water to be directed.The User then Will Spit out decent amount of water will increadible force.If the User is looking down he will raise up as he spits the water making a jump higher or simply a way to quickly rise.If the user is looking straight or to the side it will unlease the water at whatever it is looking at with the force that would push you yards away into a object and would cause great trama from the force of such a hit.

Name: Sugoi Mizu Kabe Jutsu(Geat Wall of Water Jutsu) Rank: A
Description: The User will preform the handsigns and take use of a soarce of water at hand.He will then cause a wall of water to rise 10 Meters across and a Meter Thick.Most all projectiles will be stopped by this body of water that is,like the prision jutsu,as tough as steel.If someone attempted to charge through it they would eneter and find themselves unable to move.This Jutsu will last for a moderate time(3 Posts).

Name: Mizu Fuma Bakuden Jutsu(Water Shark Bomb Jutsu)
Rank:A
Description: The User will preform the handsigns and spit out a body of water resembling a shark.The Shark will then either leap at its target or fall into the ground.The user can make the shark rise from the ground and direct it underground at will.When and if the shark connects with its target it will unleash a blast equivelent to three exploding tags.

Name: Mizu Sugoi Kibaku Gachan Nami(Water Great Exploding Colliding Wave)
Rank: A
Description: The User will preform the handsigns and take advantage of a body of water or will spit out their own for this jutsu.The user will accumulate the water as it forms into a 50 Meter high Gaint Wave.The Wave can be controlled by the User who is usually riding on top.The Wave can take any form that the user wishs it to and can be formed back into a wave at will.If the Wave connects with its target it explodes with force equivelent to an exploding tag along with the pure force of hundreads of gallons of water hitting you.The water will then reform later if able to.

Name:Mizu Ryoshi Kira Jutsu(Water Hunter Killer Jutsu)
Rank:A
Description: The User will soak the ground if standing on earth by Suiton Jutsu or some other meathod.Once the ground is wet or if they are standing on water the user will preform the handsigns and instantly 3 Clones Will Rise from the Water and Attack the user.The Clones can be killed after Two hits but can regenerate from any nearby body of water making them hard to destroy

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:06 pm


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Many eons ago the Gods walked the earth. There was one called Zues: Lord of the Sky and Master of Lightning. We ruled over the other god's with an iron fist,making sure his will was obeyed. All gods,including Zues,courted and eventually married mortal women. Zues raised his first children in peaceful times,letting them have a relevetly normal life with no knowledge there father was a god. It wasnt until the Children showed signs of Mastery of Lightning that Zues became worried. Henceforth he banned all of the gods from romantic ties to mortals and ascended into the heavens where he has stayed. Throughout the Centuries the Children of Zues have breed,and amazingly kept there powers. They call themselves the Raikou Clan. The Children are much like there father. They have short tempers and amazing abilities in the art of manipulating lightning. They also have an aura of leadership around them. They are naturally born to lead and people usually defer to them on choices. Most Raikages have been one of the Children. This is their story.

Rules

• The Original Children of Zues were half god half mortal. So many generations have passed since then that any traces of godliness other then the power grant have long since vanished
• While,yes, you are incredibly strong you are not Super Human. You have limits. The more the use your strength the more of a strain it puts on your body. The harder you push yourself the faster you tire.
• Fuuton Jutsu Goes up one rank when used against you
• Raiton Jutsu Goes down one rank when used against you
• Raiton Must be Your Main Element
• You CANNOT have Fuuton as a second element
• Due to the impulsiveness of these Shinobi they are soley focused on offence and offence only. The ability to learn genjutsu isnt beyond them as much as it is that they see it as beneath them. It is in the mentality that-'Why break their mind when I could break their bones?'
• Ther Impulse to lead other must be present in your RPC's Rp occasionally. Ex: When forming a team you always volunteer to be leader
• Can only be a Ninjutsu or Taijutsu user
• Follow the Burnout and Genjutsu Rules



Abilities

• You Strength goes up by one rank,meaning that a normal genin can go toe to toe with a normal chuunin,same with speed.
• You Learn Raiton Jutsu Two Posts Quicker
• You Learn tTaijutsu One Post Quicker
• You Have Zues's Aura. It makes you a natural born leader and gives you the impulse to lead. Other around you will also trust you more
• Your Naturally Stronger then normal Shinobi of your rank even with no strength training
• The Burnout- By going over the post limit for the Lightning Armor you enter the Burnout Stage. This stage is one in which you return to your normal parameters but all attacks on you do twice the damage as your body is physicly exhausted. Your speed and strength drop as well as your muscles have tore to a great extent. I recomend you avoid at all costs
• Genjutsu Susceptibility- You are very weak against genjutsu. You do not understand,nor will you ever understand them. You cant even learn to Kai out of them until your a Jounin! My advice: Punch em out before they get in your head!



Jutsu


Name: Fuzen Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Partial Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: D
Description: This is the first step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a limb on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is very short [1 Post]

Name: Kyousei Bushi No Jutsu [ Great Peircing Jutsu ]
Rank: D
Description: The user will grab just about anything with a point and will call upon thir lightning armor. They shroud the object in a casing of the armor so tightly packed that even a toothpick could penetrate a boulder.

Name: Raiton Tama no Jutsu [ Lightning Shot Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will shroud his hand in the armor. He will raise his hand and bring his pointer finger to point at the targer. Then on will the lightning armor surrounding his hand will change shape into a bolt,and fire at the target the finger is pointing at.

Name: Baburu Kassha no Jutsu [ Bubble Sheild Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will preform the handsigns and place his hands on the ground. A Shroud of armor will expand and form a bubble like sheild. The sheild is 3 meters high and 4 meters in diameter. The backside is that organic life forms can pass through wile clone,projectiles and jutsu of equal or lesser rank cannot. A jutsu of higher rank of a Fuuton jutsu of lower rank can break the sheild. Note that the users hands must remain touching the ground for the sheild to stay active

Name: Hangaku Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Incomplete Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: B
Description: This is the second step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a two limbs on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is short [3 Posts]

Name: Tsuin Tiger no Jutsu [ Twin Tiger no Jutsu ]
Rank: B
Description: After preforming the handsigns the user will coat his arms in the lightning armor. Soon afterwords it will peel off and form twin tigers composed entirly of the armor. These tigers can attack but will be destroyed after 3 hits or a C Rank Fuuton Jutsu

Name: Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: A
Description: This is the final step in the Lightning Release Armor's three forms. The user will be totally and completely encased in a feild of electricity. All there Raiton jutsu while in this form are one rank stronger as well as there strength and speed.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:11 pm


Woah woah woah, no added speed and chakra for Hoshigaki. That makes no sense (Samehada is what gave Kisame his chakra, it wasnt natural). And "Natural skill with a blade" is far too vauge.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:17 pm


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Woah woah woah, no added speed and chakra for Hoshigaki. That makes no sense (Samehada is what gave Kisame his chakra, it wasnt natural). And "Natural skill with a blade" is far too vauge.


Actually,not true sir. Many people think so but after many questions The creators proved that,yes,Hoshigaki's are born with much Chakra. If you read through the Chapter dealing with Kisame's past in the Hidden Mist the Mizukages directly comments on Kisames immense chakra. The speed ,I agree, could be taken out however but the Chakra needs to stay as the whole bloodline revolves around chakra usage in mass amounts of water
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