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 Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:37 pm
Barith:  Mmm, its just an uber strong strong shield,nothing special about it,besides that.so please try again
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Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:58 pm
Sofa: If we can't have a weapon that absorbs shakra im pretty sure we can;t have one that drains shakra as well, so please edit that and try again
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:41 pm
Name of weapon: Scorpio Who owns the weapon: Hurdy Where it was found/Who made it: The elder's of Hurdy's tribe The Range of the weapon: 3-4 feet Weakness: 1. being a short sword, it has a close range restriction 2. not able to "chop" (no cutting off limbs ect.) 3. poison cannot fly off blade, must be skin contact. Description: A short sword made by the elders in Hurdy's Tribe. It is named scorpio due to it's secret ability. The sword was built with a chamber in the hilt. There is a small opening on the cutting side of the blade that leads to this chamber. It is used for poison, Scorpion poison is placed into the hilt and it coats the bladed side of the weapon. THis poison causes temporary paralyse, for 3 turns. Rp Sample: Hurdy looked through the window at the sleeping kage. His mission was to end the man's life. He silently opened the window and entered the room. Sticking to the shaows, he slowly drew Scorpio. Placing the poison into the hilt, he watched the blade suddenly get moist. Hurdy would then pull the covers back without waking the man, and quickly slide the blade across his arm. His eyes snapped open, but by now the poison had worked it's course and he would be un able to move.
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:03 pm
@Hurdy:Hmm its a good weapon but the rp sample is a little short your make it longer please thank you
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:54 pm
I AM IN THE PROCESS OF REVIEWING ALL SUBMITTED CUSTOM WEAPONS WITHIN THE PAST THREE PAGES. PLEASE BARE WITH ME AND CEASE POSTING CUSTOM WEAPONS UNTIL MY NEXT POST WITH FINAL JUDGEMENTS, THANK YOU.
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Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:20 pm
@Tinymin: DENIED. That poison is way too powerful, especially for someone of a genin rank. Poisons have stages that should be gone through in a few posts instead of one. Not only that, but I would limit it to one type of poison instead of three (including one that is a gas.). Finally, a weakness for this would be its frailty. As Martin Spiralware pointed out, the weapon being hollow makes it very fragile. A direct strike from another weapon would cause it to fracture and break.
@Zetsubou: Really? Well repost the application so I can take a look then.
@Mistah Bow: This is APPROVED. Good sized rp sample, good weaknesses, and an interesting design that I haven't seen in a custom weapon.
@Almost: I like the idea, but kind of want a longer RP sample going into a bit more detail about how you'll use the weapon in combat. Write up a good one and I'll approve it.
@Barith: Saying it's "Nearly Unbreakable" doesn't give me much to go on. What is the limit of its strength? Not only that, but it's a metal shield. It would be SEVERELY weak against raiton because you're basically carrying around a large conducter for the element, and katon probably of chuunin rank and higher would melt that thing down.
@Urban Superstition: If this weapon doesn't have anything special about it other than being large, then you could just put it in your profile without putting it here to be accepted. If it's basically just a regular broadsword, then you don't have to go through here to wait for it to be approved 3nodding
@Water Lilly: APPROVED! I like it as well as the concept behind it. Another interesting one.
@Vanillabear: Agreed with Gregar, it is actually a direct rule. DENIED, sorry.
@Hurdy: I need a post count for how quick the paralysis takes affect, and a better RP sample.
@Everyone: Two things: First and formost, except an apology from myself for being entirely too inactive and neglecting this duty that is in fact my own. I'll be checking these once daily from today on so that this doesn't pile up. SECONDLY, people I'm going to make it a rule soon that you cannot just inherit a poison weapon. I'm seeing at least three of these per page, and to be honest genin don't have an extensive knowledge of poisons without training. So, soon it is possible that you will have to train yourself in how to make poisons BEFORE submitting a weapon with that capability.
So to recap: Mistah & White:
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Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:21 pm
Sry to post here Lou but about poisons (kind of a expert)...
Poisons needs stages-
There are different types of poisons meaning they should not last the same amount of time-
People need to say the amount of posts it takes to create a single vial of poison. That vial lasts for 1 fight unless washed off.-
The more stages of a poison the more posts you should have to make it. (my 6 stage poison required 25 posts to make)-
Be original and scientific about it-
Also not every single person knows how to make poison.. that being said i suggest only puppeteers or straight weapon users summit weapons with poison.-
Also i think poison should be limited to chuunin +, cause in all fairness... if you make a awesome poison for a academy student.. and you just happen to hit lets say a saanin with it... that basically just made you stronger then the saanin (in theory) Even then its high doubtful that a academy student or genin would even have the knowledge of the human body, and poisons, antidotes, and other things... With this being said... I think there should be a set amount of posts where people head to the hospital in there village to learn about all of that so they can start making poisons for their weapons.. this would limit the amount of people using poison... cause we all know... there arnt that many medical ninja around >.<
Agian sry lou >.< jsut had to throw my 2 cents in
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:26 pm
 Name of weapon: Antrum Luna Who owns the weapon: Serenity White Where it was found/Who made it: Deep within in the snow country The Range of the weapon: Close range to medium range Weakness: Once the user runs out of chakra the blade is rendered useless. It absorbs 2 points of chakra every post that the blade is out and in use. Description: The blade is hazy black with white marking right above the hilt and at the tip of the blade. Both marking seem to have a rose pattern to it with Celtic Moon symbols to accompany it. Rp Sample: During her journey back to the Land of Snow she came upon her parent’s estate. She walked through the house, which was silent. It wasn’t till something clicked in her head. The silence was forced. She looked around and spotted the odd shadows. When she stepped closer, several ninja popped out from the nearby village. They threw questions at her asking her about the blade. ”Tell us where it is!” they kept saying. She just growled and attacked. This was her home! Everything was ransacked because of that blade! Her rage overtook her and she battled with a new strength. Once the ninja was dead or they ran away, she walked to the back. Outside in the snow were her parent’s graves. The stones were demolished and the coffins were tossed about. Angry tears came to her eyes as she re-buried them. When she was done she noticed a key. She grabbed it and noticed the sign on it. It matched the one to locked door in the basement. She walked over to the door and unlocked it. She walked through a narrow hallway till she came to another door. She opened it and saw two blades on an alter. She walked towards it and saw a scroll next to it. She took the scroll slowly and opened it. Serenity, If you are reading this then your mother and I are dead. We did everything we could to protect you and these blades. Your birth given right. They are called Antrum Luna because when you use the main attack the mark is that of a crescent moon. The blades you up chakra though. So you must be careful. The more you train the longer it takes for the blade to zap you chakra. Takes these blades go back to where you came. Back the Leaf Village. Live your life and become what you always wanted to be. Your mother and I love you so much. We’re sorry we failed to protect you and see you grow up into a wonderful ninja. We’ll always look over you Serenity. We love you.Serenity cried for the first time in many years. She took the blades and strapped them to her back and went back to her new home. As she was walking back she was ambushed again by several groups of ninja. They saw blades in her back and attacked her without a thought. She dodged most of them soon deciding she would have to use the blades. She took them out of the sheath and felt her chakra flow into the blades automatically. She went jumped high and held the blades in a cross and came down a group of ninja. The blades sliced through the ninja and ground like butter. She smirked and battled the rest of them, easily slicing through their weapons. When she was done, it was snowing and her blades were covered in blood. She dragged them across the snow and dried them. After sheathing them she noticed how exhausted she felt. She looked at the marks on the ground and saw how deep it went. Almost 6 feet! She turned around and walked away from the bloody scene.
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:42 pm
Those blades seem more like a weakness than a strength, what does the chakra DO?
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:42 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Those blades seem more like a weakness than a strength, what does the chakra DO? Your talking about mines? I just have to make sure?
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:51 pm
Oh! Its ok. The blades may seem like a weakness but they happen to be very good. They cut deeper than any other blade and the chakra pushed into the blade, makes it more stronger. When used right the blades can cut through a boulder.
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:54 pm
You should put that in the description and your RP sample. It's a good story for where the weapon came from, but what they want to know is what the weapon does.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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