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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 3:48 pm
Username: Hinote Tosatsu
RPC Name: Kazoku Segare
RPC Rank: Special Jounin, B Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: [N/A]
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Support, Combo
Shinobi Weaknesses: Heavy Tread, Genjutsu Intolerant
Talent Description: Sunaton Mastery
Segare is able to learn all sand jutsu. Rank limitation from Extra Element does not apply.
Talent Sacrifice: Must have the Extra Element: Sunaton chuunin rank benefit. Cannot gain a final element at jounin rank.
How it happened: Eager to learn everything there was about being a ninja, Segare advanced quickly, unlocking both of his natural elements early in his career. Not satisfied, he continued pushing, trying to unlock a third, but without properly knowing how, he instead discovered the method of combining his first two elements together to control a third, sand. Believing this to be his third element, he ceased his attempts and focused on gaining mastery over his sand abilities, unknowingly locking away his ability to gain a third natural element, and allowing the sand to take it's place.
As a result of this, Segare, who was capable of attaining four elements, is only capable of using three. However, the talent he could have gained with his fourth element is merged with his third, allowing him to reach the same level of mastery with that element as he could with his first two. ~ Username: Hinote Tosatsu
RPC Name: Shikaku
RPC Rank: Academy Student, E Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Kansatsuryoku [X]
Profession: Espionage Specialist
Ninja Types: Support, Speed
Shinobi Weaknesses: Taijutsu Incompetent, Weak Bodied
Talent Description: Vanish
Shikaku is, and has always been, able to use a slightly altered version of the Vanish jounin rank benefit. Like the benefit, when he chooses to do so, Shikaku is able to vanish entirely from the senses of anyone who cannot already sense him. Meaning that he must first be completely still, unseen, and silent. If the opponent is able to smell him he must also have masked his smell. So long as he remains motionless and does nothing to draw attention to himself, he is impossible to sense, even if the opponent is looking directly at him.
Unlike the rank benefit, there are a few extra limitations on Shikaku's ability to do this. Firstly, his Stealth must be higher than the opponent's Perception. If the opponent's perception is higher than Shikaku's stealth, Vanish has no effect. If however Shikaku's Stealth is of equal rank to the opponent's Perception, Vanish will only work if he is completely hidden. The opponent will not be able to sense him normally, but any extrasensory skills will be able to locate him, and if he is seen normally he will be visible, canceling the effect.
As Shikaku grows older and stronger, so too does his skill at vanishing. At D rank, and every rank beyond that, he gains one increment rank to his stealth while using Vanish, making him able to hide more easily and efficiently from stronger enemies.
Like the rank benefit, Vanish lasts as long as Shikaku remains fully motionless. However, if his stealth is at least double his opponent's perception, he is able to move without canceling the effect, so long as the opponent cannot see his movement.
Talent Sacrifice: Shikaku has no elemental affinities, making him unable to use any elemental ninjutsu.
How it happened: As a child in the orphanage, Shikaku was always picked on, being the smallest and weakest person there. As a coping mechanism, he learned to hide. First hiding himself, sneaking around to evade the notice of the other children. As he grew older, and continued this habit even after the bullying mostly stopped, he grew more skilled in doing so, and began to notice that when he was hiding, people wouldn't notice him even when they were looking straight at him. Edit: Changed the movement bit to only require not being visible, cause otherwise it was, well, useless 90% of the time.
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:04 pm
Approved: Although as you know said approval can be revoked if the Talent proves OP or whatever. Or if it is abused, though I trust you wont it need be said.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:59 pm
Username: Hikaro_Rin
RPC Name: Timmy
RPC Rank: E
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Not Yet Applicable
Profession: Sealing
Ninja Types: Offensive, Combo user
Ninja Weakness: Heavy Tread, Genjutsu intollerant
Talent Description: Timmy has the ability to pass as a complete stranger. Even those who know his face (be it from images or even face to face interaction) tend to pass the likeness on as a mere coincidence. This also allows him to sell his roles more easily, while he can keep up the act.
Talent Sacrifice:Those who have worked close with Timmy for a long time (specifically when under cover) become immune to this effect. Because Timmy falls so deeply into his roles, it is entirely possible for Timmy to work against his own better interests to sustain the character.
Doesnt work immediately after interacting with a person for obvious reasons. This also makes it impossible for him to immediately try a different act on the same person.
How it happened: Through lots of practice in the arts of acting, paired with Timmy's mental peculiarity, Timmy has the ability to completely fall into a given role. This creates a powerful illusion on par with a full henge.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 9:45 pm
Hikaro_rin Username: Hikaro_Rin
RPC Name: Timmy
RPC Rank: E
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Not Yet Applicable
Profession: Sealing
Ninja Types: Offensive, Combo user
Ninja Weakness: Heavy Tread, Genjutsu intollerant
Talent Description: Timmy has the ability to pass as a complete stranger. Even those who know his face (be it from images or even face to face interaction) tend to pass the likeness on as a mere coincidence. This also allows him to sell his roles more easily, while he can keep up the act.
Talent Sacrifice:Those who have worked close with Timmy for a long time (specifically when under cover) become immune to this effect. Because Timmy falls so deeply into his roles, it is entirely possible for Timmy to work against his own better interests to sustain the character.
Doesnt work immediately after interacting with a person for obvious reasons. This also makes it impossible for him to immediately try a different act on the same person.
How it happened: Through lots of practice in the arts of acting, paired with Timmy's mental peculiarity, Timmy has the ability to completely fall into a given role. This creates a powerful illusion on par with a full henge.
This one doesn't really work. Simply put, it takes too much control of the situation out of everyone's hands, and nobody is going to want to abide by it. Heck, a lot of characters, even among those we already have, are built around concepts that this would throw out the window. It just kind of falls into a strange area where it sounds fun, but would cause too much rage and frustration in the actual RP. Not to mention it's a bit odd with your types/weaknesses. I'd say go ahead and RP as if it were true, but it can't have the extra power of a talent for the same reasons I can't approve pickpocketing talents or similar.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 02, 2014 9:40 pm
Username: Kagetsukiko
RPC Name: Kageko Yume(Maybe? She's not really made yet.)
RPC Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Planning on getting a demon eventually
Profession: Espionage Specialist
Ninja Types: Support, Combo User
Talent Description: In addition to the benefits she already has, Kageko gains the Mass Genjutsu benefit at jounin rank. She can also access the genjutsu specialist exclusive list of genjutsu.
Talent Sacrifice: No ninjutsu elements. Weak Bodied weakness in addition to default two ninja weaknesses.
How it happened: Born with a weak body and no elements, Kageko simply didn’t attract much attention. She took advantage of this silver lining and focused her studies in the art of genjutsu to make herself even harder to pin down.
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2014 7:25 am
Kagetsukiko Username: Kagetsukiko
RPC Name: Kageko Yume(Maybe? She's not really made yet.)
RPC Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Planning on getting a demon eventually
Profession: Espionage Specialist
Ninja Types: Support, Combo User
Talent Description: In addition to the benefits she already has, Kageko gains the Mass Genjutsu benefit at jounin rank. She can also access the genjutsu specialist exclusive list of genjutsu.
Talent Sacrifice: No ninjutsu elements. Weak Bodied weakness in addition to default two ninja weaknesses.
How it happened: Born with a weak body and no elements, Kageko simply didn’t attract much attention. She took advantage of this silver lining and focused her studies in the art of genjutsu to make herself even harder to pin down. Doesn't really work. Especially if we get the dual profession rules settled, and even more so with it adding the extra benefits on top of your normal set. As a side note, if you planned to have a demon and also a "No element" weakness, you'd need to specify one way or the other how that affects the demon elements.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2014 4:58 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Kagetsukiko Username: Kagetsukiko
RPC Name: Kageko Yume(Maybe? She's not really made yet.)
RPC Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Planning on getting a demon eventually
Profession: Espionage Specialist
Ninja Types: Support, Combo User
Talent Description: In addition to the benefits she already has, Kageko gains the Mass Genjutsu benefit at jounin rank. She can also access the genjutsu specialist exclusive list of genjutsu.
Talent Sacrifice: No ninjutsu elements. Weak Bodied weakness in addition to default two ninja weaknesses.
How it happened: Born with a weak body and no elements, Kageko simply didn’t attract much attention. She took advantage of this silver lining and focused her studies in the art of genjutsu to make herself even harder to pin down. Doesn't really work. Especially if we get the dual profession rules settled, and even more so with it adding the extra benefits on top of your normal set. As a side note, if you planned to have a demon and also a "No element" weakness, you'd need to specify one way or the other how that affects the demon elements. I don't understand what you mean by the talent not working. I'm adding extra benefits, but I'm giving up all of my elements for it. As an espionage, it's only two elements (I think), but elemental ninjutsu also compromises almost all of any character's powerful ranged attacks. I would think that giving up on all elemental jutsu would be enough of a sacrifice to be able to gain a profession rank benefit and part of a profession base benefit. After all, using the ninjutsu specialist chuunin rank "extra element" benefit as a guide to the worth of an element, I'm giving up at least the equivalent of two C-rank benefits by not being able to use any elements. As for the upcoming dual profession rules, I can't use them for this character because they can't be modified to include her no-elements weakness. I might not be as crazy about making powerful characters as some other people are, but I don't exactly like giving up something for nothing. As for the demon, I guess my character can use the demon's elemental jutsus and that's it? Didn't really think about it. I was planning to wait for the Kyuubi sweatdrop .
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:06 pm
Username: BluewolfofMibu
RPC Name: Z
RPC Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: Genjutsu
Ninja Types: Tactical Shinobi, Chakra Control
Talent Description: The ability to master Medical Jutsu up to S rank.
Talent Sacrifice: Z has no elemental affinity and is unable to practice any elemental jutsu.
How it happened: Genjutsu specialist have always been known to have a higher ability to control chakra than the average ninja and Z has even better chakra control than the average Genjutsu specialist. Because of his chakra control, Z has been taught in the ways of medical jutsu. While he tortured and interrogated prisoners, he was able to heal their wounds in order to continue inflicting pain without killing his prisoner.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:16 pm
BluewolfofMibu Username: BluewolfofMibu
RPC Name: Z
RPC Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: Genjutsu
Ninja Types: Tactical Shinobi, Chakra Control
Talent Description: The ability to master Medical Jutsu up to S rank.
Talent Sacrifice: Z has no elemental affinity and is unable to practice any elemental jutsu.
How it happened: Genjutsu specialist have always been known to have a higher ability to control chakra than the average ninja and Z has even better chakra control than the average Genjutsu specialist. Because of his chakra control, Z has been taught in the ways of medical jutsu. While he tortured and interrogated prisoners, he was able to heal their wounds in order to continue inflicting pain without killing his prisoner.
While I do plan on having the lower levels of medical opened up more once we actually work on that, there's no way I can justify giving a character another profession's main benefit right up to max level, no matter the sacrifice.
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 3:00 am
Username: TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name: Tomoki [Haven't decided on his last name yet]
RPC Rank: Academy
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/a
Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Strength, Speed
Talent Description: Naturally Talented Idiot -
Tomoki, while unable to consciously mold chakra, can actually instinctively mold chakra of near any element so long as it is used in a physical attack as part of a style. He can ONLY produce chakra of the five main elements [Ka, Sui, Fuu, and Raiton], meaning no special, or combination elements can be used, even if it were used in a physical style.
Talent Sacrifice: Natural Idiot -
Tomoki is unable to actually wrap his mind around the process to mold his chakra. He has the ability, just lacks the thought process to actually preform it. This makes him unable to utilize ANY ninjutsu or Genjutsu, making him extremely susceptible to Genjutsu, since he cannot Kai.
How it happened: Always willing to solve his problems with plenty of punches and kicks, and it normally working in his favor, Tomoki's decided that he doesn't need to utilize any sort of ninjutsu or genjutsu, and instead feels the need to punch and kick things in an even greater way, utilizing styles. When he first encountered a style that required the use of chakra, he was crushed, but upon attempting it, through sheer idiocy and instinct (Even more idiocy) He molded chakra of the correct type in the correct amounts, allowing him to preform the technique.
[If this is approved, I will change his weaknesses, seeing as currently they'd be... nullified completely by the weakness in the Talent itself.]
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 6:07 am
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Username: TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name: Tomoki [Haven't decided on his last name yet]
RPC Rank: Academy
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/a
Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
Ninja Types: Strength, Speed
Talent Description: Naturally Talented Idiot -
Tomoki, while unable to consciously mold chakra, can actually instinctively mold chakra of near any element so long as it is used in a physical attack as part of a style. He can ONLY produce chakra of the five main elements [Ka, Sui, Fuu, and Raiton], meaning no special, or combination elements can be used, even if it were used in a physical style.
Talent Sacrifice: Natural Idiot -
Tomoki is unable to actually wrap his mind around the process to mold his chakra. He has the ability, just lacks the thought process to actually preform it. This makes him unable to utilize ANY ninjutsu or Genjutsu, making him extremely susceptible to Genjutsu, since he cannot Kai.
How it happened: Always willing to solve his problems with plenty of punches and kicks, and it normally working in his favor, Tomoki's decided that he doesn't need to utilize any sort of ninjutsu or genjutsu, and instead feels the need to punch and kick things in an even greater way, utilizing styles. When he first encountered a style that required the use of chakra, he was crushed, but upon attempting it, through sheer idiocy and instinct (Even more idiocy) He molded chakra of the correct type in the correct amounts, allowing him to preform the technique.[If this is approved, I will change his weaknesses, seeing as currently they'd be... nullified completely by the weakness in the Talent itself.]
The first paragraph implies that he can utilize all five elements. That's not gonna happen, and should b edited down to just his natural elements.
The second paragraph implies that he
s not actually losing anything, just doesn't use it, basically leaving you the option if you wanted to learn the stuff anyways and just say that's how it was written all along. That should be edited in some way to remove that potential.
You seem to have forgotten to include an actual benefit, unless it was the ability to use all elements, which still isn't gonna happen.
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:18 pm
Aight, since he'd still be limited to three elements, I'll just drop this talent. Giving up all ninjutsu and making him have to stab himself/break a bone just to get out of any genjutsu seemed a decent enough sacrifice to let him use any taijutsu style even if it required use of an element he didn't have access to normally. The second paragraph is stating that he can't consciously mold chakra. He's also literally an idiot, and can't understand the process [meaning he'll never be able to]. He'd die before he understood how it works. The benefit was that he'd never be limited in the taijutsu styles he wants to learn because of his inability to create chakra consciously.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:53 pm
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Aight, since he'd still be limited to three elements, I'll just drop this talent. Giving up all ninjutsu and making him have to stab himself/break a bone just to get out of any genjutsu seemed a decent enough sacrifice to let him use any taijutsu style even if it required use of an element he didn't have access to normally. The second paragraph is stating that he can't consciously mold chakra. He's also literally an idiot, and can't understand the process [meaning he'll never be able to]. He'd die before he understood how it works. The benefit was that he'd never be limited in the taijutsu styles he wants to learn because of his inability to create chakra consciously. Pain doesn't break genjutsu anymore. That was rather OP all things considered, so we made it impossible. Considering what you're going for here, you might want to check out the "Too Dumb to Live" challenge talent.
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