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 Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:25 pm
@Baitos:
The only immediate thing I noted was 'Helios' Might', which says it's the 'final' move of his Limit Break. Limit Breaks are meant to be individual moves, not combinations. If the moves are meant to be combined, than list them as a single Limit Break.
@ QD: Will do.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:33 am
I meant it to be a kill move to Limit Break, like a final trump card if the other few moves don't really work. I'll go back and edit it~
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:15 am
I forfeit Reno.Also making an edit to Cory's Summon Drive, since it hasn't been used yet it and shouldn't pose a continuity problem. Quote: Cerulean Samurai [Cory + Yojimbo (Summon)]:Weapon Enhancement: Twin Cylinders (Cory gains an additional Revblade)
Additional Attributes: Outright Speed +3, Attack Speed & attack Strength +2, Evasive Reflexes & Guard Strength +1
Additional Abilities:God Cutter- Cory swings both Revblades at the same time, unleashing two Engine Forces at the same time so that they combine into one powerful force.
Engine Storm- Cory fires off Engine Forces one after another, using the dual Revblades and his already high attack speed to create a veritable "storm" of Engine Forces.
Burst Count Up- Cory's Burst count is increased by 5.
Cataclysm Mk.∞- Also known as "Mugen Style". Cory focuses all of his Cataclysmic energy in both Revblades, similar to Cataclysm Mk.II. However, the energy remains into the swords, augmenting each swing rather than unleashing the energy as a concussive force. Because of it's similar nature, Mk.∞ may combo into Mk.II at any time, though Mk.∞ will come to an abrupt end.
Engine Rush Ver.2- Cory charges in and begins swinging both Revblades with all his speed, striking 12 times with each blade. As the finisher, Cory hops back and rushes through the opponent, piercing with both Revblades as he does so for a combined 26 hits.
Daigoro's Loyal Bite- When Cory is afflicted with a status ailment that can be ended by a strike, he will become internally "bitten" by Daigoro, allowing him to end the ailment. Does not work against ailments that cannot be ended by an attack, such as poison or stop. EDIT: Adding his Drive Contributions' reboot as well. Quote: Drive Contributions:Indomitable Will- The person infused with Cory has access to Cory's basic Elemental abilities, namely: Indomitable Resolve, Indomitable Firaga, Indomitable Eye, and Indomitable Strike.
Cataclysmic Deviation/Industrialization- The person infused with Cory will have the ability to charge their own element into a Cataclysmic state if they don't instead received a motorized weapon.
Attribute Boost- The person infused with Cory has the following stats boosted : Attack Strength, Attack Speed, and Constitutional Endurance.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:53 pm
Yuniko_Stormrider What Goes Here? Name: Yumeko Starr
Nickname/Alias: Yume
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Appearance: {Do not fill in this blank, only those underneath it. If you have a picture, you may use it as well.}
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 150 lbs.
Body Type: slightly taller then the rest of her kind and agile
Skin type: Pale to an almost light blue
Eye Color: Ice Blue
Hair Color: silver/white
Hair Style: mostly down short of two braids to the side (look for Girl's Bard in Salon Durem)
Clothing: She wears a light blue tank top with a blue pair of shorts and no shoes.
Unusual Body Art/Parts: A red Heart surrounded by crystal colored angel wings adorns her chest.
Race: Kistune (Artic desent) ((Otherwise known as Hengiyokai))
Theme Song(s):
Unwritten- Natasha Bedingfield
Significant Trait: {In One or Two Words} Gentle and Protective
Quotes: "I will protect you because I want to."
"Are you alright?"
"What does being different have to do with being friends?"
Good/Evil: Chaotic Good
Homeworld: Coros
Main Weapon: Bow & Arrows
Additional Equipment: {Secondary Weapons, Enchanted Armor, Accessories, Conclave Jewelry} Twin whips
Job Class: Gaurdian
Attack Abilities: {You can have less/more than three, if necessary}Lighting Arrow- When she shoots an arrow she also calls lighting at the same time thereby giving the lighting bolt a direction to go. It also helps to get the arrow through certain barriers.
Foxfire- While not as strong as an Elder Kistune's Foxfire. Yumeko's Foxfire can hurt. It causes about the same amount of damage as a regular Fire spell does.
Support Abilities: {You can have less/more than three, if necessary}Illusion- This little ability that she has allows her to make her opponents think that things are going their way when really the are making a fool of themselves. She usually uses it only to prevent someone's death.
Emerald Winds- For Yumeko this spell is a healing spell that also protects. Something like combining Curaga and Aeroga.
Passive Abilities: {YOU MAY ONLY HAVE TWO MAXIMUM}Tounge of Beasts- This little passive ability allows her to speak with all animals.
Shift- Her body shifts according to the situation that she is in. For example in battle she would go to her mid form to gain more agility.
Limit Breaks: {These are attacks that you can only use when your character is near defeat, as in his/her last few HP.} Foxfire Kistune! - When she is at a loss as to what she can do she will slpit her tail into nine with foxfire alight on each tip. They will move from the tails and gather together to form a large Fox made of fire. It will charge at all opponents to try to either knock them out or kill them.
Tenshi Kistune- This ability gives her the chance to heal all that she is with or bring one person back to life.
Kistune Crystal Heart Shot- This Limit Break would be her final one. It is the one ability that she fears using. This ability allows her to bring out her heart which is surrounded by crystal, as the the marking on her chest would show, and form it into an arrow. She will then put all that she can into the arrow and fire it. The effects of the arrow will depend on the strength of her heart.
Strengths: Agile and full of Energy
Weaknesses: Sharp loud noises and brute strength
Personality: Kind hearted, protective, stubborn, loyal, and gentle.
Likes: Nature
Dislikes: Forest fires, and cold blooded killers.
Fears: Kistune hunters, slavers, and spiders.
Family: Umiko Starr is Yumeko's twin sister. Both parents died when they were five.
Bio: Yumeko and Umiko Starr were orphaned at the young age of five due to hunter of a specific kind. On their home planet all Hengiyokai were concidered pets if they were caught. Among the most valued of Hengiyokai were the Kistunes. The orange kistunes were rare, but the Kistune that most hunters hoped for were the Artic Kistunes due to their fur and abilities. Yumeko and Umiko both cared for mankind even if they were hunted. If someone was hurt... well let's just say that their agility comes in handy should the injured realize who was tending to them. The twins decided that if they were to survive they would have to leave their home and start anew someplace else. Other Hengiyokai they knew had left as well, so it was only natural that they would want to leave as well. Yumeko and Umiko both decided that by going on two seperate ships they would not be found. The girls had picked random ships in hopes that the next place they went to would not be as bad as their homeworld.
Sample Post: Two young ladies both with silver/white hair and ice blue eyes looked at each other then hugged.
"I wish you well Umiko and I hope that we will meet again." said one of the ladies as she backed away.
"And I wish you the same Yumeko. 'Til we meet again." Umiko said before she left to get on the closest ship paying for her passage as she stepped up to the man.
Yumeko knew that her sister would get off-world without a problem, so she turned to go the other direction and went up to the lady who was handing out passes for gold. "Is this your first time miss?'asked the ticket lady, who after recieving a nod from Yumeko, handed her a ticket.'You look like you would need all the gold you have deary, so here have one on me."
"Thank you ma'am." Yumeko responded gently with awe in her voice, for it was rare that someone would be kind to her without there being a catch.
As I responded in your PM, I'm SO SORRY. Here's the critique: 1) First and foremost, please re-read the rules of PLL carefully. 2) Illusion needs to be a bit more detailed. Are you saying she can pretty much do anything with illusory power? 3) Emerald Winds is a bit powerful, if you're comparing it to a combination of Curaga and Aeroga. It's a bit early in the game for someone to have such knowledge, especially at 22 years of age. 4) Bringing someone back from the dead is not a possibility. From being unconscious/passed out? Sure. Please fix Tenshi Kitsune when keeping this in mind. 5) Kitsune Crystal Heart Short worries me somewhat. Are you saying the ability actually ends her existence? By firing the heart, her life would be forfeit... are you certain about that?
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:10 pm
Starlit Struggle Name: Yumeko Starr
Nickname/Alias: Yume
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Appearance: {Do not fill in this blank, only those underneath it. If you have a picture, you may use it as well.}
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 150 lbs.
Body Type: slightly taller then the rest of her kind and agile
Skin type: Pale to an almost light blue
Eye Color: Ice Blue
Hair Color: silver/white
Hair Style: mostly down short of two braids to the side (look for Girl's Bard in Salon Durem)
Clothing: She wears a light blue tank top with a blue pair of shorts and no shoes.
Unusual Body Art/Parts: A red Heart surrounded by crystal colored angel wings adorns her chest.
Race: Kistune (Artic desent) ((Otherwise known as Hengiyokai))
Theme Song(s):
Unwritten- Natasha Bedingfield
Significant Trait: {In One or Two Words} Gentle and Protective
Quotes: "I will protect you because I want to."
"Are you alright?"
"What does being different have to do with being friends?"
Good/Evil: Chaotic Good
Homeworld: Coros
Main Weapon: Bow & Arrows
Additional Equipment: {Secondary Weapons, Enchanted Armor, Accessories, Conclave Jewelry} Twin whips
Job Class: Gaurdian
Attack Abilities: {You can have less/more than three, if necessary}Lighting Arrow- When she shoots an arrow she also calls lighting at the same time thereby giving the lighting bolt a direction to go. It also helps to get the arrow through certain barriers.
Foxfire- While not as strong as an Elder Kistune's Foxfire. Yumeko's Foxfire can hurt. It causes about the same amount of damage as a regular Fire spell does.
Support Abilities: {You can have less/more than three, if necessary}Illusion- This little ability that she has allows her to make her opponents think that things are going their way when really the are making a fool of themselves. She usually uses it only to prevent someone's death. However if one pays enough attention then they would be able to tell that something wasn't quite right like eye color or the movement, and even the lack of shadow.
Emerald Winds- For Yumeko this spell is a healing spell that also protects. Something like combining Cure and Aero. It will grow over time.
Passive Abilities: {YOU MAY ONLY HAVE TWO MAXIMUM}Tounge of Beasts- This little passive ability allows her to speak with all animals.
Shift- Her body shifts according to the situation that she is in. For example in battle she would go to her mid form to gain more agility.
Limit Breaks: {These are attacks that you can only use when your character is near defeat, as in his/her last few HP.} Foxfire Kistune! - When she is at a loss as to what she can do she will slpit her tail into nine with foxfire alight on each tip. They will move from the tails and gather together to form a large Fox made of fire. It will charge at all opponents to try to either knock them out or kill them.
Tenshi Kistune- This ability gives her the chance to heal all that she is with or bring one person back from unconsciousness.
Kistune Crystal Barrier- This ability is one of her passionate abilities as it is directly linked to her heart. Much like the marking... the crystal that her heart summons also incases her friends and allies.
Strengths: Agile and full of Energy
Weaknesses: Sharp loud noises and brute strength
Personality: Kind hearted, protective, stubborn, loyal, and gentle.
Likes: Nature
Dislikes: Forest fires, and cold blooded killers.
Fears: Kistune hunters, slavers, and spiders.
Family: Umiko Starr is Yumeko's twin sister. Both parents died when they were five.
Bio: Yumeko and Umiko Starr were orphaned at the young age of five due to hunter of a specific kind. On their home planet all Hengiyokai were concidered pets if they were caught. Among the most valued of Hengiyokai were the Kistunes. The orange kistunes were rare, but the Kistune that most hunters hoped for were the Artic Kistunes due to their fur and abilities. Yumeko and Umiko both cared for mankind even if they were hunted. If someone was hurt... well let's just say that their agility comes in handy should the injured realize who was tending to them. The twins decided that if they were to survive they would have to leave their home and start anew someplace else. Other Hengiyokai they knew had left as well, so it was only natural that they would want to leave as well. Yumeko and Umiko both decided that by going on two seperate ships they would not be found. The girls had picked random ships in hopes that the next place they went to would not be as bad as their homeworld.
Sample Post: Two young ladies both with silver/white hair and ice blue eyes looked at each other then hugged.
"I wish you well Umiko and I hope that we will meet again." said one of the ladies as she backed away.
"And I wish you the same Yumeko. 'Til we meet again." Umiko said before she left to get on the closest ship paying for her passage as she stepped up to the man.
Yumeko knew that her sister would get off-world without a problem, so she turned to go the other direction and went up to the lady who was handing out passes for gold. "Is this your first time miss?'asked the ticket lady, who after recieving a nod from Yumeko, handed her a ticket.'You look like you would need all the gold you have deary, so here have one on me."
"Thank you ma'am." Yumeko responded gently with awe in her voice, for it was rare that someone would be kind to her without there being a catch.
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Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:14 pm
Starlit StruggleName: Thales Nickname/Alias: N/A Age: 19 Gender: Male Appearance:Height: 5'11"
Weight: 164
Body Type: Slim, lean, and defined
Skin type: White; somewhat tanned
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Short and messy; his bangs reach a little below his eyebrows
Clothing: Thales wears a white toga that goes around his left shoulder, only exposing the right half of his chest, which is tucked into a loose pair of white pants, which are tucked into copper-colored metallic straps with wings around his shin worn over black leather sandals. Around his waist are a couple metallic thigh guards strapped together by a belt above torn brown cloth wrapped around his waist. On his left arm he has a golden fleece that covers most of his shoulder and bicep and a golden pronated forearm protector. On his right arm, he has a similar golden forearm protector. (For a better idea, take a look at this picture--minus the wings, of course.)
Unusual Body Art/Parts: N/A
Race: Human Theme Song(s): Significant Trait: Optimistic and Disciplined Quotes: ”You can bend it and twist it… You can misuse and abuse it… But even the gods cannot change the Truth.”
”Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.”
”Only the gods should have a say in the matters of life and death.” Good/Evil: Good Homeworld: Olympus Coliseum Main Weapon: Bo Staff (capable of splitting in two) Additional Equipment: A golden fleece for his left shoulder, matching golden pronated forearm protectors, and a messanger bag filled with goodies. Job Class: Monk Attack Abilities:Rushing Waterfall – An overhead smash followed by another overhead smash.
Raging Phoenix - A hit with the end of the staff, followed by a hit with the other end and then a more powerful hit from the closest end.
Sweep - A swipe with the staff at an opponent's legs.
Upper Bo Smackdown - Six quick swipes to the face
Middle Bo Smackdown - Five Jabs to the middle region of the enemy.
Lower Bo Smackdown - Four quick jabs to the legs.
Phoenix Flare - Spins the Bo staff around four times, hitting the opponent with each spin.
Heaven Monument - Thales puts his staff vertically on the ground, jumps on top, spins around and then picks up his staff and does an overhead smash.
Charge – Thales bull rushes the enemy and delivers a powerful headbutt into the enemy’s mid-torso Support Abilities: Double Jump – Thales is able to jump into the air and perform a second jump mid-air.
Reflect – The golden fleece give Thales the ability to reflect spells.
Haste – A short burst of speed that provides Thales with a quick getaway. Passive Abilities:Awareness – Thales has a heightened sense of awareness of his surroundings at all times.
Agility – Thales has a heightened sense of agility, allowing him to move quicker and dodge most close-combat, physical attacks Limit Breaks:Last Stand – As a last resort, Thales’ body produces a large amount of adrenaline, increasing his pain threshold, strength, and speed, and improving his eyesight, increasing his chances of dodging ranged attacks. Strengths: Close-Combat, Weapons Master, Strength and Speed Weaknesses: Thales is nearsighted, making him prone to long-range attacks and has an injured right knee, a result of a training accident that tore his meniscus. Personality: Thales is a very knowledgeable youth with a great respect for truth and morality. Though he has been trained to fight, he’s somewhat of a pacifist—choosing not to fight unless he has to. Thales also has quite the temper (however contradictory it may sound given his calm and peaceful exterior), but has managed to control it since the incident back at home. However, Thales is rather humble, kind and polite, and optimistic as he always attempts to see the positive in every situation. He is very caring and selflessly puts others before himself. Likes: Thales enjoys reading about philosophy, training, telling the truth (though it has gotten him into trouble), optimism, peace, relaxing, providing an unnecessary amount of deatil, his family, and stratigizing. Dislikes: Thales dislikes liars, violence (unless necessary), pessimism, unrighteous anger, and the perversion and disrespect of truth, morality, and human life. Fears: Thales fears losing control over his temper and in turn lashing out at others, being unable to protect others, and further injuring his right knee to a point of being immobile. Family: Thales has a father, Matthaios, a mother, Alethea, and a baby sister named Celine all on Olympus. Bio: The son of a Spartan Warrior, Matthaios, and a common woman from Thebes (the home of the Legendary Hercules), Alethea, Thales’ future has always been rather divided. In one hand, his father Matthaios would push his “Spartan way of life” on Thales, claiming, “there’s nothing more satisfying than receiving glory on the battlefield by spilling the blood of Greece’s enemies on her soil!” On the other hand, his mother Alethea would push politics and philosophy, claiming, “there’s nothing greater than the pursuit of truth and wisdom,” hence why his mother named him Thales, after the Father of Philosophy. Driven by his desire to please both his parents, Thales had become a master of both mind and body. After his daily schooling, when his friends and classmates would go out and enjoy each other’s company in “merrymaking,” Thales would return home to train and study. The sounds of clashing swords and shields filled the air around their typical Greek house as his father and him spent the rest of the afternoons and some of the evenings training in the ways of combat. Thales was thought how to use everything from his surroundings for tactical advantages, collaboration in team environments, the sword and spear, and the shield not only as a means of defense but as a weapon as well. However, training did come at a cost of an injury to his right knee resulting in a torn meniscus after severe damage to both his anterior cruciate ligament (ACL) and the medial collateral ligament (MCL). Though since then his knee has healed, Thales still feels the affects when his knee is overused or struck. Later in the evenings, when everyone has gone to bed, Thales would remain up and study the books his mother would leave him about philosophy and politics by candlelight, which resulted in his poor eyesight, weakening his farsightedness (thus making him prone to long-range attacks). Anger has always been an issue Thales struggled with. His lack of control brought upon one of the darkest chapters of his life he will never forget. When he was 17, Thales, overworked and stressed, lost control of his temper in the midst of his training as his father pushed him to his limits. As a response, Thales reacted violently, viciously swinging his sword about. In his rage, Thales had struck his baby sister, Celine (who at the time was only 5-years-old), bringing the tip of his sword down her right eye. The attack had left her blind and scarred. The whiteness in her eye and the scar that runs down it played as a constant reminder of the travesty he had committed. From that day forth, Thales vowed to never again lose control of his temper (thus taking a more calm, peaceful, and optimistic view on life) and placed down the sword, picking up a less lethal weapon: the bo staff (a representation of his vow). And with that vow came a transformation within Thales, producing a kinder, more polite and caring person. About the time Thales had finished his secondary schooling, a group of travelers had landed in a strange ship on Olympus. They claimed to be from other worlds, which had been destroyed due to dark creatures with beady yellow eyes and antennas called Heartless. The idea of other worlds intrigued Thales, especially the part of him the pursued knowledge and truth. He felt this was an opportunity too great to pass up. That night, he spoke to his parents, informing them of his plans to join the travelers throughout their journeys. His parents agreed, feeling he was both old and well prepared enough to take care of himself. As a goodbye gift, his father presented the boy with a golden fleece and matching golden pronated forearm protectors he had used during his younger years in the war. Kissing his parents and baby sister Celine (now 7) goodbye, Thales, bo staff in hand and a messenger bag filled with his possessions in the other, made his way over to the travelers and asked for permission to join them in their journey; who wholeheartedly agreed. Thales and the small group of travelers took off and when the Gummi landed again, the group found themselves outside of the gates to Traverse Town. Thales exited the ship, taking his first steps on a whole new world, excited about the endless wonders awaiting on the other side of the large wooden doors before him. Sample Post:Everything seemed to be moving quicker than Thales was use to growing up on Olympus. It had only been a couple weeks since he had graduated from high school and now he was on a Gummi Ship with a group of strangers flying towards an unfamiliar world. Thales chewed on his fingernails and tapped his knee as he sat, excitedly waiting for what’s ahead. The ship finally landed as the hydraulics to the loading ramp released, lowering the ramp. “Alright, boys,” the pilot of the group began. “Welcome to Traverse Town! Go out, stretch your legs, relax, and have a drink, but be back quick! As soon as we restock out inventory, we’ll be taking off—with or without you.” With that, Thales exited the ship, taking his first steps on a whole new world, excited about the endless wonders await on the other side of the large wooden doors before him.
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:22 am
RhikoDemson Louis(M) Abilities: Active Abilities:Permafrost: Louis concentrates the powers of ice on himself, then released them all at once. Ice spreads out in a flash from Louis as the center covering every surface in a wide radius. Anyone touching a surface and not in the air within a matter of a second or two of activation will be covered in a frost spell. Defense calculation still occurs. After activation, Louis can disperse the spell immediately, leaving those effected with the Frost spell to deal with it for another 3 turns, or hold it indefinitely until his mana runs out maintaining the frost effect as long as he pleases as long as they continue to touch the surrounding surfaces every 3 turns.((Louis must remain on the ground as long as the spell is active.))((Can Dispel Fire/Burning)) Support Abilities:Frost: All of Louis' physical and magical ice attacks are imbued with a magical frost, impacts from any of his abilities initiates an added effect of frost. Frost, is the physical ice equivalent of the magical Slow. While the effects are physical, the ice is obviously magical so its effects are still determined by magic defense. Frost will eventually deteriorate over 3 turns unless a new hit is placed on the target. Freeze: The heavier, more potent relative of frost. This status effect is only caused by certain attacks in Louis' arsenal. Freeze, renders a target completely immobile and can only be cured by thawing naturally or Louis leaving the battlefield. -------------------------------------------- Louis Luciano Abilities: Active Abilities:Demi: Louis summons darkness to his palm and fires it off in a concentrated ball. The ball travels either several yards, or until it hits something, then detonates, sucking in everything within a few feet into it as it expands, compresses, then explodes. This attack is great for diverting attacks and nullifying ranged magic attacks. Does damage proportional to the condition of the opponent. Works less of those tainted by darkness. ((PS: I kinda used this attack before awhile ago in the training car. Didn't think about it at the time that it was never actually approved.)) Limits:The Vanguard's Sacrifice & Rose of Purification:[Level 3] The Vanguard's Sacrifice- Louis calls upon his affinity to darkness, tapping into the darkness of his allies. Louis draws on the darkness in those around him, sapping a large amount of darkness from their hearts and placing it into himself. This action leaves his allies stronger without darkness to weigh down their hearts and hold back their true strength. ((AOE OMNI-BUFF & Minor Heal: Bravery/Faith/Concentration/Etc.))
Louis as an after effect is left incapacitated for 3 turns. If the battle does not end within 3 turns, Rose of Purification is activated.
Rose of Purification: Covered in darkness, and decorated in countless black bruises, Louis sinks into a dark puddle. Slowly in his place, a black rose bud larger than a person itself grows out of the same puddle. It blooms slowly, then once fully open to the world reveals Louis standing in its core. His raises his arms to each side at the elbows, allowing his hands to droop strangely lower, a sinking feeling enveloping everything and everyone around him. Louis swings his hands down and in one fluid motion brings them back up to the sky, an eruption of dark tendrils flowing out of him and into the sky high above the battlefield where they converge and bloom again dropping jagged, thorned roots onto the enemy below, crashing like lighting and holding their form until the entire sequence is complete where they slowly grow a shade of grey, then white and then finally shed away in layers upon layers of white pedals that vanish soon after. Louis then falls completely unconscious for the remainder of the battle and some time afterwards. I approve of all of these abilities. I believe 'Frost' would be listed under Passives.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:52 pm
Rhiko's abilities approved. Thales approved. Yumeko: 1) Again, please thoroughly read the rules of PLL. If you can't find them, click this link. 2) Illusion still isn't descriptive enough. What illusions does this ability cover? Visual? Physical? Audible? Does she control every sense, just a few, just one...?
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:47 am
An audition for a (possible) new Turk. I've actually had this ready for about a week, but for some reason, I felt that if I posted it, you guys'd eat me alive or something >.>". I DON'T TASTE VERY GOOD, I PROMISE DX!!! Also... STATS. I really want to talk to you HA Mods about it. I'm still not set on the point distribution, so please keep that in mind when going over the audition. Kthnxbai(plzaprov) ;3 EDIT: Revised =u=. Changes made to Bio and Abilities. Super-Special-Awesome Template Name: Ail
Birthdate: Appears to be in her early twenties
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 120 lbs
Body Type: Slender
Skin type: Fair; the bridge of her nose and her higher cheek bones are dusted with light chestnut freckles
Eye Color: Periwinkle
Hair Color: Russet
Hair Style: A French braid; bangs pulled back save a few loose strands, with the braid itself reaching her mid-back
Clothing: An unzipped black blazer w/ a white blouse (un-buttoned at the top) tucked into a high-waisted black pencil skirt - customized w/ invisible side-zips that go all the way up her thighs - plus a chunky black belt, red-leather strapped silver watch, large silver hoops and THESE
Theme Song(s):
Fighter - Christina Aguilera
Stop The Rock - Apollo 440
Run Rabbit Junk - HIDE (Hideyuki Takahashi)
Right Here, Right Now - Fatboy Slim
Quotes: *dances, really into it, singing phail-y* "I don't wanna rock, DJ, but yo--" *someone walks in* "-- keep walking," *taps rifle* "you saw nothing."
Good/Evil/Other: Other
Weapon: A personalised high-performance sniper rifle [AtkSt = 13; AtkSp = 3] NB: any status ailments administered by the rifle go by its AtkSt, not her's
Accessories/Secondary Weapons: Two trench knives, a silencer [-2 AtkSt], smoke lensed aviators, a silver flip-phone, a small red mp3 player, several elixirs, HP pots and MP pots, plus many, many, bullets and cartridges hidden in and around her Turk ensemble
Occupation: Turk [Sniper]
Stats:Attack Strength: 7 [w/rifle; 13]
Attack Speed: 10 [w/rifle; 3]
Magic Strength: 1
Magic Defense: 9
Guard Strength: 3
Evasive Reflexes: 10
Outright Speed: 10
Constitutional Endurance: 9
Energy: 4
Attack Abilities: Sniper's Solatium - whilst not exactly an attack ability, I'm putting it here because this is what people will look at when she engages in combat, and I want this to be known, so that there are no complaints later on; her rifle is not magical. Subsequently, no Hammerspace, and no magical bullets, so D: she needs to carry ammo and re-load her cartridges. However, because her bullets are not magical, they are actual bullets. Like, from our world. If she successfully shoots you, it will be by a real life metal bullet travelling at several times the speed of sound, hand-in-hand with all the bodily harm that goes with it.
However, due to RP purposes and rules, I, a law-abiding RPer, cannot have her kill anyone without their RPer's permission, so successful head shots, which would realistically be a FATALITY! *cue sounds effects* are now just instant K.O.s ^///u///^. The bullet simply disintegrates upon impact.
Hot Shot: Disabling Shot - when she successfully hits someone in the arm/shoulder/hand, in addition to doing damage, she can also physically deal a status ailment and strip them of the use of both their arms/shoulders/hands for three posts.
Crippling Shot - when she successfully hits someone in the foot/knee/leg/thigh/hip, in addition to doing damage, she can also physical deal a status ailment and strip them of the use of both of their feet/knees/legs/thighs/hips for three posts.
Addling Shot - when she successfully hits someone in the thorax or abdomen, in addition to damage, she can also physically deal a status ailment and cause them to completely forget any special abilities they may have for three posts. Specialised Shots: Piercing Shot - she can fire bullets that hit and damage a target, but then pierce through them to hit and damage multiple targets behind them; the number of targets she can go through depends on the mana (MP) she puts behind the bullet. Ammunition:Toxic Rounds - bullets coated in poison that, in addition to damage, can physically deal a status ailment [Toxic] that lasts for three posts if the bullet comes in contact with blood.
Stunning Rounds - bullets that emit an electric shock-wave that, in addition to damage, can physically deal a status ailment [Stun] upon contact.
Explosive Rounds - bullets that, instead of piercing and searing, explode instantaneously upon contact, in a manner similar to that of a grenade.
High-Explosive Incendiary Rounds - bullets that can penetrate armour, and then fragment and flare up, causing a fire inside the target.
Support Abilities:Float - raises the target off the ground by a few feet for a maximum of three posts.
Vanish - target is temporarily rendered invisible for up to three posts.
Passive Abilities: Name - Details
Name - Details
Limit Breaks:
Strengths: A very strong will | Diligent | Excellent high-precision shooter| 20/20 vision | First-class spatial-temporal reasoning (spatial awareness) | Excellent traceuse | Physically fit and very fast | Nimble | High tolerance for pain | Extended hearing | Adroit | Excellent long-term memory for things she has experienced
Weaknesses: Low physical defense | Her desire to prove herself may result in her making reckless decisions | Easily distracted by sounds, which she can pick up quite easily, though she has learnt to ignore them | Absolutely phails with magic; the most she can do are a couple'a status effects | Poor recollection of sequences, facts and information she has not experienced
Personality: Independent, spunky, composed and straightforward, Ail is the girl who says what needs to be said, when it needs to be said, or just says nothing at all. Mind you, she is the one who decides what needs voicing.
But don't misread her silence - her thoughts are so wacky they're borderline ridiculous. She is, however, very diligent, probably due to her ingrained desire for approval, though she has yet to realise that the only acceptance she needs is her own.
With that said, Ail has always understood that everyone has crap in their lives, and thus, Ail tends to hold everyone on the same level of regard, and when coupled with her silent moments, makes her seem rather apathetic; and perhaps she is, though it's more like a lack of sympathy, if anything. Though I guess it doesn't help that her neutral face just makes her look bored/pissed.
So whilst she doesn't tend to be overly concerned, once you have her best interests, you can't lose them even if you try. But don't fool yourself - Ail respects everyone, no matter how good or bad, and expects the same in return. If not... Well, let's not go there.
Flaws: Blunt | Bold | Dyslexic | Envious | Fierce | Overambitious | Reckless
Likes: Sharpshooting | Exerting herself physically | Sunshine | ♫ MUSIC ♪~ | Hoarding munnehz $$ ;3
Dislikes: ANYTHING to do with literature | Saying long sentences | People mocking her inability to hold a tune | The touchy-feely types | The overemotional, always-weeping-on-your-shoulder species | Disrespect | Coffee ("people pay for this crap?") | Unnecessary spending | Silly excuses | When people think she's stupid | Her learning disability being made known to others | Being treated differently because of it | Being disparaged
Fears: Her dyslexia interfering negatively with her life or holding her back in any way
Family: Father | Mother | Younger brother [twin ->] | [<-twin] Younger sister
Bio: Ail was born the oldest child of a very wealthy yet traditional couple, to a beautiful estate in a land where the sun never slept. Discovered to be dyslexic at an early age, she suffered hard at the hands of her strict parents, who refused to acknowledge her learning disability as an excuse for her poor academic progress and behaviour, and all but abandoned her for her younger siblings. She did, however, shine at gymnastics, and started to better acquaint herself with competitive shooting, another sport she had an uncanny predisposition for.
But alas, the lack of support and guidance from her parents alongside all of their alienation just drove her off the edge and, at not quite fourteen, Ail ran away from home. However, being a kid, and a frustrated one at that, she didn't actually think her escape through. So with no real plans - save the last-minute decision to bring her father's best rifle (a decision that would prove to shape the rest of her life) - and enough pride to not want to crawl back to her parents with her tail between her legs, she hitchhiked her way from world to world, finally arriving in Traverse Town.
There, she meet a group of performers who had fled their dieing world and, from them, picked up many new skills; the art of parkour, to name one, but also many useful self-defense moves that they knew well enough to incorporate into their performances; both of which came to her surprisingly easily, especially the former, thanks to her years of gymnastic experience.
As an amateur traceuse, she performed small stunts in order to earn her bread and butter, and also took up odd jobs with 'pest' - namely heartless - control, using her father's rifle when she could afford rounds, or cheap, tacky trench knives when she couldn't. There were... Mishaps, of course, but with her firm will and strong desire to remain unhindered by shortcomings and insecurities, she triumphed over her mental and physical barriers, and grew to become a talented fighter and traceuse.
Ail's skills gradually increased (as well as the weight of her back pocket), but after some time, she grew tired of her new lifestyle, and longed for greener pastures. After a few good, happy years together, Ail and the troupe said their goodbyes, with yours truly once again traversing from location to location, staying for short bursts of time, handling the odd job, kicking the odd heartless. Finally wanting to set up some roots, Ail landed in a newly reclaimed Hollow Bastion, which was being restored to its former glory by its faithful occupants. Picking up where she left off, now with more feats in her repertoire and greater marksmanship than she had first started out with, she made a pretty good living for herself as both a performer, heartless hunter, and kitchenhand, the latter of which she picked up on a streak of good luck.
This new regime lasted for several of the ensuing years, ending just a few months ago. Tseng had caught whiff of Ail's precision shooting talents, and after some deliberation, Ail took him up on his offer of a position amongst the Turks. Since then, she has been working as an employee of Shin-Ra, doing the jobs that a rookie would. Though her dyslexia plagued her with the odd task, she persevered through it, insisting earnestly that her learning disability be kept hidden from her co-workers unless absolutely, life-threateningly necessary.
Aaaand that's the story so far, mes amis~. As for the rest? Well, it'll unfold as the roleplay progresses.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:31 pm
Mmkay. Colours changed, bio edited aaaaaand I'm good to go biggrin DD.
Thank you HA Mods for being patient x3. You may proceed to pick it apart and correct moi~.
I say this because I didn't specify in bolded text what RP this was for, and I dun wanna change the template header. I AM CONCEITED SO LOVE MEEEEEE
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:54 am
Meet my ability overhaul from hell. I am also adding my second passive ability as well as editting my Boss Form stats, as Chaos should be hell of a lot faster and less focused on magical power.
Attack Abilities: Chaos Blade Lanista Blade techniques
Bloodstrike - Nick's blades glow red, and he loses some health. He then slams down on an opponent in a barrage to do damage.
Lifebane - Nick's blades glow green, and every attack that hits, whether it is blocked or not, drains life from the opponent. If blocked, it draws less life that it would from an actual hit, but still drains life. Nick can also drain life without his weapons, but he must be touching his opponent. This drains life at a quicker rate as well.
Manabane - Nick's blades glow blue, and every attack that hits, whether it is blocked or not, drains mana from the opponent. If blocked, it draws less mana that it would from an actual hit, but still drains mana. Nick can also drain mana without his weapons, but he must be touching his opponent. This drains mana at a quicker rate as well.
Crippling Strikes - Nick's blades glow purple, and he attempts to strike the foe's arms and legs. [Attempts to cause Cripple/Disable]
Oblivion - Nick draws life from everything around him, whether they be allies or enemies, then channels the attack into a single destructive strike for massive damage. Blades glow with a black aura.
Aeromancy Offensive wind techniques
Gentle Fist - Shoots a blast of wind towards the opponent, possibly knocking them back. Can be used in a combo.
Aero Stomp - Stomps the ground, releasing a large push of air all around Nick. Pushes back friend or foe.
Spin Me Right Round - Nick manipulates the wind to spin an opponent in order to disorient them temporarily.
Blade of the Four Winds - Nick channels the wind into an arc shape, then fires it off at his opponent to cut them.
Aerial Combo - Nick launches an opponent into the air and proceeds to attack them brutally in midair.
Bull Rush - Nick charges, tackling one foe and dragging them along for a ride before throwing the opponent with a blast of wind.
Support Abilities:Aeromancy - Nick's aero defenses
Light on your Feet- Nick uses his wind to increase his speed or the speed of his ally/allies.
Jet Stream - Nick launches himself with a large blast of air. This can be used to jump high or propel off of a wall or even a ceiling to dash at someone. It can be used multiple times, but costs a lot of energy to continuously use.
Blade Guardian - Nick summons four swords composed of wind magic as a last resort defense shield from an attack. Each sword can take one attack, then 'shatters' before vanishing. The ability is a last resort, and takes a decent chunk of energy to keep using during battle.
Aero Shield - Nick uses the wind to create a shield protecting him from ranged attacks.
Darkness - Nick's power over the Darkness
Dark Portal - Nick can travel to different places using Corridors of Darkness.
Heartless - Nick can summon various shapes and sizes of Heartless.
Level 1 - Shadow Heartless, the Musical Casters, Basic Heartless
Level 2 - Mid-rank Heartless, can create basic 'Chaos Heartless', custom Heartless which have a green third eye that glows green somewhere on their bodiesLevel 3 - High rank Heartless, Mid-rank Chaos HeartlessLevel 4 - Midboss Heartless, High rank to Midboss Chaos Heartless, Humanoid HeartlessLevel 5 - Boss Heartless, Boss Chaos Heartless
Eyes of Chaos Nick's unique ability, able to channel pure chaos through his eyes, able to cause many different kinds of status effects.
Blind Shadows fall over the person's eyes, blinding them.
Confuse The person sees demons and monsters all around them.
Berserk The person flies into a rage, attacking in a blind fury.
Paralyze The person becomes paralyzed with fear.
Passive Ability:
Chaotic Mind: Nick is immune to being feared or confused
Chaos [Boss] Form Stats
Attack Strength: {16}
Attack Speed: {16}
Magic Strength: {10}
Magic Defense: {10}
Guard Strength: {13}
Evasive Reflexes: {15}
Outright Speed: {14}
Constitutional Endurance: {13}
Energy: {10}
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:05 am
@Rio Rin: As I said to you before, everything looks fine with this one, you have my approval.
@Mitsudo: Well, immediately I can tell you to not bother with the Unversed, as you don't meet the requirements for controlling such a creature and never will, for good reason. Also, why do you only have 5 'Levels' of Heartless control? If you're going with the stat Level system, there would be 6. That one's more out of curiosity than anything.
Also, a Passive may induce immunity to no more than 2 statuses. As such, you'd have to choose from the mind-altering status ailments: Confuse, Berserk, Charm, Fear, and Addle.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:01 am
Edited my passive ability and have removed any mention of Unversed.
And the five levels of Heartless control is so I don't have to be like, "At level 1, I can summon this, this, and this Heartless. At level 2, blah blah blah." I just set it so it's a basic list of what I can and can't summon based on my experiences with darkness, not how fast I level. It is not connected to my stat leveling in anywhere other than the higher level I am, the higher level my Heartless summoning will be. But the rates will be completely different.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:03 am
An update to PLL!Vain's abilities. Quote: Attack Abilities:Engine Magic- Magically attacks charged and unleashed by the Revblade. The Revblade must be "awake" in order to cast, thus it must be in Cory's Shadow Hand. Because of this, Cory cannot use Shadow Magic and Engine magic at the same time.Flair- A skill set originating from the Parivir class.Wind Slash- Wind damage at a distance.
Iai Blow- Minor damage with a chance to KO.
Blade Bash- Minor damage, may Immobilize.
Shimmering Blade- Fire damage and Confuse.
Hoarfrost Blade- Ice damage and Slow.
Skyfury Blade- Lightning damage and Berserk.
Lifethread Blade- Dark damage and Doom. Uproar- Releases the spirit of the Revblade, creating a concentrated explosion. Must remain still for a moment to activate.
Sky Cutter- Concentrates energy at the tip of the Revblade, unleashing a shockwave projectile when swung.
Earth Splitter- Stabs the ground with the Revblade and revs the engine, causing a low-scale earthquake accompanied by faults. Shadow Magic- Dark magic invoked by Cory's infected Shadow Hand. Cory cannot use Shadow Magic and Engine magic at the same time.Dark Firaga- Fires a blast of flaming darkness from his hand.
Dark Fist- Strikes an enemy with his Shadow Hand, inflicting explosive dark damage.
Dark Grip- Grabs an enemy and begins absorbing darkness from it, converting the darkness to HP. Lethal to creatures made only of darkness. Support Abilities:Engine Magic- Magically attacks charged and unleashed by the Revblade. The Revblade must be "awake" in order to cast, thus it must be in Cory's Shadow Hand. Because of this, Cory cannot use Shadow Magic and Engine magic at the same time.Flair- A skill set originating from the Parivir class.Unburden Soul- KO user, fully heal hp and cure all negative buffs to the five nearest allies. Ethereal Guard- Conjures a shield of energy to block frontal attacks.
Energize- Invigorates himself with the Revblade, granting a boost to speed and strength. Left fatigued afterward. Shadow Magic- Dark magic invoked by Cory's infected Shadow Hand. Cory cannot use Shadow Magic and Engine magic at the same time.Dark Shield- Summons a shield of darkness to block attacks. More powerful than Ethereal guard, but weak to Light attacks.
Dark Hand- Makes the Shadow Hand more dense and resistant to cutting, allowing Vain to grab and block edged weapons without consequence. Terminus- Releases the spirit of Father's Cry to open up a rift to a random place located on the world he is on. Passive Abilities:Disruption- When caught in a status that can be nullified by an attack, Vain's energy will become disrupted by the Revblade. This makes him immune to such status effects.
Bushido- Due to his dual-Samurai class, Vain's parrying skill outclasses even warriors much more powerful than he.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:53 pm
Mitsudo Tenshi Edited my passive ability and have removed any mention of Unversed. And the five levels of Heartless control is so I don't have to be like, "At level 1, I can summon this, this, and this Heartless. At level 2, blah blah blah." I just set it so it's a basic list of what I can and can't summon based on my experiences with darkness, not how fast I level. It is not connected to my stat leveling in anywhere other than the higher level I am, the higher level my Heartless summoning will be. But the rates will be completely different. There is mention of Unversed under 'Heartless Level 3' ^^".
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