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 Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:20 pm
.o O ( *POOf!* hi all ^^ )
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:23 pm
::Unks looked to Koji and petted him too after Jade got herself a drink. He looked up at her and smiled and laughed lightly about her comment about him not being late to his own wedding.
"Yeah he is mine. .I found him the other night. He had no tags or anything, so I took him in. I named him Koji."
Finishing his can of Dr. Pepper Unks placed the empty can on the counter next to the almost empty bowl of milk and he let the kitten go back to his drink::
"I just wish I got to see Pith, I haven't seen her in a few days. ."
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:24 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:31 pm
(It goes well Merena, how about with you?)
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:32 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:38 pm
(well it got quiet, where did everyone go?)
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:43 pm
((Sorry, multitasking...^ ^;; Heya M-chan!! *glomps*))
Jade smiled, nodding knowingly as he mentioned not seeing Pith for a few days. She smiled down at the kitten before taking a sip of her coke, leaning up against the bar and looking around idly.
"I know what you mean....but don't worry, I'm sure she's alright. Plus, you'll definatly see her tomorrow."
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:49 pm
.o O ( *glomped* hey jade loves ^^ )
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:51 pm
"Yeah your right, I am sure she is just making sure everything is ok for the wedding."
::Unks looked around the club idlely too his ice blue eyes locked onto Jade's back and he opened his mouth to speak. What he was gonna ask her was random and something not expected from him::
"Hey Jade you don't know where your brother is do you?"
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:56 pm
Jade paused in her glancing around and turned to look at Unks, a kinda curious look on her face. She raised an eyebrow before laughing a little.
"My brother? Haven't seen him for a while, didn't talk to him when he was here with Taliman....why do you want to know where he is?"
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:57 pm
(( @Unks: Yeah, I did. Dude, please take this as an honest critique and not a flame against you, okay?
The picture needs alot of work. Your proportions are extremely off. His arms are awkward and have no form; I'm not even sure he has a left elbow. His face, while well-shaped, just sort of floats on his head and doesn't seem to be a part of the rest of him. Neither does his hair. It looks like a felt wig glued to his skull; very unnatural.
His clothes are unreal. They are stiff and hard, and his pants have the weirdest shapes I've ever seen. Clothes don't make those shapes. You should look at real life pictures of clothes and use them for reference; look at how clothes fall and gather and pull at seams and angles so that you can draw the appropriate shapes. His sword is illogical; the hilt is too short to be attached to a blade that long, not to mention the fact that it's drawn at a different angle than the rest of the blade. Very awkward.
On to your coloring. The colors are bland and uneven. They aren't very strong and don't show any depth. Your shading is also very unnatural. Where are those shadows coming from? Your light source seems to be all over the place, and most of the shadows you made cannot exist all at the same time. Pick one light source and stick with it, creating shadows based on the form and the angle.
I'm sorry to be harsh, dude, but it needs alot of work and you won't get better if you don't know the areas you need to work on. Again, I don't mean to offend; it's just my opinion. 3nodding
@Jade: Yeah, it is. And I got double prints. (I always get double prints.) So, WHOA. Although I'm a little unhappy with how some of the previous pictures turned out, so when I get a job, Im going to start saving to get a really nice camera. The pictures my mom used to take of me and the guys when we were kids are really good, and she had a nice camera. I hate having fuzzy pictures of things I cherish, so camera it is!
After I get cable. This whole "I have crappy reception and have to watch Numb3rs through the Snow Show" BS has got to GO. mad
Welp, I'm getting off peoples. I'm gonna go draw for a bit before bed. Huggles and g'night. ))
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 8:03 pm
(None taken, but if you see that much wrong with it. .Please keep it to yourself. I haven't drawn in like four years and now i have no intention too anymore. .I was told it was good by Deity and my girlfriend. If they are lying to me well then at least they lied and didn't throw all that at me.
But none taken as I said before. .)
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 8:16 pm
((*pokes Unks* Hey babe...you going to post before I fall asleep...? lol))
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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 8:17 pm
The soft crackle of static within the main corridor. Stepping out into the Orion the huddled figure was clad in a heavy winter parka drawn tightly about their body. Staff in hand, a mist of warm breath hung in the air about their face. Clinging to the heavy fur that lined the parka's seams, long icicles clattered to the ground about the individuals body. Taking a long shuddering breath the person sank to their knees the portal sealing behind them.
Throwing back her hood the emerald and scarlet haired woman gritted her teeth observing her surroundings. Fleeing to the artic she had gone to invite her mentor to her wedding and wound up staying longer than she had intended.
"Gah...why must he train so far up north..."
Rubbing her arms she reveled in the newfound warmth about her, pleased to be away from the blistering cold. Not sure whether to shed her coat she yawned making note of those who were present.
"Uttterly ridiculous..."
Regaining her composure, she used her staff to steady herself, rising to her feet.
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