Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Leonidas Peridot • Name :: Mirgeanu Zalchen • Age :: 19 • Height :: 5’ 10” • Weight :: 144 lbs • Hair Color :: White • Eye Color :: Purple • Skin Color :: Medium to Dark Brown; African descent • Tattoo / Markings :: Aside from her possible future guild mark, none. • Race :: Human • Personality:: It's best not to judge a book by its cover, and Mirgeanu is an example of that classic proverb. When left to herself, she is usually perceived as a calm woman; however, this is not always the case when she is interacting with others. Mirgeanu is ambitious, determined to pursue her many goals through hard work and dedication. She seems to be fearless and independent- though she appears distant towards others sometimes, she secretly cares deeply for them despite not showing it much, and will remain supportive and protective of those she's grown accustomed to as long as they don't give her any reason to do otherwise in some way or form. When she's around those she's become more accustomed to, she may be somewhat more relaxed, perhaps even willing to socialize at times. Mirgeanu is spirited and strong willed; she will push herself to the limit during a battle if that what it takes.
Unfortunately, Mirgeanu does have her pitfalls like everyone else. She initially seems to be closed off and selfish towards others until she warms up to them due to her expecting judgement. Even more, her competitive nature may lead to her becoming impulsive in her actions in order to gain the upper hand, and might be regarded as highly reckless to others. However, from Mirgeanu's perspective, this stems from her many fears and desires. She aimed to become better to appease her grandfather and other people, and she wishes to become someone who will be remembered instead of a forgotten outcast; however, her fear of failing and disappointing others is the root of her perfectionism. Mirgeanu desires to fit in, to prove others wrong when they regard her as a weakling... yet now that she's on her own, she wants to accomplish her goals for her own benefit, not her grandfather's.
• Biography ::Mirgeanu was born to Blade Magic mage Milgros Zalchen and his wife- a Telekinesis mage- Irinia within a moderate village. Needless to say, her arrival was not met with a warm reception by most members of the family; a child with white hair and purple eyes that clashed with her dark skin was initially perceived as a possible curse from someone allied to a demon or a demon itself. Though their ludicrous notion wore off over the first two years of Mirgeanu's life, a few of the family members were still skeptical, one of them being Milgros' father Squall. Their life seemed pretty relaxed for a while; unfortunately, when the girl was at the age of three, Milgros had suddenly disappeared from the village without a trace. Whether it was caused from his grandfather's accusations against the toddler, or from him wanting to make a name for himself, no one ever knew. Regardless, Irinia and Squall- with the help of his wife Kherise- took up the task of raising her.
Throughout her childhood, Mirgeanu was a lively little girl, often interacting with others in the village and learning about the world around her, though she had developed a keen interest in magic. However, despite Irinia's wishes to at least educate Mirgeanu for future use, Squall was vehemently against the notion, believing that it would lead the child to be corrupted and possibly led to a dark guild. With that, he started teaching the girl himself in the art of swordsmanship once she reached the age of twelve, aiming to hone her skills and improve them past the level of her father's. Kherise meekly kept her peace, yet it didn't prevent Irinia from slipping Mirgeanu a few tips and tricks about magic, despite the child not showing any signs of being capable of it as of yet. As for Squall and his teachings, it was possible he was still bitter about the still ongoing disappearance of his son; therefore, he began criticizing the teenager about her shortcomings more than praising her for her successes, convincing her that completely overcoming them would pave her path in becoming a great swordsman. However, he had not been expecting the events that would unfold once Mirgeanu reached the age of seventeen.
During a battle with several other- and older- pupils of her grandfather, Mirgeanu found herself consistently taunted by a few of them, mainly due to her appearance and the fact that her father was still missing. Throughout the fighting, Mirgeanu's anger had begun to steadily grow with the consistent teasing; the breaking point was when an older girl had outright blamed her for her father's disappearance... and going so far to say that she might have killed him. At that point, Mirgeanu raised her sword in preparation to strike the bully... and somehow, her anger channeled through to her attack. Despite the bully raising her sword to block it, the force of the strike sent the girl flying several feet before she landed on the ground unconscious, yet still alive. The other kids had backed away, but by that point, the girl had passed out from exhaustion. When the matter was brought to Irinia's attention, the woman had two more choices; either continue teaching Mirgeanu about magic and be exiled from the family, or discontinue the teachings altogether. Reluctantly, the woman gave up to her grandfather's demands... but Kherise herself hadn't. The older woman secretly taught the young woman on her own, and through intense study and secretly practicing her craft, the girl discovered what kind of magic she held- the Blade Magic that was rumored to be hereditary among her father's family.
Upon that revelation, Mirgeanu sought to leave her family right then and there, but decided to remain with them until her eighteenth year. When the time came, she began to undertake a journey of her own in order to improve her skills a bit more and make a name for herself as a mage, yet also aiming to avoid allowing her grandfather's harsh influence on her to last throughout the remainder of her years. Furthermore, she deeply desires to find her father and the reason why he had left the family. At least it might bring her some closure... even if it does turn out that she was the reason for his disappearance.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name ::N/A ; Currently Searching •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: N/A •Color of Mark :: N/A
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water - 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
Ⅳ.XXX▐░ Wizard Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Primary Magic Name :: Blade Magic •Primary Magic Type :: Holder Magic •Mana Amount :: 750
● Blade Magicxx
↬ Default Blade :: As the name of the magic implies, the blade is in its original form with no significant abilities; however, it is wielded like a normal blade, and is able to cut through magic shielding. [8 Posts Use, 4 Posts Cooldown] ↬ Mana Cost: 50
↬ Flame Slash :: The user charges their blade with flames and attacks the target. The blade must be in Default form in order to be utilized; it cannot be used within the other blade forms. ↬ Mana Cost: 200
↬ Water Slash :: The user charges their blade with water, sending a sickle like mass of water at the target. The blade must in Default form in order to be utilized; it cannot be used within the other blade forms. ↬ Mana Cost: 200
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra ::Theme Song - Mirgeanu is fond of spicy and sour food; she especially likes citrus fruits.
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:27 am
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Name :: Athena • Age :: 16 • Height :: 5'9 • Weight :: 40 • Hair Color :: Red • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: Creamy • Tattoo / Markings :: N/A • Race :: Human • Personality:: Athena has a pretty sweet personality but she is ruthless in battle and shows no mercy AT All. • Personal Weakness :: Acrophobia • Personal Strengths :: She is very good in combat. • Likes :: Sweets • Dislikes :: The social evils towards women • Biography :: N/A
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•Guild Name :: N/A •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: N/A •Color of Mark :: N/A
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Your profile are missing the key things that make your character essentially stand out, one being your personality, its a liiiiiiiiiiiittle vague. Your biography I would say is a necessity in making your character have objectives/goals in this guild it also in a way goes hand in hand in sculpting your characters personality. The type of magic you have won't be approved as we have a list of dragon slayers already, if you check the profile forum's "Slayer Magic Chart" you can see what we have available and petition to get a vacant slayer magic. Lastly your stats don't add up, you start off over all with 30 stats you put 33, you have no magic power also, kinda need that to be a wizard, I'm not sure if you took the other stuff out but the code for the format is on the first page. One more thing, do you not want a picture for your character?
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:57 pm
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: LightAngelOfVCS • Name :: Seras [pronounces Sair-Rez] Celia Migeal • Age :: 22 • Height :: 5"8 • Weight :: 130 • Hair Color :: Lime Green • Eye Color :: Yellow • Skin Color :: Fair • Tattoo / Markings :: She has a tattoo of Shiva's brother's name (Michael) in calligraphy on her back and the date he died on her right wrist. • Race :: Human • Personality:: She grew up as a sarcastic, rude, and rebellious girl. Shiva was normally the nice one who kept her out of trouble. Ever since the separation, Seras started to mellow out. She felt lost without her two friends after the village incident. After she learned self defense, her attitude came back. She became edgey and was quick to mouth off at someone. She also became defensive. At times, people can see her quiet, laid back side again. Others might even see sorrow, happiness, or care. It's all one big roulette of emotions. People never know exactly what she will be like. However, she tends to have mood swings especially when she starts having flashbacks of the past. • Biography :: Seras was actually Shiva Lore's (and Michael Lore's) half sister. Their mother was in an affair and had a child two years before she had Shiva. Their mother had her best friend take Seras in as her own daughter. Seras was four and Shiva was two when the disaster struck. Seras was away on a trip with her adopted mother. When they returned, the entire village was in ruins. Sera's adopted mother searched the entire area only to find nothing but dead bodies. Some of which were the Lore. Shiva and Michael Lore were missing. Seras's adopted mother gathered all that she could and took Seras on a trip to find the missing children. She followed their footsteps as far as she could for another two years. She finally found a frantic, wandering 12 year old boy, Michael. She got them a home in the town, and she took Michael into her home. Michael was silent and cold for years. He had lost sight of his little sister. Most days, he would wander around outside hoping to find her wandering around. Seras spent most of her time trying to cheer him up. The most she got out of him was a soft, sorrowful smile, and a pat on the head. It wasn't long before Seras formed a child's crush on Michael. At the age of 10, she was fully in love with Micheal. At the age of 18, he had finally accepted that Shiva died, and he was moving on. He would spend every single day with Seras, treating her like a sister. The only twisted part was that she was his sister. She knew, but something inside her wouldn't form the courage to tell him. The more time he spent with her, the more twisted her thoughts became. She was obsessed with him. He tried teaching her self-defense, but he had to adapt the method due to her weak frame. She didn't grasp the concept well. She was too busy being distracted to learn. Eventually, Michael gave up teaching her.
One day, they were talking a walk around the village. A familiar figure could be seen walking around in complete and utter disarray. It was as if it was looking for something. The figure walked right by Seras and Michael. Seras's head whipped around fast, but Michael was already stopping the disoriented Shiva. Michael and Seras had to remind Shiva of who she was and of her past. Shiva seems delusional. She was wandering around claiming how she couldn't find her parent, whom was a dragon. It seemed ridiculous. Once she finally remembered, Micheal wanted to celebrate. Seras wanted to go as well, but Michael wanted to be alone with Shiva for a moment. During their outting at the nearby pub, Michael ended up impaling himself during a bar fight. Shiva broke into complete agony.
Shiva returned home to a curious Seras. Upon the news, Seras's emotions and rage overfilled her. She raged at Shiva, attacked her, and told her to leave. She wanted nothing to do with her. Michael was dead now because of her. At least, that's how Seras's 10 year-old mind took it. Shiva left and created her own path. Seras rotted in her own hatred, vengance, sorrow, and envy. At the age of 20, she decided to go find 18 year old Shiva and apologize. Age 22, she ran into a strange wizard guild known as Fairy Tail. They directed her in a different directions due to the unknown case of Shiva. Seras continued to search until she finally stumbled upon a guild known as Raven Tail. Well, it doesn't hurt to ask.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: •Color of Mark ::
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water - 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
Ⅳ.XXX▐░ Wizard Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Primary Magic Name :: Lightning Magic •Primary Magic Type :: Caster •Mana Amount :: 750
● Lightning Magicxx
↬ Fulmine's Strike :: User directs a bolt of lightning out at where ever his or her fingers are pointing. The lightning may be used for offense or defense. ↬ Mana Cost: 200
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra :: She can get moody every now and then. Out of no where, she has sudden flashes of the events she saw when she was very young. She thought she saw a man rip the throat out of Shiva's mother, but she wasn't sure. She didn't tell her mother, so she went along with the "natural disaster" story. She knew better. It was a masacre.
Oh, she has the tendency to change outfits sometimes to fit her mood. It's only when she feels like it though.
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Fiery Keys • Name :: Athena Rivers • Age :: 16 • Height :: 4 ft • Weight :: 35 kgs • Hair Color :: Auburn • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: Fair • Tattoo / Markings :: N/A • Race :: Human • Personality:: Athena has a pretty sweet personality but she is ruthless in battle and shows no mercy AT All. This is because her dragon told her to be like this so that she could fool her enemy into thinking she’s soft. She tends to get touchy about her past because her dragon disappeared without a trace. She is very good at making friends, though. However, if anyone gets on her bad side, there’ll be hell to pay. People get on her bad side when they pester her about her past, contradict her, etc. • Biography :: Athena lived with her mother and father until she was 13. Then, her parents were brutally murdered by a powerful dark wizard. This loss made her personality change from cold-hearted to her current sweet one. She swore to get revenge for her parents and learnt Wind Magic and trained by herself to become stronger. After that, she settled down in Magnolia. Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████
•Guild Name :: N/A •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: N/A •Color of Mark :: N/A
Ⅲ.XXX▐░ Statistics Data ██ █████████████████████████
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra :: N/A
[I don’t want a picture]
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:10 pm
LightAngelOfVCS
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: LightAngelOfVCS • Name :: Seras [pronounces Sair-Rez] Celia Migeal • Age :: 22 • Height :: 5"8 • Weight :: 130 • Hair Color :: Lime Green • Eye Color :: Yellow • Skin Color :: Fair • Tattoo / Markings :: She has a tattoo of Shiva's brother's name (Michael) in calligraphy on her back and the date he died on her right wrist. • Race :: Human • Personality:: She grew up as a sarcastic, rude, and rebellious girl. Shiva was normally the nice one who kept her out of trouble. Ever since the separation, Seras started to mellow out. She felt lost without her two friends after the village incident. After she learned self defense, her attitude came back. She became edgey and was quick to mouth off at someone. She also became defensive. At times, people can see her quiet, laid back side again. Others might even see sorrow, happiness, or care. It's all one big roulette of emotions. People never know exactly what she will be like. However, she tends to have mood swings especially when she starts having flashbacks of the past. • Biography :: Seras was actually Shiva Lore's (and Michael Lore's) half sister. Their mother was in an affair and had a child two years before she had Shiva. Their mother had her best friend take Seras in as her own daughter. Seras was four and Shiva was two when the disaster struck. Seras was away on a trip with her adopted mother. When they returned, the entire village was in ruins. Sera's adopted mother searched the entire area only to find nothing but dead bodies. Some of which were the Lore. Shiva and Michael Lore were missing. Seras's adopted mother gathered all that she could and took Seras on a trip to find the missing children. She followed their footsteps as far as she could for another two years. She finally found a frantic, wandering 12 year old boy, Michael. She got them a home in the town, and she took Michael into her home. Michael was silent and cold for years. He had lost sight of his little sister. Most days, he would wander around outside hoping to find her wandering around. Seras spent most of her time trying to cheer him up. The most she got out of him was a soft, sorrowful smile, and a pat on the head. It wasn't long before Seras formed a child's crush on Michael. At the age of 10, she was fully in love with Micheal. At the age of 18, he had finally accepted that Shiva died, and he was moving on. He would spend every single day with Seras, treating her like a sister. The only twisted part was that she was his sister. She knew, but something inside her wouldn't form the courage to tell him. The more time he spent with her, the more twisted her thoughts became. She was obsessed with him. He tried teaching her self-defense, but he had to adapt the method due to her weak frame. She didn't grasp the concept well. She was too busy being distracted to learn. Eventually, Michael gave up teaching her.
One day, they were talking a walk around the village. A familiar figure could be seen walking around in complete and utter disarray. It was as if it was looking for something. The figure walked right by Seras and Michael. Seras's head whipped around fast, but Michael was already stopping the disoriented Shiva. Michael and Seras had to remind Shiva of who she was and of her past. Shiva seems delusional. She was wandering around claiming how she couldn't find her parent, whom was a dragon. It seemed ridiculous. Once she finally remembered, Micheal wanted to celebrate. Seras wanted to go as well, but Michael wanted to be alone with Shiva for a moment. During their outting at the nearby pub, Michael ended up impaling himself during a bar fight. Shiva broke into complete agony.
Shiva returned home to a curious Seras. Upon the news, Seras's emotions and rage overfilled her. She raged at Shiva, attacked her, and told her to leave. She wanted nothing to do with her. Michael was dead now because of her. At least, that's how Seras's 10 year-old mind took it. Shiva left and created her own path. Seras rotted in her own hatred, vengance, sorrow, and envy. At the age of 20, she decided to go find 18 year old Shiva and apologize. Age 22, she ran into a strange wizard guild known as Fairy Tail. They directed her in a different directions due to the unknown case of Shiva. Seras continued to search until she finally stumbled upon a guild known as Raven Tail. Well, it doesn't hurt to ask.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: •Color of Mark ::
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water - 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
Ⅳ.XXX▐░ Wizard Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Primary Magic Name :: Lightning Magic •Primary Magic Type :: Caster •Mana Amount :: 750
● Lightning Magicxx
↬ Fulmine's Strike :: User directs a bolt of lightning out at where ever his or her fingers are pointing. The lightning may be used for offense or defense. ↬ Mana Cost: 200
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra :: She can get moody every now and then. Out of no where, she has sudden flashes of the events she saw when she was very young. She thought she saw a man rip the throat out of Shiva's mother, but she wasn't sure. She didn't tell her mother, so she went along with the "natural disaster" story. She knew better. It was a masacre.
Oh, she has the tendency to change outfits sometimes to fit her mood. It's only when she feels like it though.
With the permission of the guild captain Ometison and vice captain ReVe, I'll be reviewing this profile. ^^ Let's take a look:
A. Weight: I'm confused; did you mean 45 lbs, or 45 kg (which is equivalent to 99 lbs)? Either way... they're very poor height/weight ratios for your character, especially considering she's nearly six feet tall. You have two options available- either decrease your character's height or increase your character's weight so they'll match up and be more believable, not to mention your character won't be liable to snap in half like a twig during battle. And please be specific as to whether the weight is in kilograms or pounds.
B. Tattoos/Markings: If she doesn't have any, put None or N/A.
C. Personality: The "sweet girl but brutal fighter" personality seems pretty cliched and vague in my opinion. I'm not saying it's bad, but it could use work. Why would she show such ruthlessness in battle when it contradicts how she is outside of the battlefield? Is there a reason for that? Plus, what exactly would cause someone to get on her bad side? Could you be specific on what you mean by that? And why is she touchy about her past? Is it because of what happened with her dragon "parent"? Regardless of whether is is or if there's a different reason, it needs to be addressed. Plus, is there a little more to her personality than just being the sweet girl with merciless fighting? What are her good traits? What are her flaws?
D. Biography: It's better than your previous ones, but at the same time... I still have a few notes. One, the guild setting takes place a few millenniums after the canonical Fairy Tail, so I would advise getting rid of the date of the dragon's disappearance. Second, I highly doubt that a ten year old can be able to not only work a shop, but be mature as well, especially after they lost their surrogate parent. Was there a reason she went to work at such a young age? Was she even staying with anybody at the time, or was she wandering the streets? And after she left the shop, where did she go? Keep in mind, your character's age is 16, but she left the shop at 13, so that leaves a three year gap in her life. And remember, your character's history helps to shape your character's personality, so it would help to add some more history to make your character more well-rounded.
E. Stats: For the third time, your character's stats add up to more than 30 when totaled. As a reminder, when making your character's statistics, add them up first to make sure their sum is up to 30. Again, your character's stats cannot be more than 30 in total. Please fix this.
F. Magic: There's already a Sky Dragon Slayer character; therefore, you'll need to select a different magic for your character.
For the present moment, your character profile is denied until these points are fixed.
Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2014 12:42 am
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Fiery Keys • Name :: Athena Rivers • Age :: 16 • Height :: 4 ft • Weight :: 35 kgs • Hair Color :: Auburn • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: Fair • Tattoo / Markings :: N/A • Race :: Human • Personality:: Athena has a pretty sweet personality but she is ruthless in battle and shows no mercy AT All. This is because her dragon told her to be like this so that she could fool her enemy into thinking she’s soft. She tends to get touchy about her past because her dragon disappeared without a trace. She is very good at making friends, though. However, if anyone gets on her bad side, there’ll be hell to pay. People get on her bad side when they pester her about her past, contradict her, etc. • Biography :: Athena was trained by Stella, the Sky Dragon, to become a Sky Dragon Slayer. One day, the dragon disappeared. After that, she was taken in by an old couple who took care of her till she was 13. Then, she left and trained a lot to become stronger for 3 years. When she was 16, she settled down in Magnolia. Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████
•Guild Name :: N/A •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: N/A •Color of Mark :: N/A
Ⅲ.XXX▐░ Statistics Data ██ █████████████████████████
With permission from the guild captain and vice captain, I'll be reviewing your profile once more. One note I would like to make, however; when you edit your profile, just edit the one you posted. Making an entirely new profile with the edits is unnecessary and tends to take up space. With that, time for the review:
A. Height/Weight: I'm glad you decided to lower the character's height to accommodate for her weight, which matches up with her height now. *gives a thumbs up*
B. Personality/Biography: I'm putting these two together for one major reason; since your character is not a dragon slayer, she cannot have been raised by a dragon. Therefore, you need to revise her backstory and come up with a different origin for her. Plus, the biography still needs a little more meat on it. What was her life like before she was taken in by the old couple? Did she train with anyone, or did she train herself? What made her decide to settle down in Magnolia?
C. Statistics: This is the fourth time you've been reminded to make sure your character's total stats (Strength, Defense, Endurance, Speed, and Magic Power) all add up to 30. Do not go above the total amount of 30.
D. Magic: That section of the profile is missing the section where the character's spells are supposed to go. Please make sure to include the section during your edit.
Once again, profile not approved until revised; and once again, edit the profile you posted and do not make another one.
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Fiery Keys • Name :: Athena Rivers • Age :: 16 • Height :: 4 ft • Weight :: 35 kgs • Hair Color :: Auburn • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: Fair • Tattoo / Markings :: N/A • Race :: Human • Personality:: Athena has a pretty sweet personality but she is ruthless in battle and shows no mercy AT All. This is because she feels that if she is like this she can fool her enemy into thinking she’s soft. She tends to get touchy about her past because her She is very good at making friends, though. However, if anyone gets on her bad side, there’ll be hell to pay. People get on her bad side when they pester her about her past, contradict her, etc. • Biography :: Until she was 13, Athena lived a peaceful life with her parents. But then a dark wizard killed her mother while trying to steal a magic lacrima from their house. Athena was devastated, and even more still, when her father, out of grief and despair, killed himself. She then swore to get revenge for her parents and learnt Wind Magic. She trained hard by herself to become strong, and then decided to settle down in Magnolia for no particular reason. Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████
•Guild Name :: N/A •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: N/A •Color of Mark :: N/A
Ⅲ.XXX▐░ Statistics Data ██ █████████████████████████
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra :: N/A
Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 11:35 am
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Zaedis • Name :: Sideaz Kroe • Age :: 17 • Height :: 5'8 • Weight :: 180 • Hair Color :: Blue • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: White • Tattoo / Markings :: None • Race :: Human • Personality:: Lonely and quiet but very energetic and lively once you get to know him • Biography :: Sideaz didn't have any friends when he was growing up but then found a book that taught him the basics of magic and found great joy in it. He eventually got good enough that the strange old man at the end of the street noticed him. He then starts to talk to the old man and finally thinks that he had found his first friend. The old man told Sideaz to follow him to his home promising telling him that he would give him some books on magic. The old man then hypnotizes him and starts experimenting on him eventually leading to the old man placing a White Dragon Slayer Lacrima inside Sideaz’s body. When he wakes up his entire town is destroyed and the old man’s rotting corpse right in front of him. Sideaz then walks around the country until he hears about guilds and figures that he should probably join one.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: None •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: •Color of Mark ::
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water + 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
Ⅳ.XXX▐░ Wizard Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Primary Magic Name :: White Dragons Slayer •Primary Magic Type :: Slayer •Mana Amount :: 750
● (Insert Magic Name Here)xx
↬ (Name of Spell) :: Spell Name:White Dragon's Roar Description:The White Dragon Slayer's exclusive Dragon's Roar, incorporating the element of light. The user releases a tornado of light from their mouth to attack the target. This spell can also take the form of a laser; the trajectory of said laser can be altered, allowing the user to strike more than one opponent. This attack is based on Magical Power. ↬ Mana Cost: 400
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost:
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
↬ (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ↬ Mana Cost: ???
- I'd evaluate you but I promised Leonidas Peridot that she could handle this one. Dont worry though. You're close!
Zaedis
-Approved
Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 6:33 pm
Fiery Keys
My apologies for you having to wait about a month for my follow-up review; life tends to be a pain sometimes. XD
Anyways, the third (or fourth, I think I lost count) review's a charm, my friend. ^^ You've kept to the limits of the total stat points, and the biography seems to be alright. However, as a reminder, don't forget to have the spells for your magic approved in the Custom Spell area before they can be used. ^^
Ometison
I'm approving the profile; anything I may have missed?
