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 Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:40 am
(( Yeah, like the dances they do.))
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:13 am
Zeraal Suicidesoldier#1 ((Cool, except Socom, is not a branch; if you want to be a Special Forces unit, specifically, you can be Army Special Forces. Also, post more! blaugh )) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
Arrival
The DI glared at the new recruit, En'K'Haral, a menacing glow of hate pouring out of his body. The recruits first display of action had been hellish, but DI fully capable of molding this hunk of s**t into something useful, and that didn't smell so bad.. "ATTENTION! Soldier, forward march. I want to see entirely what you are capable of! Present your name, height, and weight soldier Refer to yourself as 'this soldier' and not as 'I' as wel- God damn it soldier are you GAY?!" The drill sergeant barked and spat as he spoke, a blue vein trembling in the upper right corner of his forehead, almost like it was about ready to explode and gush torrents of blood all over the new recruit, mercilessly.
Army Special Forces
Bus
ArrivalEn'K'Haral had been enjoying his last momentss of free thought and action. When the DI had yelled at him he snapped to attention and marched forward, the action was sloppy and he new he would quickly regret it. He shouted his response but looked straight through the DI as if he wasn't there. "Sir! This soldier's name is En'K'Haral. This soldier is five feet elevan inchs in height. This soldier is one hundred-sixty-one pounds sir!
Sir! I am not gay sir!"s**t!Was his first thought as he caught the mistake only after he had said it. En'K'Haral stood there sweating and wondering what he had just earned himself. ((I apologize if this is not enough. Plus I am confused so I need to put Army special forces instead of Socom correct? Also the name is pronounced En-Ka-Harall)) ((Well, SOCOM is not a branch. You must be a part of the core branches- Army, Marines, Navy, Airforce, and then you can be a part of SOCOM and be an individual unit in SOCOM corresponding to your branch. You aren't necessarily SOCOM- if your in the Army, then you'll be Army Socom, or if you in the Navy your Navy Socom, but your not 'socom'. So you have to apply to an individual branch first. Btw... you passed! )) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalA small grin stretched across the DI's face when the recruit answered. "Bullshit. I bet you could suck a golf ball through a water hole. You into sodomy? I've got my eye on you boy..." The drill sergeant continued on down his path along the bus, keeping straight in the aisle, and looking for any more recruits that might be ******** up.
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:33 am
Suicidesoldier#1 ((Well, SOCOM is not a branch. You must be a part of the core branches- Army, Marines, Navy, Airforce, and then you can be a part of SOCOM and be an individual unit in SOCOM corresponding to your branch. You aren't necessarily SOCOM- if your in the Army, then you'll be Army Socom, or if you in the Navy your Navy Socom, but your not 'socom'. So you have to apply to an individual branch first. Btw... you passed! )) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalA small grin stretched across the DI's face when the recruit answered. "Bullshit. I bet you could suck a golf ball through a water hole. You into sodomy? I've got my eye on you boy..." The drill sergeant continued on down his path along the bus, keeping straight in the aisle, and looking for any more recruits that might be ******** up. ((Alright so change it to army then is that correct? Full metal jacket powned!! Five foot six!? I didn't know they stacked s**t that high!! xd Passed awsome! I guess I better start my next session in the army then))
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:40 am
Zeraal Suicidesoldier#1 ((Well, SOCOM is not a branch. You must be a part of the core branches- Army, Marines, Navy, Airforce, and then you can be a part of SOCOM and be an individual unit in SOCOM corresponding to your branch. You aren't necessarily SOCOM- if your in the Army, then you'll be Army Socom, or if you in the Navy your Navy Socom, but your not 'socom'. So you have to apply to an individual branch first. Btw... you passed! )) Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalA small grin stretched across the DI's face when the recruit answered. "Bullshit. I bet you could suck a golf ball through a water hole. You into sodomy? I've got my eye on you boy..." The drill sergeant continued on down his path along the bus, keeping straight in the aisle, and looking for any more recruits that might be ******** up. ((Alright so change it to army then is that correct? Full metal jacket powned!! Five foot six!? I didn't know they stacked s**t that high!! xd Passed awsome! I guess I better start my next session in the army then)) ((woot! Lolz on 'water hole', my bad lol mmhmz. xd ))
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 7:32 pm
Grant Luxem
Navy
Bus
Arrival
Wonderful, thought Grant as he sat at the back of the bus, leaning his head back against the wall, getting banged around by the jostling movements of the poor suspension system. He had applied for the Navy late in senior year of college, and had been all too happy to get out of his house. His psychotic brother had been trying to kill him for years now, and his parents had done almost completely ignored it. He had researched military recruitment, and despite the challenges listed, he new it was better than living with a psycho brother and ignorant parents. As the bus rolled to a stop, he sighed and shouldered his bag. before he could stand up to get off, however, a barrel-chested man thundered up the steps and stopped immediately next to the driver. Instantly all chatter on the bus stopped. Not even the flies buzzed, out of sheer universal terror. Everyone knew who this man was. Everyone knew him as the Drill Sergeant.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 4:35 am
Harry Maddigan
Army-armored mechanized force
Bus
Arrival
Harry have seen it before and will be seeing it for years to come,stereotypes of constantly screaming, overbearing, abusive drill sergeants always parade any military based movie, serious or comedy but he never expected to be this worse.
The sergeant scream and chewed out the poor recruit right behind him who made the stupid mistake of chuckling, he kept quiet 'better him than me' he thought, the more that ape of a sarge direct his perpetual anger on someone other than him the better and sooner the bus arrives to boot camp.
Once he finished that thought the jolt and squeel of brakes can be heard as it finally arrived and stands up, and a thought came to him 'the sarge have to say we can stand ....right?'
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 5:16 am
Lord Tai Roleplay Name: Tai
Branch: Army
Location: Bus
Objective: ArrivalAs the bus roared down the road toward its destination, carrying its burden of passengers along with it, one particular individual became increasingly bored. Tai, a recruit among the many that were packed into the vehicle, removed his decorative officer's cap, which he recieved during his last venture into military service, and began scrubbing at the metal insignia that it bore with his sleeve. Satisfied that the emblem was as shiny as it was going to get, he replaced it on his head, pausing to see if it was straight or not before checking other areas of his person. He noted a loose screw in his mechanical arm, which seemed to have been shaken from its place by the vibration of the bus. Taking a quick glance over the rest of the arm, he found only two other screws that had started to come out of place. Mentally noting their positions, he withdrew a small flat-head screw-driver from within the shirt pocket that lie beneath an array of medals and began tightening them again. As the bus began to slow, he slipped the screw-driver back into his pocket and patiently waited for the order to move. (I hope this is okay. Please let me know if there is anything that needs to be fixed.) ((Okay Ed Elric, I get the picture, you sold your brothers soul and lost you arm and leg. Good Grammar, Good Spelling, over-all decent sentence structure, you kept yourself busy. So long as you don't plan adding weird stuff like your arm that into your actual roleplays... Congratulations, you passed! blaugh
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 5:20 am
Commnader Crowbar Grant Luxem
Navy
Bus
ArrivalWonderful, thought Grant as he sat at the back of the bus, leaning his head back against the wall, getting banged around by the jostling movements of the poor suspension system. He had applied for the Navy late in senior year of college, and had been all too happy to get out of his house. His psychotic brother had been trying to kill him for years now, and his parents had done almost completely ignored it. He had researched military recruitment, and despite the challenges listed, he new it was better than living with a psycho brother and ignorant parents. As the bus rolled to a stop, he sighed and shouldered his bag. before he could stand up to get off, however, a barrel-chested man thundered up the steps and stopped immediately next to the driver. Instantly all chatter on the bus stopped. Not even the flies buzzed, out of sheer universal terror. Everyone knew who this man was. Everyone knew him as the Drill Sergeant. ((Um... Decent Grammar, Decent Spelling, Good sentence Structure. Over-all it was pretty good and you didn't break the Amp. It was a little short but, your entire set-up was nice, and I give you Kudo's for your back story; pretty original. I bet you were expecting me to talk to you in Character so I understand part of why you did something that I won't tell you... ninja Anyways, congratulations, you passed! blaugh ))
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 5:31 am
boomstix Harry Maddigan Army-armored mechanized force Bus Arrival Harry have seen it before and will be seeing it for years to come,stereotypes of constantly screaming, overbearing, abusive drill sergeants always parade any military based movie, serious or comedy but he never expected to be this worse. The sergeant scream and chewed out the poor recruit right behind him who made the stupid mistake of chuckling, he kept quiet 'better him than me' he thought, the more that ape of a sarge direct his perpetual anger on someone other than him the better and sooner the bus arrives to boot camp. Once he finished that thought the jolt and squeel of brakes can be heard as it finally arrived and stands up, and a thought came to him 'the sarge have to say we can stand ....right?' ((Mhhm. Over-all decent spelling, decent grammar, okay sentence structure. I want to get some more samples from you however, just to be sure... ))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalAfter passing up another recruit he had just chewed out, The DI couldn't help but notice some giggling behind him; and he hunted giggling. It wasn't something so much as he hated, as so much that he hunted. He loved a fresh quality meal; and these recruits were ripe and ready for the picking. "You there, Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The Drill Sergeant barked, spitting as he spoke, spraying his words out almost in unison with his spit; almost like the two substances had combined, and had fused into a singular unit, each dependent on each other, each fundamentally having the same effect on the new recruit.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 5:42 am
Suicidesoldier#1 boomstix Harry Maddigan Army-armored mechanized force Bus Arrival Harry have seen it before and will be seeing it for years to come,stereotypes of constantly screaming, overbearing, abusive drill sergeants always parade any military based movie, serious or comedy but he never expected to be this worse. The sergeant scream and chewed out the poor recruit right behind him who made the stupid mistake of chuckling, he kept quiet 'better him than me' he thought, the more that ape of a sarge direct his perpetual anger on someone other than him the better and sooner the bus arrives to boot camp. Once he finished that thought the jolt and squeel of brakes can be heard as it finally arrived and stands up, and a thought came to him 'the sarge have to say we can stand ....right?' ((Mhhm. Over-all decent spelling, decent grammar, okay sentence structure. I want to get some more samples from you however, just to be sure... ))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalAfter passing up another recruit he had just chewed out, The DI couldn't help but notice some giggling behind him; and he hunted giggling. It wasn't something so much as he hated, as so much that he hunted. He loved a fresh quality meal; and these recruits were ripe and ready for the picking. "You there, Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The Drill Sergeant barked, spitting as he spoke, spraying his words out almost in unison with his spit; almost like the two substances had combined, and had fused into a singular unit, each dependent on each other, each fundamentally having the same effect on the new recruit. ((kk~)) Harry heard the scary ape scream, from a second He thought the DI spotted him, wanting to play it safe He slowly sits down, looking around his fellow recruits to see if they are leaving or staying put in their seats. "close call...." He whisper under his breathe, He really wanted to ride tanks but He always cursed why do the army even bother putting someone like this neantherthal in boot camp, he wasn't even enlisted as a a footslogger
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 6:14 am
boomstix Suicidesoldier#1 boomstix Harry Maddigan Army-armored mechanized force Bus Arrival Harry have seen it before and will be seeing it for years to come,stereotypes of constantly screaming, overbearing, abusive drill sergeants always parade any military based movie, serious or comedy but he never expected to be this worse. The sergeant scream and chewed out the poor recruit right behind him who made the stupid mistake of chuckling, he kept quiet 'better him than me' he thought, the more that ape of a sarge direct his perpetual anger on someone other than him the better and sooner the bus arrives to boot camp. Once he finished that thought the jolt and squeel of brakes can be heard as it finally arrived and stands up, and a thought came to him 'the sarge have to say we can stand ....right?' ((Mhhm. Over-all decent spelling, decent grammar, okay sentence structure. I want to get some more samples from you however, just to be sure... ))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalAfter passing up another recruit he had just chewed out, The DI couldn't help but notice some giggling behind him; and he hunted giggling. It wasn't something so much as he hated, as so much that he hunted. He loved a fresh quality meal; and these recruits were ripe and ready for the picking. "You there, Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The Drill Sergeant barked, spitting as he spoke, spraying his words out almost in unison with his spit; almost like the two substances had combined, and had fused into a singular unit, each dependent on each other, each fundamentally having the same effect on the new recruit. ((kk~)) Harry heard the scary ape scream, from a second He thought the DI spotted him, wanting to play it safe He slowly sits down, looking around his fellow recruits to see if they are leaving or staying put in their seats. "close call...." He whisper under his breathe, He really wanted to ride tanks but He always cursed why do the army even bother putting someone like this neantherthal in boot camp, he wasn't even enlisted as a a footslogger Drill Sergeant Military D.I's Bus Arrival The DI grew furious, and extremely upset at the recruit who had just blatantly ignored him. Actually enjoying the ability to severely reprimand a recruit, the DI crouched down a little, bent over slightly at a 15 degree angle, placed his head right next to the recruits, and began screeching into the recruits ear."You there, YEAH YOU. Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The drill sergeant barked and spat as he spoke, a blue vein trembling in the upper right corner of his forehead, almost like it was about ready to explode and gush torrents of blood all over the new recruit, mercilessly.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 6:30 am
Suicidesoldier#1 boomstix Suicidesoldier#1 boomstix Harry Maddigan Army-armored mechanized force Bus Arrival Harry have seen it before and will be seeing it for years to come,stereotypes of constantly screaming, overbearing, abusive drill sergeants always parade any military based movie, serious or comedy but he never expected to be this worse. The sergeant scream and chewed out the poor recruit right behind him who made the stupid mistake of chuckling, he kept quiet 'better him than me' he thought, the more that ape of a sarge direct his perpetual anger on someone other than him the better and sooner the bus arrives to boot camp. Once he finished that thought the jolt and squeel of brakes can be heard as it finally arrived and stands up, and a thought came to him 'the sarge have to say we can stand ....right?' ((Mhhm. Over-all decent spelling, decent grammar, okay sentence structure. I want to get some more samples from you however, just to be sure... ))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
ArrivalAfter passing up another recruit he had just chewed out, The DI couldn't help but notice some giggling behind him; and he hunted giggling. It wasn't something so much as he hated, as so much that he hunted. He loved a fresh quality meal; and these recruits were ripe and ready for the picking. "You there, Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The Drill Sergeant barked, spitting as he spoke, spraying his words out almost in unison with his spit; almost like the two substances had combined, and had fused into a singular unit, each dependent on each other, each fundamentally having the same effect on the new recruit. ((kk~)) Harry heard the scary ape scream, from a second He thought the DI spotted him, wanting to play it safe He slowly sits down, looking around his fellow recruits to see if they are leaving or staying put in their seats. "close call...." He whisper under his breathe, He really wanted to ride tanks but He always cursed why do the army even bother putting someone like this neantherthal in boot camp, he wasn't even enlisted as a a footslogger Drill Sergeant Military D.I's Bus Arrival The DI grew furious, and extremely upset at the recruit who had just blatantly ignored him. Actually enjoying the ability to severely reprimand a recruit, the DI crouched down a little, bent over slightly at a 15 degree angle, placed his head right next to the recruits, and began screeching into the recruits ear."You there, YEAH YOU. Laughy McGee, present your name, height, age, and weight, recruit!" The drill sergeant barked and spat as he spoke, a blue vein trembling in the upper right corner of his forehead, almost like it was about ready to explode and gush torrents of blood all over the new recruit, mercilessly.((uh he's talking to me right?)) "GYAH!!!" Harry jumped from his seat and stand up "I um...Harry Maddigan, 5'4 age 27 , 160 um...SIR!!" He's done it now. he wasn't so sure if the DI is talking to him or some guy behind him, the man is just too loud to judge how near he is.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 7:13 am
((Haha, congratulations, you passed! blaugh ))
Drill Sergeant
Military D.I's
Bus
Arrival
The DI squinted his eyes while staring at the recruit, and let out a deep, menacing, roaring laugh, as a large smile broke out about his face, revealing all his teeth."Look son, I don't care which part of you is Harry, and I don't Care if your 'Mad Again", when your on my bus you do what I say; and that means no unnecessary noises! You do not blink, you do not cough, you do not sneeze, you do not fart unless I say so, is that understood soldier?" The Drill sergeant had thought he had did enough, and expected the soldier to return a salute and message of understanding in the future.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:05 am
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