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sheepcakes


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 11:51 am


TheQualityofMercy
Lighten the skirt just a little more...and let the light-area expend closer to her arm.
The highlight on the hair looks pretty good, I would make her curls two or three pixels thicker. That way you can have more fun practicing to shade them! whee
Did you give her a smaller chest? Perhaps it's your white being evil again.
Feel free to go just a titch darker around the very edges. The grey you've got right now looks awesome!
(Nice work on the bow-you may want to shade it as well. wink )
Ok, thank you.
I tried my best to make her flat chested because Chibi Chibi is a little girl.
*goes back to work on her*
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:21 pm


Lucca Ashtear
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Another commission for AllianceSJR. I am very, very proud of this one.

Nice job 3nodding

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:22 pm


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Ok, thank you.
I tried my best to make her flat chested because Chibi Chibi is a little girl.
*goes back to work on her*


As mercy kinda alluded to, you didn't really darken the outline on the white enough.

My current Gaia avatar is a good example of white clothing on avatars, you might notice that they go quite dark grey with shading and it still looks fine.

Darker shadows stop things looking luminant. 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:28 pm


dragon bound
Ok, thank you.
I tried my best to make her flat chested because Chibi Chibi is a little girl.
*goes back to work on her*

this may just be me, but i've noticed that even the younger sailors still have chest definition. i'm not too up on the names, but the young one with the green hair seemed to

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:35 pm


sailor Mercury is like... PHWOAR!!

*runs and hides*

Anyone else notice quotes have stopped working?
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 4:20 pm


Yes. Yes I have.

Lucca Ashtear


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 5:25 pm


I'm glad it's not just me going insane then.

We're all just that little bit too loopy. Loopy to the point that we're quite frightening! Well... I am...
whee
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 6:56 pm


*kills sailor Mercury while no one is looking* eek

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 7:07 pm


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ninja dunno if I should be here...but just made this for a friend of mine...of a more ...modern crowd...needed opinions. XD And yes, the staff IS suppose to be exactly the same color as the shirt. I had a hard enough time distinguishing it in the picture... emotion_sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 5:47 am


Good guess, sailore, this is where the comments and criticisms are served in buckets.

I do like your latest edit. The pastelly colours do make it look very soft and very homosexual. I'm sure your mate will be very happy. :3

Lucca: I really do love the details on the suit's engraved pannels. The helmet is exquisite. You have every right to be proud. That edit is definitely one of your most in-depth. Awesome work!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 7:30 am


nice animation u got there, sailoreclipse 3nodding

i know u said that the staff & shirt are the same exact color.. but if u want to distinguish one from the other more, u can try giving the staff more of a shading on its right/bottom side & a soft highlighting on the left/top side.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:07 am


Such high praise from Vorty himself? I am honored.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:31 am


lucca, i agree with vorty.. ur stormtrooper edit is spectacular.. u did a wonderful job with the armour & helmet's shading, and i like how the pose came out with the blaster rifle. tis a work worthy of praise. 3nodding






*radios in through the stormtrooper helm*

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 9:06 am


lol thanks. ^^ I'll keep that highlighting trick in mind for future reference. And petals isn't my mate; just a friend. XD I'm a girl--and as you can probably tell from his outfit--he is NOT into girls very much. emotion_sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 9:32 am


aw dont sound so disappointed, sailoreclipse whee


yea, that highlighting trick is a good one to use.. especially in cases like ur staff & shirt. also, methinks vorty meant mate as in friend.. he's british u see, so he's got some different slang wordz than us, dudette. wink
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