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Dysclerion
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 8:39 am


Aha, very well then.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 8:46 am


The Criticizer
Aha, very well then.

The other character in Kiri with the last name "Takanashi" is my character, Synn, Midori's half-sister.

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Name: Uchiha Mifune
Nickname(s): The Prince of Dreams
Age:18
Birthdate: March Third
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Heterosexual
Relationship Status: Single/Looking
Ethnicity:Italian

Height: 1.8 m (5 ft. 10 in.)
Weight: 80 kg (176 lbs)
Body Build: Skinny/Toned
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Plumb (blackish -purple )

Physical Description: The most prominent feature that Mifune possesses is without a doubt his bright blue eyes. Some say they are pretty others say they are just plain creepy. Secondly would be his wardrobe. He prefers to wear extravagant silk cloths and firs when he can. He also has a very defined jaw and slightly pale skin despite growing up in the desert.

Personality: Mifune has a very complex personality. One one hand he is joyous and helpful. On the he is a harsh and unrelenting realist. He will gladly help someone if there is a point and reason behind what he is helping with, if not then you have a better chance of getting water from a stone.

Behavior: When he is engaged in combat he never holds back and will exploit every single weakness he can to gain victory. To him it matters not what the cost of completing a mission is as long as it is completed successfully. Out of combat he is calculating and gathers information almost passively using every action a person makes to build a mental profile of the person.
On the off chance that he gets close to someone and becomes friends then he will do what ever is needed to aid them.

Nindo: "The ends justify the means"

Theme song: Demons By Avenged Sevenfold

Character History: The Birth of a Prince

Village: Konohagakure

Rank: Genin


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Clan/Bloodline: Sharingan/ Uchiha Approval
Stage: Inactive


Ninja Class: Genjutsu

Special Ability: [Intricate Deception]

- Genjutsu Class ninja are especially skilled at crafting the illusions they inflict on others. This makes all Genjutsu Class ninja act as if they are one rank higher when determining the effectiveness of their Genjutsu and it multiplies the Stamina Drain caused by the Genjutsu by 1.5x .

Tweak: None

Mifune enjoys mentally tearing apart his enemy's and takes a small sadistic pleasure from watching those who stand against him suffer. Furthermore due to his high intelligence and massive chakra pool as well as a large amount of control over said chakra makes him a natural genjutsu user.

Attributes:

Primary Attribute: Great Chakra Reserves
Though few individuals are blessed with legendary amounts of chakra like Bijuu hosts are, variations in chakra levels still exist between shinobi. As the very basis of the techniques that the ninja world depends on, the amount of chakra a shinobi has directly effects what they can and cannot do. Those blessed to have high chakra however find that they are capable of using more ninjutsu then their companions, allowing them to last longer in combat, and in the most dire of need, draw from an inner power to go beyond their limits.

Benefit: User receives an additional +5/10 chakra points. [For every 10 points of chakra a user has, they receive an additional 5 points of chakra]

Combat Ability: Once per combat, even if the user has been completely drained of their chakra, the user can still complete one final jutsu which they already know by utilizing their "Overdraft" ability. [This jutsu costs no Stamina to use]

Secondary Attribute: Intelligence:
Ninja with this attribute are the strategists who can read several moves ahead. They are able to use their vast trained knowledge to gain an edge in battle, or innately understand the underlying principles behind even completely foreign situations. Through study and a training of the mind, their minds have been sharpened and honed to in a sense, see into the future of what will most likely occur.

Benefit: All jutsu, for the purposes of learning, are considered one rank lower and can be learned at an accelerated rate, of 3 fewer posts required. (Example: If a Genin wishes to learn a Chuunin technique, it counts as a D-rank and has a -3 learning counter... meaning he can learn it in 2 posts, when others would require 8.)

Tertiary Attribute: Endurance:

If placed in the Tertiary slot, it gives an additional 3 stamina per rank.

Seeing the mental and physical strain genjutsu causes Mifune has began to develop and increase the amounts of punishments that he can take.

Mifune learned very early on that if he was to succeed as a genjutsu user he would need to outlast his enemy's and that meant having a large pool of chakra to draw upon. From an early age he dove head first into books and learned every thing he could and continues to learn all that he can at all times. It was only recently that he has began to work on his physical stamina. He noticed the extreme punishment that genjutsu placed on an opponent caused to their physical stamina. So from this he began to work on his ability to take more punishment so as to be able to last a bit longer should he ever find himself in a genjutsu.

Specialties:

Chakra Control: All Nin-/Gen-/Tai-/Ken-jutsu techniques are reduced in cost as if they were one rank lower (for Chakra only) at Genin, and at Special Jounin and above, they cost one rank lower (for Chakra only) minus an additional 1 chakra point. Use of chakra control techniques such as Wall/Water walking cost nothing. Also, ninjutsu 2 ranks below the user and below do not require hand seals to perform.

Stealth: Though Stealth ninja cannot make themselves seemingly invisible as Assassins can, they still find many ways to hide their presence. Stealth ninja have the ability to completely mute their footsteps and are extremely adept at moving without making any noise. Also, although they cannot disappear as an Assassin in [Stealth], they can still hide their chakra signatures to avoid being detected by a Sensor, or a shinobi with a detection bloodline (To detect a Stealth ninja via chakra signature, you must be an equal ranked Sensor ninja, or have a bloodline which puts you at an effective equal rank in terms of detection).

Stealth ninja also have a series of unique abilities which help them to hide their intentions and true identities in when they are in plain sight. When performing jutsu, they need not 'announce' the title of their technique, allowing them merely to use the necessary hand seals to create the effect. All Stealth ninja also have the ability to use Slight of Hand, allowing them to make small objects (shuriken, kunai, a scroll, etc...) appear and disappear in their hands seemingly instantaneously. This allows them to make subtle movements, removing or placing items in their pockets/pouches behind their backs without even the keenest observer noticing.

Additionally, Stealth ninja can 'infuse' any clone they make with their own chakra signature, which can throw pursuing sensors off their trail. If a stealth ninja is 'marked' by a sensor, the mark also appears on the clone, making the Sensor see a 'double' image. This forces them to make a choice as to which 'marked' target they will attempt to track down, giving the Stealth Ninja a better chance to escape.

Note: Chakra Control is one of the specialties available on this list. Having the Chakra Control specialty along with the Stealth specialty allows you to control and hide your chakra signature even better, and you will receive +1 to your rank as a stealth specialist.


# Chakra Elements: 2

Primary --> Katon
Secondary --> Raiton (Chuunin)


Chakra Color: Orange with flecks of red

Total Chakra:35
Total Stamina:28


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Squad Name/number:
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


Completed Missions Log:

Total Mission Points (MP) acquired:

E-rank Missions:
D-rank Missions:
C-rank Missions:
B-rank Missions:
A-rank Missions:
S-rank Missions:




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Non-Elemental

Rank E - (Basic)

• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)




Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)





Katon (Fire)

Rank E - (Basic)




Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)




Raiton (Lightning )(Unobtainable)

Rank E - (Basic)




Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)





Genjutsu

Rank E - (Basic)
• Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)



Rank D - (Genin)




Rank C - (Chuunin)




Rank B - (Special Jounin)




Rank A - (Jounin)




Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)




Bloodline Abilities






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Taijutsu Styles Allowed:

Primary Style:
Current level of Mastery:






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# Custom Weapons Allowed:1

Custom Weapon 1: None

Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range:
Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:

Special Properties:



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Headband Location | Style | Color: On forehead | Normal | Black

Outfit | Style: Specified in the personality and in the picture.
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Outfit | Color: (see above)
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: On a belt on his right hip
| Black
Projectile Holster Location | Color: On his belt on his left hip
| Black
Scroll Holster Location | Color: Strapped in a holster on his left Bicep | Black

Kunai: 7
Shuriken: 10
Senbon: 0
Makibishi: 0
Smoke Bomb: 3
Flash Bombs: 0


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:10 am


Cobra_X
Edited. Just waiting for acceptance on Bloodline.

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Deil Grist
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:35 pm


Azeiel The Fallen


I don't think Cobra will mind me taking something off his plate, so here we go:

1. You gain three stamina per rank for having endurance as tertiary, but Academy Student is not a rank in this guild. Therefore you gain three stamina for now instead of six.
2. You don't have your number of taijutsu styles listed, and you need to get rid of all the stuff in between the parts with < > around them.
3. You don't have to have a filled out character history yet. Simply link your RPC's "life of a shinobi" thread in the profile and get your background filled out there within the next couple weeks.
4. Give us a summary or paraphrase of what is asked of you for your attributes and specialties when filling those sections out instead of copying and pasting the info. We need to know you know the information.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:59 am


BlackFruity
Cobra_X
Fruity: Outou

- Please look at the custom weapons thread. A few points were brought up that I think you should comment on regarding your second heart.

- Please add english ht/wt values.

- You will be the last remnant of the Kurama clan, but I will say this to you... I expect you to use these abilities sparingly and fairly. In any case when you use a Genjutsu under the guise of your bloodline, you spend equal stamina to the chakra used and it cannot be an effect which is automatically attributed to the user... it must be an effect which can be dealt with in some way or another [Example, no imaging their skin and flesh covered in acid... only that a giant fireball is plummeting towards them through the sky. Also, it's limited to TANGIBLE effects. You cannot create real people or demons, etc... just elemental effects.]

- Cunning and Intricate deception will not stack effectively, but I guess you can say it gives genjutsu a slight boost more then normal. You may want to consider something else if the lack of stacking bothers you.

- When your summon is approved, link the approval.
Hey, I hear, the futurebirds; it's called spaceships...

- I had been reading your discussion with Criticizer, and he sent me a PM about it as well. I replied to him asking about whether I'll need to add what you two had agreed on to the weapon's description, and, if so, how to format it appropriately. He has yet to reply. I have no qualms at all with what you and Crit. agreed on!

- Values added!

- If anything I will be trying to avoid using the bloodline at all costs. It is too dangerous for her to use. But I will take your warning seriously.

- The stacking does not bother me at all!

- I will link once approved, but may I use my character (without the summons) until the approval is given?

Thank you for everything, Cobra!

...astronauts and all, let's trade all these types of things for wings.
Sorry for reposting this, but I was wondering about two points;
a) I still haven't been replied to by either Crit or Cobra over the weapon, as I talked about above,
b) is my character otherwise approved?
Again, I am sorry for the spam-like reply, I was just curious. Hope you guys are having a great day!


BlackFruity


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Dysclerion
Vice Captain

Phantom

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 3:53 am


It's not really a problem, you can format it however you want in the style you did with the whole Weapon. Remember this:

1. She feeds the heart with chakra every now and then for all of it's services.

2. The heart has its own Chakra System [Total/Maximum Points: 40 Chakra Points]

3. The Stamina needed for a heal [Five Stamina Points] is paid by the user, while the Chakra needed for it [Also five chakra points] are paid by the Second heart's own Chakra System.

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 5:16 am


The Criticizer
It's not really a problem, you can format it however you want in the style you did with the whole Weapon. Remember this:

1. She feeds the heart with chakra every now and then for all of it's services.

2. The heart has its own Chakra System [Total/Maximum Points: 40 Chakra Points]

3. The Stamina needed for a heal [Five Stamina Points] is paid by the user, while the Chakra needed for it [Also five chakra points] are paid by the Second heart's own Chakra System.

Hey, I hear, the futurebirds; it's called spaceships...

Excellent, thank you very much! Knowing those are the main parts are all I really required - I didn't know what to write down specifically so this is perfect - thank you again!

...astronauts and all, let's trade all these types of things for wings.


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:47 am


Deil Grist
Azeiel The Fallen


I don't think Cobra will mind me taking something off his plate, so here we go:

1. You gain three stamina per rank for having endurance as tertiary, but Academy Student is not a rank in this guild. Therefore you gain three stamina for now instead of six.
2. You don't have your number of taijutsu styles listed, and you need to get rid of all the stuff in between the parts with < > around them.
3. You don't have to have a filled out character history yet. Simply link your RPC's "life of a shinobi" thread in the profile and get your background filled out there within the next couple weeks.
4. Give us a summary or paraphrase of what is asked of you for your attributes and specialties when filling those sections out instead of copying and pasting the info. We need to know you know the information.

1. Done
2. Done
3. Thank you
4. None of the other profiles in this thread have had to do that ?? Why am I being forced to do so ? Some of them have paraphrases with information on how the tertiary attribute affects them but nothing on the specialties.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:04 am


Azeiel The Fallen
Deil Grist
Azeiel The Fallen


I don't think Cobra will mind me taking something off his plate, so here we go:

1. You gain three stamina per rank for having endurance as tertiary, but Academy Student is not a rank in this guild. Therefore you gain three stamina for now instead of six.
2. You don't have your number of taijutsu styles listed, and you need to get rid of all the stuff in between the parts with < > around them.
3. You don't have to have a filled out character history yet. Simply link your RPC's "life of a shinobi" thread in the profile and get your background filled out there within the next couple weeks.
4. Give us a summary or paraphrase of what is asked of you for your attributes and specialties when filling those sections out instead of copying and pasting the info. We need to know you know the information.

1. Done
2. Done
3. Thank you
4. None of the other profiles in this thread have had to do that ?? Why am I being forced to do so ? Some of them have paraphrases with information on how the tertiary attribute affects them but nothing on the specialties.

Actually, everyone is asked to do it, but some people just include it in the brief description of all of their attributes. Some people just roll them into one paragraph, but others more responsibly describe the benefit of their tertiary stat and then all of their attributes together.

... I try not to sweat that particular part too much though. Ill look over your profile again and let you know.

Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:09 am


Cobra_X
Azeiel The Fallen
Deil Grist
Azeiel The Fallen


I don't think Cobra will mind me taking something off his plate, so here we go:

1. You gain three stamina per rank for having endurance as tertiary, but Academy Student is not a rank in this guild. Therefore you gain three stamina for now instead of six.
2. You don't have your number of taijutsu styles listed, and you need to get rid of all the stuff in between the parts with < > around them.
3. You don't have to have a filled out character history yet. Simply link your RPC's "life of a shinobi" thread in the profile and get your background filled out there within the next couple weeks.
4. Give us a summary or paraphrase of what is asked of you for your attributes and specialties when filling those sections out instead of copying and pasting the info. We need to know you know the information.

1. Done
2. Done
3. Thank you
4. None of the other profiles in this thread have had to do that ?? Why am I being forced to do so ? Some of them have paraphrases with information on how the tertiary attribute affects them but nothing on the specialties.

Actually, everyone is asked to do it, but some people just include it in the brief description of all of their attributes. Some people just roll them into one paragraph, but others more responsibly describe the benefit of their tertiary stat and then all of their attributes together.

... I try not to sweat that particular part too much though. Ill look over your profile again and let you know.

KK thanks man ^.^ So do I need to put that in ?
PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:10 am


Shira:

YOU ARE APPROVED!

Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:13 am


Fruity:

YOU ARE APPROVED!
PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:31 am


Cobra_X

Alrighty all done ^.^

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:51 am


Azeiel: Mifune

YOU ARE APPROVED!
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