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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:00 pm
The shower did the trick. He was able to clear his mind. But then he thought he heard singing. He listened. There was silence. (Jeez, I'm really losing it...)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:03 pm
"Time never seems to trickle away, takes to long to be near you again. Why did I have to leave? To blind to see I needed you here next to me. From the start I should of known. Should of known you needed to be here with me Here with me Here with me."
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:27 pm
It didn't make sense. he heard nothing, but a song echoed in his head. The song somehow seemed soothing. He felt calm and relaxed.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:30 pm
"Everytime I look away from you your already gone, because I didn't keep you here with me, I let you go. The future was uncertain and I didn't keep you here to help me through it. I was to blind to see I needed you here with me, here with me here with me."
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:36 pm
The song continued to echo in his head. He finished up in the shower, put on some warm clothes and then went to his room. He felt so calm that he fell asleep shortly after he entered his room.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:40 pm
I somehow know Shinji was sleeping. That was good. Then I started to here a little voice in my head. (Sometimes when you really care about someone you develop a connection with them.) Yup I'm crazy. (your not crazy I'm your little voice I'm sort of your consicne but in a lot of ways I'm not if you need me I'm up here for you) (ok then I'm I doing the right thing?) (Yes with many things I can see your thoughts are with pure intentions) (that's good)
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:00 pm
Shinji had a dream. Oddly, it felt very real. It was like a vision of what was to come. The bombs went off, everyone managed to get outside, but the head members of Shinra managed to escape by helicopter. When he woke up, Shinji didn't know what to make of the dream. It felt real, and yet, it didn't.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:02 pm
I reviewed all my data there were no escape doors. Good then no one was getting out. See I also had a code to auto lock all the doors and windows on the Head Shinra members. If not i'm poping in there and killing them myself soon as the codes go through. Everything was foolproof no one in Shinra has enough brains to work around this one.
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:14 pm
Shinji glanced out the window. he had no way of telling what time it was. (Damned plate...) He got up and got dressed. It looked like team gold was getting ready to move out. Shinji armed himself. Just before they left, Shinji went back and got a piece of fire materia that he had stashed away.
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:04 pm
I'd sent out the signal almost half an hour ago. I was waiting in the computer room team blue was dispercing themselves around the building. Since we were here for an imginary deal all the Shinra fat cats were here trying to get their piece of the deal, no one was left out today. I heard a call on the walkie talkie.
"Were almsot there Deneria."
"Roger. Tell me when your withen range of the outisde cameras so I can shut them down."
"Roger over and out."
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 5:44 pm
The sky seemed like something new to Shinji. It had been so long since he'd last seen it. And the Shinra building seemed like a lion's den. Just seeing it made him remember the horrors he went through.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:00 pm
"Were near the cameras." I shut the cameras off. Like lighting blue team opened the door and two team gold members rushed in guns up and aimmed. Everyone else ran. I locked down the office rooms bathrooms and dorm rooms. Everyone whos' key card would bypass moved throughout the building. I ran the codes in for their account. I went to their medical database and saved the data on my pda. I heard screams from rooms as people were shot. I recieved a call.
"All the bombs are in place."
"roger." I put the cameras back online everyone was in their rooms panicing. Exspecially the head members. Everyone ran out of the building as soon as all their money was into our account. We waited.
"10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1" BAM! Down went the Shinra building nice and for all taking everyone inside with it. "You've seen it all now folks." Everyone cheered the only Shinra building exsisting was goen forever.
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:04 pm
As the Shinra building went up in smoke, Shinji felt as if a terrible weight had been lifted from his shoulders. It was like a nightmare had finally ended. Relief spread to every inch of his body as he relaxed. Someone handed him a cigarette. He lit it and began to smoke.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:10 pm
I throw up my arms.
"point me to some alchoal preferably scotch, tequila or wine!." Some handed me scotch. "Thank you." Then I snet an e-mail to every computer int the world. "Shinra has fallen the world is saved." I looked at a huge screen in the plaza.
"I'm recieving word that the Shinra building is no longer standing and 15,000 empleyes are dead....... Amazing! Who ever did this is going to be recieving something!."
"were heros yay us." That sctoch was gone in about three minutes.
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