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I wants constructive critisism ♥♥

mimiu78

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Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 9:38 pm

i reeelly wanna improve ..! >o<;; soo please offer me some constructive critisism!

ooooh and please go to my dA for larger versionss of pics and discription!
http://www.mimiu78.deviantart.com

here are some:
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http://Mimiu78.deviantart.com/art/Follow-your-Dreams-95375549
http://Mimiu78.deviantart.com/art/Cherry-kimono-95198904

^_^

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:35 pm

Overall I really like the shading and coloring, really nice! and your style is pretty cool too. The only problems I see may be with foreshortening, though you could attribute some of those issues to your style as well. I would just keep practicing and posting so we could see some more 3nodding

But your shading is really awesome!

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Impmon51

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Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:44 pm

I like 4, it looks like you did it wit water colour. If you did, I'm really impressed, because I know how hard it is to use....

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:53 pm

I personally like picture three and the coloring shades that were used. I really have nothing to say about it, except that maybe you should make a more concious effort to be AWESOME!BUT UR ALREADY TOO AWESOME!!! xp

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Kyokuran

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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:17 am

I love the link to the art "Cherry kimono". Its just sooooo cute! You're really quite good already! The coloring and shading is wonderful! 4laugh I can't really say anything D: well maybe just try to keep in perspective and do your best in all your works! (can't believe I'm saying that. O.O you're really good already xd )

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