Alright these should go by PRETTY FAST because we certainly want to make sure everyone has their characters rearing to go and get started on the fun stuff, Roleplay!
A few key tips of things that will be automatic rejection
Being directly related to any of the original characters( no sister, brother, uncle, aunt-- the only exception is cousins/distant cousins in large families, like applejack's) Being involved in the original character's lives (again, exceptions being things like being pinkie pie's friend because you also live in ponyville) God-mod / over powered skills magic or otherwise. Instant death, control over other characters, things that have no "bad" side to them. Every power should have both a strength and a weakness of matching value. (small gain, small cost; big gain, big cost) No names that don't fall into the scheme. There is a "joe" in the show but for the most part try to keep with the typical way! Uber-angst / "dark" ponies -- let me be clear here, its okay to have a villain or a "dark pony", but you need to be VERY careful with this. Have a legitimate character. No "my character is SUPER lol insane like pinkemania" Your characters can always have legitimate illnesses, but do not cross the line that turns mental illness and other illness into a joke. On the same subject, no directly yoinking traits from your favorite characters. "she likes animals like fluttershy" your character's interests should speak for themselves with no links to the mane 6! No otherwise offensive ponies. No racist, sexist and whatever kind of 'ist' you can think of. Again, variety is good or if you want to challenge yourself with a pony that has a bad trait and learns a valuable lesson later, but it should have little to do with the design and name and skill of your pony. No alicorns or other "unique" species until otherwise specified. See below for limitations! No stolen art! ((If you'd like a reference image there's a pony creator~)) DO NOT USE OFFICIAL ART OR OTHERS FANWORKS. You don't even need a picture to apply! Stop using them!
USE THIS APPLICATION TO APPLY:
[quote="cuddlycuttlefish"][/quote] [b]Name:[/b] [b]Species: [/b] (Earth Pony, Unicorn, or Pegasus) [b]Gender:[/b] [b]Cutie mark:[/b] (Or blank flank if unknown) [b]Special skill:[/b] [b]Age:[/b] Newborn - Foal 1year - Yearling Child - Colt/Filly, Teen - New Stallion/New Mare, Adult - Stallion/Mare Parents (adult to middle age) - Sire/Dam Elderly Old Stalion/Old [strike]gray [/strike]Mare (or geriatric if you don't like old)
[b]Residence:[/b] (where their home is located if you have it) [b]Appearance:[/b] (Describe in words how they look, you may include your own images if you have them, but images are not required.) [b]Brief history/bio:[/b] Any backstory you'd like to jot down so we can confirm that its in line with the guild's lore.
CURRENTLY: Unlimited standard ponies. 2 Atypical ponies. 1 Nonpony.
Ponykind You are allowed as many standard ponies as you like((earth, unicorn, and pegasi)) 2 atypical ponies. ((Crystals, Faeponies, batponies, merponies.) 1 nonpony character from either subset Minotaurs and Monsters -- Gryphons, Dragons, Minotaurs, Hippogriffs or Equines of Equestria (and other hooved friends) -- Zebra, Donkeys and Mules, Buffalo, Goats, Camels, Elk, Deer.
Postcount unlocks: (you can check your postcount under the memberlist.) You may redeem an additonal nonpony or atypical pony character at the following goals: 100 posts = +1 300 posts = +2 500 posts +5 1000 posts = Unlimited! and 1 of your very own Villain or Princess and a metaplot of your choosing with assistance from the mods!
*Note -- Do not "bump" within the guild, there is no need. Chatter and RP posts will both count. c:
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 4:30 am
EXAMPLE Before Approval
cuddlycuttlefish
Name: Rainy Daze Species: Earth Pony Gender: Female Cutie mark: A large and small mushroom in a puddle with 5 rain drops falling around them. Special skill: Rainy Daze likes to sleep while it rains, and then go out and gather mushrooms from the fields and her own garden. She both sells them, food, and an immunity boosting elixir using mushrooms and fresh rain water. Age: Adult Residence: Not sure yet.
EXAMPLE After Approval
cuddlycuttlefish
ACCEPTED
Name: Rainy Daze Species: Earth Pony Gender: Female Cutie mark: A large and small mushroom in a puddle with 5 rain drops falling around them. Special skill: Rainy Daze likes to sleep while it rains, and then go out and gather mushrooms from the fields and her own garden. She both sells them, food, and an immunity boosting elixir using mushrooms and fresh rain water. Age: Adult Residence: Not sure yet.
EXAMPLE Revisions needed
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REVISIONS NEEDED
Name: Rainy Daze Species: Earth Pony Gender: Female Cutie mark: A large and small mushroom in a puddle with rain drops falling around them. Special skill: Rainy daze sells mushrooms. Age: Adult Residence: Not sure yet.
Revision suggestions
Need more info about her special skill, what does it have to do with the rain?
EXAMPLE Rejection
cuddlycuttlefish
REJECTED
Name: Pinkiecake Species: Alicorn Gender: male Cutie mark: A flaming skull Special skill: Pinkiecakes is happy but when you cross her path she'll use her powers to light your head on fire. Age: Adult Residence: Celestia's castle
Why you were rejected
Pinkiecake is too similar to pinkiepie You can not be an alicorn Over powered skill. Must live in own residence in town, not in a canon residence
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Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:13 pm
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ACCEPTED
Name: Globe Trotter Species: Pegasus Gender: Female Cutie mark: An old-fashioned suitcase with colorful bumper stickers haphazardly placed all over it. Special skill: Globe Trotter's special skill is her gift for learning languages. She doesn't take long to master a new one, but there's so many she hasn't gotten them all down yet. Her determination will see her to her goal, though! Being able to speak the languages of the places she visits is a huge advantage, and she runs a travel blog to help potential trip-goers learn about the best and most fun things to do in a new city or town. Age: Adult Residence: She doesn't call any one place home, but she was born in Cloudsdale.
Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:26 pm
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVED
Name:Poetic Justice Species: Unicorn Gender: Female Cutie mark: green and brown yin-yang with a sun and moon instead of two dots. Special skill: Mediation. PJ has a strong desire for harmony and balance, justice, as well as a hefty desire to see that everyone around her is happy, thus she has found a talent for selling arguments. Her desire for harmony is her defining characteristic, thus the cutiemark. That said, she can easily be considered a pushover, putting others before herself to a troublesome extent. Age: Adult Residence: Canterlot
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Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 10:50 pm
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ACCEPTED and I've added yearling into the mix c:
Name:Forest Frolic Species: Earth Pony Gender: Female Cutie mark: A few deciduous trees to represent a forest Special skill: Is adventurous, courageous, curious and loves all nature as well as exploring, but has a great fear of fire. She enjoys helping other ponies navigate through the Everfree Forest. Age: Adult (well...more like teen...juvenille?) Residence: The Everfree Forest
Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 2:31 pm
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVED
Since gypsy gold is a real phrase used in the reverence of horses I think this is fine and is in conduct with the rules!
I would caution you to avoid the use of the word gypsy as it originated as a derogatory term outside of the US, and while the typical American associates it with more positive things, there is a lot of history behind it.
Ah here we go... In this paticular case gypsy refers to the ethnic group -- Irish Travellers (Irish: an lucht siúil) or Pavee, also called Tinkers or Gypsies (but not to be confused with the Romani people), are a traditionally itinerant people of ethnic Irish origin, who maintain a set of traditions and as the wiki states "Travellers refer to themselves as Minceir or Pavees, or in Irish as an Lucht Siúil, meaning literally "the walking people"." so I would suggest replacing "Gypsy saying" with "Pavee saying" but there should be no need to change the character as of right now, this is just a quick note for future reference and for other players. c:
So again I think the name is fine, and my comment is only out of attempted respect for the issue not anything I see wrong in your particular case! I like to err on the side of caution and respect... as for all I know I'm preaching to the choir right now. xD
And yes! I see what you're saying. I know colt and filly are any horse under 4, and after 4 is adult. BUT since colt and filly are already being used canon wise for very young ponies, I figured it might be comparable to how teens are still "kids." while it says yearlings are early adolescence with some sexual maturity but too young to be bred(be parents)? Still equestria wise ponies are little ones for more than 1-2 years so there's no reason to keep to it strictly or anything! If you have any suggestions for something better feel free to offer them. @v@
I understand completely and admire your consideration of others. heart This particular pony actually happens to be based off an actual gypsy OC that I have who was based off of the gypsies from the story The Hunchback of Notre Dame, so I was sure to do my research. Thank you for the information!
EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to mention! I know you said it would be more accurate to replace the words 'Gypsy saying' with 'Pavee saying', but I was actually referring to the other kind of gypsy that you mentioned in your excerpt - the Romani kind.
Thank you for being so understanding! <3
The reason I got pavee was in relation to the origin of the phrase since it was Irish in origin, "Claddagh Gypsies of Galway, Ireland" to be specific with that saying itself, and then irish gypsy got me to pavee. But I'm sure you know more than I do with your research! xD
EDIT EDIT: I'm so sorry, I forgot to say I edited again. ^_^; The following is mostly information for fun.
...I was actually referring to the other kind of gypsy that you mentioned in your excerpt - the Romany kind - as well as the Irish Travelers. The reason why I used the term 'gypsy' is because although the saying was attributed to the Claddagh Gypsies of Galwa, who are Irish, the saying itself refers specifically to the horse breed of Gypsy Vanners (of which my pegasus pony was modeled after) which are also known as Romany horses. Since the term 'Gypsies' refers to both the culture and lifestyle of both Romany and Irish Traveling people, I meant to refer to both by using the blanket term.
Also, I am aware the term is considered a derogatory term, but that was part of the reason I gave it to this pony. The OC he was based off of - Shamaki Oro - is a lowly gypsy thief who has to steal to eat, though by no choice of his own. He is practically a beggar who entertains for a few coins a day which are hardly enough to live on. I refer to the term not as a positive thing, but meant with every connotation and stigma that comes with the word, both good and bad.
Aah I see I see! Thank you so much for all the information. I love to hear and learn. That makes total sense, and I love the inspiration you derived him from. Thank you for sharing, it helps both myself and future character applications to hear about and learn from! whee
Name:Gypsy Gold Species: Pegasus Gender: Male Cutie mark: A gold horse shoe and two gold coins Special skill:"Gypsy gold does not c***k and glitter, it gleams in the sun and neighs in the dark." - Gypsy saying Gypsy's performances include juggling, acrobatics, optical illusions, and slight-of-hoof tricks when he can for the entertainment of younger ponies. However, he's somewhat afraid and untrusting of magic and, by association, unicorns. As he believes, all magic has a price, so he doesn't like the use of it at all. He also dislikes particularly arrogant and haughty ponies. Age: Yearling...? (Thanks for adding Yearling, but I tend to think of Yearlings as tweens rather than teens. ^_^; Like the wiki says - "Yearlings are comparable in development to a very early adolescent. Both "colt" and "filly" describe not only yearlings, but any other young horse under the age of four." But that's just me.) Residence: Cloudsdale (though he likes to visit Forest Frolic on occasion and travel around to perform)
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 5:52 pm
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APPROVED
Name:Mirror Shards Species: Unicorn Gender: Male Cutie mark: Broken mirror shards Special skill: Glass-making (particularly the creation of mirrors). His parents were in the trade of making magic mirrors and he's studied long and hard since he was a foal to learn the lost art of their creation. As of now he only knows how to imbue his creations with simple spells like bad luck to whoever breaks his pieces. Age: Adult Residence: Around Horseshoe Bay near Baltimare (Now crystal pony)
Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 5:58 pm
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVED
Name:Melon Madness (goes by 'Mel' for short) Species: Pegasus Gender: Male Cutie mark: A slice of watermelon with a bite taken out of it Special skill: He can spit watermelon seeds with speed, accuracy, and precision from quite a distance and is always trying to break his own records. Unfortunately he tends to use this talent mostly to harass and play pranks on others.
Extra: He loves all melons including cantaloupe, and honeydew, but especially watermelons. He knows a hundred different recipies for them (if not so much how to make/prepare them himself since he tends to be messy) - such as melon sorbet, melon candy, melon soup, melon pudding, melon pie, melon upside-down cake, melon bubble gum, melon taffy, and melon ice cream with melon sauce and melon-flavored sprinkles on top.
However, he's most proud of his accomplishments as a watermelon seed-spitter and can beat any pony in a seed-spitting contest. His favorite pastime is to lounge about in the clouds or fly by and shoot watermelon seeds with speed, distance, and accuracy at ponies below for fun. He likes to practice on moving targets and is a horrible prankster.
Although Mel can't make the melon dishes he loves so much himself, he usually demands said dishes from farming ponies in exchange for helping them water their crops (since pegasai are known to have some amount of control over weather and, thus, rain/clouds/irrigation). He's also not above being bribed with melons to stop spitting seeds at ponies from up high. Age: Adult Residence: Ponyville
Looks good! Though maybe put in what his special skill is in specific to his cutie mark, sounds like its simply magic as a special skill though? Either way its up to you because you're already APPROVED! *confetti*
Here's hoping this character's good 'nuff...
Name: Cobalt Lightning Species: Unicorn Gender: Male Cutie mark: A single yellow Lightning Bolt, surrounded by an electrical aura. Special skill: Cobalt Lightning has quite the affinity and understanding for magic, as he believes he should from his assumed heritage. Though he has much more to learn, there is little hesitation to claims he is 'on par with Celestia's prized pupil.' Age: Adult Residence: Canterlot.
Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 4:22 pm
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVED
Name:Morning Dew Species: Unicorn Gender: Male Cutie mark: A drop of water falling into a pool. The water symbolizes life force, in reference to his healing powers. Special skill: Morning's Dew is gifted with very powerful healing magic, which can completely heal wounds and cure illnesses with sufficient focus. This power is limited by the potency of its use each time, and typically after healing a major condition, Morning Dew requires a long rest before he can use his magic again. He also uses magic to detect his surroundings, as he is blind. He cannot see full images as most do, but knows where obstacles are and can discern the relative shapes and identities of those around him. A notable product of this form of magic vision makes him unable to see illusions, such as a changeling's disguise. Age: Stallion (Adult) Residence: Morning dew is a wanderer, never finding himself able to completely fit in anywhere. He is sought after for his abilities and is willing to heal those in need, but tries to keep a low profile for fear of being exploited for his magic.
APPROVED Going to go ahead and green light this but with a few revisions for the future.
"However Shadow had a semi normal childhood and was often teased because of his wings, though the bullying never bothered him he never goes out due to not having any friends." This was the only part that confused me. The sentence contradicts itself. It reads as if the bullying preceded his fear to go out into public, and if that's the case then the bullying did bother him to some extent. So think about that one a little more and switch it up a little.
And do please try to mind your punctuation and grammar, as it can be difficult for other players to read your posts. This isn't mandatory, of course, we accept all levels of RP and encourage people to be here for fun! So if this is too much of a drag, you can easily let it go.
However if you want to improve it I suggest downloading open office, or using Microsoft word if you have it to run your posts through. Capitalize the start of your sentences, use periods and commas, and watch your spelling )of coarse = of course) and firefox can be helpful too as it has an automatic spell check. xD
thanks for the tips again its really helpful to have some one encourage me to be better, rather then having some one scare me to do better XD Name: Shadow fire (note this is from my own deviantart profile) Species:Pegasus Gender: male Cutie mark: a ball of fire Special skill: from birth Shadow fire has been fascinated with a blacksmith forge of coarse this was best for him sense his not well known family was always the local smith of ponyville. because of his family heritage he has a natural ability of controlling fire but can not create fire on his own, though he can do this he never has used it out of the forge and thus is easly worn out when he is not forging anything (doesn't have discipline in conserving strength) background: When Shadow fire was born there was a problem. he had a condition that caused his wings to never developed feathers. So his father began to work the forge to give his son mechanical wings, in which are fully opposable like real wings but can be taken off showing his real featherless wings. However Shadow had a semi normal childhood and was often teased because of his wings, though this never bothered him he is afraid to go out into public. Now Shadow is a yearling that has now inherited his fathers blacksmith shop and has lived there taking care of his little sister light fire for several years now. But his heart acks for adventure something he can never do.. or can he? Age: Yearling Residence: Ponyville (local blacksmith) nevermind I posted it to my deviantart profile (yay my first peace of art... sort of confused
Revisions done
The special skill is fine, and I enjoy the limitations set there (he can control fire but not create it, and tires himself out. *thumbs up*
However the appearance will, unfortunately, have to change. I would leave out the part that "nopony has ever seen before" and simply say "a rare condition that caused him to be featherless" which is quite probable, as--say-- chickens can have a genetic defect that prevents normal feathergrowth.
My biggest concern is the dragon-like appearance. I would suggest, instead, no tattoo, and instead of dragon wings that were created by a spell to do something more inclusive of his story. Say; mechanical wings that his father forged for him. In which case you could do something dragon like, for simplicities sake... or have him create a featherlike mechanical wing. These could attach to the little bald chickenwings c:
Finally you need an entirely new image; revise his coloration, as he looks an awful lot like Spyro the dragon. I'm sure you're aware of that because the image is from deviantart, and I've explicitly stated not to use art that is not your own via the rules this is the reason for the rejection. c:
Please address these issues before reapplying, and do not use an image that is not your own! Thank you~
Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 11:06 am
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVEDprovided the following conditions are met: 1. Light fire's abilities have a time limit. Somewhere under a minute, and do not actually physically alter the form but use mirage work. (Which would make sense with the fire thing cause heat can cause mirages! So I think we're on the same page here xD) and that's simply because Twilight is shown to be struggling with altering physical shapes and is canon-wise a very high level magic. Time limit because they need to wear off otherwise it would be considered godmodding and thus against the rules.
2. Please have a reasonable explanation as to why their parents died. As I noted I don't want any "orphans for plot" so no like "they were brutally murdered by changelings" or anything. Something mundane like 'died of old age' or even childbirth to an older mare could be lifethreatning, and then loving papa could have "died of a broken heart" -- something like those, it needs to be equally plausible were you to put them into a real life situation as humans living in north America. Otherwise you run the risk of "dark pony" area
If you have any questions feel free to pm me. Reminder that nothing you wrote here actually implies that you're breaking these rules, so there are no revisions or additions necessary. These are merely a precautionary way to make sure we're all on the same page with the rules! So with that you're good to go~
Name:Light fire Species: Unicorn Gender: female Cutie mark: none yet Special skill: altering physical appearance. Light fire has the natural ability to alter the appearance of physical objects and people around her. but because of her young age she messes up most of the time, which causes more problems then its worth including that she gets worn out very quickly. history: Light fire has grown up under the care of her older brother Shadow fire due to there parents dying when Lil light (that's what her brother calls her) being only a newborn at the time.when light fire asked what happened to them shadow just replys they vanished after they went to a dragon migration festival, so not even shadow fire knows what happened. she knows about Shadow's wings even though he has not told her yet, and because of this she has dedicated herself to find a way to fix her brothers wings. (this is going to take many years XD)the gold rings that she always wears was forged by Shadow fire on her birthday last year, she has never taken them off sense. Age: Foal Residence: ponyville Shadow fire the blacksmith's home
Name: Vermithirod (goes by 'Hard Truths' as a pony and may look something like this, but with a spiky beard. Please ignore the name there; it was a previous concept idea.) Species: Dragon (takes on a unicorn guise as a pony) Gender: Male Cutie mark: Unknown/Blank Flank (for the time being. wink ) Special skill: Um...being a dragon? XD Hahaha, nah, he actually very highly values the truth and will be very bluntly honest with others (even, perhaps, to the point of rudeness). He is also helpful in teaching young foals to be honest and the value of the truth. Age: Elderly Residence: In a cave around the Smokey Mountain, where most dragons live, I think...?
Posted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 1:02 pm
cuddlycuttlefish
APPROVED
Name:Shadow Ghost Species: Unicorn Gender: Male Cutie mark: A ghost's figure outlined in shadow Special skill: Helping other ponies sleep and practicing astro projection to help them work through and deal with difficult dreams/nightmares Age: Yearling Residence: Manehattan (lives on the streets)
