A still Movement (And More Poems)

[brina510]

Smiles everywhere when tears choose to follow
All brought to me because of these faint memories
Sometimes faces I've never seen
Filled with old friends, sometimes new a motion that doesn't move
Pictures are all I have left of you
The familiar stranger who I can't exactly see
The plastic peels as I lift to a new page of these odd strangers
Am I happy or am I sad I'm not yet sure?
I can't tell if I'm mourning or celebrating a memory
I'm gleeful of the times we had
But sorry and sad of the times we never reached
Why do my memories wish to play tricks on me?
Who's that person I've never before seen?
Should I laugh in glee or cry and mourn this memory?
Memories
Memories
Memories

[Unfortunate Misfits]

Wow. . .Very good.

[brina510]

Thank you I only started writing poetry last year. Do you think there is anything that I may need to improve on?

[Unfortunate Misfits]

Well, maybe you could put a little more flow into it. Make the words go together a little better. But other than that it's good.

[brina510]

Okay I will work on that as much as possible.

[brina510]

The End

Sadness strolls so gently down my cheek
I guess this is the end for me
The end for everything I have lived for or wanted
And it came ever so suddenly
There I lied on the floor baring my soul
Only for it to be shattered
When the end came for me
The voice, the scream crept into my head
Waiting for the darkness to consume me
Lost for eternity
That was the end for me

[brina510]

Death

A tear roles down my cheek
I guess this time I am going to die
They always said your life flashed before
Your eyes when you were going to die
They didn’t lie
I’m lying on the floor
Searching for some truth
I scream and it echoes through my skull
This is the end isn’t it?
My vision blurs I can’t see anymore the scream isn’t leaving me
It is my only company
The scream and me
The scarlet liquid is leaking from me my life is fading
I can’t breath
I lie on the floor waiting for death to come take me hostage

[Unfortunate Misfits]

Hey were in a Rp together now. Weird.