Domina Angelorum
Hi this is my Walt Disney Classic 1951 Alice in Wonderland cosplay, I would love some critiquing and if you would like I would love to have an honest vote in the arenas for this avi the link directly to it is in my sig thank you so much for your time!
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I will be using your entry as a reference point and also telling you some tips regarding it.
[Looking into it]
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First off I believe the biggest issue you have with the entry is the colors. Various parts of the avi
seem much to bright then needs be. It looks like Alice (1951v.) but at the same time it doesn't
because of the colors. To fix this issue I suggest trying to bring in the heavier tones of the color.
A big thing to talk about is the face. In the movie her nose is rather pronounced and seen from
almost any angle. I would urge you to look for nose items in gaia. It can be the item
Pick Your Nose,
Commander, etc to fit the situation. The eyes are way to large in comparison
to the source.
Skin =
Human C
Hair = Mustard
Eyes = Duke Blue/Royal Blue
Dress = Steel Blue
Background =
Moga Ancient Forests
[Item(s) reasoning]
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The reasoning behind Pick Your Nose is that has the overall shape as well as the feel of said nose.
The reasoning behind "Commander" is that it is a cheaper alternative in comparison to PYN.
The reasoning behind human C is because of the shows overall lighting and the ref you chose for it.
During which she has a darker skin tone just because of the lighting the opted to try and share.
The reasoning behind Moga Ancient Forests is to truly fit into the seen in your reference image.
Compared to the current one it is much more dark and mysterious rather then exciting and
wonderful.
[Other Thoughts]
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While you did provide a reference image in your entry the character is rather hard to see. If you
want to show the background I suggest a GIF of a still-image of the character for a second or two
followed by the scene.
Regarding the title the max you can have is 30 characters (this includes spaces). 500 for the
description. I use the following to check my entries letter count for various parts.
http://www.lettercount.com/
[Final Thoughts]
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While it is a rather simple character to make it becomes the hardest to perfect. Overall you did a
decent attempt at the character. The entry wasn't bad but there is still a clear room for improvement.
Any who I will wish you the best of luck~
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