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The vampier hunter or vampier savior?
*as kiash run strait at frozen with his sword he aim straid to his heart frozen remain still* "what's wrong blood sucker are you giving up?" kiash saybut frozen didn't aswer back. *kiash was about to stab frozen when all of the sudden kiash's legs were stuck in the ground* "What is this? Damn you i didn't notice that you use magic" frozen replay "i don't know your problem but if it doesn't involve me then leave me alone, but if you whant to kill me then tell me why!?"*kiash got angry to frozen's calmness in such situation where frozen make him look like he was no threat* "Damn Vampier if you didn't hide behind the arts of man ill be putting this sword throug your heart, you are lucky that i don't know magic" *frozen reply not looking at kiash*"I have no reason on killing you, but ill ask once more why are you trying to kill me? and ill let you go!" *kiash look down disapionted of himself but he accept the condition of frozen* "find ill tell you why i hate vampiers but i can't trust you so ill keep my sword at hand"
*fozen look at him then he smile* "ok, i have no objections" *frozen put his hands on the ground and the harden soil that was wrap around kiash disolve into sand and let kiash lose* "there, is that better?" *kiash look at frozen with hate but he didn't try to attack frozen* "you only won because you use the arts of man, but i am a true warrior of the light and accep defeat." *Frozen look at kiash confuse* confused "well what othre art you whant me to use? alchemy?, chi focus?, chakra estimulation? or physenergy?" *kiash was astonish to hear so many kinds of figthing types and the knowlege that each carry* "coward, if you ask me what you should use, i say your vampier abilityes what else?" *frozen smile then look down in shame* "hehe! i may be a great warrior, not to brag but......erm!.....i don't know how to use any of my vampier abilityes, i never even thougt on using them" *kiahs face drop with a wide open mouth* "Are you serious? you don't know how to? my you are the first that i meet that...then their still hope, i may be capable to accomplish my mision."
* question frozen was more puzzel than before and had compleatly forgot that he didn't even present him self* "Oh! i almost forgot my name is....... well thats not importan, im call frozenknight by others but my closest friends call me frozen for short." *kiash look at frozen and smile at him* "thats rigth you didn't introduce yourself, well sorry if this a question all of the sudden but, do you...no do you whant to become human once more? stop being a vampier!" *frozen look at kiash with a little of curiosity* "why is that all of the suddent? and let me ask you! something, does your arm hurt?" *kiash was puzzel by the aswerd that frozen give him* "does my arm hurt? why you didn't hurt me!" *forzen point at the left arm of kiash* "well yeah i didn't, but the sheckna got you there" *kiash look quickly his shoulder and notice that he's clouthes were torn and that his flesh was bleeding, he was more busy thinking on destroying frozen that he didn't notice the pain* "oh! no the poison spread faster when i was figthing you, damn look like i won't make it." (as said in the previous entry the sheckna has poisonus claws that are deadly, when kiash moves it causes the poison on his blood to spread faster, he realize what has happen and he has give hopes.)
*kiash falls to his knees and cryes* sorry master Shadar, i fail to keep my promest and to fullfield my goals for the salvation of tourture souls." *kiash faints* "tourture souls? Shadar? hmm? i better heal him and quickly, sigh i whant to know more of his goals!" *kiash woke up the next day, he was on the ground next to a fire place that had being burning all night* "uh? what happen? did i dream all of the events of last night? was i really wounded?" *without hestiation kiash look at his shoulder but he found no wounds* "so it was a dream! sigh!" *at that moment frozen walk into the camp site and look at kiash and smile as he said a good mornig greating* "oh! i see you are up already! well it wasn't easy treating your wounds in the condition that you were but i even heal your flesh so you woun't have a single scrach" *frozen smile at kiash but kiash just remaind silent and look sad* "Something wrong kiash?" *kiash look at frozen with a smile in his face* "n..n..no why would something be wrong, i mean you save my life two times!" *frozen smile back* "well that wasn't a big deal, but ill like to ask you something" *kiash stop smiling and look at frozen seriously* "what is that you whant to ask?" *frozen walk slowly towards kiash and kneeld to kiash eye level* "sigh! ill like to know more about you, your goals and also more about this Shadar guy, because that name sound familiar."






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waterpearls
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 04:16am
WOWW!!! interesting, but really really hard to follow. i mean, XD isn't there SOME way u can add paragraphs? so it looks like real dialogue from a book? or maybe revise it a little so the grammar and spelling is correct?

but the content is GREAT. ^^ blaugh

nothing more than that except for the usual: post soon!! ^^


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 06:27am
sigh! worry not everything will be better once i finish the hole thing!



Frozenknight
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