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Frozenknight's journy
a new foe? or an ally?
after i talk to izark i told him all that had happen to me and then he felt so bad for thinking that i had choose the path of darkness. he told me that i could get help in derrish-karlan (the city of the angels), i told izark that thats where i was going, but i was getting eaker by the second because of my lack of eating.
what can i say i really dislike the thought of me sucking blood, it compleatly goes against what i stand for so i decide to move quickly and not lose time, i start to walk into the forest that surrounds the temple of light and head strait to derrish.
its being a long time that i haven't see that place, as i walk in the forest i wonder how were things in derris, if neo was doing fine? and if reconstructions had ended? so many questions keep poping in my mind as i move deeper and deeper into the forest.
two days have pass after frozen enter the woods, (he has become so weak that he can't trable by air, he needs to eat to regain his strength but he refuses and as time flows his desier for blood grows stronger.) "damn i run out of my potion. now there is nothing that could stop me from trying to feed on bood. luckly im in a huge forest, the chances of me finding another human are 1 in 10000, but even so i can risk anyones life even if is a forest creature." frozen keep on walking without sence of direction, at night fall he couln't keep himself from drinking blood he needed to hunt but the little bit of human mind remaind on the deaps of his mind. at that moment he heard a scream "AARRRGGG!!" frozen run to see what was it and he found a person being attack by a forest shekna (sheckna is a creature that looks like a bear but ut has red glowing eyes, his calws are poisoness long mouth that can crush human bones in an open and close and its streng can kill and elephant in two hits) Frozen didn't wait for an invitation and jump out of the bushes where he was hidding and attack the Sheckna, but his attack wasn't as he expected.
When frozen stroke the beast he bite the neck of the creature and kill it in one hit as he fed on the creatures warm blood, the man look at frozen with terror but then he gather all his courage and rush to where his belongins where. frozen didn't notice it until the man point a ballesta to frozen's back.
at this moment frozen realize what he was doing and what was goign on! "don't do it i just save your life" said frozen, "ha! like if i ask you to do so, blood sucker!" said the man."you won't kill me because i have something to do and i have to inform someone about the terrible thing that happen to my best friend!! "ha! like im going to belive you blood sucker, you are all the same i wish you all could just become normal but because that can't be i have to destroy you all" "then i have no choise but to fight with you!" "fight? i got you, you can't possibly figth now not even after feeding" "i didn't whant to feed on blood again but now tha i got my stength back ill show you what i can do but i won't kill you" *with a sarcastic tone* "oh! you are so nice mr. Vapier" "the name is frozenknigth not Mr. Vampier" in a blink of an eye frozen was behind. "i told you that i can't lose to you" " nice trick but nothing will stop me kiash the vampier slayer"
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waterpearls
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 11:05pm
kk, waiting on u! blaugh


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 09:20pm
hmmm... ok, well first off, the GRAMMER and SPELLING are much much better...

second...

it all of a sudden... changed to 3rd person limited in the 4th paragraph... dunno why, i thought it was a journal??

other than that, AWESOME...

nice cliffhanger!!!! can't wait till the next one!!! ^^



waterpearls
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Frozenknight
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 09:26pm
ell thanks i think im getting better at grammer! sweatdrop


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