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heart heart Laughter in the room beside us, Whispers in the air, As I hold you tightly, Watching you sleep next to me there. A sleepy moan and shift, Lost inside your dreams, A world inside your mind that I wish I could let myself in. A kiss on your brow to wake you, And with your fluttering eyes, A kiss on your lips to please you, And you look at me and smile. You eyes a mystical wonder, As you gaze in mine. And when you cuddle closer, I feel your heart beat along with mine. And though its the frst 10 minutes, Of this bright new day, I've already fell in love with you, In each and every way heart heart

Posted by: chs_junior_16 Thu Jun 29, 2006 @ 06:21pm

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Gendodorijitsunaba-sama
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Commented on: Sun Jul 09, 2006 @ 09:32pm


	Hey, I'm not entirely sure if it's proper for me to write comments about the poetry of somebody I just met, but I feel I should tell you that I like this poem. Though there are some awkward sections, overall the flow and some of the imagery is rather nice. I especially like the last three lines. ^_^

Commented on: Sat Jul 15, 2006 @ 04:27pm

Cheeky88
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