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Viva mis Amigos y Amigas
well last years poem =3=
Broken voices and betrayal choices
As darkness appears to consume the light
I try and listen with all my might
To the voices so broken, who have lost all trust,
Whose voices were taken by a giant gust.
As I wander around in the darkness created
I wandered into a park where I was fated
And in this park I saw under the moon’s cover
A couple who seemed to have been made for each other
But as time slowly passed, I noticed a grand change
The male’s face had grown into a face of rage
For no apparent reason he had broken their love
Wounding her emotions like an injured dove
As I continued looking on I saw in her eyes
The growing loss of hope, loss of trust, and surprise
For a few moments before she expressed to him
Her willingness for their love, giving life and limb
Though she tried to seem strong, her heart and mind grew weak
Expressing her thoughts of her life becoming bleak
As the “lovers” then separated, the images began to fade
After all of the decisions had finally been made.
Whilst fading away, however, on the broken woman’s path
I hear frightening noises as frightening as math
A silenced gunshot is heard, followed by a scream
Making me wish it was all just a dream.
Then darkness reappears consuming the light
Hearing the voices with not as much might
The voices so broken, I had heard of before,
Telling me that that there is still much more.
As new images begin to appear
I begin to feel a little more fear
Wondering what the next event will show
The voices they led me to a family with woe
It began with two cousins, both of them were male
So close to each other, one Bill and one Dale
They felt as if they can sincerely confide to each other
Always having the feeling they can trust one another
However one didn’t expect the outcomes that would contain
The actions of the other will lead them to much pain
By knowing all the secrets of the cousin named Bill
Dale did something that was created by ill will
One day after they got into a fight
Dale had done something that just wasn’t right
He told the whole school about Bill’s biggest secret
Something in the near future he would soon regret
Once Bill heard of these actions, he felt really betrayed
Making his feelings of trust slowly fade
His once kind attitude became that of a Grinch
Not willing to help anyone, even if he is in a pinch
And as for Dale, he lost all of his popularity
Once the actions were heard by the entire community.
The whole events that occurred begin to fade
After stating the purpose that it wished to have made
Then the darkness reappears to consume the light
Listening to the voices with only a little might
The voices that are so broken, who combined, will feel like a ton
Tell me that I must see only one new event, just one.
As the events begin to appear
I notice two friends hanging out with beer
Their friendships seems to glow
Like fireworks that tend to blow
They do everything for each other and it looked swell
Until a friend had a job at church to ring the bell.
The other friend remained loyal but felt more alone
But after a while he got a call on his phone.
A group of thugs wanted him in the gang
And the one inviting him was known by the name of fang
The friend wished to remain loyal yet found it very hard
Though he knew that his friend would remain scarred
His finally decision was to join the group
Though what they had asked of him made his mind go in a loop
The gang had a grudge against his friend
So the action they wanted to take was given to him to tend.
Though they had been friends for a very long time
There was this idea hidden in his mind
That though his friend was special for a certain time
His own life would be better so he agreed to commit the crime.
The crime he had to commit
Would put him in a pit
For it was to end the life of his friend
This would never be able to mend.
As the events began to unwind
The darkness began to absorb my mind.
Before knowing how events would play out
My mind gave way and I then passed out
Waking I notice I’m back in my room
Recalling the events thinking they stand for future doom
Throughout the event I learn you must be true
Not allowing darkness to possess you
Like the act of using someone for your own personal gain
Or backstabbing those who care for you inflicting emotional pain.
As the darkness looms away and light reappears
It takes away all of my growing fears
The voices they vanish after stating their point
Tugging the emotions in my heart joint.






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Zombiegir1
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 22, 2014 @ 07:28pm
blaugh I usually dont like long stuff but this is so good crying beautiful work.


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