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My thoughts for the day
mostly going to be poems, inspired when i listen to music
He Walks...

He walks...Down the dirt trodden path
It stretches on and on, winding, curving like a snake...
His feet shuffled loudly against the searing dirt
The dirt seemed to scream at him in utter agony
As the sun beat down on it
Sweat dripped from his somber, distant face as his eyes stared up
Up at the blue sky in front, above, and behind him
It watched him... intently
On his back... Is a weight... something which he is forced to carry
Its heavy, and cold... like ice... cold cold ice...
The dry tendrils of hair stuck from what was on his back
The hair was dirty, dry, useless as it whipped in the wind
The thought of what was on his back caused his heart to pain and his stomach to turn
For what was a simple mistake he made
Something had ended in this painful world of ours
He carried this thing on his back to remind himself
Of what the mistake was
And to make sure it never happened again
And so as he carried the ice cold figure
With the sun beating down on him
Walking the endless, searing dirt path
The blue sky watching everything he does
He walks...
And... he falls
Landing on his stomach
The dirt burned him...
He had lost hope
He didn't want to continue
He closed his eyes tightly and fought back tears
The thought of the figure... forced him to get up and continue
He walked slowly now... following the endless path
On and on...
He walks.






User Comments: [1]
Samara Holbrook
Community Member





Tue Oct 20, 2009 @ 03:20am


Q.Q

Sean, you write so beautifully. it's like nothing i've ever read before. Q.Q

i almost started crying Q.Q

this is so beautiful. you should submit this as your english thing XD the poem about the burden and stuff.

and i know this is about YOU. i know enough about you to know that this is about you, and a burden that you do carry. the world is a harsh place, and the burden of a life lost is, indeed, a cold one to bear.


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