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Yesterday, today, and tomorrow they were all the same to serena very very boring. her parents were probably the happiest couple in the United States. Her brother was an average guy he wansnt a geek, but he wasnt a totaly popular guy either. Her life was just normal. They had no problems at home it would seem... perfect.
So Im going to start my story on the day when all the excitement started. Serena was riding her bike down the street on her way back from school beautiful brown hair flowing behind her. Her beautiful shining green eyes shining in the sun. she was so out of the ordinary you wouldnt think she belonged to the oh so very normal family down the street.
"Hey Serena!"called a boy who had been her next door neighbor for only a couple of weeks now, but they had become the best of friends. He is a normal looking guy not to tall, not to short, not super handsom, and not super ugly. Serena is 13 so that would make Darian two years older than her.
"Hey! Whats up Darian?" she said slowing down so he could keep up.
"Nothing I'm kind of hungry want to go get pizza " darian explained
"Ya! Im starved" Serena exclaimed
"We both ate the same thing at lunch it somtimes amazes me how much you can eat" darian pointed out
"Well maybe if you ate more like guy you wouldnt have that problem" serena came back at him
"I dont know any guy who can eat two pizzas by themselves in one hour" darian answered
"Whatever...more like four" Serena answered and Darian laughed at her small joke they continued on talking on thier way to the pizza shop by there houses. They walked in like anyother day but today somthing was off.
"Does somthing feel difren to you?"
"Maybe they got new wallpaper"
"maybe..." They walked to a table sat down
"I have to go to the restroom I'll be back"
"Okay" he said while watching her walk off
Serena was walking to the bathroom she wasnt thinking strait so this lady walked write into her knoking her to the foor. The lady was wearing a lot of makeup and jewlery. There was somthing wierd about her.
"oh sorry let me help you up"the lady said offering Serena her hand
"Thank you."serena said taking her hand as soon as she did the lady saw her braclet the ladys eyes brightened.
"What a beautiful bracelet” the lady answered
“Thank you” she said pulling her hand away from the lady something wasn’t right
“Were did you get such a beautiful bracelet” the lady asked staring deep into Serena’s eyes
“I’m not sure I have had it as long as I can remember I am pretty sure its from my parents” Serena said escaping her glares she just realized she hadn’t gone to the restroom
“Thank you for helping me up but I really need to go to the restroom” she said turning around
“Of course but that’s really is a wonderful bracelet would you sell it to me” the lady rushed to ask
“I’m sorry but no I love this bracelet more than my life sorry” Serena turned around answered then ran to the restroom she finished and ran back to the both
She told Darien everything
“What is so weird about that it is a pretty bracelet” he said taking a sip of his drink. Their number was called
“I’ll get it” Darien said getting up a couple of seconds later he came back with the pizza
“The pizza is here” he said placing the pizza on the table. Serena took two slices put it on her plate and was about to take a huge bite out of one of the slices when Darien asked
“Where did your parents get the bracelet anyway” taking a slice of pizza for himself.
“I’m not sure” she said taking a big bite out of her slice but at that moment her brother burst in ran to them grabed her by the arm and said “it’s time”
“Now”
“Yes” then the three of them ran out Serena had no clue what was going on
they ran for about 10 minutes strait serena had millions of questions that she wanted to ask but she was too tired she looked at her brother allan he looked fine not even a bit tired he looked determined this was really wierd. They ran for another ten minutes when they stopped. they stopped infront of an old borded up house
"What-are-we-do-ing-here?" serena asked breathing hard
"We will explain everything in the house" allan said noding his head torward the house
"That house?" serena said flat out pointing
"yep" he said walking down the path to the back of the house she followed but stoped cause she noticed a small carving in the side of hte house that looked like the solar system
"Serena come here."allan said plainly
"what?"serena asked still looking at the carving
"just come here" he rushed
"fine"serena said walking to her brother this all gave her a bad feeling then she saw the back door it wasnt borded up like the rest of the house in a way it was beautiful but it did not have a doorknob
"take your braclet off put it in the palm of your hand hold it up and say qrystal power unlock this door " allan said moving back
" stop joking we are in reallity it not going to open just cause you say open so why dont you tell me whats going on" serena said getting very impatient
"I will once you do what i say" allan said
"NO your going to te-"serena started but was cut off
"SERENA just do what allan says" darian said it knda scarred serena she had forgotten he was there
"fine but dont expect nothing" serena said her heart hoping it would open but her brain telling her it wouldn't
"qrystal power open this door" nothing...nothing happened just as she said
"see i to-" once again she was cut off
"you didnt say it right say it like this qryatal power UNLOCK this door" he said with doubt in his voice serena looked at darien and he noded
"okay...qrystal power unlock this door"at that moment her dimond stared to glow brighter and brighter to the point were the three of them had to close there eyes when she oppend them the first thng she noticed was that her braclet was no longer a normal domond shape it was a dimond heart with gold wings and it wasnt a braclet it had grown into a necklace. she finnaly looked up
"wow" was all serena could say this was not what she expected. Not at all.
It was a huge house way to big to be the inside of the house out side this was crazy we walked into a den huge castle like stairs were behind it and a door that said ball room above it. She looked at the coach and saw two adults sitting on a couch they both were wearing a crown for some reason she thought they sorta looked like her but she knew better.
"sit sit there is to little time to be standing there day dreaming" teh lady adult said she had a beautifully hypnotizing voice
"yes mam" all three of them said as if they planned it serena went and sat down in the middle of a couch in front of the two adults darian and allan sat on the sides of serena she was getting a very serious vibe in the room she hated serious vibes she she decided to make a small joke
"must you two sit next me" sereana said in a playfull manner
"no madam" they said seriuos with not event the slightest laughter in there eyes they moved to a diffrent chair.
"i was just playing"she said hating this why were they acting like this
"well now to introduce ourselves I am king (name) and this is Queen serinity we are your parents" king (name) said
"no my parents live down on cherry street your not my parents" she said she wouldnt believe it
"serena your not blind even you can see the resemblence" allan said inpatiently
"I know....."she said it was true these were her parents but who was her other parents

Well there it is comment i need to know if its good and what im doing wrong cool