well, Today I have achieved an understanding with a friend. Just by eating Subway with her! The powers of subway are mystical!! I know how she feels now, and I can finally achieve peace for more weird question ways....
sweatdrop all i know is that everything is a bit awkward and there is nothing I can do about it. twisted I could make it worse though, spread the flames... make it hard for EVERYBODY! mrgreen But i won't, nobody has to worry about me doing something horribly wrong... yet wink jk... anyways here is a terrible poem that i am making up write, dedicated to the title.
Now please, just not to offend anyone this isn't directed on anyone in gaia, the one I direct this poem to is not a "net" person.
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Bam! In the face,
so hard to take.
Smack! No one will
help you no.
Boom! the glass vace falls from
the table.
Wow! You never thought
you'd have to take.
Stab! You thought they did.
silence woah, they didn't hurt you.
You understand them, no
you understand HER...
HER. People thought so bad of HER.
I can admit so did I. Now it
makes sense now.
I am sorry friend,companion.
Forgive me... my soul, my thoughts were
misled by those unknowning and mainiputlative.
Never again, I know how you feel.
I feel the same thing, everyday of my life.
Forgive me.
Everlasting Silence as whisper in the wind sound
these words
I am sorry...
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Anyways, well yeah. The poem may over exaggarate a little about how i misjudged her but still. I know how she feels too so that gives me no right to think bad about her. I am going to let her sort everything out and hope everything to be the best.
thank for reading!
PeAcE oUt! cool
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These are the ramblings of insanity and the poetry that won?t be heard. Even on the net the message won?t go out but I put them out so if the ones who show genuine promise will be able to save them selves. I may be crazy but at least I am not stupid.
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I love this Tenken so much. I wish I could show him that.
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This poem, though not really my style, is...well....I'd like to say mediocre, but would that be too harse? It's my opininon and I shall stand by it. Maybe it's the fact I see it all in one time frame...and that's what I disliked. But yeah....my opinion. I hope you don't feel offended that I went around and looked at your journal.