Uncle Sai, I'm gettin' sleepy...
Will you tuck me in?: Brad Armstrong and Edward Emitt
My favorite part was when...:I highly enjoyed what you wrote for me - you really captured Brad's attitude to what was happening to him, and detailed his reactions superbly. The way you paid attention to little sports details - and the character of the coach! - made the story come alive. Edward's behavior, and the dialogue between them, was spot-on too.
Don't forget to leave the night light on...:All characters and the plot were present and accounted for, so nothing was lacking...only thing that might've added was more direct banter between Brad and his team-mates, but they were only minor characters, if that.
Will you tell me another bed time story?: Absolutely...when I get enough gold. ^^;