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Kinda complicated situation I need help fixing holes in:

There are several city-state kingdoms in a fantasy world. Jacinth and Ametrine don't like each other due to their stance on a neighboring kingdom and they are both engineering a cold war and trying to keep what they're doing secret.

Jacinth advocates slavery/indentured servitude and has hired a woman, Nyira, and and her slave, Kel, to go find a magic relic called the Macariastone, which can create and control undead. In finding the stone, the are attacked by an undead and Kel created a portal to our world and was severely wounded.

Some doctor treats Kel and learns about the other world, Nyira tries to get Kel back because he belongs to her, and the undead monster later abducts Kel and some people have to rescue him.

I'm not sure what Nyira does when or before he gets abducted, how the doctor survives, what powers the undead monster can do that some specialists need to be involved, or why the monster doesn't end up killing everyone once it gets to our world with the other two.


Maybe Kel has something special that the monster needs to survive off of, or if it's a monster capable of logic, it could be using Kel to help more undead monsters cross over (assuming that perhaps these undead monsters work in a pack and are not in competition for food). The doctor might survive because s/he has nothing of use to the monster/doesn't seem to be tasty to the monster/the doctor hid and perhaps the monster is blind and due to constantly sanitizing, the doctor doesn't have much of a scent, so the undead can't smell him out/doesn't want to bring too much attention to itself/etc. As for powers, maybe it can turn others into undead creatures (similar to zombies) or maybe vegetation dies out when they're around as well as water sources drying up.

That's all I can really think of at the moment. If I come up with anything else, I'll edit this post. Hope this helps you though!
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Kinda complicated situation I need help fixing holes in:

There are several city-state kingdoms in a fantasy world. Jacinth and Ametrine don't like each other due to their stance on a neighboring kingdom and they are both engineering a cold war and trying to keep what they're doing secret.

Jacinth advocates slavery/indentured servitude and has hired a woman, Nyira, and and her slave, Kel, to go find a magic relic called the Macariastone, which can create and control undead. In finding the stone, the are attacked by an undead and Kel created a portal to our world and was severely wounded.

Some doctor treats Kel and learns about the other world, Nyira tries to get Kel back because he belongs to her, and the undead monster later abducts Kel and some people have to rescue him.

I'm not sure what Nyira does when or before he gets abducted, how the doctor survives, what powers the undead monster can do that some specialists need to be involved, or why the monster doesn't end up killing everyone once it gets to our world with the other two.


Maybe Kel has something special that the monster needs to survive off of, or if it's a monster capable of logic, it could be using Kel to help more undead monsters cross over (assuming that perhaps these undead monsters work in a pack and are not in competition for food). The doctor might survive because s/he has nothing of use to the monster/doesn't seem to be tasty to the monster/the doctor hid and perhaps the monster is blind and due to constantly sanitizing, the doctor doesn't have much of a scent, so the undead can't smell him out/doesn't want to bring too much attention to itself/etc. As for powers, maybe it can turn others into undead creatures (similar to zombies) or maybe vegetation dies out when they're around as well as water sources drying up.

That's all I can really think of at the moment. If I come up with anything else, I'll edit this post. Hope this helps you though!


I think I can play with this.

New, more complicated question:

A fantasy world needs its own version of the League of Nations (this later became the UN) and International Criminal Court. How would anyone go about doing that?
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Kinda complicated situation I need help fixing holes in:

There are several city-state kingdoms in a fantasy world. Jacinth and Ametrine don't like each other due to their stance on a neighboring kingdom and they are both engineering a cold war and trying to keep what they're doing secret.

Jacinth advocates slavery/indentured servitude and has hired a woman, Nyira, and and her slave, Kel, to go find a magic relic called the Macariastone, which can create and control undead. In finding the stone, the are attacked by an undead and Kel created a portal to our world and was severely wounded.

Some doctor treats Kel and learns about the other world, Nyira tries to get Kel back because he belongs to her, and the undead monster later abducts Kel and some people have to rescue him.

I'm not sure what Nyira does when or before he gets abducted, how the doctor survives, what powers the undead monster can do that some specialists need to be involved, or why the monster doesn't end up killing everyone once it gets to our world with the other two.


Maybe Kel has something special that the monster needs to survive off of, or if it's a monster capable of logic, it could be using Kel to help more undead monsters cross over (assuming that perhaps these undead monsters work in a pack and are not in competition for food). The doctor might survive because s/he has nothing of use to the monster/doesn't seem to be tasty to the monster/the doctor hid and perhaps the monster is blind and due to constantly sanitizing, the doctor doesn't have much of a scent, so the undead can't smell him out/doesn't want to bring too much attention to itself/etc. As for powers, maybe it can turn others into undead creatures (similar to zombies) or maybe vegetation dies out when they're around as well as water sources drying up.

That's all I can really think of at the moment. If I come up with anything else, I'll edit this post. Hope this helps you though!


I think I can play with this.

New, more complicated question:

A fantasy world needs its own version of the League of Nations (this later became the UN) and International Criminal Court. How would anyone go about doing that?


Sorry for the late reply!

As far as setting one up? If war is commonplace in your world, it could be between allies working towards a common goal, trading partners, enemies who are trying to negotiate, or it could be every city-state involved. If you're going for the last one, I would suggest having the leaders of the city-state kingdoms who are already forming their version of the League of Nations make some sort of promise to the others who are not entirely willing to join.

For the International Criminal Court, if someone from a more powerful city-state did something so illegal that they would be put to death while traveling in another city-state, the first could declare war on the latter because that isn't the latter's citizen. To discontinue the war, they could negotiate a treaty that sets up the International Criminal Court.
Hi there, so I'm writing a story, and I need a bit of help with the actual story part. I know kind of what I want out of it, and the direction, but its the very very basic plot that I need to choose from. Ill give a bit of a run down.

Characters:
1. Echo - Main female- shapeshifter
2. Sorcha - Second Female - Echos best friend- Fairy
3. Felim - Male - possible echo love interest - Friend - Selkie
4. Heck - Male- Friend- Sorcha love interest - Aaxte

5. Cathan - Main antagonist male - Human
6. Anxo - Cathans son/henchman - possible echo love interest - Jinn

These are the main ones. Story revolves around Echo, and is told from her viewpoint. I have 3 different ideas I'd like to bounce off you.

1. Main 4 are orphans, raised by nun, slowly learning about powers. Were part of a genetic experiment to bring out stronger forms of extinct preternaturals. Cathan kidnapps, tries to train as super-soliders to take control of supernatural society, but with help from Anxo they stop him and escape

1. Main 4 are orphans, raised as soliders by Cathan. Were part of a genetic experiment to bring out stronger forms of extinct preternaturals. When they find out about their powers, and Cathans plans of conquest. With help from Anxo, they stop him and escape.

1. Echo is an orphan, raised through foster homes, not all good. When she starts to develop her powers, she is taken in by wealthy, seemingly good natured Cathan, and transfers to same school as other 4. They become quick friends, and secrets about powers start to show up. Anxo is Echos foster brother. Turns out Cathan wants to collect all types of preternaturals, starting with the rarest first, Echo, followed by other 3. Anxo is a middle common.
is there anyone out there who writes more modern fiction/relationship stuff and is willing to help me figure out a plot for nano???
i'm so lost and have no writing buddies to help me plot, etc.
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is there anyone out there who writes more modern fiction/relationship stuff and is willing to help me figure out a plot for nano???
i'm so lost and have no writing buddies to help me plot, etc.

I'm always keen on being a writing buddy.

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