Ryuu_Keiji
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Post: 4803263_7156 created on Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:22 amPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:22 am
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@sword of snow: Hmmm.... Have you thought about her leaving the original world entirely? How about the war causes the world mass chaos and destruction so she has to go to a different world. Or perhaps she is lead into a different dimension or something. Or time travel? She could go back in time before all of the advanced technology (or she could go into the future). Anyway, those are just suggestions. I hope you can fill in the blanks!
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm having a little... situation of my own. I have two stories (more like ideas....) that I want to put on paper, but I can't decide what to do with them. Both of the stories have very similar characters... (ok they're almost identical, but... I like my original characters...... cry ) so I would prefer to choose one over the other. Here are the plots: The first story (takes place in a world with magic, but is similar to medieval times) This story has a more complicated plot with many turns and twists. There is a prologue that explains how the world came to be (the gods/creators) and explains the past of the world..... The story starts out with five people who inherit the power of the gods/creators and through a series of events, they loose their powers and have to get them back; meanwhile, there is a war going on. To get their individual powers back, they have to go through a temple/ maze thing (Indiana Jones style... not really) and defeat a huge monster. It actually is way more complicated than that.. but I didn't want to write anymore.. The main problems I have with the story are: A. I'm going to have to make 4 temples with monster thingys and that will probably get old after the second time... B. It reminds me of Legend of Zelda WAY too much... C. If this goes the way I want it to, there will be five "books" and that sounds like I'm gonna end up like scream stressed Second story (this is the nicer one. It takes place in Earth-- during current times, and in a different world, which is like medieval times and also has magic) A human is taken from Earth and is brought to a different world. She is raised be a duke and his wife with their two other children-- a boy, who is the oldest, and a girl who is in the middle. The boy is sent off to become a knight and the girl is learning to become the next duchess. The parents are later murdered. And the Human girl has to choose whether to move far away or stay near her family and either become a knight or a duchess like her sister; she chooses to become a knight like her father and brother. The story involves her going through many hardships like trying to hide her true identity. She makes two friends and later finds out that one of her friends has a terrible past and is related to the person who murdered her parents. Problems: A. I have no idea where to go with this story; I think I now what to do with the middle, but I haven't quite figured out the ending or climax yet... B. I also use three of the characters that I used in the above story. C. It sounds like it could become the stereotypical "girl tries to become a knight, but she almost fails and then she miraculously becomes better than all of the guys" story... eek Sorry about the humongous post... any thoughts/ideas/suggestions/complaints? |
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And that sounds like a good idea 





