What are your opinions? (Look at this art)

[The Lonely Dream]

I am a traditional artist.

I started this a few days ago, and have yet to work on it since.

Needless to say, I am quite proud of where I

am going with this. At some point I plan to ink it

and color it with Water Color pigments.

[Minnoa 666]

woah great job so far ;D i like where its going! keep it up! ^u^

[LadySnark]

Really cool!

His neck is too long though.

[Berylite]

Yeah, the neck is too long. especially for a man haha biggrin It might just be the placing of the shoulders and head so the neck looks strange. I make the same mistake every time... The more I look at it the less it's bothering me, it's not a reason to abandon or change the drawing, It seems like the lines are too hard to erase properly anyway. Everything else looks amazing! I'm looking forward to see it when it's finished :3