Welcome to Gaia! ::

R a v e S o n g's avatar

5,400 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Full closet 200
Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.

User Image

dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.
inthesis's avatar

Original Regular

8,900 Points
  • Megathread 100
  • Millionaire 200
  • Tycoon 200
R a v e S o n g
Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.

User Image

dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
I like it. Could use a wee bit of shadowing on the forehead near the hairline though :X

Edit: Just noticed, the right hand could use some work, the fingers are kinda spread out a lot
R a v e S o n g's avatar

5,400 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Full closet 200
inthesis
R a v e S o n g
Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.

User Image

dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
I like it. Could use a wee bit of shadowing on the forehead near the hairline though :X

Edit: Just noticed, the right hand could use some work, the fingers are kinda spread out a lot


Ah, I totally missed the forehead shading. o-o I will also admit, I'm still getting better at hands. I find it really hard to make them look natural still. @_@

Quick Reply

Submit
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get Items
Get Gaia Cash
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games